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By *he Dark Saint OP   Man
over a year ago

hitchin

Hi, I've been away for a while and only recently got back on. Would anyone be able to critique, critisise, evaluate, appraise or whatever to my profile.

I feel I need a pair of fresh eyes. It would be appreciated

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

My honest review:

So I looked at the photos first and my first impression is that you were probably a gay man. Your pictures are sexy, but some of them are a little camp (really don’t mean this in any way homophobic)

When I read the profile text I was surprised to see you are a straight man looking for couples and women only.

So maybe a couple of the pics you could change (the first one, and the one laid down with your legs crossed need to go I think)

Your profile text is good, but I am not keen on the way you have broken it up with the ******

It would read better as one or two continuous paragraphs.

You have a couple of verifications, but these aren’t visible- if I see people have verifications that aren’t visible this can be a red flag as I like to read the veris.

Hope that helps

X

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By *he Dark Saint OP   Man
over a year ago

hitchin


"My honest review:

So I looked at the photos first and my first impression is that you were probably a gay man. Your pictures are sexy, but some of them are a little camp (really don’t mean this in any way homophobic)

When I read the profile text I was surprised to see you are a straight man looking for couples and women only.

So maybe a couple of the pics you could change (the first one, and the one laid down with your legs crossed need to go I think)

Your profile text is good, but I am not keen on the way you have broken it up with the ******

It would read better as one or two continuous paragraphs.

You have a couple of verifications, but these aren’t visible- if I see people have verifications that aren’t visible this can be a red flag as I like to read the veris.

Hope that helps

X"

Thank you I'll definitely tweak a few things.

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

I think the text is good

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Just took another look and I think it looks brilliant now!

Best of luck and happy Fabbing

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By *he Dark Saint OP   Man
over a year ago

hitchin


"Just took another look and I think it looks brilliant now!

Best of luck and happy Fabbing "

Than you, I appreciate that. All the best of pleasures to you!

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