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"What are they going to say to the cops "we found this naked couple in the middle of nowhere we all got our cocks out and had a wank because it was so offensive to us..."" | |||
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"Why do people have to pick faults in the "stories and fantasies" section? Leave the man alone to tell his story!" I think the point that some people are trying to make is that for a story of this type to work well, it has to be believable. And that means all elements of the story: whether setting, descriptions of what’s taking place or the behaviour of all concerned. And it seems to some, that the behaviour ISN’T believable. If OP is trying to tell the story as a recollection of something that happened to him, then that element is what people are having difficulty with. If OP was trying to tell it as a Fantasy, then it wouldn’t matter really, because it’s a fantasy, NOT a recollection of (supposedly) true events. | |||
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"Christ remind me just to send in any fantasys to the pulitzer prise instead of here, it would get less critiqued." Don't get to disheartened, you carry on writing your stories...be they based on true events or total fantasies. As long as you enjoy doing it, that's all that matters. | |||
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"Christ remind me just to send in any fantasys to the pulitzer prise instead of here, it would get less critiqued." 1) I didn't criticize, I tried to explain in a moderating way what I believed was trying to be said by those who were criticizing you 2) just trying to help | |||
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