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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

(with apologies, of course, to Belinda Carlisle)

Australia Day always made her feel a little nostalgic. The end of January, when school holidays ended. When she was a kid, small businesses would then reopen and the normal grind of the year would begin. So much had changed in 20-odd years. In some ways she yearned for that slower pace of life. The simplicity of it.

Nostalgia, of course, isn’t what it used to be. In many ways Claire was much better off than she’d ever been. The predictions were that she’d come into her own when she left school, and they were spot on. Sidelined as a child, a timid little thing, she’d very much found herself in her twenties. Now well into her thirties... huh. If only they could see her now. The transformation had been rather remarkable.

Nevertheless, she decided to take a slightly more old fashioned summer trip. Not following her peers on dirt cheap Bali package holidays, she decided to travel up the coast, to the seaside town where she’d spent several summer holidays as a child. She wasn’t much one for patriotism, but she certainly preferred to support small regional businesses, rather than jump on a plane and wrap herself in flags made in China.

She was delighted to find an old fashioned Greek milk bar along the way, got a burger with the lot (hold the egg). She remembered to lay a towel down on the splintering wooden bench before she sat on it, the overloaded burger disintegrating in her hands and the pineapple juice dripping down her arms. She had baby wipes for this, same as her mum had all those years ago. The little town she’d stopped in was quite quiet, and she could hear the ever-present buzz of the insects that was typical on oppressively hot days like these. She could also see into the surrounding farmland, although it was obscured by a rather large mirage. It was interesting the way that heat could so obscure your vision.

After several more hours on the road, she arrived. The same little beachside huts her parents had favoured, looking a little careworn. Cheap airfares had much to answer for. But she still had a couple of hours to grab fish and chips, and sit just beyond the gently lapping waves, feeling the salty breeze tousle her hair. Like her parents had, while she and her siblings played in the sand.

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

The forecast for the weekend was a bit like those old ads for Queensland. “Beautiful one day, perfect the next.” Claire had plenty of sunscreen with her, and a rash vest to cover her bikini during the worst of the midday sun. She neither wanted a tan, nor the risks of cancer that had been drilled into her since before she could remember. It had long been commented on that she was an unusual beauty, her very pale skin contrasting with her dark brown hair and again with her strikingly blue eyes. But, more importantly, there’s no such thing as a safe tan. She wasn’t prepared to take her chances.

Laughing to herself, she found herself doing as her mother had, waking just after dawn. Claire had complained about these sunrise walks, but now appreciated the stillness, the sand squeaking between her toes, the roar and crash of the tide. It was almost meditative. The temperature was under 30 for a couple of hours, too, which was a bit of a relief. (Fortunately, since the 90s the owners of the huts had invested in air conditioning, rather than just ceiling fans)

She thought she heard echoes of voices that seemed familiar while she was walking. Not family. But certainly from childhood. Memory is a funny thing. It was like being transported back to school days, how little things had changed up here. She must be imagining things.

She sat in her hut watching the tide and the people arriving for the day. The Vegemite on toast hadn’t changed, but thank God coffee had improved somewhat since she was a kid. She didn’t think she could cope with that horrible burnt crap her parents used to drown in sugar. After lingering over the coffee for awhile, she picked up her insulated bag and towel, slipped on her flip flops, and went to claim a space on the sand.

Claire threw herself into the tide, the way she’d done as a child. She was aware that people noticed her, although for very different reasons than they had when she was a gawky awkward girl. But it barely crossed her mind. She joined the children leaping against the waves, giggling and mostly avoiding being wiped out. Mouthful of salty sand with a particularly strong wave. Ah well. You win some, you lose some. This was the stuff of Australian childhoods. Bliss.

The mix of sand and salty water was incomplete without a barbie, of course. The acrid scent of burnt onion and sausage made her mouth water, and, once again, made her think about school. She’d rather not! Instead, Claire wandered up the beach, crossed the road to the nearest corner store, and got herself a classic lemonade Icypole. Remembered when her younger sister was too little to eat them all herself, and the ice lolly would melt down her arm. Claire’s niece would appreciate hearing that story: Claire’s sister might not.

Once again Claire heard familiar voices, and dismissed them as her mind playing tricks. She was so caught up in the memory of her young sister, that she didn’t notice the man staring at her from the other end of the row of shops.

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

After lunch, Claire erected a beach umbrella on her spot in the sand. Just sit and people watch for awhile, put on some more sunscreen before heading back into the surf. She sipped her water as she observed the families. Toddlers being led into the water’s edge, older children playing in the sand, teenagers sunbathing. She was quite unusual being there on her own, but was well used to being outside the norm, and preferred it that way.

The rhythmic crashing of the waves and the heat of the day began to make her feel a little tired, but she wanted to make the most of the weekend and get as much time in the sea as possible. She took off her rash vest to prepare for thorough sunscreen application, and loosened her long wavy hair to detangle. Her pale skin contrasted with the forest green bikini she’d chosen because it played so well with her features, particularly her dark hair rippling down to the small of her back. The curves of her torso were gentle, and it was this, if anything, that she worried about. She’d had lots of commentary about her defined, muscular, shoulders and arms, her solid thighs, and her strong calves. But she was perfectly comfortable both in her gender and her sexuality, despite her passion for weight lifting. She did it for herself, not to win any popularity contests. Besides, it was an excellent arsehole filter.

Claire was very much lost in her own little world, memories of matted hair and being called back from the surf to put on more sunscreen. She was surprised, and a little perturbed, when she looked up to find a man standing at the edge of her towel, staring at her. Just before the instinctive “bugger off, dickhead” came out of her mouth, she realised that he looked familiar. She wasn’t sure why.

“Is that you, Claire?” She realised that the staring wasn’t creepy, as she’d assumed, but trying to place her. “My God you’ve changed. It’s Lachlan. We were in English class together in high school.”

Lachlan... Lachlan. Claire struggled to remember: she’d tried to blot most of high school from her memory. Oh, yes. They’d not really known each other that well, but he’d always been kind to her, which is more than she could say for so many others. She smiled as she remembered them being placed together as Romeo and Juliet, and how awkward it had been for both of them. And yes... of course. He had family up this way.

Claire thought the years had been kind to Lachlan, and said so. She was circumspect, but thought he’d really grown into his looks. She invited him to throw down a towel and join her, chat for a bit. She’d avoided all that school reunion crap, but this was a sudden, and rather pleasant, surprise.

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By *iam4Man
over a year ago

Chiswick

Apparently they have Christmas Rashies, just like we have Xmas jumper day

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)


"Apparently they have Christmas Rashies, just like we have Xmas jumper day"

I was thinking about those but decided not to go there haha

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

Bump. Comments welcome

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

There are many things at love about your stories. The way you express yourself, the way you build your characters, the way you create anticipation and and wish for more. But what I found so refreshing reading them on Fab is they don’t just focus on the sexual. They entice me in like a good book should. I haven’t found all that many books that do that either. Great stuff Swing.

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By *ohn32991Man
over a year ago

LEEK

I quite agree. Beautiful grammar, punctuation and obviously proof read.

You can feel the story developing and drawing you in. If/when it gets sexual it will be outstanding I'm sure. Very refreshing, the author ought to think about writing as a professional.

Nice change from some of the knuckle draggers who struggle with putting words in the right order.

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By *iddlesticksMan
over a year ago

My nan’s spare room.

I feel like I’m there and I think I’d definitely like to be stood at the edge of Claire’s towel.

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By *r imp miss minxCouple
over a year ago

Colchester

Reads very well, great introduction and looking forward to seeing how it goes.

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

Bump

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By *nyx99Man
over a year ago

London

Great and interesting detial, well formed and relatable. Just finished 'Out of her league' and came and found this one. Interested to see where this goes... And looking for your others

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

****

Maybe this nostalgia thing wasn’t so bad after all. She might go grab a snag from the barbie tomorrow. Lachlan’s family was running it, it turned out, raising money for the local primary school. Like Claire, he was single, although he spoke with pride about his nephews and nieces. He pointed them out in their rash vests building sand castles. The extended family all together. Claire realised she should probably give her cousins a call, it’d been too long.

Claire had tried not to dwell on running into people from school. As noted, a time in her life best forgotten. But it was surprising how relaxed she felt with Lachlan, even given his abrupt intrusion into her quiet reflection. He had become quite an interesting man. And yes. Most certainly attractive.

In the distance she thought she heard familiar voices again. Not Lachlan, obviously. He was right here. Definitely male. Good lord, her mind was playing tricks on her. Wasn’t it?

As lovely as this was, Claire had a score to settle with the wave that had dumped her before. (Yes, she knew it didn’t work like that) She asked if she could swap details with Lachlan, so they could catch up another time. There would be plenty more weekends or evenings for a drink, a brunch, maybe more. Who knows. Lachlan readily agreed, a broad smile on his face. It turned out he didn’t live too far from her.

Claire was oblivious, as always. She didn’t notice the appreciative way that Lachlan took in her body as she stood, put her rash vest back on, and tied her hair back. That appreciation intensified as, once again, she lost herself in nostalgia. She ran, laughing, back into the surf.

Claire lost track of time in the sea, weaving through the waves. Jumping, diving, giggling with the older children who could safely swim this far out. Eventually, her muscles began to ache and the salt began to sting her eyes. Time to call it an evening, she decided.

She strolled up the beach towards her towel and small bag. She loved this part of the world, she could just leave her things and not have them nicked. The sun beginning to fade, she took off her sodden rash vest and put it over her arm. She loosened her hair, shaking it out in a way that would have been seductive, had it been intentional. But it rarely was, with her. She just wanted to make sure that it wasn’t a horrendous, matted mess.

Her thoughts turned to the burger joint she frequented with her family, back in the day. Was it still open, and might that make a nice dinner tonight?

That train of thought, however, was abruptly halted. She looked up to locate her stuff. In her line of vision was the man who, unbeknownst to her, had been staring while she’d been thinking about her sister and the ice lolly. She felt a familiar, jarring, twist in her stomach as her heart rate escalated. This was the voice that had been weaving in and out of her awareness since she arrived, taunting her memory.

He remained tall, dark and handsome, his gaze piercing her. Claire felt her body respond, a visceral non verbal memory of being a teenager again. One who had quietly pined over the boy that now stood before her. Now very much a man. Suave, sophisticated, oh so popular. She had never dared say anything at the time, and her teenage feelings roared back, most unwelcome, into her present moment.

Claire felt much more conflicted than she had when she’d met Lachlan just a few hours before. But, unlike Lachlan, there was no mistaking who this was.

Despite herself, she could even recall the aftershave that Patrick used to wear, and the rush of overwrought teenage lust it brought over her.

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By *ipplebarnyMan
over a year ago

milton keynes

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By *ustme34Man
over a year ago

Bingley

Book marked

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nice, please carry on

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Hello Swing. Can’t reply to your profile but saw you inviting critique of this story there. Your writing is great, the scene setting is highly evocative, just enough particular detail to make it real but with enough left unsaid about the setting that readers who haven’t been to Australia could lose themselves in.

Moving from observing Claire to reading her thoughts done very skilfully.

Like other readers I definitely want to read more!

If you want to discuss further do message me (not trying to get around your chat preferences: I do editing professionally and would be in trouble if I did that!)

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

Thank you

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

****

Claire felt as though she had been hurled back twenty years. Timid, shy, and powerless. Her feelings towered over her like a particularly powerful wave. Strewth. She’d moved past this.

Still. She was certainly conflicted. Patrick, too, had aged well. Her thoughts churned, scrambled by both her vivid recollection and a new surge of lust. Fuck. Yes, she still wanted him. Maybe she hadn’t changed so much after all. Although... was she now in a better position to go after what she wanted, if it were possible? It had, of course, been awhile since she’d last indulged her insatiable libido.

Claire was in no position of power here. She’d have to react while she brought herself under control. It’d been an eternity since she’d had to suppress her feelings like this. Deep breaths, Claire. Deep breaths.

The intensity of Patrick’s stare diminished as he broke into a smile. Lord, even his early expression lines were attractive. Claire kicked herself, internally, trying to pull herself out of this lust driven haze.

“Claire! It’s been such a long time.” The reverberation of his voice through her head didn’t help matters at all. He strode towards her, and, with the jocular overconfidence she’d found endearing, wrapped his arms around her. Despite herself, Claire found herself melting into his embrace. How she’d longed to just touch him back in the day...

Patrick had moved up here a few years ago, a sea change. It seemed convenient enough to accept his invitation for dinner, and yes, that burger place was still there. Most of the staff, the menu, and the decor unchanged. What a strange juxtaposition, her childhood memories and being here with probably her biggest teenage crush. She’d long found that life can be odd. Roll with it.

Claire tried very hard to relax. Not to over think: her greatest weakness years ago, and a lingering obstacle to overcome. Did they still do that ridiculous drink for kids? Her mum had made her stop ordering it because she was “too old”. Mum wasn’t watching now – and they did. Patrick looked askance at the glass decorated with ice cream, syrup, cream and sprinkles as the waitress brought it over. Claire dismissed her self-consciousness (this was about her nostalgia, after all). She settled into the conversation about the ways in which their lives had changed. It sounded like Patrick had done well for himself.

The uneasiness faded. Patrick had always been charming, she’d noted at a safe distance as a teenager. It felt wonderful being the object of his charm. And potentially more. Claire wasn’t always oblivious, like she’d been with Lachlan before. She thought she caught Patrick admiring her figure: tight shorts and T-shirt looking very different on her than they had when she was a tomboy. She couldn’t quite escape the reticence of her youth, though, and certainly wasn’t going to presume he was interested. The idea was a lot to get her head around.

The bill arrived, and she found herself letting Patrick pay, rather than ruin a nice evening over principles. She found herself reflecting. Today had been an odd, emotionally charged day. Rather wonderful. But tiring. She needed a good night’s sleep, give her brain a chance to catch up.

As they walked towards the door, Claire again thought she heard things. Not voices this time. A deep rumbling in the distance, as though a thunderstorm were approaching. The forecast had been for sunshine. She checked her phone: it still was. She didn’t sense that a cold change was coming. You sometimes could, when summer rain abruptly broke through the subtropical haze.

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

Bump. Comments welcome.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like the scene shift from the beach to the restaurant, although I had to read twice to check I hadn’t missed it. Blurs what’s happening with what’s being remembered from Claire’s past. Subtle, very clever writing: suggests the disorientation you feel in a situation like that, or the conveyor belt you feel you’re on when desire takes over.

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By *ustme34Man
over a year ago

Bingley

cant wait to read the some more

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

I'll be returning to this soon. In the meantime, I published a new part of Hitting Reset today.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

This is so beautifully written, really takes you there, lovely scene setting.

Your writing just flows so well

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By *urvygirl75Woman
over a year ago

chester

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

****

Hot, physically intense days tend to lend themselves to an abrupt enveloping tiredness. Claire would really appreciate her bed tonight. But when Patrick suggested they take a stroll along the shore as the sun went down… there was no way she was going to turn that down.

The waves lapped gently against the glistening sand. The sky was a kaleidoscope of colour against the orange of the setting sun. The temperature dropped gradually, and the remnants of the day’s heat were eased by a soft breeze. It was perfect… and trivial. Because Claire was walking side by side with Patrick. She could barely contain the bubbling, giddy excitement of her inner teenager. She wasn’t trying to suppress it any more: just maintain some composure.

Claire’s feelings clashed against one another. Her fatigue; the magnetism with which Patrick drew her in. Wanting to listen to his every word; being distracted by the barely repressed, bounding excitement she felt. Nostalgia again: it was like a stifling Christmas Eve. After a packed, sweaty carol service, the only thing stopping her from falling asleep on the way home was anticipating Santa.

… What a thing to think of at a moment like this. Claire. Honestly!

Patrick had been talking about the benefits of living in a small community, rather than the big smoke. Claire had barely heard a word, truth be known. They had reached the end of the beach. Looking inland, Claire laughed at the sudden sight of a giant bronze Queen Victoria in the town’s main park. The image of the Queen was quite clear: in front of the statue, the fountain had been turned off due to water restrictions. An odd tension between the realities of modern Australia, and an imagining of a glorious past in the distant, almost mythical, mother country.

Patrick was standing so close that Claire could feel the heat radiating from his body, smell the sweat breaking through his aftershave and deodorant. Claire’s mind bounced from topic to topic, trying to avoid her lust in vain. She saw the way he was looking at her. And she didn’t dare to look at him in the same way. She was so tired, but – oh god – every fibre of her being wanted him. Her overwrought teenage self was winning this battle, trying to break through her self control. She thought she’d wanted an early night!

It was clear that their walk had come to an end, and a decision had to be made. Patrick turned to face Claire. She could feel his breath on her face, and hoped he didn’t notice that hers shuddered, as she struggled to contain herself. For fuck’s sake, Claire, you’re not a teenager any more.

“This has been a most pleasant evening, Claire” Patrick almost purred, and the seductive look in his eyes was unmistakeable. Claire was instantly aroused. “The time has flown, great company, and wonderful conversation. I can think of only one thing that might top it off. Might I…” He paused, his eyes twinkling mischievously, “have a taste?”

Despite all the signs, despite how obvious it was what Patrick wanted… it took Claire a few seconds to realise what he was asking. Her teenage experience of Patrick was so different to this… could it be true? Could he actually want her?

She found herself unable to speak: she felt quite overwhelmed. She nodded vigorously.

Patrick caressed her neck as he took hold of her. He leant in, devouring her: an unusually aggressive kiss, but Claire wasn’t about to complain. She melted into him, her hands exploring his back and muscular shoulders. The experience was so powerful that when Patrick stepped back, she found herself gasping for air.

He openly took her in now, his gaze ravenous.

“I’m going to enjoy you. Your place, or mine?”

Christ, Claire was so tired. Not the way she wanted to fulfil the fantasies she wouldn’t have dared to have, twenty odd years ago. She knew she was a better lover than she could be tonight.

The irritation in Patrick’s eyes, when she explained this, was as fleeting as it was clear. She hoped it wouldn’t last. But… she was in no fit state to have him, tonight.

He kissed her again, before they went their separate ways. As Claire watched the moon reflected on the sea, she wondered if she felt the early signs of a cold front coming. The forecast was still for sunshine, but she sensed a coming storm.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Welcome back - always love your stories ? xx

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

Thank you!

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

Bump

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By *imon_hydeMan
over a year ago

Stockport

Anticipation, excellent!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

Given it's currently pissing down here... bump

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

****

Claire’s mind raced as she walked back to her hut. Trying to reassure herself that she’d done the right thing. Hoping she hadn’t blown it. Her teenage self roaring with righteous indignation: what a terrible mistake she’d made!

But Claire really needed to sleep. Not engage in more self-flagellation.

She felt her body begin to disengage before she opened the front door, barely registering the cold of the air conditioning slapping against the remnants of the day’s heat. Despite her inner turmoil, she didn’t even remember hitting the pillow.

It had, of course, been the right decision. A night with Patrick would not have involved much, if any, sleep.

Once again Claire was awake at dawn, the sun beginning to peer through the blanket of darkness you don’t see in the big cities. Rather than walking, this morning she sat by the edge of the water, letting it lap at her toes, then her feet. Reflecting.

Last night, so vivid; yet so unreal. She’d run so long to escape her past, buried it. And in trying to reclaim it, it had finally chased her down. She wasn’t sure what to make of that. How to be the woman she’d fought to become, not the shell of a girl she’d been.

Nostalgia. It really isn’t what it used to be.

Claire noticed the cool of the water against her feet. Rise, swell, retreat. Again and again. Focus on the physical sensations and the way they contrasted. Tried to meditate, in the hope that the existential angst would wash out to sea. This, too, shall pass.

The sun began to warm her skin, after awhile, like a blush creeping up her face. She didn’t know how long she’d been sitting there, but it was time to go inside, get some coffee, and put some sunscreen on.

As she walked back up the beach, she saw Lachlan’s siblings carrying supplies for the fundraising barbecue, including what must have been at least ten litres of tomato sauce. Claire smiled. She must make sure to get a snag for lunch, and slip some more money into the donation tin.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great writing, really gives flavours of the characters, the subtle nuances give it a real organic feel

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

Thank you writing is one of my passions, although I do it here for fun.

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By *oel400Man
over a year ago

Doncaster

Such exquisite prose, I relished every word and am users as this story develops, I like so many others, are in for a treat. thank you xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Thank you writing is one of my passions, although I do it here for fun."

I can relate, I write a little and have very creative aspects to my personality, but I’ve never thought to on here.

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)


"Such exquisite prose, I relished every word and am users as this story develops, I like so many others, are in for a treat. thank you xx"

Have a search for The Dance, Out of Her League, or Hope

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

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Claire checked the weather, again, while waiting for her coffee to brew. No wonder she’d been feeling warm. Change of forecast: it was set to get into the mid-40s today. Reason to get a move on, then. Time in the sea before it became unbearably hot or the risk of sunburn too high. After lunch, maybe a novel or a nap.

She’d spend most of Australia Day in the car, driving home tomorrow. So today would be the day to mark it. She’d got some of that coloured zinc you used to see all the time, in green and gold. After she applied sunscreen, she smeared a line of each across her cheeks.

A somewhat nostalgic nod to patriotism.

“Australians, all, let us rejoice, for we are young and free,

With golden soil, and work for toil,

Our home is girt by sea”

The beach was busier today, of course. But not crowded the way that Bondi might be, or a beach at a more salubrious location. The sand beneath her thongs was already becoming uncomfortably hot as the temperature began to soar. The sun danced across the waves, the deep, rich blue reflected by the cloudless sky above. The gum trees by the edge of the sand rustled and creaked in the wind. Today Claire could detect the faint scent of eucalyptus alongside salt, sunscreen, and the burnt onion from the barbie.

She ran into the surf on her toes, to try to stop the sand burning her feet.

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

The surf was definitely rougher today, and there were a lot more people frolicking in the waves. Claire recalled a British comedian joke about Australians leaping into the supposedly dangerous sea, to escape the relentless heat. Not so, of course, but rather amusing.

Once again, she was back to her childhood, one with her body and her experience. The roaring, crashing waves only overpowered by the delighted laughter of the children around her. Jumping and diving just out of sync with the arc of the wave. A simple, confident joy in the here and now: endless and timeless, it could seem. Claire used to imagine that this was the same all over the world, before she’d travelled and understood that other children lived differently. She’d read about Brighton and Blackpool as a girl, idealised British holiday spots: she’d been shocked to discover that they were nothing like the beaches she took for granted. Britain certainly had its charms, but Australia was, indeed, the ‘lucky country’.

Plenty of time to reflect later, though. Claire suspected that the life guards were a bit worried about the potential for rip currents, today. Lots of kids, slightly more challenging conditions. Must stay alert, even slightly lost in the reverie of the ocean.

The crowd meant that she was hit by a fair few boards (the little boogie boards: they stung more than hurt). She’d tried them as a child, and she much preferred swimming without. After another blow to the head, and half-hearted apology from a little boy, she noticed Patrick had returned to the beach.

… Concentration? What concentration? His rippling muscles glistened in the sun, and Claire had a vivid, visceral flashback to the night before. The hunger with which he’d kissed her. Oh god, he was… such a fine specimen of a man. What a view. Claire wandered to the water’s edge to have a slightly closer look.

Patrick was sunbathing up near the surf lifesaving club, and seemed to be turning an uncomfortable shade of pink. (Pink rather suited him – except use your upstairs brain, Claire, that’s going to be a nasty burn) He too, had a nod to Australia Day with his Southern Cross boardies. As it ever was: he was effortlessly cool. Claire suddenly felt self-conscious about the zinc across her face. She was who she was, and she’d learned to be unashamedly herself. Normally, that was more than enough. Normally…

Claire noticed herself overthinking, and swore under her breath. As far as she’d come, as long as she’d run, her past was still right there, threatening to engulf her. It wasn’t healthy. It certainly wasn’t the kind of nostalgia she was seeking.

Later, Claire: deal with it later.

She wrenched herself from her psychological spiral, and turned to throw herself back into the surf. It was crowded, and she wasn’t entirely paying attention. As she turned, she accidentally hit a young girl across the shoulder, quite hard. Claire winced and then knelt to apologise: the girl was now crying. Hopefully just the shock of the blow.

Claire was focused on the girl, but after a moment noticed a man’s feet out of the corner of her eye.

“What happened, Tillie? Are you alright?” Claire and Lachlan were equally startled to be seeing each other again. They spoke over the top of each other. Claire apologised profusely, and Lachlan explained that Tillie (Matilda) was his niece.

Tillie seemed to be alright after a few minutes, but Claire was a bit rattled that she’d been so careless. It was about time for lunch, anyway, and Lachlan was helping with the barbie. He scooped Tillie up and almost danced up the beach carrying her. He sang the chorus to Waltzing Matilda, accompanied by Tillie’s happy squeals. Claire walked slightly behind them, finding Tillie’s joy quite infectious. At least there was no harm done.

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By *stingxMan
over a year ago

Glasgow

Love it

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By *rnoldZiffelMan
over a year ago

Leinster

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By *rnoldZiffelMan
over a year ago

Leinster

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By *rnoldZiffelMan
over a year ago

Leinster

Earlier comments have perfectly captured my thoughts about this story but if I may, I will sum them up with one word - quality.

I greatly anticipate the next instalment..in which, I feel sure we will read that Laclan & Patrick finally give in to their previously hidden 'bi' tenancies and run away to a life of perfect bliss in Manley, Dee Why or Curl Curl leaving our lovely protagonist in Casualty with poor Tillie & her parents.

Seriously though, I read volumes of EROTICA on another site which contains such LIT-erature and though you say that writing is a hobby, I must say that your writing holds up very well when compared to best on offer there.

(previous flawed efforts deleted due to silly typos which I would have been embarrassed to leave incorrected)

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

I appreciate it very much

The Northern Beaches would be an appropriate spot for such a couple to live

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By *rnoldZiffelMan
over a year ago

Leinster

Indeed they would but having said that, I treasure a long ago Christmas Eve walk with my wife & kids from Camp Cove to Watson's Bay, simply idyllic.


"I appreciate it very much

The Northern Beaches would be an appropriate spot for such a couple to live "

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By *imon_hydeMan
over a year ago

Stockport

It's always a pleasure to read stories of this quality

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By *iddlesticksMan
over a year ago

My nan’s spare room.

This is publishable quality and I should know I’ve got an O level grade c in English Lit.

Very good, I love the way it’s building.

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By *naswingdress OP   Woman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

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The great Aussie barbie. Almost a cultural institution, laden with clichés. Get between an Aussie bloke and his tongs at your peril. That looked like Lachlan’s dad. Claire couldn’t suppress her smile. This scene had played out hundreds of times in her own life, with her own family, at school events, during elections (“democracy sausage” now firmly part of the Australian vocabulary). Nostalgia, again: the comfortable sort.

Lachlan introduced Claire to his family as she bought a sausage and a bottle of chilled water (and discreetly slipped a few notes into the donation tin). She didn’t remember his parents or siblings, wasn’t sure she’d met them. His parents, in particular, seemed to give Lachlan a knowing smile as she spoke to them. Odd. But... well. Families are odd.

They were interesting people, opinionated. The conversation quickly turned from small talk, to a discussion of the books they were reading. Claire had always been a voracious reader, and had brought a few books with her in case the weather had turned particularly foul (it was January, after all, you could never tell). She felt right in her element debating the merits of recent novels. Just after she arrived on Friday, she’d finished the latest Scandi noir thriller – the blood trail on snow drifts quite a contrast to her current surroundings – which Lachlan mentioned he was looking forward to reading. She gave an honest review (great plotting, some sloppy writing) without spoilers.

The temperature continued to soar. The heat and humidity together were oppressive, almost constricting them, the background hum of insects rising along with the heat. Further inland, the cicada chorus would be deafening.

The sun on Claire’s skin began to grow uncomfortable: her sunscreen was probably beginning to wear off. Time to seek shade, avoid burns or heat exhaustion. She realised that the heat was making her particularly tired, probably a remnant of yesterday’s fatigue.

Given the temperature, it was probably best to head inside. It was a bit of a shame. Claire was enjoying this very much. She wished his parents luck with the fundraising, and asked Lachlan if he wanted to borrow the thriller, come up to her beachside hut when he could be spared from the barbecue. His mother smiled pointedly at Lachlan, again, and said that he could be spared now, even for a couple of hours.

“Families are weird”, Claire thought wryly. But yes, this would be fine. She asked if Lachlan wanted to come with her, have a cup of coffee out of the sun. He readily agreed.

Claire and Lachlan returned to their discussion of Scandi noir as they strolled up the beach. Their thoughts a long way away – perhaps to the coffees they’d have when they met in Sydney in the future.

Not far behind them, at the surf lifesaving club, Patrick had risen from his towel to find some lunch, before working some more on his tan. As his eyes scanned across the beach he spotted Claire – who had become striking, not the forgettable little thing she once was – walking away with Lachlan. Once again he stared intensely at Claire, his gaze not wavering until she and Lachlan disappeared into her hut.

Even if he had not been so fixated, he might not have heard the rumbling of thunder in the distance.

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By *heRazorsEdgeMan
over a year ago

Wales/ All over UK

Wonderful writing as always!

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By *oukevCouple
over a year ago

Lancaster

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By *cotFit4funMan
over a year ago

Kettering

Oh looking forward to developments

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