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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

This is the story of Lucy's wild night. Even now, months later, she'll readily admit she still doesn't understand why she said 'yes' to a stranger online, or why she agreed to his demands. But she accepts it was her choice and that night changed her forever.

Lucy always described herself as 'ordinary'. "Just a woman," she would say. "Nothing special." But of course every woman is special. 48 years old, a wife and mother, and a successful career in teaching. She had risen through the school over the years and now held the lofty position of Assistant Head, although she'd quickly remind people that 'assistant' effectively means doing all the heavy lifting while the Head sat in his office with his feet up!

Women have their fantasies, of course, but it's a daring leap from fantasy to reality. Lucy had confided in one or two close friends that her marriage had become dull and lifeless. Work was stressful. Teenage pupils are demanding and rude and apathetic. She was tired and craved a little 'me-time'. Something sensual or sexy. Just to feel whole again. Not a new husband or lover or anything complicated like that. Just... well, you know... a good seeing to!

Her friends were sympathetic, suggesting porn or toys, or simply sharing her confession with a knowing grimace. And then, over a coffee one afternoon, Janet simply said matter-of-factly "Oh I know a place you'll find a man. No strings. Just fun."

Janet was a solicitor. Not the kind of woman you imagine would be playing around! Lucy was slightly taken aback, but Janet just winked and smiled.

"I've handled enough divorces to know where the men hang out for casual sex," she continued, dropping to a whisper. "It can be a lot of fun if you're careful."

Lucy swallowed. "You've actually..." she began but couldn't bring herself to finish the sentance. Janet simply smiled again, knowingly.

"How do think my marriage lasted so long," she murmurred. "If you want the details, just let me know."

Over the next couple of days, Lucy couldn't get the idea out of her head. She found herself daydreaming about secret trysts, lithe, sexy men in dark rooms. She even caught herself in the staff room, staring at Jonathan, the new Head of Phys Ed, only 31, a charming young man and sexy as hell. She tore her eyes away from his tight little arse and flushed with embarrassment when she realised she was wet. "For goodness sake, control youself," she reprimanded herself quietly.

She was restless that night, still hot with sexy thoughts, imagining herself wrapped in muscular arms and powerful thighs. Her husband was snoring so she slipped a hand into her pjs and found her vulva, squeezing it gently and stroking her clit. She moistened immediately and quietly fingered her slit, trying not to groan with the shivers of pleasure it brought. Thoughts of hard cock drifted into her head.

She'd been married for 20 years so her sex life wasn't terribly varied, but she wasn't a prude either. She'd had her fair share of men at university, plus a little experimentation. It felt like a lifetime ago, but she imagined being on her knees, sucking a nice fat cock, the man groaning with pleasure. After a few minutes she shuddered silently as her pussy flooded with her juices. It was a beautiful release and she sighed deeply and relaxed into the pillow.

Then she did something she'd never done before. Bringing her hand up to her face, she licked and sucked her fingers, tasting the pungent, sticky fluid. She thought it might be disgusting, but it turned out to be quite pleasant, which surprised her. She realised there were many things she'd never done before, and life was slipping past.

"I need cock," she whispered to herself and made a decision.

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By *urvy cathy2023TV/TS
over a year ago

rathmines

Brilliant start

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By *lknhungMan
over a year ago

Luton

Well written I’m enjoying this start

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By *etsplaynow696969Man
over a year ago

Burton on Trent

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By *bbott24Couple
over a year ago

Devizes

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

good start

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By *yTreacleMan
over a year ago

Winchester

Fabulous

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great start xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Promising start.....

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By *ndrea54TV/TS
over a year ago

cambridge

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By *J GeminiTV/TS
over a year ago

Northumberland

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By *nyx99Man
over a year ago

London

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Janet texted her the web address with a little wink emoji. 'Have fun!' she added.

'Just research at the moment,' Lucy replied.

'Sure. I believe you,' came the sarcastic reply. Janet added an aubergine and a love heart, which Lucy quickly deleted. Then another message appeared: 'Maybe it'll be...' followed by several aubergines. Lucy almost chok*d on her coffee. 'STOP IT!' she stabbed into her phone.

It had been a busy day, but eventually the pupils were gone and she was alone in her office. She pulled out her phone, switched to a private browser and tapped in the address.

It was obviously a hook-up site and within minutes of hesitantly setting up an account, her inbox started filling with messages. 'Fucking hell, I haven't even added a picture yet!' She thought, but smiled inwardly when she realised that here were dozens of men who want to have sex with her. The initial thrill soon turned sour when she started reading the messages.

'Hey babe, wanna fuck?'

'I'm gonna make you squirt'

'Take my load bitch'

Lucy sighed and started hitting DELETE. After an hour the messages tailed off and Lucy stopped looking. She fired a curt message to Janet with an annoyed emoji. 'Patience,' came the reply. 'Just ignore the idiots. Real men will be along soon.'

Having dismissed it from her mind, Lucy spent the evening doing all the usual things. She finished the dishes wearily and wandered into the lounge. Hubby was parked in front of the telly watching something monotonous about cars.

"I'm heading up," she murmured, suddenly tired. He just grunted, eyes glued to the screen.

As she slipped out of her blouse and skirt, she considered her body in the full length mirror. 'Am I still attractive?' she wondered, turning to check her bum. She lifted the cheeks and frowned as they flopped back into place with a wobble. 'Well they could do with work!' she sighed. She turned towards the mirror and cupped her breasts. They were still firm. Maybe not quite as pert as she remembered but not bad for 48! She brushed her nipples and felt a little jolt of sexual energy shoot down to her pussy. Smiling she tweaked and squeezed them, teasing herself as she began to moisten down below. 'Maybe a quick wank before he comes to bed,' she thought with a naughty grin, then remembered the hook up site.

Grabbing her phone, Lucy hopped into bed naked and logged in. Wow - nearly 50 messages! Does it ever end? Most of the messages were banal, but she was horny now so she scrolled through them, occasionally checking out profile pictures of cock. So many different shapes and sizes! And colours of course, not that she had any preference.

Then it popped up and immediately caught her attention. The message simply said 'Tuesday'. Curious.

'Welcome. I expect you've got through the first million messages and I know how depressing that is. I'm not like any of them. I'm not going to waste your time or mine, so take a look at my profile and if you'd like to chat, just reply and tell me more. Look after yourself.'

That was it. No nasty demands or withering put downs. No begging for a meeting or whiney statements about how 'my wife doesn't understand'. Lucy was intrigued. She clicked through to his profile. His name was Tom (or at least that's the name he'd used.) The profile image was a simple low-key portrait. It was dark but she could make out a rugged chin and sultry eyes. No other pics. 'Not much to go on there,' she thought. 'Bit of a mystery man, eh?'

His profile page talked about how he enjoyed giving and receiving pleasure, how life was too short not to have fun, in and out of the bedroom. 'I'm not the marrying kind,' he wrote. 'I enjoy the company of a woman, helping her to relax, explore her sexuality and become free. No expectations. No commitments. If you're that woman, I'd love to hear from you.'

Lucy stared at the profile. It looked scripted, firm but emotionless. In her head she accepted that this was exactly what she'd been fantasizing about, but now that this mysterious stranger was staring out from the screen, she suddenly felt a little intrepidation. Maybe even fear.

'Let's see what happens,' she thought. 'I can always say no.' She tapped in her first message, hoping to sound flirty but not too desperate.

'Hello stranger. Finally someone who sounds interesting. Maybe what I'm looking for. Why does your message say 'Tuesday'?'

'That's enough,' she mused. 'I'm not giving anything away yet. I'll see what Mr Tom has to say for himself first and then decide.'

She deleted a bunch more messages then came back to Tom's profile while she waited for a reply. Gazing at the picture she started to imagine what he might be like. She flushed with lusty thoughts, one hand between her legs, the other gripping the phone. Her pussy quivered as she stroked her clit. Feint sounds of laughter drifted up from the lounge, presumably some chat show on the box. As she waited, Lucy slipped a finger into her vaginal opening. It throbbed gently as she fingered herself, gaze locked on the eyes of the mysterious Tom.

Suddenly the inbox pinged and she sat up abruptly. It was him.

'Well hello to you. Nice to hear you're interested. Happy to chat here if you're just browsing, but if you like what you see, meet me at the Kings Arms on Tuesday. 8PM. Just a drink.'

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By *cubasexMan
over a year ago

dudley

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Lucy was in a quandary. Having harboured fantasies about anonymous no-strings sex with a handsome stranger, it was suddenly real.

Staring at the image on her phone, she shivered. Reasons for NOT going any further were crashing into her head - her marriage, her job, her reputation, her health. But her pussy was still throbbing from the little play she'd had earlier. She stared at his message unable to decide. If I say it's too soon, will that scare him away? Does that make me a 'prick tease' or a timewaster? I mean... I started this to get laid and here I am having second thoughts!

Lucy heard the gentle thuds of her husband coming up the stairs. Shit! She quickly tapped into the phone.

'Sorry, got to go. Yes, I'll be there.'

Her finger hovered over the send button, biting her lip.

"Still up love?" said hubby as he entered the room. Lucy hit SEND and closed the browser.

"Still catching up with email," she replied, trying to sound calm. But her mind was spinning.

**

It wasn't until lunchtime the following day that Lucy finally had a chance to log in again. She'd been fretting all morning. 'I don't HAVE to go,' she thought. 'I could still cancel. Or ask him to postpone until we've chatted a bit. Bit of a cop out, but fuck, I know absolutely nothing about this man!'

There were dozens of messages, but she ignored them, scrolling down the list for his name. And there it was, sent ten minutes after she'd shut down last night.

'Great to know you're coming. You won't be disappointed. It's just a drink and a chat. So much nicer than trying to get to know each other through messages, don't you agree? Of course, if you're having second thoughts then maybe I'm not the right guy for you. Just let me know. Otherwise I'll see you at the bar on Tuesday.'

Lucy's doubts slipped away. 'Can't really pull out now,' she thought. 'I'm not a fucking snowflake and I'm not missing this opportunity. And is it just a drink, so perfectly OK.'

As the day progressed, more 'issues' popped into her head. She hadn't put much detail on her profile. It had her age and build, but not her marital status. Not even her real name! By the end of the day she'd convinced herself she would have to reply.

'Hi - sorry to be a pain, but you should know that I'm married. I've never done anything like this before. Do you want to share photos? I don't want to waste your time if I'm not what you're looking for.'

Once again, Tom replied within ten minutes.

'Trust me, you're exactly what I'm looking for. I sense you are a little hesitant. Are you scared of me or yourself? I don't need to see any photos. I'll see you in the flesh on Tuesday. I could send you some photos if you insist, but won't it be more exciting to meet a tall, handsome stranger without any preconceptions or judgements? You'll find out more about me in 5 minutes at the bar than in a 100 photos. You decide.'

Lucy knew he was playing with her. 'I'll see you in the flesh...' he'd written. Naughty man. 'Scared? No way! Ok, maybe just a little, but it's a pub for God's sake. I can just leave if he's an ogre.' But his profile picture said differently. Those eyes... Gentle, sensual butterflies filled her stomach, then fluttered down to her pussy.

'OK you win. But only the first round! Tuesday at 8. I'll be wearing a yellow scarf.'

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By *ixen 2020Couple
over a year ago

daventry

Loving this!!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

They say that when people meet on a date for the first time, they decide whether they're going to sleep together within 30 seconds. Lucy had made up her mind before she even reached the bar.

It had been a frantic couple of days. The half term holidays were coming up, which meant setting homework and reviewing timetables. And Parents Evening was on Thursday. Added to that, Lucy had rearranged lunch cover so she could pop out shopping. For some bizarre reason that she couldn't quite rationalise, she HAD to have new underwear! After perusing the lingerie aisle for 20 minutes, worrying about whether a 48 year old married woman should really be wearing THOSE, she grabbed a lace balcony bra and thong, mumbled her way through the till and stuffed them in her bag before rushing back to class.

Hubby knew all about the stresses of running a school, so it was no surprise to him when she announced that she'd be working through Tuesday evening.

'I guess I won't wait up then,' he laughed.

'I won't be that late!' Lucy replied with a nervous giggle.

She'd pulled up at the Kings Arms a few minutes early, and sat in the car fiddling with her makeup. 'You look fine,' she mumbled. 'It's just a drink.' But, of course, she'd changed into a thigh length dress, slipped on some sheer tights and, of course, had the lace underneath. 'Who am I trying to kid!'

Her legs trembled a little as she approached the door, wondering if she'd recognise him. All her worries dissipated instantly as she met his gaze immediately, perched at the end of the bar, alone. Oh yes, that's him alright. He beamed and stood up. Dark haired. Mature but rugged. Casually dressed. Not huge but tall enough. Not slim but nicely proportioned. And the eyes...

All of this within a few seconds, of course. The butterflies returned and she just made it to the bar where Tom ushered her onto a stool. He pecked her on the cheek and she caught his scent. Spicy and alluring.

"That wasn't so hard, was it!" he chirped.

"You have no idea," Lucy replied, finally grinning with delight.

He ordered her a drink and they introduced each other. Lucy tried to be coy, but felt herself relax in Tom's company. He was easy going, confident and led the conversation gently and without any pressure. They moved to a corner table and ordered shrimp with a spicy dip and bowls of fries on the side.

"I don't want to sound controlling but I think there should be a few ground rules," he stated, smiling. "Firstly, you don't need to tell me anything you don't want to. I don't need to know your name, or your job or anything about you. It's entirely up to you what you share."

Lucy couldn't help herself. She opened up about how stressed she'd been, how much she needed a break, about her marriage and her life. Tom listened patiently, interjecting occasionally and nodding when nothing needed to be said. Eventually she paused.

"I'm so sorry. All I've done is talk since I got here."

"Maybe that's what you need at the moment," Tom replied, smiling and munching on a French Fry.

"Well, that wasn't why I..." Lucy blushed and her voice tailed off as their eyes locked for a moment.

"So what is it that you'd like?" murmured Tom.

Lucy hesitated. The moment of truth. "Not really sure," she muttered, although she was.

"You see, I think I know exactly what you want," he said gently.

Lucy felt herself moistening and suddenly felt empty in the pit of her stomach. Tom reached across and took her left hand. He massaged her fingers. Lucy's pussy tingled as he touched her.

"I booked a room here," he said slowly. "Would you like to join me upstairs?"

Lucy couldn't speak. Her legs were trembling again under the table. Her pussy quivered at the thought of what she was about to do. She looked up shyly and nodded.

Tom touched her wedding band. "Take this off first," he said firmly.

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By *otef69Man
over a year ago

Edinburgh

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By *J GeminiTV/TS
over a year ago

Northumberland

Hot ,

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By *andy IanMan
over a year ago

cheshire/Preston

I prefer them to leave the ring on

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By *onle81Man
over a year ago

Sherborne

What an excellent story op, the build up is brilliant, really looking forward to see how this develops

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By *j47Man
over a year ago

limerick

Great

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I prefer them to leave the ring on "

There is something rather delicious about that, I agree!

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By *aveyboy100Man
over a year ago

Preston

Excellent story :-

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By *rego69Man
over a year ago

Chelmsford

Nice.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I would rather there ring stays on then you cum over it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Wow what a brilliantly written story more please don't leave us in suspenders

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By *emasselMan
over a year ago

Edinburgh

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By *aughtywifeyWoman
over a year ago

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By *he-ProfessorMan
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Can't wait for more.

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By *onnoisseur100Man
over a year ago

Woking-ish

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By *bbott24Couple
over a year ago

Devizes

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By *hereswallyMan
over a year ago

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By *hil153Man
over a year ago

Bournemouth

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By *eepfill999Man
over a year ago

South Cheshire

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By *oingdown2Man
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Can't wait to read more

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By *uddle4uMan
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

More please

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By *b1976Man
over a year ago

North East

Excellent story

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By *obbo6969Couple
over a year ago

Rochdale

This is an excellent story. Well written. I can wait to read more.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'd love my wife to go out and get fucked by a group of strangers.

Long as I got sent some pics of it happening so I could sit at home and play over them I'd be happy.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

It was a beautiful room. Oak beams crossed the ceiling and a small dressing table sat demurely in one corner. The room was dominated by a large double bed. Tom had closed the curtains leaving the room lit only by the glow of a small lamp on the bedside table.

It was warm but Lucy still shivered a little, although it may have been the butterflies. She turned and faced him, noticing how calm he looked. His confidence was reassuring. She paused, not quite sure what to expect.

"Rule Number 2," he said softly. "You're completely safe here. Everything that happens in this room, stays in this room. We can do anything you want. We can stop any time."

Lucy swallowed. "OK," she croaked and blushed. Her mouth was dry, but her pussy was wet and tingling. Once again, Tom was calm and clear.

"I want you to undress me," he murmured.

Now that she had something to do, Lucy felt at ease. She reached for his shirt buttons, slipping them out one by one, glimpses of his toned, lightly haired chest peeking through. Looking up, she saw he was smiling. As he slipped off the shirt, she fumbled with his belt buckle, then tugged gently at the clip and zip. His trousers came loose.

"Kneel down Lucy," said Tom firmly.

She was relaxed now. She knew what he wanted and remembered how she'd fantasised about this just a couple of weeks ago. Sinking to her knees, she slipped her hands into his trousers and they dropped to the floor. He deftly kicked them away. His cock bulged in his boxers and twitched as she touched it. She gently lifted the hem and reached in to feel his cock, pulling it out. She felt it pulse as her hand wrapped around its girth. It was hot to her touch, and she was momentarily light-headed with it's musky scent.

"That's a good girl. You know what to do."

Tom stroked her cheek with one hand, then reached behind her head and gently pulled her forward. His cock was hard by now, fully erect, her hand holding it tight at the base. She opened her mouth and pushed her tongue under the head. He continued to pull her forwards until his cock slid into her open mouth and he sighed.

Lucy was still fully dressed, kneeling in front of this gorgeous man, his manhood sliding in and out of her mouth. She explored the feel of it, cupping his scrotum and gently squeezing it. Her knickers were soaked. She looked up and noticed Tom's eyes were closed and he was grinning. She hadn't sucked cock for years and she suddenly realised how much she enjoyed it, kneeling in subjugation, this man using her like a whore. She revelled in the fact that she was giving him pleasure.

"You like that, don't you?" He purred and she nodded. Her tongue was licking his shaft and she tried pumping him with her hands.

"Just your mouth," he said and she slowed a little. "Hands behind your back."

Lucy complied and let him hold her head and fuck her mouth for a few minutes. He caught the back of her throat a couple of times and she spluttered but he kept going. She sucked him, trying to keep her teeth away from his skin. She desperately wanted to please him. In fact, she realised that she wanted him to release his seed into her mouth and taste him. She pulled away momentarily.

"You can cum if you like," she whispered, and immediately swallowed his cock again.

"If that's what you want," he replied. He lifted her face and gazed at her, smiling. "Rule number three. If I cum, you swallow. Understood?"

It suddenly felt so...right. So perfect. She was his to be used, to take his pleasure from her. It felt like the most natural thing in the world.

"Yes, sir," she said, without even thinking.

And then he pushed her head back onto to his pole and started pumping. She gagged and her nose started running, but she held still for him, her hands clasped behind her back, his hands holding her head tight. Her pussy was throbbing and it hadn't even been touched yet. Then he grunted, rammed his cock into the back of her mouth and she felt the warm sticky semen splash onto her tongue. In that moment she thought it was the sweetest thing she'd ever tasted.

He spurted a few times, then stopped, continuing to hold her in place.

"Swallow it," he commanded and she obeyed.

After a moment he pulled out, lifted her to her feet and sat her on the bed. He knelt and slipped off her stockings, sliding his hands along her thighs.

"Is this the kind of thing you came for?" he asked.

"Yes, she whispered, breathlessly.

"What next?"

"You're in charge. Anything."

"Anything?" he chirped, raising his eyebrows. "Are you sure?"

Lucy didn't hesitate. She'd forgotten about her husband, her career and the fact that it was supposed to have been 'just a drink.' She was intoxicated by this stranger's scent, the lingering taste of his sperm in her mouth, and the warmth and strength of his hands as he undressed her. She was his now.

"Anything you want," she sighed.

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By *ack again100Man
over a year ago

Tamworth

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By *obbo6969Couple
over a year ago

Rochdale

It just gets better and better

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over a year ago

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By *lare_thomas38TV/TS
over a year ago

my town

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Wow just getting hot now, beautifully written too more please

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By *j and c 2Couple
over a year ago

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By *ohn1953Man
over a year ago

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By *asexxMan
over a year ago

near you

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By *torm in a G cupWoman
over a year ago

Land of the Long White Cloud

Loving this

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Lucy was naked, face down on the bed. Tom had straddled her, his flaccid cock resting in the crack between her cheeks. He was kneading her shoulders and it felt divine.

"You're very good at that," she purred with a sigh.

"I'm very good at lots of things," he replied and she giggled.

"What's your wildest fantasy?" He continued.

"Lots of cock!" She mumbled absentmindedly, grinning into the pillow. The tension in her shoulders was melting away with his touch.

"I can call a few friends?"

There was a pause as Lucy processed the words. Oh my God, was he suggesting...?

"Or is that too... dangerous for you?" He continued, obviously teasing her.

"I'm not..." she started but then fell silent. Her head was swimming with images of men. Surrounding her. Touching her. Using her. Wild thoughts. And not the first time she'd imagined them.

"I don't know," she finished, hesitantly.

Tom moved to her side and started stroking her buttocks with one hand, while the other pressed against her back. Her pussy twitched, as his fingers slid along her thighs, just grazing the lips of her vulva.

"Yes, please," she sighed. She was so horny!

"To my fingers or my friends?"

"Either. Or both. Just fuck me! Please!"

"mmmm... not quite ready for that yet," he whispered. "But I know someone who will be. Let me send a couple of texts."

Before Lucy had a chance to react, Tom had swiped his phone from the bedside table and was tapping away.

"Who...?" She mumbled as she realised what he was doing.

"Does it matter?" He replied, tossing the phone back on the side. His hand slid between her legs, circling her clit, and she groaned with pleasure. He clearly knew his way around a woman's pussy. He squeezed her labia, pressing them together to tease her clitoris, then running his fingers along her slit. She gasped as he flicked her clit. Any worries she had about his so-called 'friends' disappeared as she melted into the pleasure of his hands on her body.

"Turn over and close your eyes," he said, switching to his commanding voice. Lucy obeyed immediately.

Tom's fingers slipped into her vagina and she squealed with joy, spreading her legs wantonly to give him more access.

"Do you want more?" He asked.

"Oh yes!"

His fingers went a little deeper and he tweaked one of her nipples, sending a little jolt through her body.

"More cock?"

"Yes!"

"More cum?"

"Absolutely!"

And then he pulled away and her pussy was empty.

"Bedside table. Open it." He said sharply. This was new. The same resonant voice but a different tone. No longer gently commanding but demanding. Lucy giggled and rolled over to open the drawer. It contained a pair of leather handcuffs and a silk scarf. She looked blankly at them for a second and then realised they were for her.

"Put them on," he said.

"Oh," she squealed. "A little kink, eh?"

She was craving a good fucking and as far as she was concerned there was no time to lose, so she slipped a hand into one of the cuffs. Tom lifted her arms and threaded the cuffs through the iron headboard, securing her wrists above her head. Then he wrapped the scarf around her head and tied it off, plunging her into darkness. Lucy giggled again.

"You are a naughty man," she cooed.

"You did say 'anything'," he whispered near to her ear.

"I'm all yours," she replied. "Do whatever you want, but please fuck me!"

And then there was a sharp knock on the door and Lucy froze.

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"It's OK. Stay there," said Tom as he hopped off the bed. Like she had a choice!

Lucy's mind was tumbling. Shit! She heard the creak of the door and someone muttering. Then the door closed with a thud. Lying naked and helpless, adrenaline flooded her body as the fear washed over her. She was straining to hear what was going on by the door. It was obvious that Tom had let one of his 'friends' into the room and they were moving around the bed. Her head was screaming 'Stop this now!' but somewhere in the depths of her mind she reeled with lust. She realised she was about to get royally fucked by a complete stranger - and she'd actually asked for it!

Something warm touched her thigh. A hand. Then two. Then a third and fourth. She felt the radiant heat of the men either side of her body as she lay helpless between them.

"Wow, she's really wet," said the visitor, stroking her pussy and making her twitch again. His voice was higher. 'Possibly younger,' she thought. The scarf was tight around her eyes and she couldn't even catch a glimpse.

"She needs a good fucking, don't you Lucy?" Said Tom. The stranger's fingers were inside her now and she decided she was past caring. Whoever he was, she was helpless to stop him. And secretly, she didn't want to anyway.

"Yes," she murmured.

He pressed his fingers into her vagina. They were a little rough but she was well lubricated. The course skin of his palm was pressing against her clit and she moaned with pleasure. 'Rough hands. Maybe a builder,' she thought for a second. Then she felt him climb between her legs. His hands grabbed her thighs and pulled her legs around his waist. She guessed he was kneeling. His cock lay against her pussy, warm and hard, and she shivered.

Then he slipped it into her opening and slid into her waiting vagina. Lucy gasped and the stranger grunted.

"Fucking hell, that's sweet," he groaned as he rocked inside her. She pushed her hips upwards and his cock bumped her cervix. Someone was squeezing her tits but she wasn't sure who. It felt like there were hands everywhere!

They fucked gently for a few minutes. She felt warm breath near her head and Tom murmured in her ear.

"This is what you truly want isn't it?" Lucy just groaned, breathing hard.

The stranger shifted and lay over over body, forcing her legs even further apart with his thighs. She felt his breath on her face as he started ploughing her cunt. She was still helpless, but found she could grip the iron struts of the headboard and push against his body. It felt good. He pressed himself against her, grunting and swearing as he thrust into her. Then he growled and she felt him stiffen. His cock throbbed and pulsed inside her and she cried out as it tipped her over the edge into climax.

He was planting kisses along her neckline. Beads of his sweat dripped on to her shoulder. Her legs were still shaking a little from her orgasm. Every tiny movement of his cock inside her made her twitch. Delicious!

"Fuck me, that was awesome," he grunted, pulling out and climbing off her body.

"Who's next," said Tom from across the room.

'Next?' thought Lucy with a jolt. She hadn't heard the door. How many of them were there!

"Wait! I want to know who's here!" Lucy said, not quite shouting but definitely miffed. She'd enjoyed the shag, but really wasn't expecting a full-on gangbang. She jumped when Tom spoke sharply into her ear.

"Rule 4. Once you ask for it, you do what you're told. You begged for cock and so my friends and I will give you what you asked for. Admit it, it's what you've been fantasising about for years, isn't it?"

He left the question hanging and Lucy lay silent. Her body was hot, damp with sweat and still throbbing from being fucked. And she still had the feint taste of Tom's cum in the back of her throat. She knew she could stop now. She just had to say something and he would send them away.

But then it would be over. Probably forever. All those wicked thoughts she'd entertained over the years. All the fantasies she'd harboured while her husband lay on top of her grunting, or while she fingered herself quietly as he snored next to her. Years of desire and lust all came to this moment. And she knew she didn't really want to stop now. Not yet.

The room was silent and then Tom spoke again.

"You want it, don't you Lucy?" He said simply.

"Yes, sir."

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over a year ago

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over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

For anyone following my story, you'll be glad to know I have crafted an ending and the last chapter is nearly ready. I will post it here at 8PM.

Poor Lucy! Or maybe she's just a very lucky lady!

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over a year ago

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over a year ago

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over a year ago

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over a year ago

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over a year ago

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over a year ago

She counted five of them from the voices. 'Where the fuck did they all come from?' she thought. 'Were they waiting in the bar?'

They laughed and joked, commenting on how pretty she was. Lovely tits and arse.

"Where'd you find this little slut?" Someone muttered.

"I have my sources," replied Tom and the room filled with laughter. Lucy flushed with embarrassment.

Her mind was drifting again as two of them lifted her easily and flipped her over. She was still cuffed to the bed but her arms twisted and she clasped her hands and buried her head in the pillow, arse high in the air and on full display. She felt strangely empowered, baring all to a roomful of lusting males. Feral, like an animal. Eager for them to mount her, one by one.

Something warm and wet touched her pussy. Slightly rough. Then she felt it, a tongue licking her slit and sliding all the way up into her crack. Gripping her thighs, he dragged his tongue along the length of her vulva and arse, the tip darting in and out of her pussy and anus. She moaned.

Hands slipped under her torso and found her boobs, squeezing them and pinching the nipples. Ripples of pleasure washed like waves through her body as the men surrounded her, hands brushing her skin and squeezing her love handles. Somebody slapped her bum and she squealed.

"So it's alright if I...?" said the man behind her nervously.

"Of course," said Tom with a laugh. "That's what we're all here for. The lady wants to be thoroughly fucked. Hard."

Lucy's legs were pushed further apart and he moved in behind her. Then his cock pushed through the opening of her pussy and she gasped again.

"Fuck yes," she cried and he started thrusting. Her vagina was still sensitive from her first orgasm. A different feeling, tingling sensations all along her channel as he pounded her. She pushed back against him, moaning and panting. 'Yes, I am a filthy slut,' she thought with a little smile. 'And I'm loving it!'

"Can I cum inside?" said the man.

"Cum anywhere you like," she replied breathlessly. And with that encouragement he thrust hard and emptied himself into her. This time she could feel the warm fluids flooding her cunt.

He pulled out and within seconds another took his place. This cock was thicker and she felt it stretching her as he pushed the head into her pussy. She was soaked, jizz dripping down her thighs, mixed with her own fluids and sweat. He slid easily inside and started pumping.

Lucy was lightheaded, possibly delirious. She lost track of time but assumed they'd all taken their turn with her. Her body shook with the waves of orgasm that only a woman experiences. Each one different from the last. She was ordered to lie down and roll over, then she was uncuffed and pulled to the floor and on to her knees, hands re-cuffed in front of her. The men surrounded her, smoothing her hair, grabbing her tits, muscular legs brushing against her shoulders and arms. And then a sticky penis was pressed to her lips.

"Suck it, bitch!"

It was slightly disgusting, but Lucy opened her mouth obediently and sucked in the semi-hard member. It started swelling in her mouth, and she licked off the sticky residue of jizz and swallowed. She recognised the taste of her own pussy and felt her horn rising again.

Her head was twisted side to side, cocks forced into her open mouth from all directions. One of them was very long and she gagged as he held her head against his crotch.

"Bukkake time, boys," said Tom. "Who can manage another load?" The men grunted approval.

Lucy was still unable to see, blindfold tight around her head. So the splash of cum across her face and nose was a surprise. It rolled down into her mouth and she was about to spit when another cock was forced between her lips.

"Yea. Open wide, you dirty cow!"

Lucy's knees ached. She drifted in and out of full consciousness, arms hanging loose, wrists bound by the leather cuffs, one hand gently stroking her sodden vulva. She simply relaxed and let them hold her head, pushing cock after cock into her mouth, making her gag. Every few minutes another splash of warm cum over face or tits. She could feel it on her skin as it cooled. Someone wiped a gob of it off her chin and pushed his fingers into her mouth. She didn't care and sucked them greedily.

And then suddenly it was over. She was lifted unceremoniously and dropped back on the bed. Her body was throbbing and she could feel the heat in her muscles, like she'd just run a marathon. The taste and odour of spunk filled her mouth and nostrils.

There were murmurs by the door and she heard it open and close. Then silence for a moment. She wondered if they'd left her there alone and was about to move when she felt Tom's hands on her cheeks. He untied the scarf and tossed it aside. Even the soft light of the single lamp was blinding as she squinted, trying to focus.

He leant forward and kissed her and she responded, sucking on his lips, devouring his tongue. She'd been used and abused like a common whore, but she was suddenly filled with desire and affection for this gorgeous, rugged and utterly wicked man.

"Let's get you cleaned up, shall we?" said Tom gently with a grin. "Rule number five. I always make sure my ladies are clean and straightened up before I send them back to their husbands."

**

It was Thursday and Parents Evening was dragging. The endless line of bored students, bracketed by restless parents, fretting over the progress of their precious offspring.

Christopher dropped into the chair in front of Lucy's little table. He was the new student that transferred at the beginning of this term. Smart and creative and confident. A lovely lad.

"Hello, Miss," he mumbled.

"Ah, my bright new student, Christopher Westwood," said Lucy with a grin. "And presumably Mr and Mrs..."

She froze as she looked up and met Tom's eyes. Her face dropped momentarily and her mouth went dry. She quickly dropped her gaze to the sheet in front of her. Her legs began to shake under the table and she suddenly felt sick.

"...er, Westwood," she croaked.

"I'm Marie," chirped the sparkly blonde woman sitting on Christopher's left. "And this is my husband, Tom."

Lucy swallowed and looked up again. Tom was smiling sweetly and held her gaze. Lucy flushed red.

"Yes... er, sorry, hot flush. Warm in here," she mumbled, fanning herself and trying to regain her composure.

"It's a wonderful school," purred Tom. "Chris has really settled in well. You're doing a great job. Looking forward to getting to know you better."

He grinned again and she thought that maybe she caught the slightest wink. And then her stomach turned over and her heart sank as he leaned forward slightly.

"The other parents have been really welcoming. I've got to know quite a few of the dads!"

THE END...

...FOR NOW.

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over a year ago

Bravo bravo fucking brilliant superbly written mate, really hope there is more

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By *ikingpairCouple
over a year ago

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over a year ago

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over a year ago

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By *rincess PhoenixWoman
over a year ago

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over a year ago

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By *r imp miss minxCouple
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Loved it got me waiting in anticipation for each bit

Can’t wait for the next one,

I’ve just posted a part story n yours puts mine to shame lol

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over a year ago


"Loved it got me waiting in anticipation for each bit

Can’t wait for the next one,

I’ve just posted a part story n yours puts mine to shame lol

"

Never be ashamed to express yourself and your fantasies and desires. Just be yourself. x

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By *ixen 2020Couple
over a year ago

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over a year ago

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over a year ago

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over a year ago

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over a year ago

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By *wakers14Man
over a year ago

burgess hill

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over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Lucy is of legend status!

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By *lymouth nice guyMan
over a year ago

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Brilliant story..

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By *FCouple11Couple
over a year ago

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over a year ago

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By *onle81Man
over a year ago

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By *obbo6969Couple
over a year ago

Rochdale

Excellent story. I hope there is follow up to this.

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By *aveSWMan
over a year ago

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Great read, honestly hope there's a follow up!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Many asked, so the next adventure begins here:

Lucy's Plight

https://www.fabswingers.com/forum/stories/1127366

Thanks for reading.

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By *andy IanMan
over a year ago

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A fantastic story with an unexpected twist at the end thanks for sharing with us

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By *andybigboiMan
over a year ago

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over a year ago

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By *ndrea54TV/TS
over a year ago

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By *rash26775Man
over a year ago

all over

Following

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By *ale_seeking_funMan
over a year ago

reading

Great story, has the second part been taken down as I was reading it earlier but it’s now vanished ??

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By *oss25Man
over a year ago

Flitwick and Fakenham


"Great story, has the second part been taken down as I was reading it earlier but it’s now vanished ??"

I’ve lost it too.......

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Yep its vanished anybody know what's going on I was halfway through and it disappeared

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By *torm in a G cupWoman
over a year ago

Land of the Long White Cloud

It has probably been removed because it contained a scene about non-consenting sex.

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By *ale_seeking_funMan
over a year ago

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"It has probably been removed because it contained a scene about non-consenting sex. "

I thought that might be the case.

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By *torm in a G cupWoman
over a year ago

Land of the Long White Cloud


"It has probably been removed because it contained a scene about non-consenting sex.

I thought that might be the case. "

Shame though

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By *asexxMan
over a year ago

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Hope to see more of this and it starts up again

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over a year ago

Pity that I thought it did well to highlight the possible dangers people may face myself shame was a good story very very well written.

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By *aggsWoman
over a year ago

Wormit

What happened to the following story

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By *hager777Man
over a year ago

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More please

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over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hi everyone. OP here. If you're looking for the follow up story 'Lucy's Plight' I'm afraid it got taken down by Admins. I had broken forum rules by describing abusive scenes. My bad. It was all fiction of course, and in my humble opinion, had a serious message, but rules are rules so it won't appear here again.

I may try and publish it elsewhere so if you ever see a story called 'Lucy's Plight' in an erotic forum you'll know where it came from!

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By *asexxMan
over a year ago

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Well I hope another story pops up with Lucy soon here x

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By *etro1940sCouple
over a year ago

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great story ... x Anne

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Do send us a link to this story !

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By *orthampton jamesMan
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

This story has now been published on a well know erotica literature site. I think forum rules prevent me from naming it or giving you the links. Just search for luvmassage. The follow up sequel and many other stories will be added over the next few weeks. Would love it if peeps could pop over there and give them a 5 star rating LOL!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Wow, what a great story. Well done ??

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By *ignbeardyMan
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hi everyone. OP here. If you're looking for the follow up story 'Lucy's Plight' I'm afraid it got taken down by Admins. I had broken forum rules by describing abusive scenes. My bad. It was all fiction of course, and in my humble opinion, had a serious message, but rules are rules so it won't appear here again.

I may try and publish it elsewhere so if you ever see a story called 'Lucy's Plight' in an erotic forum you'll know where it came from!

"

I genuinely love your writing, your style and your story telling - but Lucy's Plight subject matter was distressing to read. I couldn't see your "serious message" tbh. Just glorified vicious debasement. You described stuff that would traumatise most women for decades. Because it wasn't CNC. I'm glad that one was pulled. I'm really puzzled you can't appreciate why it was.

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"Hi everyone. OP here. If you're looking for the follow up story 'Lucy's Plight' I'm afraid it got taken down by Admins. I had broken forum rules by describing abusive scenes. My bad. It was all fiction of course, and in my humble opinion, had a serious message, but rules are rules so it won't appear here again.

I may try and publish it elsewhere so if you ever see a story called 'Lucy's Plight' in an erotic forum you'll know where it came from!

I genuinely love your writing, your style and your story telling - but Lucy's Plight subject matter was distressing to read. I couldn't see your "serious message" tbh. Just glorified vicious debasement. You described stuff that would traumatise most women for decades. Because it wasn't CNC. I'm glad that one was pulled. I'm really puzzled you can't appreciate why it was. "

I agree. It wasn't really a an erotic story. It was subjects real women face and go through in life. That bit was sexual abuse, revenge porn, r*pe at that point. Nothing good about it. I get people like CNC but what you wrote was a completely other thing. And it isn't just oh these women these days don't get this and that or are being to soft. It's a distressing thing you say you don't get why it was taken down

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over a year ago


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I agree. It wasn't really a an erotic story. It was subjects real women face and go through in life. That bit was sexual abuse, revenge porn, r*pe at that point. Nothing good about it. I get people like CNC but what you wrote was a completely other thing. And it isn't just oh these women these days don't get this and that or are being to soft. It's a distressing thing you say you don't get why it was taken down"

All fair comments. Thank you for your candour. I didn't say I didn't get why it was taken down, and the issues involved. I said that I felt it had a serious message. Maybe I am wrong in that. In fairness I am a man and I write spontaneously, so it was, no doubt, heavily influenced by male thinking. In no way do I condone any form of abusive behaviour, but at the same time have found that both women and men fantasise about domination and submission in different ways. The line between exploring sexual fantasy in a safe, caring environment, and being subjected exploitation or abuse, is a delicate one. Issues such as full understanding, communication and consent are paramount. So maybe you are right, Lucy's Plight is perhaps the result of a lack of care, wild and unchecked imagination and male stereotypical thinking. I will be mindful of that in future. I offer my apologies to those who were offended by it.

~ luv-massage

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By *iglittleoneMan
over a year ago

B76 is home

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By *ess n BenCouple
over a year ago

Didcot

Loved this story could relate to it, but after reading the comments from others about the other story I will pass on that one

Jess

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By *ugardadcleanerMan
over a year ago

cirencester

Lucy's plight need to read where please please

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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I agree. It wasn't really a an erotic story. It was subjects real women face and go through in life. That bit was sexual abuse, revenge porn, r*pe at that point. Nothing good about it. I get people like CNC but what you wrote was a completely other thing. And it isn't just oh these women these days don't get this and that or are being to soft. It's a distressing thing you say you don't get why it was taken down

All fair comments. Thank you for your candour. I didn't say I didn't get why it was taken down, and the issues involved. I said that I felt it had a serious message. Maybe I am wrong in that. In fairness I am a man and I write spontaneously, so it was, no doubt, heavily influenced by male thinking. In no way do I condone any form of abusive behaviour, but at the same time have found that both women and men fantasise about domination and submission in different ways. The line between exploring sexual fantasy in a safe, caring environment, and being subjected exploitation or abuse, is a delicate one. Issues such as full understanding, communication and consent are paramount. So maybe you are right, Lucy's Plight is perhaps the result of a lack of care, wild and unchecked imagination and male stereotypical thinking. I will be mindful of that in future. I offer my apologies to those who were offended by it.

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By *ussD1Man
over a year ago

Gloucester

Great story, I shall pass on the other one, not into abuse of any kind so I’m not sure it’s a typical ‘male thinking’ issue; or, gladly, I’m not a typical male. Either way your writing is superb.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Bookmarked for later

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Completely and utterly understand that some will not want to read the second part of Lucy's tale. But let's please keep this in perspective. Without evil and abusive characters, we wouldn't have Dracula, Humbert Humbert or Uriah Heep. And stories like those give us an alternative view of the human psyche and the evil it has the capacity for.

Yea, there are lots of weaknesses in my story, it’s certainly extreme and, in some parts, I made it overly-repellent to highlight the evil of the antagonist.

Or in other words, quite fun to write, but probably less fun to read!

It isn’t supposed to be ‘real’ or some kind of NC wishlist. In fact, the extremes are intended to make it more fantastical, and therefore less offensive. I guess that didn't work!

It is a bit of an odd process for me. I don't plan my stories at all, I just start writing with a vague theme. The story evolves as I put things on paper. Lucy became a teacher purely because I was thinking about a friend at that moment. That eventually led to the twist ending - again unplanned until the later stages of the writing process.

And then when I concocted the bl*ackmail story, I really had no idea where I was going. I just wanted to be sure that Carter got his cumuppence. Sometimes these things work, sometimes not. I've actually re-written the ending for Literotica to ensure that he doesn't get away scott free.

Really appreciate your interest and feedback. If you've found some of my other stories you'll see my mind isn't quite as warped or evil as it might seem. And they are all just stories!

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By *rent100Man
over a year ago

Warwick

Bookmarked. I clearly need to make space to give this my undivided attention A bit like I do when meeting, lol

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over a year ago

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By *ussD1Man
over a year ago

Gloucester


"Completely and utterly understand that some will not want to read the second part of Lucy's tale. But let's please keep this in perspective. Without evil and abusive characters, we wouldn't have Dracula, Humbert Humbert or Uriah Heep. And stories like those give us an alternative view of the human psyche and the evil it has the capacity for.

Yea, there are lots of weaknesses in my story, it’s certainly extreme and, in some parts, I made it overly-repellent to highlight the evil of the antagonist.

Or in other words, quite fun to write, but probably less fun to read!

It isn’t supposed to be ‘real’ or some kind of NC wishlist. In fact, the extremes are intended to make it more fantastical, and therefore less offensive. I guess that didn't work!

It is a bit of an odd process for me. I don't plan my stories at all, I just start writing with a vague theme. The story evolves as I put things on paper. Lucy became a teacher purely because I was thinking about a friend at that moment. That eventually led to the twist ending - again unplanned until the later stages of the writing process.

And then when I concocted the bl*ackmail story, I really had no idea where I was going. I just wanted to be sure that Carter got his cumuppence. Sometimes these things work, sometimes not. I've actually re-written the ending for Literotica to ensure that he doesn't get away scott free.

Really appreciate your interest and feedback. If you've found some of my other stories you'll see my mind isn't quite as warped or evil as it might seem. And they are all just stories!

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Good response. Thank you for taking the time to explain and not just getting the hump

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very hot story. Fantasies about my partner taken like that

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By *ocktoplaywithMan
over a year ago

Derby

My absolute dream would be for this to be my mrs

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By *oss25Man
over a year ago

Flitwick and Fakenham


"This story has now been published on a well know erotica literature site. I think forum rules prevent me from naming it or giving you the links. Just search for luvmassage. The follow up sequel and many other stories will be added over the next few weeks. Would love it if peeps could pop over there and give them a 5 star rating LOL!"

Does it begin with L and end Stories? I really enjoyed the fact that the story had a serious message, that you thought it important enough to write about......education and calling out our fellow men is the only thing that will stop this abhorrent behaviour.....

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By *onsi69Man
over a year ago

llanfairpg

Again, fantastic and expertly written... bravo sir!

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By *teelyBloomMan
over a year ago

Swansea

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By *lymouth nice guyMan
over a year ago

Plymouth

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By *lderWiserNowMan
over a year ago

Kettrin

Very horny read

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By *eet or funMan
over a year ago

peterborough

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By *igerman23Man
over a year ago

hayes

Love it

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By *igerman23Man
over a year ago

hayes

Nice.hope she gets it rough

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By *igerman23Man
over a year ago

hayes

Good girl

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By *untooMan
over a year ago

manchester

I’ve loved the story. I don’t understand the psyche of Dom and sub so this is a great read for me

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By *ohn1953Man
over a year ago

North Wales

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By *ohn1953Man
over a year ago

North Wales

Great story really enjoyed it, I met quite a few couples and ladies over the years and always enjoyed sharing some of the ladies with other men . One i really enjoyed was when I took this lady to he attic cinema to push her boundaries, she was another married lady who I met a few times, her hubby knew about our meets and I use to take photos of her and send them to his phone. But I wanted to push her boundaries and with meeting her a few times she was very comfortable with me and trusted me, so I told her I wanted to take her to the attic sex cinema and that I wanted to share her with others men at the cinema, she was nervous at first about it but I assured her I am there to look after her, I also text her hubby to say what I have planned for her and he was also excited about my plan about sharing her with other guys, I have always fucked her bare back because her hubby always enjoyed cleaning her pussy when I sent her back home so I told him I wanted the guys in the cinema to fuck her bare back too, he told me to bring her back smelling of sex and full of cum . So I arranged to pick her up from there house and for him to bring her to my car for the drive to the cinema. I told him I want her to wear a short dress a thong, stockings and no bra because I wanted to see her nipples sticking though her dress. On the Saturday morning he brought her to the car she had a long coat on, he opened the car door and I told him to take her coat off and put it on the back seat . He did what I asked and she had on just a small pink dress her nipples was already hard and you could see them poking out of her thin dress, as she sat in my car he dress rode up showing her stocking tops and her little black thong, she went to pull her dress down when I told her to pull it up over her stocking tops and showing her thong, I told her I want her like that while we drove to the cinema so anyone in a lorry or white vans could see her. If you want to read the True story about me taking her to the cinema then go in forums and in search put Attic cinema and you will see . True story taking a lady to the attic cinema for her first time . Hope you enjoy because it’s a true story . John

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