FabSwingers.com forum: Profile help

By *ario1981 OP Man
over a year ago

Clevedon

Well something is putting people off now this cold be my ugly mug or my badly worded profile so what I’m after is some profile advice

Many Thanks in advance

Mike

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Well something is putting people off now this cold be my ugly mug or my badly worded profile so what I’m after is some profile advice

Many Thanks in advance

Mike"

There is no profile wording ... Bulk it out a bit

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Well something is putting people off now this cold be my ugly mug or my badly worded profile so what I’m after is some profile advice

Many Thanks in advance

Mike"

You’re right, Mike!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Why would someone go to the effort of asking you stuff when you've not bothered to make an effort yourself? You need to be way more informative, sell yourself my lovely.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You won’t be everyone’s cup of tea but you need to make an effort you’re a man so it isn’t offered on a plate

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Well something is putting people off now this cold be my ugly mug or my badly worded profile so what I’m after is some profile advice

Many Thanks in advance

Mike"

8 words does not constitute a profile....

its hardly even a sentence...

your profile is your shop window … get some advertising in place or prepare to be boarded up

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Your profile is an advertisement for yourself .

If you read your profile woukd you pick you ?

Think about what you want to say and put it down .

Sell yourself that's what it's all about

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Well something is putting people off now this cold be my ugly mug or my badly worded profile so what I’m after is some profile advice

Many Thanks in advance

Mike

There is no profile wording ... Bulk it out a bit

U kidding its already far too wordy took me ages to get thru that

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

We only fuck closed books. Sorry x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

What profile???

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"We only fuck closed books. Sorry x"

It’s more a flyer than a book. It’s needs to go flyer then leaflet the pamphlet then booklet before its gets to be an open book.

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By *ario1981 OP Man
over a year ago

Clevedon

Ok so thank you for everyone’s advice I had a bit of a profile update any more advice or criticism would be great

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Ok so thank you for everyone’s advice I had a bit of a profile update any more advice or criticism would be great"

It’s better. I could be super critical but sometimes people just have to find their own way. Read your profile out loud, exactly as it is written and see what it sounds like.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Your tagline bit at the top doesn't make sense.

You could do with some more flattering pics as the angle ypuve taken them from isnt great.

Your text is quite negative, maybe try adding what you can offer?

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