FabSwingers.com forum: Erotic novel help

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hi guys,

I’m about half way through writing a few erotic short stories that i will be realising on Amazon kindle soon but I’m a bit torn on what way to take the story

It’s of a MF couple in the mid 20’s

Male has always been secretly bi curious and begins to experiment with anal play culminating in him using her rabbit before telling her about his desires to explore anal but not with another man.

They eventually get a strapon and while fucking he lets slip he wants a BBC.

Now as I have it at the moment she will find out he is into cuckolding find a man on a site like this

Surprise her bf by riding a bbc then is his turn obviously more elaborate than that but I’m not giving it all away

However I’m toying with the idea of him keeping her in the dark and planning it all himself having her blindfolded only to let her take it off and find him riding a bbc

Just want some thoughts thanks