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"The only thing I'd change on yours is the mention of covid. That was 5 years ago now. The rest is fine. Maybe another public pic or 2. That's it. "Well written you come across as a nice person we have spoke a while ago about something can't even remember what😂 and a pice photo  | |||
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"Seen many a post over the years from newbies asking for advice on why their profile doesn't get attention or what they should put to get more replies and was thinking this might be a fun thread. Give one Critique off the profile above ie the profile above aka me really needs to update their blurb, first line says 32 single straight etc turned 34 not so long ago, didn't think it had been that long since I updated "As the lady above mentioned covid was almost 6 yrs ago now . Also as you mentioned your 34 not 32 . I'd also put on more recent photos than the ones you have. The toy collection part of the profile might also not appeal because not all women would be willing to play using toys that have been used on many others with no idea if the toys are being cleaned properly. | |||
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"Hard to critique, she has clear points on who she is, what shes looking for etc plenty vids & pics erm its a pretty good profile" You have been on 5 weeks and filled in no details | |||
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I'd say all three profiles above are quite good, I like the spacing of the sentences so much better/easier to read than one big block of text
Pheobe mentioning your tattoos is good provides for a conversation starter ie guys can ask what they are x
Juicy one point it says
Not looking for single guys. Men Women aged 27 to 46 only. Will meet smokers.
It looks like you've ticked both boxes men and no single guys, easily done x
MissDynamite excellent photos
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"More pictures would be nice. Not a bad profile though xx " Not my cup of tea... However you have lots of photos and explain exactly what you want  | |||
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"More pictures would be nice. Not a bad profile though xx Not my cup of tea... However you have lots of photos and explain exactly what you want "Great profile, you say exactlywhat your looking for and also have a good variety of pics and vids 😀 | |||
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"Could add some more pics. Ones in a nice shirt/jacket combo, as the ladies keep asking for. Though, I suppose I should follow my own advice. " Good profile with a good amount of info in the blurb although the two sentences on couples contradict each other slightly. Would remove part about needing to arrange a carer and just do that quietly in the background as may make some not engage incase they put you out. | |||
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"Im 6 months too young for you. May chat in 6 months if your profile lets me "Really good profile, I would change the profile pic for a body shot, and maybe add some new pics. | |||
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"Im 6 months too young for you. May chat in 6 months if your profile lets me
Really good profile, I would change the profile pic for a body shot, and maybe add some new pics. "Love the profile. Clear and straight to the point with lots of pics and vids to see.  | |||
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Do you cam chat in the rooms? Its a good way to meet ppl and get veri's. Maybe put a little of what you like/dont like? xx | |||
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"Hot profile 🔥 Good info in bio and a selection of photos and videos to whet the appetite. The beach video (PDI ?) is stunning xx" Nicely written profile, explains everything you are looking for. Others say need more public photos but you explain discretion so only one photo explaining can supply more for possible meet scenario. Nicely spread out paragraphs make reading easy too and. Would we ask for a potential social, possibly as the profile ticked all the boxes we would look for. | |||
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"All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected. " Thanks, trip to Spain 2 weeks time should resolve that issue. | |||
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"All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected. " Good profile from our point of view. Hard to be critical to be fair. Well done xx | |||
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"All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected. Good profile from our point of view. Hard to be critical to be fair. Well done xx "Great profile - can't really fault it. Definitely the kind of profile that would interest us xx | |||
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"You are two stunners   "Maybe a couple different type of pic. Not too much to change. | |||
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"[Removed by poster at 04/06/25 19:04:27]" I could only suggest more photos of Mrs J’s legs. You can never have enough photos of great legs. Oooofty. | |||
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"Some more photos would good." noted, thanks. | |||
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"Some more photos would good. noted, thanks." I dont think you have to change much Your profile is quite informative Only thing would be is the part looking for someone to educate you You have to educate yourself along the way But pretty good profile Hope your fab journey is good  | |||
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"Good profile in terms of what your looking for etc. Would adjust the grammar in your main body of text but that's about it. " Well put together profile and definitely someone to message. | |||
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"Some more photos would good. noted, thanks. I dont think you have to change much Your profile is quite informative Only thing would be is the part looking for someone to educate you You have to educate yourself along the way But pretty good profile Hope your fab journey is good "Fair point regarding education! Love your profile! Thank you | |||
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"Honest and straight to the point "Would add a bit more about yourself and add some new pics that differ from the style of those on show. | |||
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I wouldn't be showing any pre 2020 verifications. I only say that as you have more than enough since 2020, so any prior is just superfluous. | |||
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"Good profile, brief and says what you want. I would take off the reference to your old profiles as theyre irrelevant now Nice photo's" Also a good profile. Well written and provides appropriate information. Nice pictures as well. | |||
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"Need more face pics to many cock pics ideally would like More face pics "We don’t look at many single guys profiles on here but this guys is one of the better ones. He comes across as actually a nice guy, not a creep, genuine and has the perfect number of dick pics. | |||
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"Maybe a different array of photos" Speaking about pics...... First pic you're not even in (well possibly your DNA is, but that's not confirmed), and you have one of you "flipping the bird" - why? Also 5 pics that are a decade old. A small clean up and it will be grand. | |||
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"Can’t fault your profile at all. Great selection of photos and videos and you’ve made it clear and precise what you’re looking for. " Thank you handsome xx | |||
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"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻" I love your profile picture most of all | |||
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"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻 I love your profile picture most of all "Profile is short and sweet. Gets to the point of what you like and what you’re looking for. I like the voyeur side of things and can identify with the enjoyment of being watched. Maybe if I’m lucky I’ll receive one of your videos in the future  | |||
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"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻 I love your profile picture most of all
Profile is short and sweet. Gets to the point of what you like and what you’re looking for.
I like the voyeur side of things and can identify with the enjoyment of being watched.
Maybe if I’m lucky I’ll receive one of your videos in the future "Coming from a straight guy here. Your description is fine, to the point. I know it's a matter of opinion, but those patterned boxers are not cool - with the exception of the green ones hiding your meat. Body shot is decent and shows what people are getting themselves into. My only other critique... your headline "Hello. Been away for a bit, back to chat" is fine if you're literally just back on Fab a week or two, but if its been like that for months I'd update it. Hope that helps! | |||
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"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻 I love your profile picture most of all
Profile is short and sweet. Gets to the point of what you like and what you’re looking for.
I like the voyeur side of things and can identify with the enjoyment of being watched.
Maybe if I’m lucky I’ll receive one of your videos in the future
Coming from a straight guy here. Your description is fine, to the point.
I know it's a matter of opinion, but those patterned boxers are not cool - with the exception of the green ones hiding your meat. Body shot is decent and shows what people are getting themselves into.
My only other critique... your headline "Hello. Been away for a bit, back to chat" is fine if you're literally just back on Fab a week or two, but if its been like that for months I'd update it. Hope that helps! "Noted and fixed  | |||
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"Sounds like GingerHefe has had some great feedback and fixed their profile accordingly - I'd love a profile roast and critique please as although I have met a few people, I am struggling to get a reply from many single ladies or couples. Help me improve my profile "Not much to change on your profile I wouldn't say. Maybe mix up the photos a bit to have some more body pictures rather than very similar photos of your cock but that would be our only comments. | |||
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"Just to say no one’s critiqued mine yet, happy to take a roasting on it x" For me male reading this here you are honest about being in a marriage but going into details about it being sexless too open for me reading it. And the part at the end about timewasters I always feel is useless information is a time waster really not going to message cause a bit off text on a profile. | |||
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"Thank you, yeah, that’s a really valid point. I’ve just added in a new photo and I’ll try to add a handful more in over the next week or so. A few new face photos and some body shots too. Appreciate your feedback " No problem x | |||
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"Just to say no one’s critiqued mine yet, happy to take a roasting on it x For me male reading this here you are honest about being in a marriage but going into details about it being sexless too open for me reading it. And the part at the end about timewasters I always feel is useless information is a time waster really not going to message cause a bit off text on a profile. " Thanks very much | |||
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"Good range of pics. Could do with a few 'action' pics" Interesting use of yer hose and no need of a hermaphrodite coupling 10/10 | |||
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"Good range of pics. Could do with a few 'action' pics Interesting use of yer hose and no need of a hermaphrodite coupling 10/10 "It’s pretty black and white. I’m sure I have seen your profile picture somewhere else before though. I fear someone may have used your photo and not told you. | |||
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"Decent profile really. Nice pics, maybe a lot of them are a bit samey, but still good. Profile text is informative. Decent xx " First two paragraphs of the biog can be removed - the update is over a year ago! Apart from that the profile should work for the target audience | |||
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"Decent profile really. Nice pics, maybe a lot of them are a bit samey, but still good. Profile text is informative. Decent xx First two paragraphs of the biog can be removed - the update is over a year ago! Apart from that the profile should work for the target audience "Decent profile, informative and mix of pics. Better than a lot of mens efforts on here. | |||
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"Prob need to add a few more pics to the detailed write up. But if you’re happy with your profile,Thats the main thing. " Great profile, hot couple. Know what they want, plenty of detail | |||
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"Clear and simple profile. No nonsense or waffle. Clear boundaries and expectations, great pics and hot video. 10/10. " Just enough enticing pictures to show what you’re in for
Bio states clearly what you’re looking for and what you’re willing to be a part of, could do with some more discreet pics in my biased opinion
All in all great profile and I’m sure there’s a lot to show for it behind the scenes | |||
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"Decent profile with good body shots, my only criticism , and I’m stretching here, would be that I like to see something that tells me about the persons. Not just their sexual desires etc but I am nit picking there " Got a bit of info, better than some profiles deff. But ditch most if not all of cock pics. | |||
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"Can someone critique mine please I re wrote it completely " Very clear information provided | |||
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