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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

It wasn't the 1st time I had met Louise,and the memories a few months on we're as vivid as if it had only happened a week ago.Her kiss,her touch,the way her eyes rolled everytime her orgasms peaked still made my cock stir when reminiscing about the wild 3 some we had with her and her partner.

Tonight was to be another 3sum with her and her partner, but as it would turn out it ,it would become different to what was planned.

I had found myself rushing to get ready, a text from her had asked if I fancied meeting her sooner for a few drinks before heading back to enjoy the planned fun.

The chance to relax and chat in a vanilla environment would be perfect for us to build a nice relaxed atmosphere for later ,and now found myself walking into one of the quieter pubs in town. Walking up to the bar I glanced around, eyes searching amongst the groups of people out enjoying their Saturday night. The figure of a tall brunette with long legs, tight ass caught my attention, with her looking directly at me ,a smile spread across my face as I realised that she was still as damn hot as I had remembered her from our previous get together.

After ordering a drink and walking over to her, a gentle kiss on the cheek was all that was needed to steady the nerves. The conversation flowed and it wasn't long before we were talking in lowered voices as we chatted about experiences that we both had had since the last time we met. With the chat turning more risqué we found ourself sitting pressed against each other, both aware that our conversation would attract the attention of anyone who happened to overhear our talk which to many would sound like a description of a porn film if they had actually heard what we were saying.

The warmth of her thigh against mine was distracting,and it was impossible to stop myself from steeling glances at her body which was being rightfully flaunted in her tight dress.Heading over to the bar to order another round of drinks, watching her leaning over the bar,her ass pushing back against the tight material of her dress brought several flashbacks to mind.The last time I had seen her ass was when she was on all fours taking her mans cock in her mouth while I had driven my cock hard and deep into her from behind.

A pang of guilt shot through my head remembering that it was a meet planned for 3, standing up and walking to the toilet, taking the chance to compose myself and to try and take the ever increasing dirty thoughts out of my head until when we were in the company of her man.

Returning to the table I saw her placing her phone down,she didn't look to impressed.

'Well it looks like it will just be you and me tonight as Neil is suffering from a case of man flu and has crawled to his bed'

As if reading my thoughts, she was quick to say it was fine and that she had his permission for some intimate fun tonight,adding that although her man wasn't feeling in the best condition to play that he would be turned on hearing his woman being fucked in the room next door. Any thoughts that she would be disappointed that she was only going to have the attention of one male tonight disappeared immediately,the twinkle in her eye was making it clear that either way she intended to have a hot uninhibited night wether she was taking one cock or two !

With no need to rush back to join her man as previously planned we got back to conversations of our sexual adventures which was adding to the build up of the sexual tension between us.

As the drinks flowed I found her slipping her leg over my thigh,her finger tips running up and down my inner thigh,a teasing grin appearing as her hand brushed over my crotch which the table and my shirt had been doing a good job of hidding the evident bulge of my cock straining against my jeans.Her hand gradually wandered higher under my shirt and it wasn't long before her finger tips found their way into the waist band of my jeans, with no underwear on it didn't take much movement for her fingers to casually run over the tip of my cock, the teasing feather light touch making it twitch and strain even further. My left hand had slowly been working its way along her thigh and up her dress,my fingers tracing gentle circles on her inner thigh, finger tips creeping towards her underwear. My facial expression of both surprise and pleasure brought a cheeky smile to her face, i didnt find the material of her underwear that I was expecting but instead found my finger tips brushing against her soft smooth skin of her already wet pussy.

Leaning forward to kiss me she smiled and whispered that she had taken them off while I had been at the bar getting more drinks in.

Her soft delicate lips pressed against mine, her tongue darting into my mouth,for a second our tongues explored each other's before pulling away ,not before gentle biting my lower lip in a playful teasing way. Leaning in to kiss her again ,I felt her body go ridged and she instantly pulled away putting a larger distance between our bodies than had been all night. Instantly I knew why. Her man my have known about our liaison but her reaction could only be down to her seeing somebody she knew.

It was one thing sharing the pleasures of 3sums together, it was a totally different when someone who knew her had seen her with a guy who wasn't her man.

Without saying anything ,she knew I had sussed what was happening and she slid off her seat and headed towards the direction of whoever it was that she knew that had come in.

Picking up my phone, trying to look as innocent as possible I began to mess about with it. After about 5 minutes I looked up from my phone and casually looked over to the area she had headed to. Half expecting to see her engaged in a heated panicked discussion with however it was that had seen her I was surprised to see her laughing and smiling with another female.

Walking back over towards our table with her friend in toe it was quite clear her friend was already worse for wear as her high heels and alcohol intake was making her unstable on her feet.

The vodka and s had obviously been flowing all night where ever her friend had been and I was greeted with a 'tut tut' followed by an alcohol induced sly smile. Catching my eye Louise indicated to follow her over to the bar.

At the bar Louise quickly explained that she had told her friend that it was just a wee cheeky kiss she had witnessed but she hadn't had to say any more as her friend already pretty hammered from too many vodkas and s was in a 'all men are bastards' mood and had just slurred

' good for you girl, go out and get what you can' followed up with her saying

'take him back to mine and just fuck him'

With the situation now less of a concern than 5 minutes before ,we returned back to where Nicola was sitting and carried on drinking and talking with the conversation somewhat different to before we were interrupted.

With last orders at the bar called we finished our drinks and headed for the door, as we left the pub,Louise quietly said under her breath to just go with the flow and it was all sorted. Looking at her, knowing she was meaning we were heading back to nicola's I went to say about Neil,

' he knows and is cool with it, he just wants all the details later' was all she needed to say.

Climbing into a taxi,Nicola half sitting half slouched on the seat,Louise sat next to her,with me taking the seat opposite her. While Nicola was going on a d*unken ramble to the taxi driver, Louise's foot tapped against mine to catch my attention, as I looked at her she let her legs subtly fall apart, the street lights creating intermittent moments of visibility letting me catch a glimpse of her freshly shaved pussy. Once she knew I had seen what she was teasing me with,she crossed her legs again and gave me a long seductive smile.There was no doubting that this girl was hungry for cock and regardless of where ,she was going to take as much of it as I could give her.

Once the driver pulled up outside her friends apartment,we were soon inside,heading up the stairs with Nicola leading the way with her staggering trying to tackle the flights of stairs we were climbing up. Each time Nicola swayed and stumbled on the stairs it gave me the chance to let my hands slip up Louise's dress who was climbing the stairs in front of me,her skirt sitting several inches higher than it had been sitting all night. As I had been teasing her she had deliberately let her skirt rise, tempting me to take my teasing further and further. As we reached the top landing Louise paused and pushed back onto my wandering hand, my fingers pushing past her swollen wet pussy lips and pressing deeper into her. It was clear she was past the point that she couldn't restrain herself and a quiet gasp escaped her lips, Nicola too d*unk to even notice fumbled with her keys while trying to open the door while Louise started to grind against my exploring fingers, Squeezing her thighs tight together holding my hand in position for several moments ,she relaxed the grip her thighs had on my hand before climbing the last few steps and followed her friend into the apartment.

Shoes off and sliding onto the large corner piece sofa,Louise pulled me onto the sofa next to her. As Nicola wandered about the apartment bouncing about off the walls, Louise slid back against the sofa ,pulling her legs up onto it before letting them drop wide open giving me a full view of where her long slender legs lead. I had let her enjoy teasing me but now it was time to start to take control.

Leaning forward,my hand running up the back of her neck I pulled her towards my lips, there was no delicate kiss this time, lips pressed hard against hers,fingers slipping through her hair, before gripping tight,pulling back her head back firmly my lips never leaving hers.

The urgency in her kisses telling me her sexual tension was at breaking point, she pulled away from my lips,her head turning,pulling against my hand which was entwined in her hair,her mouth next to my ear whispering

' I want to feel that cock deep inside me'

before I felt her lips start to snake down my neck.

I released my grip on the back of her neck, pulled away and stood up, the look on her face was like that of a kid who had had their sweetie taken off them.turning around I walked towards the kitchen hearing her purr

'Your a fucking tease'

As I reached the kitchen ,Nicola practically fell through the living room door dragging a duvet behind her.flinging it on the sofa,she then nearly fell over the coffee table as she swayed back n forth while picking up her phone and tried to unlock it.

Standing in the darkened kitchen, I poured a glass of water and admired the view form the top floor apartment.

I could hear Nicola telling whoever it was she was on the phone to hurry up and get a taxi to hers,after 5 minutes or so and Nicola still slurring and rambling on the phone Louise appeared at the kitchen door way.

The silhouette of her gorgeous figure was cast into the room by the natural night sky light, walking over towards me before slipping her arms around my waist.

Pressing her cheek against mine she whispered

'She's absolutely wasted' before giggling quietly.

As she leaned in to kiss me my arms reached down towards hers which were pulling me tight against her.taking her hands in mine our fingers clasping around each other's I leaned towards her and let my lips move closer to hers.just as they were about to touch I stepped forward and turned her around at the same time,her back now pressed against the wall that I had been leaning against. i pressed my body hard against hers making sure she could feel my cock pressing against her thigh through my jeans,forcefully taking her hands from her side and pushing them up against the wall above her head before letting our lips meet again, slow forceful kisses, biting her lip each time I pulled away before moving in to taste her delicate lips again.

With my left hand still pinning her arms above her head my other hand ran down over her face,lifting her chin with my free hand before kissing her with a sense of more urgency this time. She responded by moaning very quietly and trying to catch my bottom lip with her teeth. Moving my head back away from her attempt to tease me back I slowly shook my head before locking my eyes onto hers. Even in the dimly lit room I could see the passion and lust in her eyes. Holding hers stare, my hand moved from her chin down over the front of her dress,fingers following the prominent curves of her bra-less breasts before my fingers finding her hardened nipples pushing out against my touch.My eyes never leaving hers ,each of her nipples found my fingers brushing over them gently followed by my fingers pinching and pulling them,the material of her dress letting me roll them between my fingers. Increasing the pressure of each pinch before releasing them just as her mouth opened to let out a gasp of both pleasure and pain.

Again she leaned forward to kiss me,again I pulled away, pressing firmly against her arms which were still pressed hard against the wall above her. My other hand fell to the centre of her breasts and followed the line of her cleavage down over her stomach,continuing down until she could feel my fingers running up and down her inner thighs. As they started to travel up towards her pussy the moist feeling at the tops of her inner thighs told me all I needed to know.

Positioning my feet between hers a quick sweeping movement had her legs spread apart, my thumb hooking under the hem of her skirt and pulling it upwards.with her dress sitting on on her waist, her pussy on full display,the moonlight coming through the window still casting enough light to see her lips glistening with her own juices.holding her there ,leaving her feeling exposed her hips trying to buck towards my free hand each time as she felt my fingers press against her hardened clit,each time only letting her feel the sensation for a split second.pulling her arms down by her side i dropped to my knees, my hands not letting hers move from her hips. leaning in i let my tongue roll over her clit, her sweet tasting juices instantly hitting the taste buds on the tip of my tongue. Forgetting where she was she let out a loud long moan, pulling away I saw her glance towards the kitchen door, but it was obvious that Nicola was totally oblivious to what's going on as she was still bending the ear of the poor guy who was on the other end of the phone listening to her d*unken,incoherent conversation.

My tongue swiftly moved back over her clit, circling over it, taking it between my lips ,my tongue flicking over it in a fast steady rhythm. Trying to move her hands away from her hips so she could pull me harder against her clit,keeping my grip firm on her hands,I let my lips and teeth tease her pussy lips,gently tugging and pulling on them.pulling her hand behind her back,holding them again with just the one hand my other hand moved between her legs and slipped 2 two fingers deep into her soaking hole.

Alternating between teasing her clit n her lips with my tongue my fingers rubbed against the inner front wall of her pussy, knowing I hit the spot I was looking for when her legs buckled slightly.standing back up pulling arms up above the her head again and leaning against them with my one arm the other hand starting to build up a fast firm rythmn against her Gspot. As the intensity of the pleasure began to build deep inside her she tried to close her legs, but with my legs stopping them from closing she had no physical way of stopping the pressure of pleasure which was suddenly,uncontrollably building with ferocity inside her. Her eyes started to fluttered as i slipped a third finger inside her, biting her lower lip,shaking her head slowly from side to side,then her eyes looked straight into mine,

'Dont'

'Oh god'

'Dont, your going to make me...'

Before she could finish whispering what she wanted to say a forth finger was now working with the other three as they rubbed and pressed hard against her special spot.

'Ohh fuck,please,Ohh fuck,no,no,Ohh fucking hell'

As the words spilled from her mouth her moans were covered with the sound of splashing, feeling her juices flow down over my fingers and hand as her body gave way to the spiralling crescendo of pleasure.

Pausing for second to reach into my body warmer pocket. Just like she had surprised me by removing her underwear,I had my own surprise for her.

A look of slight confusion crossed her face as the heat between her legs was replaced by the feel of cold stainless steel. Using her own juices I gently worked the bulbous head of the silver butt plug with a blue crystal stone at the head off it into her tight ass.she couldn't,she wouldn't take it at 1st but with a whimper she let her muscles relax and buried her face in my neck as the plug slipped into her.

Her legs began to buckle,almost unable to hold herself up as the pleasure ripped through her body as my fingers returned to that special spot deep inside her soaking pussy. Her juices gushing and dripping onto the floor as wave after wave of pleasure tore through her body again and again. Pressing my body against hers to stop her from collapsing to the floor,her legs no longer able to take her weight. I held her pressed against the wall, her juices trickling down the inside of her soft thighs.

Letting her arms fall back down to the side of her soft gently curved hips,hooking my arm around her waist I took her weight in my arm and pulled her close for a deep long passionate kiss.fingers stroking her cheek,her breathing gradually slowing down. Her lips were met with my soft gentle kisses, each time pulling my head back to stare into her eyes before leaning back in for a kiss,each lighter and softer than the previous one.

Standing in silence in the kitchen,she caught her breath.The apartment was silent, Nicola had finally given up her d*unken quest for cock and left the living room and gone to her room.

The corners of her mouth turned upwards as Louise let a naughty smile spread across her face. Gently pushing me away from her she reached up and let the straps of her dress roll off her shoulders,her dress seeming to just glide down over her body till it was on the floor at her feet.

' now it's your turn'

was all she said as she walked towards the kitchen door ,naked all but for the blue crystal head of the butt plug which was still held in place between her tight firm ass cheeks.

Taking a moment I then followed her through to find her sat on the edge of the sofa. tilting her head slightly,and with a real look of hunger in her eyes she looked at me before raising a finger and giving me the 'come here' gesture. Walking up towards her i stood in front of her, her hands quickly tugging at my belt.

As she slipped my belt off and slid my jeans down I began to slip the rest of my clothes off. As i balanced to slip my socks off my motion of thought was broken as I felt her soft lips, warm mouth and eager tongue start to work its way over my throbbing cock. Letting my head fall back as she worked her mouth up and down my shaft, her hand squeezing and pulling on my swollen balls. The sensation sent shivers through my body, my hand finding it's way back onto the back of her head, gently rocking in time with the eager movement of her head . Each time she devoured my cock she took more of me in her mouth until I felt her lips wrapped round the base of it. Holding her mouth there without the slightest of gag reflexes I then felt her tongue running up and down,around and around my throbbing shaft. Then I felt her warm tongue flicking down over my balls,gently sucking each one at a time. Now it was her who had my legs starting to buckle with the intensity of the pleasure.

Lifting her head away from my cock and balls she sat back on the sofa ,lifting her legs so her feet sat on the edge of the sofa.

' fuck me and fuck me hard'

was all she had to say.

Lifting her legs over my shoulders I looked down to see her ass still holding the silver butt plug firmly in place,then I knelt between her legs taking the tip of my cock and running it up and down her lips before pushing just very tip into her.

Leaning forward my lips were met with hers and with a long hard thrust she felt my full length push deep inside her. The warm tight feeling of her pussy almost made me come there and then, Taking a second to compose myself i started to slide deep into her,each time my cock slipping fully out before finding its way back deep into her. With each deep thrust I would grind my hips towards her,my pelvic bone pressing against her clit. Her fingers ran down my back,nails digging in as each thrust got harder and deeper, faster and harder ,the rhythm building up slowly. as her nails dug deeper into my back,I put my full weight on my left arm and with my right hand I squeezed two fingers in against my cock in her already tightly filled hole. As each thrust of my cock slammed into her ,my fingers again started to work her spot.

The sensation of my cock driving hard into her,balls slapping against her ass and the butt plug and my fingers furiously teasing her gspot was too much for her, her legs that were wrapped around the back of my head pulled me in tight against her as her orgasm burst through and sent her head back in sheer delight, her juices exploding all over my cock and balls and she couldn't contain a loud cry

' oh Jesus,fucking Christ'

Her body shaking and shuddering,eyes rolling as her orgasm took complete control of her body. Feeling her pussy pulsing and throbbing around my cock and fingers was too much, feeling my balls tighten I pulled out my cock just as I felt my balls twinge before beginning to empty.Despite her own wave of pleasure Heather quickly leaned up and forward and grabbed my cock with her hand, pumping furiously making me come even harder as I shot my hot sticky load of cum over her chest and face.

Collapsing next to her it took several minutes to catch our breath. Wrapping her legs around mine,entwining our bodies together,our heart beats raced in time with each other,feeling our thumping heart beats gradually slowing as we shared a very long slow delicate kiss.

It was only then that I saw the living room door move slightly, before seeing Nicola moving quickly across the hall back into her room in a not so d*unken fashion !!

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By *atelotmanMan
over a year ago

Chatham

Great reading,hope there is more?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks, appreciate you taking the time to read it.

For this particular story there isn't, I could go on however other stories to be written.

This and my previous story are maybe to tame for some people but they will gradually become dirtier as I go along.

I write the stories on my phone so can take a while to do but depending what peeps think of this story then there will be more.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great read

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Great read"

Glad you like

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By *orneyloverMan
over a year ago

Boston

Loved this story. look forward to reading more like it.

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By *awty_MissDynomiteNo1Woman
over a year ago

No idea, I'm lost. Damn Sat nav!

Yummy

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Loved this story. look forward to reading more like it."

Appreciate the comment m8,thanks

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Yummy "

Leave you hungry for more Miss D

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By *mzipopWoman
over a year ago

ayrshire

Such a good read! I love a good story that makes ya feel like it could totally be you in it xxx

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

That is the way I try and write them.

Once I start writing I tend to not stop lol.

This one took about 5 hrs to do. I end up changing bits and rewording them,but the sooner I get my PC up and running again the better because it's a nitemare doing it via phone.

Glad you liked and hopefully you enjoyed my previous one and enjoy the ones to come

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By *mzipopWoman
over a year ago

ayrshire


"That is the way I try and write them.

Once I start writing I tend to not stop lol.

This one took about 5 hrs to do. I end up changing bits and rewording them,but the sooner I get my PC up and running again the better because it's a nitemare doing it via phone.

Glad you liked and hopefully you enjoyed my previous one and enjoy the ones to come "

it's definitely the best way to write them. That's the first one of yours that I have read I will need to go and read your other now and no doubt I will enjoy it also and the ones to follow xx

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By *awty_MissDynomiteNo1Woman
over a year ago

No idea, I'm lost. Damn Sat nav!


"Yummy

Leave you hungry for more Miss D "

Always sweetie

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"That is the way I try and write them.

Once I start writing I tend to not stop lol.

This one took about 5 hrs to do. I end up changing bits and rewording them,but the sooner I get my PC up and running again the better because it's a nitemare doing it via phone.

Glad you liked and hopefully you enjoyed my previous one and enjoy the ones to come it's definitely the best way to write them. That's the first one of yours that I have read I will need to go and read your other now and no doubt I will enjoy it also and the ones to follow xx"

'Short story for the female reader'

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Yummy

Leave you hungry for more Miss D Always sweetie "

I have a few in mind,once I decide which one I'll do and find myself in the mood I'll put another one together

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By *ilth_mistressWoman
over a year ago

glasgow

Another fantastic write ,one is so looking forward to when the mind unleashes the dirt

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By *ugar1andspice2Couple
over a year ago

Leicester


"Thanks, appreciate you taking the time to read it.

For this particular story there isn't, I could go on however other stories to be written.

This and my previous story are maybe to tame for some people but they will gradually become dirtier as I go along.

I write the stories on my phone so can take a while to do but depending what peeps think of this story then there will be more. "

Dirtier oh yes please put one of them up

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By *ravate33Man
over a year ago

cork

great story man.loved the detail..keep them cumming

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Fab bedtime reading. Another good story.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Another fantastic write ,one is so looking forward to when the mind unleashes the dirt "

Now why am I not surprised you ant wait for the filth x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Thanks, appreciate you taking the time to read it.

For this particular story there isn't, I could go on however other stories to be written.

This and my previous story are maybe to tame for some people but they will gradually become dirtier as I go along.

I write the stories on my phone so can take a while to do but depending what peeps think of this story then there will be more.

Dirtier oh yes please put one of them up "

Work already in progress,with a hint more of a 'Fab' style of play

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Fab bedtime reading. Another good story. "

Well I hope it didn't send you to sleep lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Such a good read. Haven't been on the forum in a while so was nice to read this story for my first time back!!

Was good. But hope it isn't finished. Want to know if anything is to happen with Nicola

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Such a good read. Haven't been on the forum in a while so was nice to read this story for my first time back!!

Was good. But hope it isn't finished. Want to know if anything is to happen with Nicola "

well im now considering extending this story,what's peoples opinion, new story or continue this one ??

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By *itoffun21Man
over a year ago

sligo

Great story so far in my opinion it would be a crime not to finish it :P keep up the good work

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Such a good read. Haven't been on the forum in a while so was nice to read this story for my first time back!!

Was good. But hope it isn't finished. Want to know if anything is to happen with Nicola

well im now considering extending this story,what's peoples opinion, new story or continue this one ??"

Continue this one!! I have all sorts of ideas in my head the way you can swing this one

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Well I'll make a start on part 2 and post it in a Cpl of day, need to get the brain working again lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Fab bedtime reading. Another good story.

Well I hope it didn't send you to sleep lol "

Far from it. Anorher vote to continue this story.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Good detail and enjoyable ready Mr . Keep them coming xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks Rose,made a start last night.

Will keep you posted when the next one is finished Shelly

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By *ustcutieWoman
over a year ago

edinburgh

Another goodie

More please

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By *untimes6969Man
over a year ago

Newcastle upon Tyne

Great story - well written!

There's certainly more to be told - great open ending!

Just keep to Louise and not involve Heather (she sneaked in at the end!)

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Great story - well written!

There's certainly more to be told - great open ending!

Just keep to Louise and not involve Heather (she sneaked in at the end!)

"

Lol, the joys of writing stories on your phone and missing mistakes

I decided to change the name when I was making changes,that one slipped by me.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Another goodie

More please "

Thank you ,more on the way

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Been two weeks now. have you wrote any more?? Please say you have

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I'm in the middle of part 2, hoping to have it posted on the forum by the weekend

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I'm in the middle of part 2, hoping to have it posted on the forum by the weekend "

Two weeks later. What happened??

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

What happened? It's been an age waiting for part 2

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