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heavily re-written profile - please feel free to comment!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hi all - following some really helpful responses to my request for feedback on my profile, I've re-written and put in a lot more detail. No doubt there's still loads to pick fault with though, so I'd be interested in any observations, if anyone fancies sparing a few minutes to give it a quick look?

thanks all xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

nobody?

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By *icecouple561Couple
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over a year ago

East Sussex

I've read it and it seems fine to me, the pictures are nice you look great in the tree one, you've been truthful and stated what you have to offer

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

too long.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"too long."

haha - can't win, I was told the previous one was too short! still, fair point maybe I'll trim it slightly. thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Too short

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Not long enough

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Not long enough "

hmm - strangely, i'd rather hear a woman say 'too long' than 'not long enough'!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I've read it and it seems fine to me, the pictures are nice you look great in the tree one, you've been truthful and stated what you have to offer "

not sure your wife would regard your activity as "truthful"

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By *londeCazWoman
over a year ago

Arse End of the Universe, Cumbria

I think it's just about the right length, not badly written at all and better than a heck of a lot on here

Now just get crafting some decent messages and see how you get on

Good luck

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

thanks Caz xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

loving the pictures espically the one with the tree, but text is slightly too long takes a bit reading but as said before you are honest and that scores a lot of brownie points in my book

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By *inktherapyCouple
over a year ago

Gloucester

I like it - reads well and I like the length/ amount of detail - much prefer a profile like yours to one a paragraph in length - personally, I like to find out enough to make me interested from a profile, not have to ask for the info

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

thanks Misty and Pink - I do appreciate your feedback and the fact that you took the time to read it xx

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By *edonism44Man
over a year ago

oldham

From a male point of view all reads very well good luck to you.

As for the picture In the woods... I hate you ...... Lol xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Female half here....I think your profile reads very well, if you were local to me I'd certainly be interested!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nice pictures and your profile is well written.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

mmmm nicley written ......just find 1 fault ....your too far away from me lol xx good luck im sure my loss will be someones gain x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Hello Paragraphs one and two are great, paragraph three is a bit wordy and personally I think you can say much the same in about half the length. Paragraphs four and five I think just go on a bit, and I think paragraph six could just be a few words about your hobbies rather than an entire paragraph. You don't need to mention how educated and articulate you are because that shows in what you've already written. I also don't think you need to mention being married again, what you said at the start is fine and any more sounds like you feel the need to justify your life and that's a turn off to me

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