""Our profile may come across as a bit direct, it is not a reflection of our personalities but just a method to filter fantasists and time wasters."
This isn't needed, it's just using up valuable space.
"Please include face pics with any intro messages and be patient for a reply, sometimes we read but wait for each other's views before replying."
You are asking things from people before you're offering anything. Offer something first, then make your demands.
"We are here for one reason and one reason only which is to have fun, we are ok with socials and building a rapport but only with right people who are here to play. Those who get off just chatting endlessly or taking months to plan a meet are not for us, so please don't waste our time and we won't waste yours."
Too wordy. Reword to: "We're here to have fun with like-minded people. Happy to meet socially and chat to see if we click. However, we're not into prolonged chatting and would rather cut to the chase."
"If you have been a here a few months and have not met anyone, chances are you are not ready so please don't involve us in your experiment."
This comes across as condescending. Delete this and amend your filters to block anyone newbies and anyone who is not verified.
"Good personalities and vibes wins over physical attributes every time, we do have our preferences so at the very least you will need to consider yourselves attractive and be in reasonable shape and clean please."
Fair demand but again quite wordy. Reword to: "We prefer people take pride in their appearance; who are in shape, clean, and well-groomed."
"Our profile photos are a good indication of what we like but don't let them limit your imagination, we are game for most things new."
Your photos speak for themselves. I'd take this paragraph out.
"We have tried a bit of BDSM and DS play and really enjoyed it but only with right people and once trust has been built."
I'd take this out, it's just not needed.
"Hotwives, Female Subs, Stag/Vixen welcome."
Great, leave this in.
"We will both be 40 in 2023 (something we cannot change on profile)"
You can change your age on your profile by contacting Admin.
In terms of your pictures, I would personally say you have too many. Your profile is like your CV. It only exists to get you the interview, so to speak. I'd have one of Mr, one of Mrs, and then 3-4 of your favourite action/couple shots."
Excellent feedback, thanks for taking the time and you are right to call out the unnecessary stuff, we ended up adding those because of some experiences.
Changes implemented. |
