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By *nonandy OP   Man
8 weeks ago

Near Glasgow

Seen many a post over the years from newbies asking for advice on why their profile doesn't get attention or what they should put to get more replies and was thinking this might be a fun thread. Give one Critique off the profile above

ie the profile above aka me really needs to update their blurb, first line says 32 single straight etc turned 34 not so long ago, didn't think it had been that long since I updated

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By (user no longer on site)
8 weeks ago

The only thing I'd change on yours is the mention of covid. That was 5 years ago now.

The rest is fine. Maybe another public pic or 2. That's it.

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By *iss_Juicy79Woman
8 weeks ago

Edinburgh


"The only thing I'd change on yours is the mention of covid. That was 5 years ago now.

The rest is fine. Maybe another public pic or 2. That's it. "

Well written you come across as a nice person we have spoke a while ago about something can't even remember what😂 and a pice photo

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By *awty_MissDynomiteNo1Woman
8 weeks ago

No idea, I'm lost. Damn Sat nav!


"Seen many a post over the years from newbies asking for advice on why their profile doesn't get attention or what they should put to get more replies and was thinking this might be a fun thread. Give one Critique off the profile above

ie the profile above aka me really needs to update their blurb, first line says 32 single straight etc turned 34 not so long ago, didn't think it had been that long since I updated "

As the lady above mentioned covid was almost 6 yrs ago now .

Also as you mentioned your 34 not 32 .

I'd also put on more recent photos than the ones you have.

The toy collection part of the profile might also not appeal because not all women would be willing to play using toys that have been used on many others with no idea if the toys are being cleaned properly.

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By *ustincredible69Man
8 weeks ago

drumoak

Hard to critique, she has clear points on who she is, what shes looking for etc plenty vids & pics erm its a pretty good profile

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By *iona38ddTV/TS
8 weeks ago

north east fife


"Hard to critique, she has clear points on who she is, what shes looking for etc plenty vids & pics erm its a pretty good profile"

You have been on 5 weeks and filled in no details

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By *nonandy OP   Man
8 weeks ago

Near Glasgow

All good points

I'd say all three profiles above are quite good, I like the spacing of the sentences so much better/easier to read than one big block of text

Pheobe mentioning your tattoos is good provides for a conversation starter ie guys can ask what they are x

Juicy one point it says

Not looking for single guys. Men Women aged 27 to 46 only. Will meet smokers.

It looks like you've ticked both boxes men and no single guys, easily done x

MissDynamite excellent photos

I believe we met many moons ago at a mutual friends party

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By *aughtySubMan
8 weeks ago

Liverpool

More pictures would be nice. Not a bad profile though xx

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By *each_BananaCouple
8 weeks ago

China


"More pictures would be nice. Not a bad profile though xx "

Not my cup of tea...

However you have lots of photos and explain exactly what you want

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By *eetootsWoman
8 weeks ago

Glasgow


"More pictures would be nice. Not a bad profile though xx

Not my cup of tea...

However you have lots of photos and explain exactly what you want "

Great profile, you say exactlywhat your looking for and also have a good variety of pics and vids 😀

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By *reywolf_18Man
8 weeks ago

ayr

Nice pics and clear on who you are and what you want

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By *aughtySubMan
8 weeks ago

Liverpool

More pictures would help I think xx

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By *avie65Man
8 weeks ago

In the west.

Maybe some more clothed photos and less of your boabie and bum

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By (user no longer on site)
8 weeks ago

Decent selection of pictures and a humorous bio, maybe a bit more of what you're after but that's just nit-pickibg a little.

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By *ewVegasWatcherMan
8 weeks ago

Johnstone

Good profile, clear and plenty of pics and vids! No complaints- happy fabbing

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By *rgoodnbadMan
8 weeks ago

greenock

Could add some more pics. Ones in a nice shirt/jacket combo, as the ladies keep asking for. Though, I suppose I should follow my own advice.

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By *itkat_and_cutCouple
8 weeks ago

Edinburgh


"Could add some more pics. Ones in a nice shirt/jacket combo, as the ladies keep asking for. Though, I suppose I should follow my own advice. "

Good profile with a good amount of info in the blurb although the two sentences on couples contradict each other slightly. Would remove part about needing to arrange a carer and just do that quietly in the background as may make some not engage incase they put you out.

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By *ohnhughie22Man
8 weeks ago

Glasgow

An outstanding profile

Very descriptive in what they offer what they seek and plenty about themselves

Spent a lot of effort on it, clearly serious players.

Discreet enough but a well written profile likeba good novel leaving you wanting more….

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By *ohnhughie22Man
8 weeks ago

Glasgow

Im 6 months too young for you. May chat in 6 months if your profile lets me

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By *rs desire deviantsWoman
8 weeks ago

North Lanarkshire


"Im 6 months too young for you. May chat in 6 months if your profile lets me "

Really good profile, I would change the profile pic for a body shot, and maybe add some new pics.

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By *ensualPleasurerMan
8 weeks ago

glasgow


"Im 6 months too young for you. May chat in 6 months if your profile lets me

Really good profile, I would change the profile pic for a body shot, and maybe add some new pics. "

Love the profile. Clear and straight to the point with lots of pics and vids to see.

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By *ohnhughie22Man
8 weeks ago

Glasgow

Thank you very much.

I will take your advice and adjust accordingly.

J

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By *ireman28Man
7 weeks ago

Glasgow

Certainly needs more photos.

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By *av007Man
7 weeks ago

Glasgow area

Naughty

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By *rgoodnbadMan
7 weeks ago

greenock

More pics, the ladies will want to know more.

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By *igYin n CowGirlCouple
7 weeks ago

New Cumnock

I agree with what some of the others have said, delete about Covid, add some new pics in public gallery, and the toys bit, yeah its a personal thing, a lot of ppl prefer their own toys etc... keep the bit about CJs coz lots of us go there Do you cam chat in the rooms? Its a good way to meet ppl and get veri's. Maybe put a little of what you like/dont like? xx

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By *atrixManMan
7 weeks ago

East Side of Glasgow

Hot profile 🔥

Good info in bio and a selection of photos and videos to whet the appetite.

The beach video (PDI ?) is stunning xx

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By *he2ofus6676Couple
7 weeks ago

Kilmarnock


"Hot profile 🔥

Good info in bio and a selection of photos and videos to whet the appetite.

The beach video (PDI ?) is stunning xx"

Nicely written profile, explains everything you are looking for. Others say need more public photos but you explain discretion so only one photo explaining can supply more for possible meet scenario.

Nicely spread out paragraphs make reading easy too and.

Would we ask for a potential social, possibly as the profile ticked all the boxes we would look for.

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By (user no longer on site)
7 weeks ago

All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected.

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By *he2ofus6676Couple
7 weeks ago

Kilmarnock


"All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected. "

Thanks, trip to Spain 2 weeks time should resolve that issue.

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By *otwifeHusband888Couple
7 weeks ago

Within touching distance


"All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected. "

Good profile from our point of view. Hard to be critical to be fair. Well done xx

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By *itkat_and_cutCouple
7 weeks ago

Edinburgh


"All we could really critique is the lack or pictures but as you're not long back on fab that's to be expected.

Good profile from our point of view. Hard to be critical to be fair. Well done xx "

Great profile - can't really fault it. Definitely the kind of profile that would interest us xx

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By (user no longer on site)
7 weeks ago

You are two stunners

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By *hogun300Man
7 weeks ago

Dundee


"You are two stunners "

Maybe a couple different type of pic. Not too much to change.

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By *otwifeHusband888Couple
7 weeks ago

Within touching distance

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By *avie65Man
7 weeks ago

In the west.


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I could only suggest more photos of Mrs J’s legs. You can never have enough photos of great legs. Oooofty.

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By *allucinatingGMan
7 weeks ago

Wild West Lothian

Feel free to critique mine as a newbie...

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By *illie10Man
7 weeks ago

Kilmarnock

Some more photos would good.

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By *.M79Man
7 weeks ago

Glasgow

Any feedback or constructive criticism is welcome

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By *lderbiguyMan
7 weeks ago

Peterhead

Well with a list of do’s and don’t that is pretty specific I hope you find the right one.

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By *ighlandguy007Man
7 weeks ago

inverness

Go for it I’d love to have some advice

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By *allucinatingGMan
7 weeks ago

Wild West Lothian


"Some more photos would good."
noted, thanks.

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By *lderChick65Woman
7 weeks ago

my town


"Some more photos would good. noted, thanks."

I dont think you have to change much

Your profile is quite informative

Only thing would be is the part looking for someone to educate you

You have to educate yourself along the way

But pretty good profile

Hope your fab journey is good

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By *cots boostCouple
7 weeks ago

Glasgow

Good profile in terms of what your looking for etc.

Would adjust the grammar in your main body of text but that's about it.

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By *he-Travelling GentlemanMan
7 weeks ago

Traveling


"Good profile in terms of what your looking for etc.

Would adjust the grammar in your main body of text but that's about it.

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Well put together profile and definitely someone to message.

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By *allucinatingGMan
7 weeks ago

Wild West Lothian

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By *allucinatingGMan
7 weeks ago

Wild West Lothian


"Some more photos would good. noted, thanks.

I dont think you have to change much

Your profile is quite informative

Only thing would be is the part looking for someone to educate you

You have to educate yourself along the way

But pretty good profile

Hope your fab journey is good "

Fair point regarding education! Love your profile! Thank you

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By *D67Man
7 weeks ago

glasgow

Honest and straight to the point

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By *hogun300Man
7 weeks ago

Dundee


"Honest and straight to the point "

Would add a bit more about yourself and add some new pics that differ from the style of those on show.

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By *ingle-minglerMan
7 weeks ago

Balloch

Hard to critique, very clear profile, gives a sense of the person. Pics are tasteful too.

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By *nonandy OP   Man
6 weeks ago

Near Glasgow

Had a we update and made a few changes with the comments in mind

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By *r.EdibleMan
6 weeks ago

Fraserburgh

Perfectly acceptable profile

I wouldn't be showing any pre 2020 verifications. I only say that as you have more than enough since 2020, so any prior is just superfluous.

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By *ollyPocket75Woman
6 weeks ago

Aberdeen

Good profile, brief and says what you want.

I would take off the reference to your old profiles as theyre irrelevant now

Nice photo's

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By *illie10Man
6 weeks ago

Kilmarnock


"Good profile, brief and says what you want.

I would take off the reference to your old profiles as theyre irrelevant now

Nice photo's"

Also a good profile. Well written and provides appropriate information. Nice pictures as well.

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By *yantico86Man
6 weeks ago

drumchapel

Need more face pics to many cock pics ideally would like

More face pics

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By *raigAndBiJess_ENMCouple
6 weeks ago

Glasgow ish


"Need more face pics to many cock pics ideally would like

More face pics "

We don’t look at many single guys profiles on here but this guys is one of the better ones. He comes across as actually a nice guy, not a creep, genuine and has the perfect number of dick pics.

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By *yantico86Man
6 weeks ago

drumchapel

Thanks for the feedback really appreciated

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By *ireman28Man
5 weeks ago

Glasgow

Maybe a different array of photos

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By *r.EdibleMan
5 weeks ago

Fraserburgh


"Maybe a different array of photos"

Speaking about pics......

First pic you're not even in (well possibly your DNA is, but that's not confirmed), and you have one of you "flipping the bird" - why? Also 5 pics that are a decade old.

A small clean up and it will be grand.

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By *eriScotMan
5 weeks ago

Scottish Borders

Can't say i'd change anything Mr. Edible

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By *awk3y3Man
5 weeks ago

West Lothian

Nice aubergines - they home grown ?

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By *aywardCoupleCouple
5 weeks ago

Your Hotlist

Profile seems light-hearted and humorous. I would maybe change the wording of "the occasional boundary pushed". Just to make it clear that you're looking to broaden your own horizons and not trying to push someone else's pre-set boundaries.

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By *oupleofdirtyscotsCouple
5 weeks ago

Scotland

Can’t critique your profile at all. The only thing I would say, your most recent pic I'd make your profile pic. Beautiful boobs xx

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By *corpioboyMan
5 weeks ago

Glasgow

Can’t fault your profile at all. Great selection of photos and videos and you’ve made it clear and precise what you’re looking for.

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By *oupleofdirtyscotsCouple
5 weeks ago

Scotland


"Can’t fault your profile at all. Great selection of photos and videos and you’ve made it clear and precise what you’re looking for. "

Thank you handsome xx

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By *omble 69Man
5 weeks ago

Symington

Can't critique great profile

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By *oupleofdirtyscotsCouple
5 weeks ago

Scotland

Thank you hun xx

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By (user no longer on site)
5 weeks ago

Very nice profile.

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By *anarkshirecouple84Couple
5 weeks ago

Motherwell

Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻

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By *each_BananaCouple
5 weeks ago

China


"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻"

I love your profile picture most of all

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By *ingerHefeMan
5 weeks ago

town


"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻

I love your profile picture most of all "

Profile is short and sweet. Gets to the point of what you like and what you’re looking for.

I like the voyeur side of things and can identify with the enjoyment of being watched.

Maybe if I’m lucky I’ll receive one of your videos in the future

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By *oco_BanjoMan
5 weeks ago

Brodick


"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻

I love your profile picture most of all

Profile is short and sweet. Gets to the point of what you like and what you’re looking for.

I like the voyeur side of things and can identify with the enjoyment of being watched.

Maybe if I’m lucky I’ll receive one of your videos in the future "

Coming from a straight guy here. Your description is fine, to the point.

I know it's a matter of opinion, but those patterned boxers are not cool - with the exception of the green ones hiding your meat. Body shot is decent and shows what people are getting themselves into.

My only other critique... your headline "Hello. Been away for a bit, back to chat" is fine if you're literally just back on Fab a week or two, but if its been like that for months I'd update it. Hope that helps!

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By *ingerHefeMan
5 weeks ago

town


"Clearly state what you're looking for and what you're likes and dislikes so no one will have any doubts before contacting you. good profile 👍🏻

I love your profile picture most of all

Profile is short and sweet. Gets to the point of what you like and what you’re looking for.

I like the voyeur side of things and can identify with the enjoyment of being watched.

Maybe if I’m lucky I’ll receive one of your videos in the future

Coming from a straight guy here. Your description is fine, to the point.

I know it's a matter of opinion, but those patterned boxers are not cool - with the exception of the green ones hiding your meat. Body shot is decent and shows what people are getting themselves into.

My only other critique... your headline "Hello. Been away for a bit, back to chat" is fine if you're literally just back on Fab a week or two, but if its been like that for months I'd update it. Hope that helps! "

Noted and fixed

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By *ddie1982Man
4 weeks ago

Peterborough

Sounds like GingerHefe has had some great feedback and fixed their profile accordingly - I'd love a profile roast and critique please as although I have met a few people, I am struggling to get a reply from many single ladies or couples. Help me improve my profile

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By *itkat_and_cutCouple
4 weeks ago

Edinburgh


"Sounds like GingerHefe has had some great feedback and fixed their profile accordingly - I'd love a profile roast and critique please as although I have met a few people, I am struggling to get a reply from many single ladies or couples. Help me improve my profile "

Not much to change on your profile I wouldn't say. Maybe mix up the photos a bit to have some more body pictures rather than very similar photos of your cock but that would be our only comments.

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By *oco_BanjoMan
4 weeks ago

Brodick

Just to say no one’s critiqued mine yet, happy to take a roasting on it x

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By *okesandsmilesCouple
4 weeks ago

durnham


"Just to say no one’s critiqued mine yet, happy to take a roasting on it x"

For me male reading this here you are honest about being in a marriage but going into details about it being sexless too open for me reading it.

And the part at the end about timewasters I always feel is useless information is a time waster really not going to message cause a bit off text on a profile.

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By *ddie1982Man
4 weeks ago

Peterborough

Thank you, yeah, that’s a really valid point. I’ve just added in a new photo and I’ll try to add a handful more in over the next week or so.

A few new face photos and some body shots too.

Appreciate your feedback

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By *itkat_and_cutCouple
4 weeks ago

Edinburgh


"Thank you, yeah, that’s a really valid point. I’ve just added in a new photo and I’ll try to add a handful more in over the next week or so.

A few new face photos and some body shots too.

Appreciate your feedback "

No problem x

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By *oco_BanjoMan
4 weeks ago

Brodick


"Just to say no one’s critiqued mine yet, happy to take a roasting on it x

For me male reading this here you are honest about being in a marriage but going into details about it being sexless too open for me reading it.

And the part at the end about timewasters I always feel is useless information is a time waster really not going to message cause a bit off text on a profile.

"

Thanks very much

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By *ireman28Man
3 weeks ago

Glasgow

Good range of pics. Could do with a few 'action' pics

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By *uctifanoWoman
3 weeks ago

Glasgow


"Good range of pics. Could do with a few 'action' pics"

Interesting use of yer hose and no need of a hermaphrodite coupling 10/10

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By *avie65Man
3 weeks ago

In the west.


"Good range of pics. Could do with a few 'action' pics

Interesting use of yer hose and no need of a hermaphrodite coupling 10/10 "

It’s pretty black and white.

I’m sure I have seen your profile picture somewhere else before though. I fear someone may have used your photo and not told you.

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By *aughtySubMan
3 weeks ago

Liverpool

Decent profile really. Nice pics, maybe a lot of them are a bit samey, but still good. Profile text is informative. Decent xx

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By *r.EdibleMan
3 weeks ago

Fraserburgh


"Decent profile really. Nice pics, maybe a lot of them are a bit samey, but still good. Profile text is informative. Decent xx "

First two paragraphs of the biog can be removed - the update is over a year ago! Apart from that the profile should work for the target audience

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By *hogun300Man
3 weeks ago

Dundee


"Decent profile really. Nice pics, maybe a lot of them are a bit samey, but still good. Profile text is informative. Decent xx

First two paragraphs of the biog can be removed - the update is over a year ago! Apart from that the profile should work for the target audience "

Decent profile, informative and mix of pics. Better than a lot of mens efforts on here.

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By *agnar2323Man
3 weeks ago

Valhalla

I can see a lot of noses put out of joint

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By *illabongboy1971Man
3 weeks ago

Penicuik

Great profile. Can't fault it.

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By *oDownEasyMan
3 weeks ago

Ayrshire

Another good and thorough one. Most people won't read it

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By *rA n mrskCouple
3 weeks ago

glasgow

Prob need to add a few more pics to the detailed write up. But if you’re happy with your profile,Thats the main thing.

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By *ollyPocket75Woman
3 weeks ago

Aberdeen


"Prob need to add a few more pics to the detailed write up. But if you’re happy with your profile,Thats the main thing. "

Great profile, hot couple.

Know what they want, plenty of detail

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By *eaAndBiscuits8788Couple
3 weeks ago

moray

Great profile

Very detailed and up to date

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By *illabongboy1971Man
3 weeks ago

Penicuik

Brilliant profile. Clear and detailed

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By *rsNeighbourWoman
3 weeks ago

Perth, Fife, Dundee

Clear and precise profile

Video + Pictures

Boundaries and Guidelines

Verifications. 10/10 for me!

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By *cotsbicoupleCouple
3 weeks ago

Helensburgh

Clear and simple profile.

No nonsense or waffle. Clear boundaries and expectations, great pics and hot video.

10/10.

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By *ackagain1XXXMan
3 weeks ago

port glasgow


"Clear and simple profile.

No nonsense or waffle. Clear boundaries and expectations, great pics and hot video.

10/10. "

Just enough enticing pictures to show what you’re in for

Bio states clearly what you’re looking for and what you’re willing to be a part of, could do with some more discreet pics in my biased opinion

All in all great profile and I’m sure there’s a lot to show for it behind the scenes

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By *cots boostCouple
3 weeks ago

Glasgow

Your profile is good but a bit too much like if ChatGpt was to write you an intro!

LOL

But yeah looks good.

Happy Fabbing !

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By *igMal300Man
3 weeks ago

Elgin

I don't think you really need reviewed. The number of positive verifications show you are legit and obviously experts in your field.

Bit confused by the multiple playmates and pictures of different women. Are you a couple with playmates or a single man with multiple women?

Your preference for dad bods is music to my cock.

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By *ingle-minglerMan
3 weeks ago

Balloch

Decent profile with good body shots, my only criticism , and I’m stretching here, would be that I like to see something that tells me about the persons. Not just their sexual desires etc but I am nit picking there

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By *hogun300Man
3 weeks ago

Dundee


"Decent profile with good body shots, my only criticism , and I’m stretching here, would be that I like to see something that tells me about the persons. Not just their sexual desires etc but I am nit picking there "

Got a bit of info, better than some profiles deff. But ditch most if not all of cock pics.

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By *ife_Guy90Man
3 weeks ago

Fife

I think your profile has a solid, friendly tone and communicates honesty and experience, which are all positives.

You have a good array of photos showing off your interests and implements you like to use.

Can't see anything to change other than nitpicking grammar which isn't why any of us are here 😂

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By *iimonMan
3 weeks ago

Central belt Scotland

Good profile, tell you all you need to know with out being a long book like some. Needs more public pics.

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By *iss_Juicy79Woman
3 weeks ago

Edinburgh

Can someone critique mine please I re wrote it completely

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By *iona38ddTV/TS
3 weeks ago

north east fife


"Can someone critique mine please I re wrote it completely "

Very clear information provided

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By *tephanie 9090TV/TS
3 weeks ago

BISHOP

Straight forward information, no ambiguity. Classic profile

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By *uboCouple
3 weeks ago

East kilbride

You seem to have all bases covered.

Who and what you are looking for. Nothing more needed.

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By *ackagain1XXXMan
3 weeks ago

port glasgow

Got it all, honest clear pictures, some discreet pics and then the teasing ones 🤤

Very clear in what you’re after and what you’re willing to turn the other way for.

Definitely one of the better ones on fab

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By *I TwoCouple
3 weeks ago

near enough

Good photos and profile, great verifications.

Not for us, too young but I'm sure you'll do well in fab

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By *ove_stockings27Couple
3 weeks ago

KdY

Plenty verifications, nice pics, obviously very popular.

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By *cottish curious coupleCouple
3 weeks ago

Comrie

well I have just read the profile above and only positive feedback from me. Concise and straight to the point. Love the pics btw. Keep em cummin

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By *ainyDaySunshineMan
3 weeks ago

Ayrshire

Lovely pictures. Short to the point 👉

All good signs from me

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By *ab365XMan
3 weeks ago

Paisley

Do your worst, check my profile out, ( if you dare!)

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By *hogun300Man
3 weeks ago

Dundee


"Lovely pictures. Short to the point 👉

All good signs from me "

Could improve if being honest. Maybe some pics And drop or change some aspects of the bio. More about what you like or looking for.

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By *ab365XMan
3 weeks ago

Paisley


"Lovely pictures. Short to the point 👉

All good signs from me

Could improve if being honest. Maybe some pics And drop or change some aspects of the bio. More about what you like or looking for. "

Thanks, I had to spring clean the majority of my pics, I had far too much cock out on display, after all, less is more!

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By *sWyldWoman
3 weeks ago

Edinburgh

[Removed by poster at 02/07/25 11:37:11]

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By *sWyldWoman
3 weeks ago

Edinburgh

It says what you're looking for but not what others might expect from you

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By *hogun300Man
3 weeks ago

Dundee


"Lovely pictures. Short to the point 👉

All good signs from me

Could improve if being honest. Maybe some pics And drop or change some aspects of the bio. More about what you like or looking for.

Thanks, I had to spring clean the majority of my pics, I had far too much cock out on display, after all, less is more! "

Id replied to the guy above you. Hadn't looked at yours.

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By *hogun300Man
3 weeks ago

Dundee


"It says what you're looking for but not what others might expect from you "

Very good. Lots of good pics and extensive informative bio.

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By *r-Mrs BackagainCouple
3 weeks ago

Perthshire

Decent bio , good variety of pictures 👍

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By *omble 69Man
3 weeks ago

Symington

Super fit couple

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By *heekyguy2Man
3 weeks ago

Local


"Super fit couple "

Maybe a bit short on the text, and the first statement is gramatically wrong. That can turn a lot of people off.

Otherwise, coming from a straight guy, looks ok. I'm sure the ladies will have more to say.

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By *appyman3943Man
3 weeks ago

Aberdeen


"Super fit couple

Maybe a bit short on the text, and the first statement is gramatically wrong. That can turn a lot of people off.

Otherwise, coming from a straight guy, looks ok. I'm sure the ladies will have more to say."

Good well written profile, clear what you are looking for and comes across as genuine. Maybe a couple more pics would help.

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By *av007Man
3 weeks ago

Glasgow area

Good,clear,to the point.

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By *ingle-minglerMan
3 weeks ago

Balloch

Good pics, would love to see a wee bit more text though. Maybe more about you and what you’re looking for?

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By *eadyforfun1Man
3 weeks ago

Glasgow

Good clear profile maybe a few more pics and a more recent veri

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By (user no longer on site)
3 weeks ago

Not what I’m looking for, but a nice straight forwards profile that says who you are and what you’re about. Decent amount of verifications (envy). Certainly a profile that fits what people are looking for.

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By *igh_landerMan
3 weeks ago

inverness-shire

Your is very descriptive of yourself which is good, my only critique would be the 1st picture posted shouldn’t be a dick pic but that’s just my personal opinion sorry lol

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By *cots boostCouple
3 weeks ago

Glasgow

Better pictures for a start.....the whole pale white chest pictures are not a great look. And your intro is just rather generic and we lost interest in it.

Remember your profile page is your selling page! You got to stand out from the crowd.

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By *oodguy53Man
3 weeks ago

Glasgow

How is my profile x

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By *opeydeviantMan
3 weeks ago

Livingston


"How is my profile x"
written very well

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By *iimonMan
3 weeks ago

Central belt Scotland

I would love to hear what some girls think of my profile. Any ideas for changes welcome!

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By *ireman28Man
2 weeks ago

Glasgow

An artisic array of pictures

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By *erKing_HisQueen22Couple
2 weeks ago

Perth

Certainly an impressive piece and loads, but the profile pic as a dick pic thing isn't for me x

Written well and gets to the point.

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By *eisenberg30Man
2 weeks ago

dundee

Fab profile

Great pics

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By *eisenberg30Man
2 weeks ago

dundee

Looks like u guys are lots of fun and confident..

Lovely

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By *uddlesorgasmsMan
2 weeks ago

Aberdeen

Good taste in music

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By *cotsbicoupleCouple
2 weeks ago

Helensburgh

A bit wordy and no pics, but other than that it's clear and covers all the basics and doesn't waffle...and doesn't have one of those stupid "Sydney University" things..so 6/10...(would be 8 but no pics!)

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By *eadyforfun1Man
2 weeks ago

Glasgow


"A bit wordy and no pics, but other than that it's clear and covers all the basics and doesn't waffle...and doesn't have one of those stupid "Sydney University" things..so 6/10...(would be 8 but no pics!)"

Loved your profile just the right amount of content (would love to meet you guys) only thing I could possibly say would maybe be a couple more pics xx

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By *r-Mrs BackagainCouple
2 weeks ago

Perthshire

Good pics , decent Bio .

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By *opeydeviantMan
2 weeks ago

Livingston

I need honest opinion,I think mines need freshening up

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By *itkat_and_cutCouple
2 weeks ago

Edinburgh


"I need honest opinion,I think mines need freshening up "

Would say it's a bit rude to not comment on the couple profile above you in the thread and instead ask for advice on your own profile. Whilst that's clearly is the theme of the thread - it's got to be quid pro quo.

Your profile statement lacks punctuation and is one very very long sentence. In that regard, it's a profile we would quickly overlook. Hope that was helpful.

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By *r-Mrs BackagainCouple
2 weeks ago

Perthshire

Clear, concise and articulate. Everything you need to know is in the bio . As for the pictures ?well they speak for themselves .

A really good mix of pictures and have we to say, hotter than hell ! 🔥

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By *itkat_and_cutCouple
2 weeks ago

Edinburgh


"Clear, concise and articulate. Everything you need to know is in the bio . As for the pictures ?well they speak for themselves .

A really good mix of pictures and have we to say, hotter than hell ! 🔥"

Stunning profile. What fab is all about! Great selection of very hot pics and a descriptive bio that sets out what they want. 10/10

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By *bostCouple
2 weeks ago

glasgow


"Clear, concise and articulate. Everything you need to know is in the bio . As for the pictures ?well they speak for themselves .

A really good mix of pictures and have we to say, hotter than hell ! 🔥

Stunning profile. What fab is all about! Great selection of very hot pics and a descriptive bio that sets out what they want. 10/10"

Wow. What a profile. Sets out exactly what they do and don’t want. Plenty of information to a paint a picture of both of them.

Photos very hot too.

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By *he_Wite_NiteMan
2 weeks ago

Usually Dundee and around

Sbost, well the gallery has a range of photos, with the inclusion of some B&W and arty pics ..

Definitely a tease, leaving you wanting more!

They are clear on what they are looking for.

The only comment would be that there are no pics of him or them together, some people would prefer to see 1 pic of Mr or the pair.

Otherwise, I great profile!

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By *opeydeviantMan
2 weeks ago

Livingston


"I need honest opinion,I think mines need freshening up

Would say it's a bit rude to not comment on the couple profile above you in the thread and instead ask for advice on your own profile. Whilst that's clearly is the theme of the thread - it's got to be quid pro quo.

Your profile statement lacks punctuation and is one very very long sentence. In that regard, it's a profile we would quickly overlook. Hope that was helpful. "

To yourself I do apologise for missing the obvious,not a habit I generally have,I had thought i was up to date with posts,the bad grammar I will blame on the lack of specs at the time,another habit which isn't normal,apologies to yourselves and to the profile above profound apologies,I am scared to look now but im very sure it will be as amazing as your main picture...peace out folks

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By *ireman28Man
1 week ago

Glasgow

Seems like a good fella but needs a range of different photos

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By *ore_Please81Woman
1 week ago

Edinburgh

Some torso pictures would be nice and lose the middle finger.

Bio is great but that many verification would put me off x

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By *arried curious guyMan
1 week ago

Motherwell

It's certainly very well thought out and lots of details and pictures. Obviously far more elaborate than most profiles

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By *berdonMan
1 week ago

Aberdeen


"It's certainly very well thought out and lots of details and pictures. Obviously far more elaborate than most profiles"

Straight to the point about your likes and status. Could do with a few photos though

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By *hehighlandmodMan
1 week ago

peterculter


"It's certainly very well thought out and lots of details and pictures. Obviously far more elaborate than most profiles

Straight to the point about your likes and status. Could do with a few photos though"

Good profile likes and wants outlined and straight to the point. Top work

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By *hogun300Man
1 week ago

Dundee


"It's certainly very well thought out and lots of details and pictures. Obviously far more elaborate than most profiles

Straight to the point about your likes and status. Could do with a few photos though

Good profile likes and wants outlined and straight to the point. Top work "

Not the worst but not the best. Get more creative with pics and add more bio. Take out the know how it works bit. Points for not being a blank profile though.

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By *umbernauld guy500Man
1 week ago

Cumbernauld

I actually think your profile is really good, but then I'm not a female looking at it

I'm not a fan of naked guys in baths but thats just a personal choice. We don't look as good as females in the bath lol.

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By *annyc1978Man
1 week ago

Glasgow

Clear, conscise and articulate. All plus points in my book. Bonus points for the b&w pictures which I'm a sucker for

Really excellent profile in my humble opinion

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By *eroLondonMan
1 week ago

Mayfair

I would remove the opening diatribe:

""Never quite know what to write on these things!

Does anyone even bother to read them anyway? Recent evidence may suggest otherwise lol!""

ㅤㅤ

Other than that you're good to go. 🌿

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By *r-Mrs BackagainCouple
7 days ago

Perthshire

As profiles go we quite like this one, it's different. It's Informative, outlines exactly what you want with a good range of pictures that aren't just all of a cock. Nice

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By *ingerHefeMan
7 days ago

town

Well written profile, says everything you need to know. It’s clear what you’re looking for and what you’re interested in, no messing about.

Great photos, verity is amazing. A+

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By *ess JinksWoman
7 days ago

West coast

Ginger, this is a better-than-most profile of a single man. You stay clear of clichés, you come across as approachable. And if someone has a kink for colourful briefs, you're their guy. No verifications despite saying that some people of here will know you if a little off-putting. And I'd add some different photos. It's very crotch-specific just now

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By *oco_BanjoMan
7 days ago

Brodick


"Ginger, this is a better-than-most profile of a single man. You stay clear of clichés, you come across as approachable. And if someone has a kink for colourful briefs, you're their guy. No verifications despite saying that some people of here will know you if a little off-putting. And I'd add some different photos. It's very crotch-specific just now "


"Ginger, this is a better-than-most profile of a single man. You stay clear of clichés, you come across as approachable. And if someone has a kink for colourful briefs, you're their guy. No verifications despite saying that some people of here will know you if a little off-putting. And I'd add some different photos. It's very crotch-specific just now "

Whilst it may not stop the influx of messages from guys in your inbox, if you're not meeting then I would take out the bit about who you're looking for as it's a tad contradictory. Or, you could take out the bit to say you're not meeting, but say that you're not 'actively' meeting at the moment. You could probably expand a little bit more below that about things you like / dislike.

That said, your profile is decent and clear, sometimes less is more! I like the array of lingerie pics, but the naked photo on the bed is a cracker.

Hope that helps x

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By *onys9266Man
7 days ago

Glasgow

You’ve a well written, honest and approachable profile. A good variety of pics too

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By *ess JinksWoman
7 days ago

West coast

Thanks, and your suggestions are duly noted jx

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By *cots boostCouple
7 days ago

Glasgow

straight to the point profile.

no messing about.

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By *ongue twister 2015Man
7 days ago

Cumbernauld

Straight to the point and clear on what's wanted / looking for

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By *eardlesswonderMan
7 days ago

Hamilton

Pretty clear profile. To the point about what you like and what you're looking for.

Good pictures but I'd say putting the m as the profile pic when he's looking to watch could be changed is all, but not a big deal!

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By *imbob85Man
7 days ago

inverness

Clear and to the point what you see is what you get

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By *ingerHefeMan
6 days ago

town


"Ginger, this is a better-than-most profile of a single man. You stay clear of clichés, you come across as approachable. And if someone has a kink for colourful briefs, you're their guy. No verifications despite saying that some people of here will know you if a little off-putting. And I'd add some different photos. It's very crotch-specific just now "

I will make the appropriate changes and extend my sincerest thank you for your honest and constructive feedback

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By *aughtySubMan
6 days ago

Liverpool

More pics would be nice

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By *aughtybadboy84Man
6 days ago

muirkirk

Would like to know what I can do with mine

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By *alkonthegrassWoman
6 days ago

Inverness

Amazing beard and tattoos. Love the bear look

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By *anarkshirecouple84Couple
6 days ago

Motherwell

profile leaves men in no doubt what you are interested and not interested in. absolutely no ambiguity lol. nice pic too x

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By *onys9266Man
6 days ago

Glasgow

Clear and concise profile, decent choice of pics and plenty of detail

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By *exsaCouple
6 days ago

Dunfermline


"Clear and concise profile, decent choice of pics and plenty of detail "

Lovely profile, great veris… would love if there were more pics

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By *nowy and the GruffaloCouple
6 days ago

Aberdeenshire


"Clear and concise profile, decent choice of pics and plenty of detail

Lovely profile, great veris… would love if there were more pics "

Well written, concise and hot photos!

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By *opeydeviantMan
6 days ago

Livingston

Very well written,no bullshit,just clear and pretty much to the point,good humour in there also which I like to see

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By *exsaCouple
6 days ago

Dunfermline


"Clear and concise profile, decent choice of pics and plenty of detail

Lovely profile, great veris… would love if there were more pics

Well written, concise and hot photos!"

Why thank you

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By *ilveryFoxMan
6 days ago

Midlothian

Wow!

Thats my critique

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