FabSwingers.com forum: My first attempt at erotic snippet

By *arbie2020 OP Man
13 weeks ago

Dublin 9

Hi All, so I am not a writer of any kind but I thought I would try write some short story (if you can call it that)

Happy for anyone to leave a review, positive or negative are welcome but maybe if they comment is negative not to go over board lol

Ok here it is

A hard working woman in the office and at home, clocking off one job to clock into another job at home. Always the Decision maker and problem resolver with no praise or thanks for all she does. She wouldn't have a problem doing all that is unfairly asked of her if she got to feel like a woman in the bedroom and be pleasured the way she should. Unfortunately her sex life isn't what she wants... some women would be happy with the odd present of perfume and a quickie from behind.... But you.. this is unacceptable and disrespectful to you. You crave to be treated like the high sex drive lady you are. Good conversation and being listened to is what you want with giving full control to the man in the bedroom...as your sick of being in control all the time. A lady in public that is any mans dream to have on their arm and a woman that wants good hard sex to bring her back to how sex used to be .... Where did it go wrong in the bedroom...did you do something wrong or make this problem yourself? No no no it's not you its him... His sense of entitlement and thinking its all fine to just go through the montions in bed.... what a fool.

Now she has had enough and is willing to discover new experiences with or without him. The chains are off, the mental fog has cleared and she is now like a kid in a sweet shop with so many options she had forgotten about... The joys, temptation and the feeling of being sexually alive again is overwhelming in a positive way....

To be continued...