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Redone my profile any pointers to make it better

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By *cottish-sin69 OP   Man
over a year ago

uk

Hi im an on and off again site member thats just redone his profile id appreciate any pointers to help make it better plz

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By *aunchy RaccoonsCouple
over a year ago

Exeter

We'd say it's a breath of fresh air to the average single guys profile.

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By *itzi999Woman
over a year ago

Slough


"Hi im an on and off again site member thats just redone his profile id appreciate any pointers to help make it better plz"

It’s pretty good!

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By *cottish-sin69 OP   Man
over a year ago

uk


"Hi im an on and off again site member thats just redone his profile id appreciate any pointers to help make it better plz

It’s pretty good! "

If i was in your area would you corrupt me like you say your looking fir on you bio

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By *itzi999Woman
over a year ago

Slough


"Hi im an on and off again site member thats just redone his profile id appreciate any pointers to help make it better plz

It’s pretty good!

If i was in your area would you corrupt me like you say your looking fir on you bio "

Oh yes!!!

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By *lossyLegsGlassesCouple
over a year ago

stafford

Looks fab although perhaps check your spelling and a cpl of grammatical errors.....their not there for example xxx just saying.....

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By *etcplCouple
over a year ago

Gapping Fanny

I’d ditch the bathroom mirror selfies.

Don’t talk negatively a out other men on fab, its not needed and you are just making people think about them and not you.

You talk about being tattooed and then carry on into toe and tease and dom sub etc.

While it’s handy to mention them, finish off one point before going into another.

Also, I wouldn’t mention dom/sub if its not something you are into as it can put people off.

Don’t mention the lack of dick pics, it makes it sound like you have something to hide.

Draw attention to the positives and what you want people to kook at, don’t draw attention to the things you don’t want them to notice.

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By *cottish-sin69 OP   Man
over a year ago

uk

Hows the change now i took your advice , just hope i whent the right way with it haha

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By *etcplCouple
over a year ago

Gapping Fanny

Its good

It shows a bit of your character, lets people know what to expect.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

We'd say to delete the "ha ha"s in your bio.

Then copy the text of your bio into a word processor and do a full grammar and spell check. Not only does it make it easier to read but also it will show that you have put a bit more work into it.

Good luck

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By *illanelleWoman
over a year ago

Ryde, Isle of Wight

I think it's pretty damn good. Definitely do a spelling/grammar check but other than that your photos are perfect, especially that black and white one, and you sound genuine and charming. Oh, and maybe change your age specifications; I'd hate to be left out

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By *cottish-sin69 OP   Man
over a year ago

uk


"I think it's pretty damn good. Definitely do a spelling/grammar check but other than that your photos are perfect, especially that black and white one, and you sound genuine and charming. Oh, and maybe change your age specifications; I'd hate to be left out "

Thanks all here for their input i keep going back to tweek it after every post

And for you beautiful thank you i will put my age limit up for you lol x

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By *razytimesinloveCouple
over a year ago

SW Scotland

It’s a very well done profile. Write up isn’t too serious and full of demands.

All your pics are well taken too.

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By *os19Man
over a year ago

Edmonton


"Hi im an on and off again site member thats just redone his profile id appreciate any pointers to help make it better plz"
. It looks to me like a well written through profile.However and apologies in advance if I am overthinking this on your verification summary you have 5 meetings one from a tv / ts which is not on your published verification yet your profile says you are straight. I too am straight and have had meetings with guys and a tv / ts all off which are on my published verifications which when read you can see they were in organised socials that I attend in London.

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By *cottish-sin69 OP   Man
over a year ago

uk


"Hi im an on and off again site member thats just redone his profile id appreciate any pointers to help make it better plz. It looks to me like a well written through profile.However and apologies in advance if I am overthinking this on your verification summary you have 5 meetings one from a tv / ts which is not on your published verification yet your profile says you are straight. I too am straight and have had meetings with guys and a tv / ts all off which are on my published verifications which when read you can see they were in organised socials that I attend in London."

I have just update the reason as to why that happened on my bio if you would like to see why

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By *os19Man
over a year ago

Edmonton


"Hi im an on and off again site member thats just redone his profile id appreciate any pointers to help make it better plz. It looks to me like a well written through profile.However and apologies in advance if I am overthinking this on your verification summary you have 5 meetings one from a tv / ts which is not on your published verification yet your profile says you are straight. I too am straight and have had meetings with guys and a tv / ts all off which are on my published verifications which when read you can see they were in organised socials that I attend in London.

I have just update the reason as to why that happened on my bio if you would like to see why "
. I have just seen your bio and you have explained it clearly basically similar to me it was at a social.Apologies again if I said something wrong I guess my fault for overthinking things.Best of luck with the site.

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

I think it's good until the last few words. "I don't bite unless you want me to". Such a well used cliché. I suggest you remove it.

I don't know why you are looking for " a touch of insanity".

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