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"I dont actually have trouble writing these, thankfully being rather articulate helps in this department, but i felt my current bio seemed a little.. uninspiring, not as true a reflection of myself as it could be. But i thought id get some thoughts from you ladies regarding how it reads before i make the effort to rework it" Hiya, I’d suggest switching the two sections so you have the about you bit as the main focus. It’s long. Very long. Give it a good edit and check for any repetition. Also maybe reconsider the negative wording about cum dumps. It’s not what you want so don’t use that language. IMO | |||
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"Hiya, I’d suggest switching the two sections so you have the about you bit as the main focus. It’s long. Very long. Give it a good edit and check for any repetition. Also maybe reconsider the negative wording about cum dumps. It’s not what you want so don’t use that language. IMO " My about me is very long?  damn i thought mine was fairly manageable, ive seen quite a few that are 3 times longer
But ill agree the about me could do with switching up. Was actually gonna get rid of that cum dumps bit. Its just grim getting msgs from tv/ts and theyre acting slutty and not in the good way either.
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"Hiya, I’d suggest switching the two sections so you have the about you bit as the main focus. It’s long. Very long. Give it a good edit and check for any repetition. Also maybe reconsider the negative wording about cum dumps. It’s not what you want so don’t use that language. IMO My about me is very long? damn i thought mine was fairly manageable, ive seen quite a few that are 3 times longer
But ill agree the about me could do with switching up. Was actually gonna get rid of that cum dumps bit. Its just grim getting msgs from tv/ts and theyre acting slutty and not in the good way either.
Repetition shouldnt be too hard to avoid with a rewrite "Use your message filters to control who contacts you  | |||
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"Use your message filters to control who contacts you "Oh i already know about the filters, i just dont want to exclude all tv/ts from contacting me, just the odd one here and there who are quite off putting | |||
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