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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

How’s my profile looking? Any advice...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Shove some punctuation in!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Yeah, re-write the whole thing

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By *j48Man
over a year ago

Wigan

"Yeah, re-write the whole thing"

This - it's not good OP

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By *ed-monkeyCouple
over a year ago

Hailsham

Presentation is as important as the content

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Smile more.

Your text is like one long rant.

Positivity is a very attractive trait.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I would rewrite it, using complete sentences and share a bit more of what you’re looking for.

It reads confusingly without sentences, and when I mentally insert punctuation, it reads a bit aggressively to me.

It’s great you aren’t a sissy and you want to meet women who are well presented, but the way you’ve worded it sounds a bit weird.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Bit aggressive, learn the difference between "no" and "know" and spell "because" with more than 3 letters.

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By *hoenixAdAstraWoman
over a year ago

Hiding in the shadows

No!

Don't change it.

It's perfect.

Tells me everything I need to know... And that I wouldn't meet you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Smile more.

Your text is like one long rant.

Positivity is a very attractive trait. "

Said so much more succinctly than I could. Ha

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By *a LunaWoman
over a year ago

South Wales

You bang on about the no men thing a bit.

So long as you've blocked them then there is no need to mention it really.

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By *tephTV67TV/TS
over a year ago

Cheshire

"No!

Don't change it.

It's perfect.

Tells me everything I need to know... And that I wouldn't meet you

This

make sure the ‘sissy’ remark stays in, I truly hope your Profile and general attitude gets you all the luck you deserve.

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By *uciyassMan
over a year ago

sheffield

"Bit aggressive, learn the difference between "no" and "know" and spell "because" with more than 3 letters."

Dis

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Is it really that bad... Jesus, better get it on the mend haha I’m not one for selling myself as you can clearly tell, thanks for the feedback tho guys it’s much appreciated and very helpful so thanks.

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By *inkswithpanCouple
over a year ago

lough

That is one god awful profile text.

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By *llaboutthewifeCouple
over a year ago

Cardiff

Crikey

It's a bit ranty

Just block single males maybe

Phew!

Jo x

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

And breath....which is what I just did after reading that without any punctuation to speak of.

As others have said OP the "no men" thing is a bit ranty and actually pretty insulting - just block men from messaging you, problem solved

Other than that there really is not a lot to go on - if you're happy with that and think it will work, then stick to what you have - if not give some thought to how to get some personality and positivity across, tell people a little about you, what you think you can offer and what you are looking for.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

All of the above. And how about a smile in your pics? Just one?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

OP what makes you a ‘proper man’ compared to the others?

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By *exy gentMan
over a year ago

Midlothian

"Smile more.

Your text is like one long rant.

Positivity is a very attractive trait. "

I smile when I look at your pictures

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By *exy gentMan
over a year ago

Midlothian

I need to re-do my profile, any hints and tips would be very much appreciated

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By *inkysexpotMan
over a year ago

leeds

I daren't look

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By *uzukiNo1Woman
over a year ago

Rhyl

More cock....

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By *uzukiNo1Woman
over a year ago

Rhyl

"More cock...."

Jesus h! I meant punctuation....

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By *inkysexpotMan
over a year ago

leeds

"More cock...."

Greedy

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"More cock...."

There’s cock on there don’t worry it’s just in the friends photos haha

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Generic reading that I'd quickly pass by.

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By *uzukiNo1Woman
over a year ago

Rhyl

"More cock....

Greedy

I meant punctuation!

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By *inkysexpotMan
over a year ago

leeds

"More cock....

Greedy

I meant punctuation!

Sure you didn't mean cream egg....

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By *tephTV67TV/TS
over a year ago

Cheshire

"I need to re-do my profile, any hints and tips would be very much appreciated

Shouldn’t hijack someone thread, start a new one in the advice forum, I’m sure you’ll get some help

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

"OP what makes you a ‘proper man’ compared to the others?"

Oh. Eww. Yuck.

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By *ed-monkeyCouple
over a year ago

Hailsham

"OP what makes you a ‘proper man’ compared to the others?

Oh. Eww. Yuck. "

Middle "leg" is a 'proper' isn't it?

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

"OP what makes you a ‘proper man’ compared to the others?

Oh. Eww. Yuck.

Middle "leg" is a 'proper' isn't it?"

To me a man is someone who identifies as a man. Maybe is 15 or over.

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By *ed-monkeyCouple
over a year ago

Hailsham

"OP what makes you a ‘proper man’ compared to the others?

Oh. Eww. Yuck.

Middle "leg" is a 'proper' isn't it?

To me a man is someone who identifies as a man. Maybe is 15 or over. "

Monkey is a man ... monkey man

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By *W ChapMan
over a year ago

Swindon

"No!

Don't change it.

It's perfect.

Tells me everything I need to know... And that I wouldn't meet you

"
Ouch

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"No!

Don't change it.

It's perfect.

Tells me everything I need to know... And that I wouldn't meet you

Ouch

Don’t think I’ll be on her Christmas card list then do you haha

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By *ed-monkeyCouple
over a year ago

Hailsham

"No!

Don't change it.

It's perfect.

Tells me everything I need to know... And that I wouldn't meet you

Ouch

Don’t think I’ll be on her Christmas card list then do you haha "

Her block list maybe

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"No!

Don't change it.

It's perfect.

Tells me everything I need to know... And that I wouldn't meet you

Ouch

Don’t think I’ll be on her Christmas card list then do you haha

Her block list maybe

Ano bleeding hell, she only read my profile anyone would of thought I’d of insulted her haha but any feedback is good feedback so I’ll take it and work with it.

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

"No!

Don't change it.

It's perfect.

Tells me everything I need to know... And that I wouldn't meet you

Ouch

Don’t think I’ll be on her Christmas card list then do you haha

Her block list maybe

Ano bleeding hell, she only read my profile anyone would of thought I’d of insulted her haha but any feedback is good feedback so I’ll take it and work with it.

Some people are of the school that giving profile advice allows people to hide who they really are. Therefore it shouldn't be given, no matter how dire a profile is.

I'm not of that school, although the advice I give has changed with that in mind.

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By *ed-monkeyCouple
over a year ago

Hailsham

"No!

Don't change it.

It's perfect.

Tells me everything I need to know... And that I wouldn't meet you

Ouch

Don’t think I’ll be on her Christmas card list then do you haha

Her block list maybe

Ano bleeding hell, she only read my profile anyone would of thought I’d of insulted her haha but any feedback is good feedback so I’ll take it and work with it.

Incidentally, better text ... but if I may be so bold, you need a hook .. something that will very people wanting to know more about you that isn't said in the text ... you need to stand out from a lot of men on here saying much the same thing as you ... to try and help you more

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"No!

Don't change it.

It's perfect.

Tells me everything I need to know... And that I wouldn't meet you

Ouch

Don’t think I’ll be on her Christmas card list then do you haha

Her block list maybe

Ano bleeding hell, she only read my profile anyone would of thought I’d of insulted her haha but any feedback is good feedback so I’ll take it and work with it.

I done another forum on that topic last night called “newbies”

It’s a funny thing how you need a hook just to become more approachable.

Someone commented on there what if you don’t want to clarify your verifications? You still get treated as a “newbie”

It’s like the chicken /egg conundrum haha.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

So OP, what makes you a proper man?

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"So OP, what makes you a proper man?"

I’m a man’s man, wouldn’t most men like to think of themselves as a proper man?

Maybe people have different perspectives of the meaning proper man, it’s just a figure of speech.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"So OP, what makes you a proper man?

I’m a man’s man, wouldn’t most men like to think of themselves as a proper man?

Maybe people have different perspectives of the meaning proper man, it’s just a figure of speech. "

But in your profile it’s implied you’re a proper man because you’re straight, not a ‘sissy’

Which just seems offensive to me

And I’m not sure - it depends what being a ‘proper man’ entails. Saying you’re a ‘man’s man’ isn’t really saying anything imo

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"So OP, what makes you a proper man?

I’m a man’s man, wouldn’t most men like to think of themselves as a proper man?

Maybe people have different perspectives of the meaning proper man, it’s just a figure of speech.

But in your profile it’s implied you’re a proper man because you’re straight, not a ‘sissy’

Which just seems offensive to me

And I’m not sure - it depends what being a ‘proper man’ entails. Saying you’re a ‘man’s man’ isn’t really saying anything imo

Well maybe you’d have to be a man to understand what a mans man entails then,

some people use the word femboy and terms like that where as I’m very much the opposite and that’s what I mean by mans man,

Doesn’t mean I have anything against anyone or anything like that or I mean to offend anyone, it’s just the word I chose to use,

Maybe your just taking it a bit too far on the fact a man likes to call himself a proper man,

Where’s the harm in that?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I always thought the notion of a "Man's man" was an oxymoron.

The kind of man another man is attracted to is basically a gay one.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I always thought the notion of a "Man's man" was an oxymoron.

The kind of man another man is attracted to is basically a gay one."

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"So OP, what makes you a proper man?

I’m a man’s man, wouldn’t most men like to think of themselves as a proper man?

Maybe people have different perspectives of the meaning proper man, it’s just a figure of speech.

But in your profile it’s implied you’re a proper man because you’re straight, not a ‘sissy’

Which just seems offensive to me

And I’m not sure - it depends what being a ‘proper man’ entails. Saying you’re a ‘man’s man’ isn’t really saying anything imo

Well maybe you’d have to be a man to understand what a mans man entails then,

some people use the word femboy and terms like that where as I’m very much the opposite and that’s what I mean by mans man,

Doesn’t mean I have anything against anyone or anything like that or I mean to offend anyone, it’s just the word I chose to use,

Maybe your just taking it a bit too far on the fact a man likes to call himself a proper man,

Where’s the harm in that? "

I aspire to be a proper man. If only I was.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I always thought the notion of a "Man's man" was an oxymoron.

The kind of man another man is attracted to is basically a gay one."

So what you saying I’m contradicting myself?

A man’s man does not mean a man who is attracted to another man, that’s the way your looking at it and other people will have a different take on it aswell,

Basically what I meant was I’m a manly man, not that I’m gay haha.

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

"So OP, what makes you a proper man?

I’m a man’s man, wouldn’t most men like to think of themselves as a proper man?

Maybe people have different perspectives of the meaning proper man, it’s just a figure of speech. "

It's one that implies other men are lesser or inferior, and it comes across poorly.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I always thought the notion of a "Man's man" was an oxymoron.

The kind of man another man is attracted to is basically a gay one.

So what you saying I’m contradicting myself?

A man’s man does not mean a man who is attracted to another man, that’s the way your looking at it and other people will have a different take on it aswell,

Basically what I meant was I’m a manly man, not that I’m gay haha. "

So can you be both?

Just wanna make sure I understand

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By *ed-monkeyCouple
over a year ago

Hailsham

"I always thought the notion of a "Man's man" was an oxymoron.

The kind of man another man is attracted to is basically a gay one.

So what you saying I’m contradicting myself?

A man’s man does not mean a man who is attracted to another man, that’s the way your looking at it and other people will have a different take on it aswell,

Basically what I meant was I’m a manly man, not that I’m gay haha. "

But you say this by putting yourself down as straight

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I always thought the notion of a "Man's man" was an oxymoron.

The kind of man another man is attracted to is basically a gay one.

So what you saying I’m contradicting myself?

A man’s man does not mean a man who is attracted to another man, that’s the way your looking at it and other people will have a different take on it aswell,

Basically what I meant was I’m a manly man, not that I’m gay haha.

So can you be both?

Just wanna make sure I understand

That all depends on the individual I’d say,

what type of person they are and what personality they have,

Everybody is different.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I always thought the notion of a "Man's man" was an oxymoron.

The kind of man another man is attracted to is basically a gay one.

So what you saying I’m contradicting myself?

A man’s man does not mean a man who is attracted to another man, that’s the way your looking at it and other people will have a different take on it aswell,

Basically what I meant was I’m a manly man, not that I’m gay haha.

But you say this by putting yourself down as straight

Because I am straight

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I always thought the notion of a "Man's man" was an oxymoron.

The kind of man another man is attracted to is basically a gay one.

So what you saying I’m contradicting myself?

A man’s man does not mean a man who is attracted to another man, that’s the way your looking at it and other people will have a different take on it aswell,

Basically what I meant was I’m a manly man, not that I’m gay haha.

But you say this by putting yourself down as straight

Have you followed everything that as been said?

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By *ed-monkeyCouple
over a year ago

Hailsham

"I always thought the notion of a "Man's man" was an oxymoron.

The kind of man another man is attracted to is basically a gay one.

So what you saying I’m contradicting myself?

A man’s man does not mean a man who is attracted to another man, that’s the way your looking at it and other people will have a different take on it aswell,

Basically what I meant was I’m a manly man, not that I’m gay haha.

But you say this by putting yourself down as straight

Have you followed everything that as been said? "

I ave

I shall walk away at this point ... ultimately it's your profile ...

But many people have given you some useful pointers here ... good luck with Fab

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I always thought the notion of a "Man's man" was an oxymoron.

The kind of man another man is attracted to is basically a gay one.

So what you saying I’m contradicting myself?

A man’s man does not mean a man who is attracted to another man, that’s the way your looking at it and other people will have a different take on it aswell,

Basically what I meant was I’m a manly man, not that I’m gay haha.

But you say this by putting yourself down as straight

Have you followed everything that as been said?

I ave

I shall walk away at this point ... ultimately it's your profile ...

But many people have given you some useful pointers here ... good luck with Fab"

Yes I no and it’s much appreciated aswell, i have took it on board and applied it to my profile, I just didn’t want people to think I came across as something I’m not, so thank you for all your feedback good and bad it all helps and I’m great full of it.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I always thought the notion of a "Man's man" was an oxymoron.

The kind of man another man is attracted to is basically a gay one.

So what you saying I’m contradicting myself?

A man’s man does not mean a man who is attracted to another man, that’s the way your looking at it and other people will have a different take on it aswell,

Basically what I meant was I’m a manly man, not that I’m gay haha.

But you say this by putting yourself down as straight

Have you followed everything that as been said?

I ave

I shall walk away at this point ... ultimately it's your profile ...

But many people have given you some useful pointers here ... good luck with Fab

Good to see you took action on the feedback- many don’t.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I always thought the notion of a "Man's man" was an oxymoron.

The kind of man another man is attracted to is basically a gay one.

So what you saying I’m contradicting myself?

A man’s man does not mean a man who is attracted to another man, that’s the way your looking at it and other people will have a different take on it aswell,

Basically what I meant was I’m a manly man, not that I’m gay haha.

But you say this by putting yourself down as straight

Have you followed everything that as been said?

I ave

I shall walk away at this point ... ultimately it's your profile ...

But many people have given you some useful pointers here ... good luck with Fab

Good to see you took action on the feedback- many don’t."

Thank you

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