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"Grammar police strike again WTF ![]() Not about basic grammatical errors, or spelling mistakes. Read the 1st paragraph out loud, it does not make sense!!! Reading it through before posting would of helped him to see this, and edit, so people could enjoy the story, without having to solve a puzzle 1st!! If this isnt pointed out, then same will happen with future posts. ![]() | |||
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"sorry guys unlucky for me I was never the best story writer as I am dyslexic, was just trying to get my story across. as I was still in the mood when I got home I thought I would share it . was well use to getting the same corrections with every thing I gone in school but when your dyslexic ya cant turn it off lol but I understand you guys are just trying to be helpful ![]() thats y i suggested reading it out loud. Then you can tell if it makrs sense or if youve jumbled the words up. 3brothers, all dyslexic, so i no this works! ![]() | |||
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"sorry guys unlucky for me I was never the best story writer as I am dyslexic, was just trying to get my story across. as I was still in the mood when I got home I thought I would share it . was well use to getting the same corrections with every thing I gone in school but when your dyslexic ya cant turn it off lol but I understand you guys are just trying to be helpful ![]() Bless ya Hun, I got the story!! Some people need to think before they put nasty comments!! Shame on them!! Take no notice x | |||
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"Ignore the tossers who are more interested in 'picking faults' they're obviously soooo perfect ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | |||
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"thanks again guys , you always see when someone put something up the 1st thing some people do is look to make fun of them or what they have written in what ever way they can and it doesn't not be long till other follow with there own smart comment its nice to see that this time people took it into there own hands and turned on the haters , I am sure they don't feel so high and mighty now lol and again thanks to all who just took the story for what it was and didn't take it as an opportunity to be hateful, still some genuinely nice people out there ![]() See, that makes perfect English sense. So you can do it. Maybe you were just confused due to being horny when you wrote the first post. | |||
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