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"This is going to be good reading me thinks lol." No it's going to turn daft now, bet the 4 black guys suddenly own them. First part was great, stories always start great. Then turn ridicously stupid, which is a shame as OP has knack of writing just takes it too far | |||
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"Oh thanks lol you never know rob might escape and fuk all the black guys then kick the bitch in the fanny lol. " Going on every other story she has written the couple get fucked, lose house and wages to black guys, totally far fetched and every story goes same way. The OP just needs to keep it real to keep it a good story, something OP struggles to do after first part | |||
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"Oh thanks lol you never know rob might escape and fuk all the black guys then kick the bitch in the fanny lol. Going on every other story she has written the couple get fucked, lose house and wages to black guys, totally far fetched and every story goes same way. The OP just needs to keep it real to keep it a good story, something OP struggles to do after first part" Its there fantasy let them tell it there way. If you are not keen read a different post. | |||
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"Oh thanks lol you never know rob might escape and fuk all the black guys then kick the bitch in the fanny lol. Going on every other story she has written the couple get fucked, lose house and wages to black guys, totally far fetched and every story goes same way. The OP just needs to keep it real to keep it a good story, something OP struggles to do after first part Its there fantasy let them tell it there way. If you are not keen read a different post." I read all stories, and was giving constructive critism not moaning, they could make stories tell so much better if kept it realistic. They write well, just too far fetched. Plus open forum which is open for all to make what comments they feel fair as long as within rules | |||
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