FabSwingers.com forum: Haiku

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Haiku.

Typically three lines long in a 5,7,5 syllable structure.

Who can construct the best Fab Haiku..?

To get the balls rolling:

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Excitement promised.

Two couples meet in the field.

A wooden cabin

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Storm rages overhead

A frenzy in the bedroom

Collapse in pleasure

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By *terobs6869Man
over a year ago

Llandudno

Her small hand trembles

As she grasps the door handle

A stranger waiting

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The sobs escape her

Freed by elation and joy

To be repeated?

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Both excellent.

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Strobe lighting flashes

A wife in erotic bliss

With a new lover

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By *terobs6869Man
over a year ago

Llandudno

Her husband watches

She feels the moment arrive

Someone else's seed

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Mischievous humour.

An erotic connection.

But when will we meet.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Joking proposal

Silk lining flash of forked

path life untaken

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

She has huge dark tits

Waiting for the gangbang fun

Nipples like bullets

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

4 were black

2 were white

All were hung

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Autumn dew settles

An uncomfortable walk

Last night remembered

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Hair a mess

Stockings laddered

Need to shower

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The taste of your lips

Lingers in my memory

Of the night before.

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By *terobs6869Man
over a year ago

Llandudno

No sight, tightly bound

Behind, bare feet prowl on wood

Her fists clench, waiting

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You open to me

And I slide into your soul

Lustful connection

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

The indiscrete wife

Her face very innocent

Comes home satisfied

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Waiting for Master

Eyes downcast and shoulders back

Tensing for the sting

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

Butterfly feelings.

His hand slips onto her thigh.

Leaving her yearning.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Enjoying these very much

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By *terobs6869Man
over a year ago

Llandudno

He can't help staring

His wife wants this, her first time

Much bigger than him

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Yearning searching tongue

Tightly, sweetly, moistly, lovely, tightly, achingly, fully, finally, unendingly, never-endingly, never-to-end.

Explosive finish

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

Slipping and sliding.

Trusting hard, nails digging deep

toes curling upwards

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Piercing blue eyes blaze.

Unbound desire seen or

just hers reflected?

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Lace bra discarded

He enters her from behind

Fast and furious

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By *lim Jim 68Man
over a year ago

Guernsey

The door creaks open

She lies there tense and naked

Yearning for his kiss

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By *lim Jim 68Man
over a year ago

Guernsey

"Waiting for Master

Eyes downcast and shoulders back

Tensing for the sting"

Possibly my favourite!

"Tensing for the sting"...what a line!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Crows fly overhead

Magasines and papers strewn

Gentle sunday love

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Crows fly overhead

Magazines and papers strewn

Gentle sunday love"

Oh that quite takes my breath away. Love the imagery. Crows v specific?

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Crows fly overhead

Magazines and papers strewn

Gentle sunday love

Oh that quite takes my breath away. Love the imagery. Crows v specific? "

Simply, they passed above my house.

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The wind bends the trees

Starlings meet new travel friends

Hand in hand we walk

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

The dithering man

Now piss or get off the pot!

Life to be enjoyed

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By *lowersandcarsCouple
over a year ago

Aylesbury

Arse begs a spanking,

His huge hand rains down hard love.

Red, warm, content again.

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By *elisandre300Woman
over a year ago

dontbefuckingnosey

"Her small hand trembles

As she grasps the door handle

A stranger waiting"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Her hair tied back

Struggling to hold position

His eyes narrow

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Penthouse article

One dimensional pleasure

Furiously wanked

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By *terobs6869Man
over a year ago

Llandudno

A light summer dress

Floating over long, toned legs

His best friend's daughter

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

All the lost veris,

whether caused or inflicted,

same pang of mourning

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

[Removed by poster at 31/08/20 11:07:19]

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

He watches as she undresses

She slinks towards the bed, eyes sparkling

Shit the wife's back early!

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By *terobs6869Man
over a year ago

Llandudno

The girl leans forward

And catches his gaze dropping.

Promise in her smile.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sometimes lost veris

are more sweetly remembered

than their encounters.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Steam room mystery

An unfamiliar kiss

Transient lover

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By *lim Jim 68Man
over a year ago

Guernsey

Entwined together

Laying 'neath a Simpsons' sky

Forever in love

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By *terobs6869Man
over a year ago

Llandudno

The room is full. Warm.

Naked, all eyes upon her

Walking on her lead.

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By *elisandre300Woman
over a year ago

dontbefuckingnosey

The blindfold descends.

Darkness. Her heart beats faster.

Awaiting his touch.

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By *enuine photographerMan
over a year ago

Swansea

A tongue explores

She takes a sharp intake of breath

She reaches out

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By *ikingpairCouple
over a year ago

Cambridge

It has been a while

Kissing, licking, sucking and no doubt fucking

Who will take the chance

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Heinz tomato soup

Fireworks crashing overhead

Smell of sulphur fills

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Lockdown frustration

When will I again touch skin

A constant hard on

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By *otsexydannyMan
over a year ago

Norwich (and London)

Not sexy, but I love this haiku from the legend that is John Cooper Clarke:

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To-con-vey one’s mood

In sev-en-teen syll-able-s

Is ve-ry dif-fic

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

A cam at night

Perverts delight

Cam in the morning;

No make-up...warning!!!

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By *otsexydannyMan
over a year ago

Norwich (and London)

Excitement building

Breathing quickening she gasps

Oh is that it *sigh*

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Man and woman meet

"Damn, I forgot the condom!"

"Fuck me already"

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Lightening flash

Only the receptionist

Is innocent

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Whilst I am working

Enjoy your autumn fucking

Wife of fifteen years

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Jumper discarded

Wife's rejection as she snores

I am jumper

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

Bound by her marriage

Restricted by her lover

She'll do her own thing

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

In bed. She's texting

Her husband snoring loudly

Her lover corresponding...

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

A black outer shell

Unwrap a secret pleasure

A feast of desire

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Mountainside rabbits

Autumn breeze chills the wetness

Seed spills on the ground

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

Upon a hillside

Lashings of fun. Harder please

Hands traced on soft skin

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Patiently lonely

waiting for the special one

who'll both give and share.

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By *ervent_fervourMan
over a year ago

Halifax

Breath taken slowly

Hand grips arse hard and squeezes

Eyes dilate lips part.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Breath taken slowly

Hand grips arse hard and squeezes

Eyes dilate lips part. "

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Sunshine plays on lake

No social distancing here!

A mountain watches

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By *ervent_fervourMan
over a year ago

Halifax

Bright sunlight dazzles

Warm hands splayed on cool glass

Approach heard behind

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

She kissed another

Yesterday I reclaimed her:

Thrusting from behind!

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By *ouple4camsCouple
over a year ago

Dundalk(ish)

She kisses her man

New passions rage as she finds

He tastes of her friend

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

The Zombies approach

Towels around waists, creening

Action on display

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Realisation

dawns that I have more balls than

most of the men here

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Upon a hillside

Lashings of fun. Harder please

Hands traced on soft skin "

Lowering to knees

The misty valley glistens

Pink Chrysanthemum

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

Up up and away

Above the clouds far away

I am proud of you

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Pearls of dew erupt

But she is not near finished!

Self love with fingers

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The men who make love

always more sensual than

the men who make love!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"The men who make love

always more sensual than

the men who make love!

¡los hombres que hacen el amor!

son mas sensuales que

"Men who make love"

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

The straining pine tree

autumn's passionate whirlwind

carpet cleaner, please

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Laboured breathing

He watched intently she rode intensly

They both erupted satisfied

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Bodies tensing in

The last moments of pleasure.

Sighs of ecstacy.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Deep inside, he moved.

His hand caressing her neck.

Soft words in her ear.

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By *antyhoseMan
over a year ago

Birmingham

You're only here once,

try everything possible

in the time that's left.

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

Straining for that ping

Its quiet, as the days long

Silence not broken

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

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By *antyhoseMan
over a year ago

Birmingham

Tonight I chatted

to a lovely, smart lady

who’s restored my faith!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Flowers delight wife

Autumn bouquet of colour

I didn't send them

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By *uphoria1968Couple
over a year ago

Chelmsford

mouth open skyward

on her tongue raindrops

of my seed

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"mouth open skyward

on her tongue raindrops

of my seed"

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Lion stalks his prey

Invitation accepted

Cat who got the cream

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By *terobs6869Man
over a year ago

Llandudno

She re-reads her text

Is she really doing this?

He hits the send key

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Limerence junkie

Always pushing them too far

Not sure what she wants

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Titillating wood

An erect, firm nipples flows

in place of the lips

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Toys in the drawer

Swallows fly home together

Next date possibilities

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By *terobs6869Man
over a year ago

Llandudno

Darkness beneath white

She leans back, a curve revealed

The darkness protrudes

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By *terobs6869Man
over a year ago

Llandudno

All those Irish girls.

Moved on, leaving us behind.

My genes long for them.

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By *ervent_fervourMan
over a year ago

Halifax

Sun slanting sideways

Illuminates skin scented

Still with midnights's breath

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By *antyhoseMan
over a year ago

Birmingham

At fifty years old,

one can see the chequered flag,

but driving is fun!

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By *antyhoseMan
over a year ago

Birmingham

He fantasises,

a room is full of swingers,

all wearing nylon.

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

Nothing like the sun.

An English man in Dundalk

Lyrics of the heart..

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By *ilverMedalWinnerMan
over a year ago

North Lakes

What is a haiku

I've written this one tonight

Whilst the wind blows hard

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Envy excites me

September leaves green to gold

She is nobody's

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

needing some action

A change of profile picture

A treck in the woods

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Red crocodile hangs

A glance upwards in motion

Beside waterfall

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

Strewn leaves under feet

Amid foliage lovers meet

Waterfall erupts

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Strewn leaves under feet

Amid foliage lovers meet

Waterfall erupts "

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Naked sunbathing

Robin voyeurs from the fence

Scent of coconut

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Indigestable

A late saturday night meal

Alone with my phone

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By *terobs6869Man
over a year ago

Llandudno

White-flecked waves withdraw,

The dishevelled shingle sighs.

Just as she had done.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Autumn leaves ...

Trembling

From her touch

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"White-flecked waves withdraw,

The dishevelled shingle sighs.

Just as she had done. "

Beautiful

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By *terobs6869Man
over a year ago

Llandudno

"White-flecked waves withdraw,

The dishevelled shingle sighs.

Just as she had done.

Beautiful"

Thank you

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

Green fields, pastures new

Sun in my eyes, blinding views

Bare bottom redened

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Females are hungry

Tractor making hay nearby

Bite on my bottom!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Video received

Are vibrators water-proof?

Tight body displayed

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By *BDYKCouple
over a year ago

Yarm

Oral sex enthusiast;

Fellates him in expert fashion;

Satisfaction achieved.

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By *BDYKCouple
over a year ago

Yarm

Or an alternative to my last;

Oral sex inexperience;

Knee trembling orgasm achieved;

Cums in her eye.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Looking out at rain

8 hour meeting on speaker

Whats app stays silent

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Tatoo in sunlight

Reflection of the first time

Wet clover

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sping bulbs bring colour

Excitement in a graveyard

Almost discovered

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Church on Sunday

Stay behind to clear up

Fantasy fulfilled

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Church on Sunday

Stay behind to clear up

Fantasy fulfilled

Love haiku - so clever!!

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By *antyhoseMan
over a year ago

Birmingham

I cannot take credit for this, except that I have "massaged it" into a haiku:

Time's a great teacher

but unfortunately it

kills all its pupils.

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By *antyhoseMan
over a year ago

Birmingham

Their legs, both in tights,

beautifully intertwined,

blissfully ardent!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Summer approaches

Fingers close around her throat

Ecstasy hightened

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

Practically spring time

(S)extremism does it exist

Appetite to learn

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Gosh you guys are hot! Fans self...

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

Spring is in the air

So, time for pastures greener

No time for wasters!

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By *enobiaWoman
over a year ago

lol

Sometimes it's chary.

Its difficult to assess..

You need to devulge

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By (user no longer on site)
43 weeks ago

Return of summer

Grass under exposed white bits

Suncream assistant

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By (user no longer on site)
43 weeks ago

A first social meet

Flutter of aprehension

Neighbour enters pub

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By (user no longer on site)
43 weeks ago

Imperial Bar

Strawberry Daquari d*unk

A crotchless surprise

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By *antyhoseMan
42 weeks ago

Birmingham

Her high heel dangles

She knows what she is doing

He's lost to her now

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By (user no longer on site)
42 weeks ago

A promise of sun

The picnic blanket is packed

Wine, baguettes, condoms

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By *antyhoseMan
41 weeks ago

Birmingham

His cock erupted

spurt after spurt of hot cum

soaked her nyloned legs

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By (user no longer on site)
41 weeks ago

Tits out on the beach

Pussy Kat shakes in pleasure

Swimsuit catches seed

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