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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

id love some feedback on how i can improve my profile and make it stand out from the crowd a bit.Iv spoke to a couple of people on hear who are great but seem to hit a brick wall with most people, where am i going wrong

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By *eeriseWoman
over a year ago

Manchester and that's all you need to know

You had a meet last night so I don't know why your asking people to give you feedback.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

because although i had a meet last night it always helps knowing other peoples views on improving your profile and it dosnt hurt to ask

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

One suggestion.

The 'straight' and 'looking for tv's' combo rarely creates the right image!

Most will consider that a bit of a contradiction in terms!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's in one big block, not gonna lie, barely bothered reading it. Separate into short paragraphs maybe. Also maybe take a bit more care grammatically?

IMO

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Break up the profile one big paragraph doesn't read too well.

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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago

Staffordshire Moorlands

I know it's been said before, but if you are "straight" why are you looking for TVs? As a girl on here, that would put me off slightly

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By *eeriseWoman
over a year ago

Manchester and that's all you need to know


"I know it's been said before, but if you are "straight" why are you looking for TVs? As a girl on here, that would put me off slightly "

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

firstly your profile is written poorly with both grammatical errors and little puctuation.

Secondly as already quoted you are straight, but are looking for TV/TS which is a contradiction.

just my thoughts!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"firstly your profile is written poorly with both grammatical errors and little puctuation.

Secondly as already quoted you are straight, but are looking for TV/TS which is a contradiction.

just my thoughts!"

Ditto. Plus the text is really hard to read as its all in one block.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Lots of pots and kettles in this thread

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By *eeriseWoman
over a year ago

Manchester and that's all you need to know

OP you asked for feedback on your profile and people gave you some really good advice yet you have not done nothing with the feedback.

Was this just a way of getting people to look at it?

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