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By *exyeyez23 OP   Man
over a year ago

St Anne’s

Have never been happy with my profile guess just want to try to make it better what divyou think would make it better ?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Loose the capitals.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

OK

I can't see anything realy wrong with it tbh. The block text is a bit overwhelming, but then it's a joke so........

Perhaps missing a face pic, but that's entirel up to you.........

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By *exyeyez23 OP   Man
over a year ago

St Anne’s


"Loose the capitals. "
Thanks sounds good will do

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Not too bad, but.....

Loose the stuff below 'Alan x' - What is all that about anyway????

Age Range - have think about who you want to meet - leaving it at the default 18-99 says 'desperate'!!

And we have the perennial 'I'm a single guy and I have ticked Cant Accom' - You're gonna need to justify that if it's genuine or it just says 'I'm really married but I don't want to break that to you right now.....' to anyone reading it.

and

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By *histler21Man
over a year ago

Ipswich


"Not too bad, but.....

Loose the stuff below 'Alan x' - What is all that about anyway????

Age Range - have think about who you want to meet - leaving it at the default 18-99 says 'desperate'!!

And we have the perennial 'I'm a single guy and I have ticked Cant Accom' - You're gonna need to justify that if it's genuine or it just says 'I'm really married but I don't want to break that to you right now.....' to anyone reading it.

and "

Au contraire - "18-99" shows that the OP is not ageist!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Not too bad, but.....

Loose the stuff below 'Alan x' - What is all that about anyway????

Age Range - have think about who you want to meet - leaving it at the default 18-99 says 'desperate'!!

And we have the perennial 'I'm a single guy and I have ticked Cant Accom' - You're gonna need to justify that if it's genuine or it just says 'I'm really married but I don't want to break that to you right now.....' to anyone reading it.

and

Au contraire - "18-99" shows that the OP is not ageist!"
Or not selective, would he realy fuck a 98 year old?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The second half of the profile really isn't funny and even if it was the ability to copy and paste a generic joke is hardly indicative of a great sense of humour.

As others have said a 50 year old male that can;t accommodate smacks of married man and needs explaining.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


" would he realy fuck a 98 year old?"

No, but I'd help one over the road at a crossing...

Wolf

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By *Ryan-Man
over a year ago

In Your Bush


"Have never been happy with my profile guess just want to try to make it better what divyou think would make it better ?"

Sorry I'm not a div so unfortunately I cannot help

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Not too bad, but.....

Loose the stuff below 'Alan x' - What is all that about anyway????

Age Range - have think about who you want to meet - leaving it at the default 18-99 says 'desperate'!!

And we have the perennial 'I'm a single guy and I have ticked Cant Accom' - You're gonna need to justify that if it's genuine or it just says 'I'm really married but I don't want to break that to you right now.....' to anyone reading it.

and

Au contraire - "18-99" shows that the OP is not ageist!"

"18-99" i like to see that on a mans profile.

it means he is realy horny.

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

Crumpet Castle

Lose the first sentence entirely it doesn't makes sense.

Leave the rest until you get to Alan x

THEN Delete EVERYTHING under that. What a stupid waste of time and space and bandwidth ......

There.... perfect x

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By *issBehavingxxWoman
over a year ago

Glasgow


"Lose the first sentence entirely it doesn't makes sense.

Leave the rest until you get to Alan x

THEN Delete EVERYTHING under that. What a stupid waste of time and space and bandwidth ......

There.... perfect x "

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Not too bad, but.....

Loose the stuff below 'Alan x' - What is all that about anyway????

Age Range - have think about who you want to meet - leaving it at the default 18-99 says 'desperate'!!

And we have the perennial 'I'm a single guy and I have ticked Cant Accom' - You're gonna need to justify that if it's genuine or it just says 'I'm really married but I don't want to break that to you right now.....' to anyone reading it.

and

Au contraire - "18-99" shows that the OP is not ageist!

"18-99" i like to see that on a mans profile.

it means he is realy horny. "

You have your opinion - we have ours. To us, ANYONE who has left the age range at 18-99 either....:-

a) hasn't given it any thought

b) is desperate

c) is a fake (that is a common 'thread' - no pun honestly - in fake profiles)

So if WE think that, how many others looking at the OP's profile will think the same????????? Hmmmmm....?????

and

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By *exyeyez23 OP   Man
over a year ago

St Anne’s


"Not too bad, but.....

Loose the stuff below 'Alan x' - What is all that about anyway????

Age Range - have think about who you want to meet - leaving it at the default 18-99 says 'desperate'!!

And we have the perennial 'I'm a single guy and I have ticked Cant Accom' - You're gonna need to justify that if it's genuine or it just says 'I'm really married but I don't want to break that to you right now.....' to anyone reading it.

and

Au contraire - "18-99" shows that the OP is not ageist!

"18-99" i like to see that on a mans profile.

it means he is realy horny.

You have your opinion - we have ours. To us, ANYONE who has left the age range at 18-99 either....:-

a) hasn't given it any thought

b) is desperate

c) is a fake (that is a common 'thread' - no pun honestly - in fake profiles)

So if WE think that, how many others looking at the OP's profile will think the same????????? Hmmmmm....?????

and "
Have taken the constructive critasism on board and have made some changes hopefully for the better and thank you to everyone for your input it has been very much appreciated I think my profile is better now just going to revisit my pictures see if I can make them better thanks to everyone

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Alan - just had a look at the changes you have made. Much, much better mate. Well done.

The ONLY lasting criticism we would have is that, for a guy of 50, your lower age limit is unrealistic and gives a 'dubious' impression on you. Have a look at it this way: You are advertising for a fem who is just SEVEN years older than your son .......... Does that make the point?

Other than that, we wish you luck with it - now all you need is bucket loads of patience and persistence......

and

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

And what is cut manhood?

Sounds a bit painful

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By *exyeyez23 OP   Man
over a year ago

St Anne’s


"And what is cut manhood?

Sounds a bit painful "
Circumcised thought women liked that ?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"And what is cut manhood?

Sounds a bit painful Circumcised thought women liked that ?"

Not personally a preference of mine, but I would say circumcised as I didn't know what you meant

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By *exyeyez23 OP   Man
over a year ago

St Anne’s


"And what is cut manhood?

Sounds a bit painful Circumcised thought women liked that ?

Not personally a preference of mine, but I would say circumcised as I didn't know what you meant "
Thought that was what you meant and you are right so sounds better saying circumcised. Thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"And what is cut manhood?

Sounds a bit painful Circumcised thought women liked that ?

Not personally a preference of mine, but I would say circumcised as I didn't know what you meant Thought that was what you meant and you are right so sounds better saying circumcised. Thanks"

No problem

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Did not see what it was like before so cannot comment but looks ok now

But what I really want to say is what a refreshing change , somebody who asks for advice gets the advice and acts on it

That in itself is remarkable

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By *exyeyez23 OP   Man
over a year ago

St Anne’s

[Removed by poster at 17/07/12 12:35:29]

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By *exyeyez23 OP   Man
over a year ago

St Anne’s


"[Removed by poster at 17/07/12 12:35:29]"
Thanks Alice

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