FabSwingers.com forum: The Guest and the Good girl

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hello

I have not written Erotica in about 10 years and had a normal brain back then. So with trepidation I shall be posting this new composition.

Please be warned it contains elements of BDSM and is only representative of the D/s relationship I seek and therefore not necessarily in harmony with readers own views. Nevertheless I hope you enjoy the naughty bits

. Here goes...

It was happening.

Out of the blue my partner had rung me with a set of instructions to follow “to the letter”. Here I was, the supplicant finalising the preparations to please my Master and his guest this clammy June evening. A Dyson tower silently kept the circulating air of the lounge cool while Pink was blaring out hits from her 2019 Beautiful Trauma tour. The volume was set high to prevent me from discerning a key in the lock and footsteps on the Italian flagstones leading to tonight’s inner chamber of debauchery. As I knelt upon our 18th century reproduction of a Renaissance rug an erotic thought caused me to ponder if I would be joining a long succession of women who, through the centuries, had obediently kowtowed to their masters. I wondered if they too, had been almost naked. I was kneeling, knees hip width apart, facing away from the lounge door and bowed my upper body until my forehead touched the aging maroon textile. I smoothed my silk, midnight-black kimono over the curves of my bottom leaving my stocking feet peeping through. I adjusted the blindfold before stretching my arms in front of me, causing a shift of the silk. Goosebumps appeared as my buttocks were partially exposed. Was it the effect of the artificially cooled air kissing my English Rose complexion, a stark contrast to my attire, or anticipation of what was to unfold? By my side was the kimono tie, latex-free condoms and a bottle of lubricant.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

In preparation for this evening, it had not occurred to me to detract from instruction. When we entered our relationship, I made an oath to Alan, in return for his ownership of my body sexually, I would submit whenever, wherever, however and with whomsoever. Denial would invoke discipline, as would becoming the obsequious girl under instruction; a gratification of my deviant fetish. Sex has always been a huge component of our relationship. Whether we shopped for food, antiques or holidays we would find a layby in the countryside and indulge in each other’s bodies before embarking on the journey home. Alan had quickly decided that part of his control over my body was to dictate my clothing. He did not want anything to impede our sexual adventures: he had to have instant access. Thus, the ban of wearing panties and trousers was born. If time was ever short, he’d park the car in a known dogging spot, push the seat back, demand I release my huge tits from the lingerie encasement of his choosing, for him to grope while he uncovered his throbbing weapon. I would be on the passenger seat in a kneeling position and ready to savour the precum and serve the phallus. As my head bobbed up and down, he would ensure my skirt had ridden up my hips so my smoothly shaved cunt could be seen glistening with the invocation of my juices to any potential voyeur.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I waited.

The palpitations throughout my blood vessels rhythmically matched the powerful chords from Pink’s tragic love ballads; they thundered on. The focus of pulsing culminated in the vulvic labia and I yearned to touch and taste the wetness escaping down the vaginal walls, but my sexual pleasure was not to come from the carnal act of servitude this evening. I was simply facilitating a transaction between Alan and his mature colleague who had never experienced the delightfully depraved intercourse of the anus – it would leave this gentleman indebted to my partner. This was a higher cerebral pleasure that not many women experience or would want to experience: the gifting of power to one’s Master over another through the willing sacrifice of a chosen orifice. To be perfectly honest it was no sacrifice. I relished each moment of being used. Each was a liberation from societal norms and sexual taboos. But tonight? Tonight, would be different. Alan was quite accustomed in offering my mouth to strangers in the private members’ clubs we frequented. He would guide my head, lowering inch by inch by inch until the stranger’s hard shaft disappeared and his balls tickled my bottom lip. The stranger was then invited to fuck Alan’s slut’s throat. I would then reap the rewards of having Alan fuck me hard with lust fuelled thrusts that would have me gushing during this licentious spit-roast. At the same time copious salivation produced a sloshing melody as I gagged on meat plunging in and out of my throat. Muffled screams would try to escape, incoherent words of ecstasy emitted as strings of saliva dribbled down my chin.

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By *eeBee67Man
over a year ago

Masked and Distant

Wow, fantastically well written, so descriptive, setting the scene so well, visually and audibly (love P!nk)

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By *r and Mrs S99Couple
over a year ago

blackpool

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By *J GeminiTV/TS
over a year ago

Northumberland

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By *c jMan
over a year ago

Glasgow

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By *orgotten22Woman
over a year ago

out in the sticks in the north east england

Good start

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Wow, fantastically well written, so descriptive, setting the scene so well, visually and audibly (love P!nk) "

I love Pink too

And thank you for the compliments.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Good start "

I'll add more later today.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

This evening was different.

Alan had decided to offer me to someone he knew, offer a part of my body that had been solely his to use, and, offer it in our sanctum. Of course, if the paintings and tapestry adorned walls of our home could speak, even the Marquis de Sade would blush. I was nervous. I belonged to Alan. I embraced the “whenever and wherever” demands, welcoming every type of attention bestowed upon me, and certainly, my preference was for the throw-me-around-the-bed-in-different-positions type of rough sex. Alan would exert power and prowess exceeding that of men half his age, attesting to his sexual dominion over me. Equally, he proved to be nurturing and thoughtful. My Master had been so gentle using an inflatable dildo in the training of my cunt to be able to accommodate a fisting from his huge hands, and, he instinctively knew when to adopt a slow sensual fucking as my hormones raged for a day or so, once a month. Although our relationship was not all about sex, it was where our innate character traits came to the fore: my partner’s natural authority and control was the yang to my yin; I was born in the hours of darkness to become an obliging submissive with a penchant for forbidden pleasures .

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Before we got together, Alan told me of all the random women he had fucked and warned me it was not something he was prepared to give up but conversely, a girlfriend would have to be his, and his alone. I assessed him as a typical peacock, he needed to flirt, chase and make a conquest of women, and even steal them away from other men. I was confident I could satiate much of Alan’s sexual appetite, but the peacock would still need to strut and conquer random women and so began our semi-open relationship. Our relationship was indeed not all about sex, we often participated in typical and not-so typical couple type activities such as clay pigeon shooting and nights out at the theatre. However, there was something about dining out that emboldened me. Alan and I could discuss or debate any subject over a bottle of house wine at a Michelin restaurant and though we may not arrive at a mutual consensus there was no subjugation to be had. In fact, my inner lustful goddess Rati would emerge and suggestively mandate sexual attention. At the end of the meal I would lick and suck the tip of the index finger, sometimes it was mine and sometimes it was Alan’s. I would lick and suck midway, trace my lips with the moist finger, sucking the entire finger and withdrawing slowly. I would lick and suck two fingers never averting my gaze from my counterpart, Kamadeva. The rising sexual tension was palpable by the time I feigned gagging as the fingers probed towards my throat. Even the brief downpours of the rains of Summer could not dampen the fire of carnal desires as I hitched up my dress, leading my partner to an alleyway, wordlessly commanding to be taken. Alan would fuck and fuck me hard to melodious sounds of the local wildlife who had espied two wet figures, one pushed up against a brick wall under street lighting, with arms held locked together above her head and legs wrapped around the naked waist of a man salaciously pumping into her, with his other hand supporting her exposed arse. The wildlife bayed before d*unkenly returning to their homes,

“Give her one from me”,

“Give it to her hard”,

“Finger that arse”.

Alan would say it was the twinkle in my emerald eyes that lead to alleyway pursuits, but I am not so sure...

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I'll post more if wanted.

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By *eeBee67Man
over a year ago

Masked and Distant

"I'll post more if wanted. "

Yes please

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By *ustybeg83Man
over a year ago

bangor

Yea

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I was nervous.

I was nervous two years ago when we attended a private club together for the first time. So many questions danced around my head like beautifully vivid carousel horses on steroids. I need not have worried as Alan took control of this new shared experience on this carnival themed night. We wore Venetian masks, Alan a Pantalone and me, a Colombina, and, as in a carnival, we played to an audience: our partially clothed bodies writhing, grinding and bumping in symbiotic harmony. My Master’s colleague was apparently nervous also. Alan was to take him for a drink after work, a stiff one to steady this anal virgin’s nerves. How appropriate. Perhaps I, too, should have had a touch of Dutch courage but I suspected I would become high on being touched, groped, fucked, disciplined, fucked, fucked, fucked…

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I felt hands on my hips, and as they were steered upwards, my upper torso moved forwards causing my long nipples to coast across the weave. One would imagine they would harden at such a touch, but they had been like bullets the entire time I bowed in reverence for my Master’s pleasure. My arms were gently crossed at the wrists, in front of me and with Alan kneeling beside me, he bound them with the silk tie of the kimono. He growled into my ear to flex my hips towards the heavens. I inhaled his scent and as I craved his seduction of my entire flesh my body responded instantaneously. The kimono slipped down my back causing further flesh exposure. It revealed the retro garter belt, straps and deep lacy stocking tops framing my sopping wet cunt below my puckered orifice. Pink continued to sing out but now at a background level as Alan spoke to me,

“Who do you belong to, NVC?”

“You, Sir”

“Good girl. Did you follow ALL the instructions I set out?”

I had showered, shaved and creamed my entire body with cocoa butter, a subtle smell to induce the awakening of an aging penis. I donned the black apparel laid out, a stark contrast to the Egyptian brilliant white cotton bedding on our queen-sized bed. I smoothed the vintage seamed stockings up my pale legs whilst ensuring a straight line, and finally, before descending our plush lipstick-red carpeted stairs to the lounge, I had walked into a mist of my favourite Dior perfume.

“Yes, Sir”

“Your evening’s ensemble is a gift from my guest, he had included coordinating lace panties, would you like to wear them?”

“The gift is most kind but no Sir, I will not wear the panties”

“Good. And did my good girl prepare her arse thoroughly?”

Alan knew I hated fingers penetrating my iniquitous void, so I used toys of different sizes to ensure the emptying of my rectum, the cleaning thereafter and lubrication to aid stretching and relaxing of the anal sphincter.

“Yes, Sir, I am fully prepared”.

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By *ildtouchMan
over a year ago

st saviour

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Why a sad face?

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By *asterR and slut mayaMan
over a year ago

Bradford

Experienced bdsm master very well written .couldn't message privately as out of your age preferences.always happy to chat.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Experienced bdsm master very well written .couldn't message privately as out of your age preferences.always happy to chat."

Thank you for your kind words.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

More, or not enough sex?

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thank you to people who have told me directly that they like what I have published so far, but am I wrong to want the "adoration"

here?

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

[Removed by poster at 23/06/20 10:34:46]

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By *avidCAMBSMan
over a year ago

Thorne

mmm yes yes please and whats next - where did this go

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I felt my Master lean over me and heard a rustling which I assumed would be the condom packet. With Alan’s large hands on my cheeks he pulled them apart. My anus beginning to gape caused a gasp from Alan’s guest and his older hands replaced the large ones keeping my cheeks forced open. Alan reached under my chest and began twisting and pulling on my nipples. As I yelped, he whispered the order to invite his guest to enter me,

“Please, let me have your huge, rock-hard cock,

“I need you to fill my arse.

“My Master wants you to pound his dirty slut”.

There was a fumbling and grunting as the guest hesitantly positioned his helmet at the dark entrance.

“I have been hungering for a stranger’s cock to plunge deep inside of me”.

That was all the encouragement needed for the guest to push through a back door that had long been denied to him by ex-girlfriends and ex-wives.

My connection was not with the guest and his mediocre endowment trying to temporarily own the arse he was fucking. Instead I was lost in Alan’s demands, his dirty talk and the use of his hands. He finger-fucked me and smeared the juices upon my lips. More finger-fucking soon had me sucking at his fingers savouring my creamy juices. I lifted my shoulders and threw my head back, my auburn curls cascading the length of my back. The guest saw this as an invite to grab a fistful while Alan started slapping my tits. I could feel a change in the rhythm of the fuck and knew it would be over shortly. Alan began inciting his guest, he too wanted it over,

“Fuck my slut

“She needs a proper arse fucking

“Fuck it hard

“Fill her with cum”.

And with that timely provocation and a long groan, the guest filled me, or rather ejaculated blobs of semen into his sheath.

My Master liberated my wrists and in a low voice, advised me to resume my original position.

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By *entlemanDevilMan
over a year ago

London and Newcastle

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By *entlemanDevilMan
over a year ago

London and Newcastle

Brilliant. Beautifully written, erotic and incredibly arousing. Which surprises me. It's a rarity for me to be aroused by a forum post. Wonderful x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

For someone who hasn't written for ten years this is fabulous. Love it. You're a delicious and deviant lady. I like, very much.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thank you to both devils, I'll post another installment tomorrow.

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By *airexchangeMan
over a year ago

near Grantham / Stamford

NVC, you have done well. You write so beautifully, leaving just enough to the imagination. Very very arousing. Keep up the good work.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Brilliantly written

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By *angibleMan
over a year ago

downham

Very erotic

I'm looking forward to reading further instalments and find out just how far her journey will take her.....

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By *enninemarkMan
over a year ago

huddersfield/manchester

Brilliant!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

The single footfall of shoes upon the flagstones signalled my Master returning to me, alone. There was a pause as he stood in the doorway.

“Stand!”

I manoeuvred slowly to ease my aching knees and used my hands to push up from the floor. I stood upright, shivering a little but held my head high with a false pride as posture was important to Alan. I remained facing away from the doorway and interlocked my fingers behind my back. Biting my bottom lip, I was uneasy at the gravity of his voice. I yearned to be cradled and to be assured I was his good girl, but discipline would first have to transpire as the initial stage of the reclaiming ritual. Discipline was metred out in two forms and it was a simple case of where and how my Master chose to spank my derriere. For erogenous stimulation the rounded areas of each cheek needed to be struck in an upward motion separately or together. Each strike and consequential jiggling of the fatty cheeks sent pulses felt deep inside my vagina. This mock discipline was beneficial to us both as the building up of the intensity of the warranted slaps occasionally resulted in me climaxing on Alan’s lap, and always gave rise to a nymphomaniac hunger eager to attend to the Master’s every whim.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Alan circled me before whipping off the blindfold. I quickly became accustomed to the fading light that entered the room via the patio doors.

“Pink tits, nice!

“Your arse needs reddening, girl!”.

Alan tugged at the kimono bunched around my hands, without exact instruction I had dared not adjust it to wear or let it slip from my arms as I had stood. Before the kimono reached the rug and me re-interlocking my fingers, my Master walloped my buttock. The surprise jolted me into inhaling a short, high-pitched breath.

“Nervous, girl?”.

Alan switched off the Dyson tower and strode over to the chaise longue. As he sat, he demanded I turn and face him. He was the very essence of authority all 77 inches of him, sat there semi-suited, having draped his jacket over the back of one of the twin sofas earlier in the evening, legs apart. Of course, I was nervous, this was new terrain for the pair of us; when was I to be his good girl again? And, standing there almost naked with dusk preparing to give way to nightfall in about an hour or so, I felt the hair on my arms rise and goosebumps make a re-appearance.

“Come!”

My footsteps were soft and delicate as I inched towards my Master and stood before him between his legs. Deftly he manoeuvred me over his right leg and ensured my legs could not move with his left. He clamped me into his lower abdomen and right side with his right arm, and although my arms were free to lie in front of my body on the chaise longue, they were inhibited by his body and elbow.

“Have you been a bad girl, NVC?”

“I… I”,

The first strike came diagonally and a little too high to cause a ripple of flesh. I yelped.

“I did not give permission for you to speak,

“You let a stranger fuck you, did you not?”

“I…”,

The second strike matched the first but the impact on previously traumatised skin stung further.

“It is rhetorical girl,

“Not only did the stranger fuck you, he fucked the most intimate part of you that belongs to me!”

I did not try to respond; I was purely concentrating on my breathing to lessen the pain and this was only two spanks in. Would my Master tell me how many spanks I was to receive, and would I have to count? And as if he could read my mind,

“You will count these spanks to ten while apologising to me for being a wanton slut!”

The third strike suggested a pattern as was comparable to the first two.

“Owwwww, threeeee,

“Sorry, sorry Sir for

“For being a slut”.

The fourth strike came from above and although it made contact with unblemished skin it felt like a plank of wood had whacked me. I shrieked so loud and whimpered before a version of the number four was forced through gritted teeth. Alan withdrew something from a pocket in his trousers, reached around to my mouth and stuffed the material into it. Lace is a conspicuous material and so I deduced I was to be silenced by the panties I had earlier declined to wear. My Master was not averse to testing the panties’ gagging qualities with strikes five, six and seven in rapid succession. I howled through the material and, try as I might, could not wriggle free or use any limb to protect myself. I sobbed silently. Alan began caressing my bottom.

“Hushhhhhhh, just three more, NVC, just three more, good girl”.

My Master adjusted his right leg slightly which raised my bottom allowing the slow strikes of eight, nine and ten to be implemented from a lower angle. They came direct from our mock discipline handbook. My flesh still smarted but also jiggled and deep within me a small fire of desire was being lit.

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By *overt711CoolMan
over a year ago

Leicestershire

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By *riental_brit_studMan
over a year ago

London

NVC, love your erotica, I love the contrast between the general descriptive writing and Alan's dirty talk. I get incredible aroused by dirty talk, especially when it comes from a woman. I like it when a woman says, 'fuck my creamy cunt', 'fuck me hard', 'bang my arsehole' simple yet effective.

I love an older woman and think you have a gorgeous sexy smile in your profile. Would love to see that jiggling arse of yours when fucked. I bet you have a sexy body and you should post some pics. I'll wanking over you for sure.

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By *riental_brit_studMan
over a year ago

London

NVC,

Here's one of my stories for you,

https://m.fabswingers.com/forum/stories/1040175

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By *p22333Man
over a year ago

Witney

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By *lim_jim1964Man
over a year ago

peterborough

Such a well written story, thanks for sharing it with us ?? ??

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"NVC, love your erotica, I love the contrast between the general descriptive writing and Alan's dirty talk. I get incredible aroused by dirty talk, especially when it comes from a woman. I like it when a woman says, 'fuck my creamy cunt', 'fuck me hard', 'bang my arsehole' simple yet effective.

Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Such a well written story, thanks for sharing it with us ?? ?? "

Thank you.

I'll post the next part later today

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By *ynapticnerveMan
over a year ago

S east Tx

Keep it going

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Alan scooped me up into his powerful arms and made his way to our bedroom. He laid me gently on our bed, placing my arms stretched towards the ornate wooden Georgian bedhead, and, straightening my legs with feet pointing to the oak bed end. With one hand, fingers softly trailed down from the sternum, over the soft curves of my abdomen, then to and past a sunken naval to the garter belt where both hands unfastened the metal suspender-clips. My Master had purposely ignored my sex, wherein the fire was emitting a low rumble, kindled by feathery touches upon flesh as he expertly unrolled the fully-fashioned stockings, climaxing in the reveal of burnished copper painted toenails. Alan kissed each foot appreciating the fulfilment of a request “had I enough time” during the early evening preparations. He gently kissed his way up my body. I purred as my back arched allowing him access to reach and unclip the fasteners of the garter belt underneath me. Again, Alan disregarded that most feminine of body parts which compelled my enslavement to him. I went to speak but was curtailed by a finger to my lips and a lingering kiss deposited on my forehead. I watched as my Master sauntered to the on-suite and pushed the door behind him. I heard water pouring into our free-standing bath and knew that I and the traces of my earlier “wanton behaviour” would be immersed, my sins cleansed, and my body liberated from all evidence of the guest.

My Master emerged from the steaming room disrobed. His penis did not swing freely on his approach to me; this was a warrior beginning to prepare for action, stiffening, growing, anticipating…

“Come”.

There was a gentility to his voice and manner. I took the extended hand and was soon assisted into the roll-top bath. Alan sponge-washed me tenderly but would not let my hands out of the bathtub to wander towards the now proud girthy phallus. He knew I ached to kiss him, to touch him, to worship at the altar of his manhood. It was my function to attend to him but more than that it was an unquenchable desire, especially as the fire was now beginning to roar. With plug removed and water now draining, I was to get on all fours so that my Master could clean and inspect that my lower orifices were ready to serve. Alan admired his mark of ownership upon my buttock as the hand-held showerhead dispensed fresh warm water, enhancing the reddened flesh,

“Beautiful! Although…”,

“Although I would prefer it indelible, or at least well-defined, and with a deep inhalation arising from profound consideration,

“A cane.”

Since the finger to my lips had signalled silence not twenty minutes since, I had not been given any indication this conversation yet involved me, and therefore, resisted the urge to disclose that the cane was my Nemesis.

My sphincter, recalling the earlier pleasure of penetration, unashamedly opened wide as Alan, finger and thumb, parted my cheeks, allowing a thorough sluicing from the pressure of the water. He then manipulated my hips to flex up and proffer his possession. Undertaking the same action, Alan exploited my cunt by holding the lips open with finger and thumb. First the labia minora and then labia majora withstood the pressure of the jet stream to ensure cleanliness inside and out. Deep within me the roaring fire became a seething volcano. The vibrations from the jets of water stimulated my clitoris and sent spasms surging through my body and a call to god. Oh god I wanted more, so much more but my orgasm was not yet to be granted.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Someone deigned to critique the story with a c+, woohoo

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By *urreyloverMan
over a year ago

Guildford

Your writing is superb; it grabs my attention like a moth to a flame. At each episode, my hunger increases for more. Will my desire get sated, or are you treating us to the same restrained mental torture that your master metes on your yielding form?

A+

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Your writing is superb; it grabs my attention like a moth to a flame. At each episode, my hunger increases for more. Will my desire get sated, or are you treating us to the same restrained mental torture that your master metes on your yielding form?

A+"

Now that's more like it

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By *avidCAMBSMan
over a year ago

Thorne

WOWeeeee its amazing writing and getting better... utterly filthy! B+

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"WOWeeeee its amazing writing and getting better... utterly filthy! B+ "

Another hard task master

Although I did notice I forgot to close quotation marks on last part. Probably cos originally I had simply started a new line of speech, then added description, oops.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

100% from me, despite the punctuation, had other things on my mind towards the end

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"100% from me, despite the punctuation, had other things on my mind towards the end

Says the guy who forgot the full stop at the end of his profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Oops, fixed, I hope that didn't make a bad first impression

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By *alleyMan
over a year ago

Eccles

Amazing story- so sexy! The whole tale is a dream. Sex whenever and wherever you want - just perfect. She is such an erotic writer and I'd love some voyeurism/exhibitionist tales.

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By *obhopenohopeMan
over a year ago

Peterborough

Do you like younger men ?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By *ay04Man
over a year ago

Peterborough

Wow, I think your have a future career as an exotic novelist. I’m not joking, I was reading it at work and got a semi, lol. I’m even more interested in getting to know you now xxx

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By *ir-spunk-alotMan
over a year ago

Southern England

Wow, never been a fan of erotica but i had a hard on after reading and my bellend under my forskin was covered in pre cum. I just had to ejaculate.

Thank you.

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over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Do you like younger men ? "

My age filters answers that

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thanks guys, glad it got you fired up.

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By *ir-spunk-alotMan
over a year ago

Southern England

"Thanks guys, glad it got you fired up. "

Could you do another story. Really enjoyed that.

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By *ir-spunk-alotMan
over a year ago

Southern England

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Thanks guys, glad it got you fired up.

Could you do another story. Really enjoyed that."

Haven't finished this yet. I'll post more later.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

A little off tangent but I'm happy to declare I pleased my Master earlier.

Just imagine the scene that hit him as he climbed my stairs. Lying face down, naked but wearing a shibari bra securing my anal hook in place. With a little room for movement obviously. Handcuffed to the brass head stead. Pillows propping my pelvis area up, so that he had an excellent view of my glistening cunt, begging to be fucked.

And boy, yes I was fucked and fucked and fucked.

Disclaimer: he's in my bubble.

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By *rash26775Man
over a year ago

all over

Great story

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By *imBanksMan
over a year ago

Letchworth

Such a vivid and filthy piece of erotica. I cannot wait until your next piece. Thank you.

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

Directed here by your profile and very glad I was too - intelligently written with a sensuality that is often overlooked in this part of the forum that conjures vivid images without being blatant, allowing the reader to fill in the gaps for themselves using their imagination

I look forward to more

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A most excellent horny piece. a lady I would love to become acquainted with

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Oh my!

That lit a fire inside for sure

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By *rad33Man
over a year ago

Cambridgeshire

what can I say well one word some it up wow I admit I gotta semi,you should deffo carry on writing more

ih and fancy a coffee lol

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thank you for your comments

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By *obhopenohopeMan
over a year ago

Peterborough

Sorry I was being cheeky wondered if I could temp you ??

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Sorry I was being cheeky wondered if I could temp you ??"

Not at all. I have three children older than you.

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By *ig TennentsMan
over a year ago

Ayrshire

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Such a well written story, I hope there's more to come.

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By *ester4473Man
over a year ago

norwich

t’s a shame you can’t turn the fantasy into reality. I would love to help you with one if possible?? xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Wow NVC what a wonderfully well written story. I found myself desperate to read each instalment. You say you haven't written anything like this for 10 years? I'd love to read some more of your work.

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over a year ago

Alan lifted me out of the bath, my legs were weak, and my body trembled as I was wrapped in a huge fluffy towel and gently rubbed dry. He brushed my wet hair, and with a scrunchie, tied it away from my face.

“Come, leave the towel,

“Crawl to me”.

By the time my Master had expressed his wishes he was sat on our bed watching me as I attempted to stealthily crawl to him; my eyes locked upon his. His wishes, as his commands, were to be executed even when affection overtook the authority of his voice; Alan wanted to reclaim not only his submissive slut but his partner too. He began stroking his thick length and drawing back his foreskin, his bulbous helmet in need of a tongue’s devotion. With deep brown Mediterranean eyes, he bade me offer my mouth, to which I was eager to comply. How eager? I may utter clichés, but they perfectly convey that I receive much pleasure in pleasing him and want to make him happy, or rather, be a major player in whatever makes him happy. And at that precise moment sexually, it entailed keeping the mischievous brat within reigned in; I’ll permit her and her playfulness to emerge at some point after I have been reclaimed.

Crawling and licking my lips in readiness, one sorrowful thought crossed my mind: the inability to envelop my mouth around his colossal girth and length so that Alan can experience what is synonymously termed as a skull fucking and a face fuck. Fortunately, with no cleft palette, both my brain and skull are safe no matter what the urban dictionary may claim. But in all seriousness, I would like to take it deep down into my throat, as I have with others without my teeth tearing into their flesh, and hearing the sounds mimicking a sopping wet cunt. Having my Master holding my head still and controlling both the rhythm and depth of the fucking of this orifice, I cannot think of a more definable action of submission. I may and I do, enthusiastically lick the entire measurement of my Lord Priapus’ cock, suck each testicle with fervour, and passionately tease his helmet and excitedly lap up the precum. I can use my fingers to massage his perineum and dart my tongue in and out of his anus or bury it deep. I can suck, lick, tease, flick, I can masturbate the foreskin up and over his helmet and back down with thumb and fingers, use wet hands for his entire length or bestow a tit wank and my Master will eventually explode; so why do I dwell on an experience I cannot provide? I want him to be able lose himself in his own carnality, to be able to hold my head against his groin, enjoy as my natural reaction is to gag and copiously salivate. I want him to relish the power over me as he fucks my mouth as I gaze into his eyes; my own watering with the paradox of pleasure appearing as its antithesis.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Enjoy

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By *ilberryMan
over a year ago

Scarborough

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Enjoy

I do, thoroughly

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Enjoy

I do, thoroughly

Good

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Enjoy

I do, thoroughly

Good

Willing to please, I like that

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By *udistnorthantsMan
over a year ago

Desborough

Awesome

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Excellent writing, I very much enjoyed it, thank you for sharing

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By *attb179Man
over a year ago

London

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By *attb179Man
over a year ago

London

Superbly written, drawing on a deep understanding of the bdsm dynamic, articulating its subtleties so well. Enjoyed this alot, thanks!

Shame I can't even see your profile OP!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

God this is awesome. Got so hard reading it

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I'm glad the story is being enjoyed.

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By *airexchangeMan
over a year ago

near Grantham / Stamford

I'm still enjoying the awesome stories, makes me hard after just a few lines! It just goes to show the power of the mind and imagination! Thank you again! xxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Loved reading this.

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By *ir-spunk-alotMan
over a year ago

Southern England

Can we make a movie?

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By *ycandyMan
over a year ago

Southern England

Thank you for sharing your evocative, erotic tale. I loved it.

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By *lashheartMan
over a year ago

shrewsbury

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By *asey666Man
over a year ago

Dublin 13

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over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Damn lady, you are good

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Thank you xx

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By *angerineMan
over a year ago

somewhere inbetween the right and wrong

Wonderful story, thank you NVC for sharing with us all.

And thanks to your Master who clearly keeps you more than satisfied, cared and tendered for.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Wonderful story, thank you NVC for sharing with us all.

And thanks to your Master who clearly keeps you more than satisfied, cared and tendered for."

I wish

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thanks all

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very enjoyable, I think you should write some more.x

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By *eady FeckMan
over a year ago

Staines

Absolutely superb,& as a master myself, you've given me some ideas.

Brilliantly written congratulations ??

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By *onle81Man
over a year ago

Sherborne

"Thanks all

Wonderful writing and lovely to see your inner submissive desires expressed for us all to enjoy

I would have thought there would have been a concluding chapter with finally releasing your pent up orgasm?

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By *orthen soul manMan
over a year ago

aberdeen

One of the best writen story’s I ever read

I can’t understand why your cut of age is so young lots of bdsm masters lots older most have years of experience

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Thanks all

Wonderful writing and lovely to see your inner submissive desires expressed for us all to enjoy

I would have thought there would have been a concluding chapter with finally releasing your pent up orgasm? "

There should be - the full reclaiming part.

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By *onle81Man
over a year ago

Sherborne

"Thanks all

Wonderful writing and lovely to see your inner submissive desires expressed for us all to enjoy

I would have thought there would have been a concluding chapter with finally releasing your pent up orgasm?

There should be - the full reclaiming part. "

And can we convince you to write it? Please

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The best story for a while on here.loved it.

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By *angerineMan
over a year ago

somewhere inbetween the right and wrong

"and can we convince you to write it? Please "

Let's start a petition! Someone get me some paper and a clipboard...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Thank you OP. I've been trawling through the forum for eloquent storytelling like this and your story has been a joy to read. Puts my own writing to shame. I will be reading again and again in the hope of absorbing some small morsels of your poetic skills. Beautiful.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

This is outstanding. Worthy of being published. I would buy your book!

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By *eon3691Man
over a year ago

stamford

Hi MM.The written can be so powerful, captivating and exciting. You certainly ignite all the senses with you erotic writing. Thank you M. Please may have some more xxx

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By *arsidefanMan
over a year ago

WWinch

Well that’s a much better read than that 50 shades.

Could definitely be made into a short story.

Good read. X

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By *nything but ordinaryMan
over a year ago

Boston

I'm not sure I can add much, that hasn't already been written by someone else about this story, except maybe, that I have just the collar for this lady.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Absolutely brilliant, what a writer, what imagination!

Ok I'm bumping my own story (

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Btw Alan is very much in the past and was heading to that eventuality, which is why I never composed a reclaim chapter.

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By *melie LALWoman
over a year ago

Peterborough

Bump

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By *oneybadger147Man
over a year ago

St Neots

A captivating read, at times erotic and delicate before turning slutty and dirty. Certainly food for thought and ideas for the future

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By *enninemarkMan
over a year ago

huddersfield/manchester

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By *melie LALWoman
over a year ago

Peterborough

I am bumping this for someone to access.

I'm an angel

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Angelically - and enjoyably, no doubt - well-researched.

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By *melie LALWoman
over a year ago

Peterborough

"Angelically - and enjoyably, no doubt - well-researched."

Just a great imagination

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By *eal62Man
over a year ago

Spalding

Amelie LAL

I was trying to reply but could as I'm 60 and you have srt your age limit to 59 so it wont let me send a message. I have a short erotic story i would love your critic on Eddie (Seal62)

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By *melie LALWoman
over a year ago

Peterborough

"Amelie LAL

I was trying to reply but could as I'm 60 and you have srt your age limit to 59 so it wont let me send a message. I have a short erotic story i would love your critic on Eddie (Seal62) "

Why don't you post it on this forum?

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By *eal62Man
over a year ago

Spalding

Amelie LAL

Just did only to be told it contains words i shouldn't have so ive got to do it again.

Amelie please i ask a favour you have your age limit set at 59 I'm 60 you have the most beautiful smile i have ever seen and would love to get to know better on a higher level. Eddie x

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By *eal62Man
over a year ago

Spalding

Sorry there's not much punctuation if any lol.

I walk into your room and walk over to you I take your drink out of your hand and kiss you gently on your red lipstick smile my tongue entwined with yours my hands cress the small of your back gently moving down to your butt and start to squeeze tight my lips start to kiss your neck a gently nibble your ear my mouth moves down towards your chest I unbutton your dress as it falls to the ground it uncovers you naked body with red stocking and your high heels.

I kiss your neck and move down to the small of your back and start to kiss your buttocks then moving towards you butt my tongue flickers your butt as it enters it making you feel scream with pleasure my hands reached between your legs and coress your pussy by this time dripping wet my fingers play with your lips just around your clit flicking it slowly now and again your screaming becomes louder now my lips come further down to your pussy I start chewing and biting your clit you scream again and again with pleasure as your body violently shivers as your first orgasam rips through your body

I don't stop while you shake my tongue ficks between your pussy and clit as my tongue enters your dripping wet c@nt I feel the contraction of your pussy gripping my tongue with your juices running down my th roat I drink all the sweet sex nector down then you shake again and beg me to stop now my rock hard cock want some of the action with you still face down on the bed you ark your butt upwards my hard cock rests between your butt cheeks I run my solid member from your cheeks to your pussy gathering all the juices from your socking wet fanny and spread your wetness around your butt hole each time the head of my hard cock runs around your pussy and clit then goes deep inside your pussy and then back to your butt gathering more juices my hard cock then turns to your face you suck the pussy juice of the head of my dick then all of a sudden you take the whole length of my cock right down to my balls deep inside your mouth my cock twiches and you start to gag you relax your grip on my cock

I then go back to your butt and pussy from behind my hard cock delves deep inside you a scream of pleasure runs through your body as you climax again I take my dripping cock out of you pussy and move back towards you ass the head positioned at the entrance hole I very gently push fermly to get the head of my cock inside your ass so not to hurt once inside I gently push the whole length all the way to my balls you arch your butt to meet my cock your tight butt squeezes my cock as I push in and out sometimes I come out of your ass then all the way back inside as deep as my cock will let me you scream with another orgasam rippling through your body I take my rock hard cock out of your butt and insert it deep inside your pussy reaching for clit with my hand I rub it to and fro your screams now are so intense you beg me to stop

but I don't want to my ball are starting to swell and throb inside your pussy I pull out of your pussy and into your mouth you suck my cock to an inch of my life sucking your sweet pussy juice clean off my cock and swallowing all down your throat my rock hard cock reaches the bottom of your throat witch makes you gag you rub my cock with both hands while you catch your breath I scream I'm cuming now your hands rub as fast as you can my throbbing cock twitches as my love juice starts shooting out over your chin you then put my hard cock in to your mouth sucking hard as you can taking my hot salty sperm down your throat not stopping until every drop has been swallowed

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By *rgar27Man
over a year ago

Bognor Regis

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By *melie LALWoman
over a year ago

Peterborough

"Amelie LAL

Just did only to be told it contains words i shouldn't have so ive got to do it again.

Amelie please i ask a favour you have your age limit set at 59 I'm 60 you have the most beautiful smile i have ever seen and would love to get to know better on a higher level. Eddie x"

I'm happy with my age limit thank you.

As for the story, I didn't mean post it on this thread. Not to worry.

Punctuation IS needed.

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By *eal62Man
over a year ago

Spalding

Top priority: honesty

I could of changed my age in my profile but that would be dishonest

If I'm not your cup of tea just tell me in a msg but i hope i am x

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By *enninemarkMan
over a year ago

huddersfield/manchester

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By *obhopenohopeMan
over a year ago

Peterborough

Hot stuff x

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By *melie LALWoman
over a year ago

Peterborough

Thanks

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By *obhopenohopeMan
over a year ago

Peterborough

Thanks for replying would love to chat 121 x

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By *obhopenohopeMan
over a year ago

Peterborough

I have a few questions x

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By *melie LALWoman
over a year ago

Peterborough

If it's questions about the story, ask away.

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By *obhopenohopeMan
over a year ago

Peterborough

Is any off it based on real life things ? Or things you would like to do ?

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By *melie LALWoman
over a year ago

Peterborough

"Is any off it based on real life things ? Or things you would like to do ?"

I have a great imagination that has been fueled by events and desires - so both.

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By *obhopenohopeMan
over a year ago

Peterborough

Very nice and so naughty love the fact it's about desires x

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By *obhopenohopeMan
over a year ago

Peterborough

Do you have anymore erotica ?

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By *jonesMan
over a year ago

Plymouth

Very enjoyable read

So much more erotic than pictures

Thanks

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By *igerman23Man
over a year ago

hayes

Love it

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By *reenworld55Man
42 weeks ago

dorchester

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By *melie LALWoman
42 weeks ago

Peterborough

Glad it's still being enjoyed.

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By *xxxMan
33 weeks ago

Bedford & Chester

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By *ohn 66Man
33 weeks ago

Birmingham

Bookmark

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