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"I do apologise about the fact my writing doesn't contain full grammar. What can I say other than I am more of a hands on kind of person, and not one of a sitting behind a desk or computer all day kind of person.So my typing skills are severely rusty. Constructive criticism is always welcome,but I will point out that I am not a professional author, nor do I have an office job.so if my writing gives you a headache, I might suggest one of the other "fantasy " stories." Oh please, don’t get upset. I apologise. It was the truth when I said I was enjoying your story. And your response to my suggestion did help with me reading it. I’m old you see- I need all the help I can get Peace x | |||
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"I do apologise about the fact my writing doesn't contain full grammar. What can I say other than I am more of a hands on kind of person, and not one of a sitting behind a desk or computer all day kind of person.So my typing skills are severely rusty. Constructive criticism is always welcome,but I will point out that I am not a professional author, nor do I have an office job.so if my writing gives you a headache, I might suggest one of the other "fantasy " stories. Oh please, don’t get upset. I apologise. It was the truth when I said I was enjoying your story. And your response to my suggestion did help with me reading it. I’m old you see- I need all the help I can get Peace x" Hmmm...ok...I received a post the first piece of constructive criticism mentioning my lack of grammar.so I post a disclaimer of sorts explaining I am not an author or trained writer. As this is something that's fairly new to me. Now if I had quoted you like I have this time, then I would assume you thought I was talking directly to you.sadly I wasn't. Read between the lines...Your the first person in the entire 3 part story to complain about grammar. Am I upset about that? No not really. Could I use some help? Yeah totally...im pretty sure your not old...at least not as old as me so by saying what your saying im afraid the only person your trying to convince to calm down or not be upset is you my friend.nice try, trying to rattle my cage....at 6:30 am its a nice way to start the day...with a chuckle.. | |||
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