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"The only thing I'd change on yours is the mention of covid. That was 5 years ago now. The rest is fine. Maybe another public pic or 2. That's it. ![]() Well written you come across as a nice person we have spoke a while ago about something can't even remember what😂 and a pice photo ![]() | |||
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"Seen many a post over the years from newbies asking for advice on why their profile doesn't get attention or what they should put to get more replies and was thinking this might be a fun thread. Give one Critique off the profile above ie the profile above aka me really needs to update their blurb, first line says 32 single straight etc turned 34 not so long ago, didn't think it had been that long since I updated ![]() As the lady above mentioned covid was almost 6 yrs ago now . Also as you mentioned your 34 not 32 . I'd also put on more recent photos than the ones you have. The toy collection part of the profile might also not appeal because not all women would be willing to play using toys that have been used on many others with no idea if the toys are being cleaned properly. | |||
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"Hard to critique, she has clear points on who she is, what shes looking for etc plenty vids & pics erm its a pretty good profile" You have been on 5 weeks and filled in no details | |||
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"More pictures would be nice. Not a bad profile though xx " Not my cup of tea... However you have lots of photos and explain exactly what you want ![]() | |||
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"More pictures would be nice. Not a bad profile though xx Not my cup of tea... However you have lots of photos and explain exactly what you want ![]() Great profile, you say exactlywhat your looking for and also have a good variety of pics and vids 😀 | |||
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"Could add some more pics. Ones in a nice shirt/jacket combo, as the ladies keep asking for. Though, I suppose I should follow my own advice. " Good profile with a good amount of info in the blurb although the two sentences on couples contradict each other slightly. Would remove part about needing to arrange a carer and just do that quietly in the background as may make some not engage incase they put you out. | |||
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"Im 6 months too young for you. May chat in 6 months if your profile lets me ![]() Really good profile, I would change the profile pic for a body shot, and maybe add some new pics. | |||
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"Im 6 months too young for you. May chat in 6 months if your profile lets me ![]() Love the profile. Clear and straight to the point with lots of pics and vids to see. ![]() | |||
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"Hot profile 🔥 Good info in bio and a selection of photos and videos to whet the appetite. The beach video (PDI ?) is stunning xx" Nicely written profile, explains everything you are looking for. Others say need more public photos but you explain discretion so only one photo explaining can supply more for possible meet scenario. Nicely spread out paragraphs make reading easy too and. Would we ask for a potential social, possibly as the profile ticked all the boxes we would look for. | |||
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"All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected. " Thanks, trip to Spain 2 weeks time should resolve that issue. | |||
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"All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected. " Good profile from our point of view. Hard to be critical to be fair. Well done xx ![]() | |||
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"All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected. Good profile from our point of view. Hard to be critical to be fair. Well done xx ![]() Great profile - can't really fault it. Definitely the kind of profile that would interest us xx | |||
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"You are two stunners ![]() ![]() Maybe a couple different type of pic. Not too much to change. | |||
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"[Removed by poster at 04/06/25 19:04:27]" I could only suggest more photos of Mrs J’s legs. You can never have enough photos of great legs. Oooofty. | |||
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"Some more photos would good." noted, thanks. | |||
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"Some more photos would good. noted, thanks." I dont think you have to change much Your profile is quite informative Only thing would be is the part looking for someone to educate you You have to educate yourself along the way But pretty good profile Hope your fab journey is good ![]() | |||
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"Good profile in terms of what your looking for etc. Would adjust the grammar in your main body of text but that's about it. " Well put together profile and definitely someone to message. | |||
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"Some more photos would good. noted, thanks. I dont think you have to change much Your profile is quite informative Only thing would be is the part looking for someone to educate you You have to educate yourself along the way But pretty good profile Hope your fab journey is good ![]() Fair point regarding education! Love your profile! Thank you ![]() | |||
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"Honest and straight to the point ![]() Would add a bit more about yourself and add some new pics that differ from the style of those on show. | |||
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"Good profile, brief and says what you want. I would take off the reference to your old profiles as theyre irrelevant now Nice photo's" Also a good profile. Well written and provides appropriate information. Nice pictures as well. | |||
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"Need more face pics to many cock pics ideally would like More face pics ![]() We don’t look at many single guys profiles on here but this guys is one of the better ones. He comes across as actually a nice guy, not a creep, genuine and has the perfect number of dick pics. | |||
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"Maybe a different array of photos" Speaking about pics...... First pic you're not even in (well possibly your DNA is, but that's not confirmed), and you have one of you "flipping the bird" - why? Also 5 pics that are a decade old. A small clean up and it will be grand. | |||
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"Can’t fault your profile at all. Great selection of photos and videos and you’ve made it clear and precise what you’re looking for. " Thank you handsome xx | |||
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"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻" I love your profile picture most of all ![]() | |||
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"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻 I love your profile picture most of all ![]() Profile is short and sweet. Gets to the point of what you like and what you’re looking for. I like the voyeur side of things and can identify with the enjoyment of being watched. Maybe if I’m lucky I’ll receive one of your videos in the future ![]() ![]() | |||
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"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻 I love your profile picture most of all ![]() ![]() ![]() Coming from a straight guy here. Your description is fine, to the point. I know it's a matter of opinion, but those patterned boxers are not cool - with the exception of the green ones hiding your meat. Body shot is decent and shows what people are getting themselves into. My only other critique... your headline "Hello. Been away for a bit, back to chat" is fine if you're literally just back on Fab a week or two, but if its been like that for months I'd update it. Hope that helps! ![]() | |||
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"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻 I love your profile picture most of all ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Noted and fixed ![]() | |||
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"Sounds like GingerHefe has had some great feedback and fixed their profile accordingly - I'd love a profile roast and critique please as although I have met a few people, I am struggling to get a reply from many single ladies or couples. Help me improve my profile ![]() Not much to change on your profile I wouldn't say. Maybe mix up the photos a bit to have some more body pictures rather than very similar photos of your cock but that would be our only comments. | |||
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"Just to say no one’s critiqued mine yet, happy to take a roasting on it x" For me male reading this here you are honest about being in a marriage but going into details about it being sexless too open for me reading it. And the part at the end about timewasters I always feel is useless information is a time waster really not going to message cause a bit off text on a profile. | |||
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"Thank you, yeah, that’s a really valid point. I’ve just added in a new photo and I’ll try to add a handful more in over the next week or so. A few new face photos and some body shots too. Appreciate your feedback " No problem x | |||
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"Just to say no one’s critiqued mine yet, happy to take a roasting on it x For me male reading this here you are honest about being in a marriage but going into details about it being sexless too open for me reading it. And the part at the end about timewasters I always feel is useless information is a time waster really not going to message cause a bit off text on a profile. " Thanks very much | |||
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"Good range of pics. Could do with a few 'action' pics" Interesting use of yer hose and no need of a hermaphrodite coupling 10/10 ![]() | |||
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"Good range of pics. Could do with a few 'action' pics Interesting use of yer hose and no need of a hermaphrodite coupling 10/10 ![]() It’s pretty black and white. I’m sure I have seen your profile picture somewhere else before though. I fear someone may have used your photo and not told you. | |||
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"Decent profile really. Nice pics, maybe a lot of them are a bit samey, but still good. Profile text is informative. Decent xx " First two paragraphs of the biog can be removed - the update is over a year ago! Apart from that the profile should work for the target audience ![]() | |||
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"Decent profile really. Nice pics, maybe a lot of them are a bit samey, but still good. Profile text is informative. Decent xx First two paragraphs of the biog can be removed - the update is over a year ago! Apart from that the profile should work for the target audience ![]() Decent profile, informative and mix of pics. Better than a lot of mens efforts on here. | |||
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"Prob need to add a few more pics to the detailed write up. But if you’re happy with your profile,Thats the main thing. " Great profile, hot couple. Know what they want, plenty of detail | |||
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"Clear and simple profile. No nonsense or waffle. Clear boundaries and expectations, great pics and hot video. 10/10. " Just enough enticing pictures to show what you’re in for ![]() ![]() ![]() | |||
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"Decent profile with good body shots, my only criticism , and I’m stretching here, would be that I like to see something that tells me about the persons. Not just their sexual desires etc but I am nit picking there " Got a bit of info, better than some profiles deff. But ditch most if not all of cock pics. | |||
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"Can someone critique mine please I re wrote it completely " Very clear information provided | |||
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"Lovely pictures. Short to the point 👉 All good signs from me ![]() Could improve if being honest. Maybe some pics And drop or change some aspects of the bio. More about what you like or looking for. | |||
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"Lovely pictures. Short to the point 👉 All good signs from me ![]() Thanks, I had to spring clean the majority of my pics, I had far too much cock out on display, after all, less is more! ![]() | |||
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"Lovely pictures. Short to the point 👉 All good signs from me ![]() ![]() Id replied to the guy above you. Hadn't looked at yours. | |||
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"It says what you're looking for but not what others might expect from you " Very good. Lots of good pics and extensive informative bio. | |||
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"Super fit couple " Maybe a bit short on the text, and the first statement is gramatically wrong. That can turn a lot of people off. Otherwise, coming from a straight guy, looks ok. I'm sure the ladies will have more to say. | |||
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"Super fit couple Maybe a bit short on the text, and the first statement is gramatically wrong. That can turn a lot of people off. Otherwise, coming from a straight guy, looks ok. I'm sure the ladies will have more to say." Good well written profile, clear what you are looking for and comes across as genuine. Maybe a couple more pics would help. | |||
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"A bit wordy and no pics, but other than that it's clear and covers all the basics and doesn't waffle...and doesn't have one of those stupid "Sydney University" things..so 6/10...(would be 8 but no pics!)" Loved your profile just the right amount of content (would love to meet you guys) only thing I could possibly say would maybe be a couple more pics xx | |||
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"I need honest opinion,I think mines need freshening up " Would say it's a bit rude to not comment on the couple profile above you in the thread and instead ask for advice on your own profile. Whilst that's clearly is the theme of the thread - it's got to be quid pro quo. Your profile statement lacks punctuation and is one very very long sentence. In that regard, it's a profile we would quickly overlook. Hope that was helpful. | |||
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"Clear, concise and articulate. Everything you need to know is in the bio . As for the pictures ?well they speak for themselves . A really good mix of pictures and have we to say, hotter than hell ! 🔥" Stunning profile. What fab is all about! Great selection of very hot pics and a descriptive bio that sets out what they want. 10/10 | |||
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"Clear, concise and articulate. Everything you need to know is in the bio . As for the pictures ?well they speak for themselves . A really good mix of pictures and have we to say, hotter than hell ! 🔥 Stunning profile. What fab is all about! Great selection of very hot pics and a descriptive bio that sets out what they want. 10/10" Wow. What a profile. Sets out exactly what they do and don’t want. Plenty of information to a paint a picture of both of them. Photos very hot too. | |||
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"I need honest opinion,I think mines need freshening up Would say it's a bit rude to not comment on the couple profile above you in the thread and instead ask for advice on your own profile. Whilst that's clearly is the theme of the thread - it's got to be quid pro quo. Your profile statement lacks punctuation and is one very very long sentence. In that regard, it's a profile we would quickly overlook. Hope that was helpful. " To yourself I do apologise for missing the obvious,not a habit I generally have,I had thought i was up to date with posts,the bad grammar I will blame on the lack of specs at the time,another habit which isn't normal,apologies to yourselves and to the profile above profound apologies,I am scared to look now but im very sure it will be as amazing as your main picture...peace out folks ![]() | |||
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"It's certainly very well thought out and lots of details and pictures. Obviously far more elaborate than most profiles" Straight to the point about your likes and status. Could do with a few photos though | |||
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"It's certainly very well thought out and lots of details and pictures. Obviously far more elaborate than most profiles Straight to the point about your likes and status. Could do with a few photos though" Good profile likes and wants outlined and straight to the point. Top work | |||
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"It's certainly very well thought out and lots of details and pictures. Obviously far more elaborate than most profiles Straight to the point about your likes and status. Could do with a few photos though Good profile likes and wants outlined and straight to the point. Top work " Not the worst but not the best. Get more creative with pics and add more bio. Take out the know how it works bit. Points for not being a blank profile though. | |||
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"Ginger, this is a better-than-most profile of a single man. You stay clear of clichés, you come across as approachable. And if someone has a kink for colourful briefs, you're their guy. No verifications despite saying that some people of here will know you if a little off-putting. And I'd add some different photos. It's very crotch-specific just now ![]() "Ginger, this is a better-than-most profile of a single man. You stay clear of clichés, you come across as approachable. And if someone has a kink for colourful briefs, you're their guy. No verifications despite saying that some people of here will know you if a little off-putting. And I'd add some different photos. It's very crotch-specific just now ![]() Whilst it may not stop the influx of messages from guys in your inbox, if you're not meeting then I would take out the bit about who you're looking for as it's a tad contradictory. Or, you could take out the bit to say you're not meeting, but say that you're not 'actively' meeting at the moment. You could probably expand a little bit more below that about things you like / dislike. That said, your profile is decent and clear, sometimes less is more! I like the array of lingerie pics, but the naked photo on the bed is a cracker. Hope that helps x | |||
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"Ginger, this is a better-than-most profile of a single man. You stay clear of clichés, you come across as approachable. And if someone has a kink for colourful briefs, you're their guy. No verifications despite saying that some people of here will know you if a little off-putting. And I'd add some different photos. It's very crotch-specific just now ![]() I will make the appropriate changes and extend my sincerest thank you for your honest and constructive feedback ![]() | |||
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"Clear and concise profile, decent choice of pics and plenty of detail " Lovely profile, great veris… would love if there were more pics ![]() | |||
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"Clear and concise profile, decent choice of pics and plenty of detail Lovely profile, great veris… would love if there were more pics ![]() Well written, concise and hot photos! | |||
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"Clear and concise profile, decent choice of pics and plenty of detail Lovely profile, great veris… would love if there were more pics ![]() Why thank you ![]() | |||
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