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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I'd like to meet u at a hotel, u open the door to me

dressed in a slutty outfit. U ammidiatly grab me for

a kiss and push me on the bed. Tell me to lay

back and not say a word. As I lay back u demand

me to stick my tounge out and not move. You

hover over me and squat down pulling your soaked panties to one side revealing your wet cunt. U

lightly brush your pussy just so it touches tip of

my tounge. You away back and forth getting faster

and faster. U let out a loud moan and u have an

orgasm and it gushes out of that tight little hole of

yours all over my face and u make me lap it all up, well u give me no choice as u sit on my face my

nose running your clot while my entire tounge is

stuck right up your pussy. U taste so sweet and

soft. Now it's my turn to have some fun. I grab

your hair and slam u down on the bed open your

mouth and ram my cock right to the back till your eyes are watering. Then u are begging me to fill u

up with my. If fat weapon. So I bend u over, giving

that ass of yours a spank or two. U are face down

with your ass in the air and your spreading your

cheeks apart tell my to take my pic with any hole.

I see how wet your pussy is as its glistening with juices and your own cum, then I edge the tip of my

cock just the head of it then I ask u what u want,

and before u can say cock, I plunge the whole 9

inches to the back and u let out a loud gasp and a

moan and u just. Collapse in ecstasy and I'm

pummelling away at your cunt for a good 10 mins, spanking your ass red roar at the same time, then

u tell me u want my your ass to be stretched apart

so I pull out and spot on your asshole and slap my

dick right up that naughty little ass. I'm giving u it

good and your begging me and telling me, please

Dave, please Dave I want all your nasty muck all in my face and mouth bit I tell u I'll cum where I

want so I let out one last thrust and I empty my

sack in your ass, pull out and I grab your hair and

head back and just have enough cum in my balls

to smoother some last drops of cum on that dirty

little tounge of yours, then without a whisper u grab hold of my semi hard cock and tender ball

sack and lap every last bit of cum you can out of

them and sucking off all your juices off. You then

look up at me with them pretty little eyes and say

to me, I'm such a hungry little cock whore, same

time tommorrow but can you bring an extra cock with you please. I want you both to destroy both

my holes at the same time repo

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Could do with a bit more character development

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I arnt a novelist. Just a guy who wrote what he thinks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You clearly aren't good at grammar and spelling!

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By *he_voyeursCouple
over a year ago

Town

"You clearly aren't good at grammar and spelling!"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Does it really matter about hit grammar and spelling?

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By *uckoldandWifeCouple
over a year ago

Manchester

This guy has obviously done his best, if you ignore the spelling and the grammar and appreciate his effort the content isn't bad, it's raw and passionate. Anyone who makes an effort to entertain us shouldn't be battered down without any attempt at positive feedback. Come on give him a chance.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"This guy has obviously done his best, if you ignore the spelling and the grammar and appreciate his effort the content isn't bad, it's raw and passionate. Anyone who makes an effort to entertain us shouldn't be battered down without any attempt at positive feedback. Come on give him a chance.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thanks to the people who appreciate the story. I'm not trying to be no raul Dahl or nothing just a little fantasy what I wanted to share. Some people on here just like to nit pick at things but those who like it thanks.

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By *lave4umidsMan
over a year ago

Birmingham

Ignore the ones that want too nit pick, as long as you enjoyed writing it then there will be someone who enjoys reading it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Omg! Imagine if Roald Dahl did erotic novels! James And The Giant Peaches? Charlie And The Chocolate Starfish?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I enjoyed it. The spelling and grammer matched the ferocious nature of the story.

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By *issHottieBottieWoman
over a year ago

Kent

"Omg! Imagine if Roald Dahl did erotic novels! James And The Giant Peaches? Charlie And The Chocolate Starfish?

Hahaha.

Charlie and the great glass dildo x

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