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"Sorry gave up reading as it's so long, and I like a detailed profile. Not sure why you've put so much detail about your medical problems on there but I know that would put me straight off from messaging back. It says female half isn't playing, so you are another single guy in a huge ocean of single guys. " Hmm, hadn't thought of that. Though to be truthful this has been going on well before the medical problems. Didn't consider the appearance of now being a single male though. Good bit of outside observation there though. Thankyou. xx | |||
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"So much better, but now you've completely left out the part about the female half not meeting. Doesn't need detailed reasons but if its only male half playing it should be in there. " Yeah, we are trying to work out how to word this now. Her health is improving much more rapidly than expected so now we are at risk of looking like idiots if we word this wrong. Anything else we could add or leave out? We seriously hadn't realised it was such a massive uninteresting epic of garbage. It's been like that so long we didn't even notice. Thanks for the advice though, it's made us relise how bad it really was. xx | |||
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"So much better, but now you've completely left out the part about the female half not meeting. Doesn't need detailed reasons but if its only male half playing it should be in there. Yeah, we are trying to work out how to word this now. Her health is improving much more rapidly than expected so now we are at risk of looking like idiots if we word this wrong. Anything else we could add or leave out? We seriously hadn't realised it was such a massive uninteresting epic of garbage. It's been like that so long we didn't even notice. Thanks for the advice though, it's made us relise how bad it really was. xx" Doesn't need details. Just put something like female half not currently playing due to personal issues, but hoping to be back in action shortly. | |||
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"I've deliberately avoided reading any of the other feedback given above so this is my honest opinion based on the current profile - on the whole it covers everything and gets across who you are and what you are about/looking for BUT (there's always a but isn't there?) and I mean this kindly - it's a little boring and lacking personality - now I tried to figure out why and it might come down to it being a little repetitive in places, saying the same thing but differently - so perhaps look at how you can condense it a little. " Boring and personality?? Yup, we can work with this. Advice on what you would look for on what we could change? xx | |||
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"I've deliberately avoided reading any of the other feedback given above so this is my honest opinion based on the current profile - on the whole it covers everything and gets across who you are and what you are about/looking for BUT (there's always a but isn't there?) and I mean this kindly - it's a little boring and lacking personality - now I tried to figure out why and it might come down to it being a little repetitive in places, saying the same thing but differently - so perhaps look at how you can condense it a little. Boring and personality?? Yup, we can work with this. Advice on what you would look for on what we could change? xx" Your personality is something I can't tell you how to get across - but in general terms it needs some snap and pzazz - something that makes the reader want to know more. Although since my earlier post you've added the bit about the female half not currently playing which is fine of course - but I'd ask if the "drought" has coincided with that? If so then maybe there's your answer | |||
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"Seriously seeing the problem here, jesus we hadn't realised what a lengthy load of bollocks we had put in there!! WE wouldn't want to meet us!!! Trimmed down and discarded well over half of it. Keep this feedback coming guys. If it's not reading well, let us know and we'll keep on taking the advice that's very gratefully being given. xx" That's a great move to have listened so well. I've not revisited it but your grasp is great. | |||
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"So.....here we go and hopefully we won't get too much abuse. We been here now about 14 months, chatted with some great people, met some amazing couples and had some awesome playtimes at club f, been to.a couple of party's and finally mage it to the Yarm social. All good so far....UNTIL a couple of months ago when everything suddenly without warning ground to a complete stop, aside from the odd single male and the few couples we regularly chat with we have had virtually no interest from anyone. We've taken advice from people and thrown up interesting and humourous status, tweaked profile information and altered pics and still nothing until a few weeks ago when we have had a few messages our way that despite all being worded differently have all bluntly given us the same answer. It seems we are arrogant and "unlikeable"????? So here's our question. Could anyone (or everyone) take a minute or 2 to take a look at our profile and give us some advice here? Are we REALLY unlikeable?? Cos this is a hard thing to take in since we like to think we are a friendly couple. Much appreciated S&R xx" hey I thought it was a very honest profile bit long mind ,you say woman not playing in first line of write up could it be that ? | |||
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"I think the changes you have made are spot on - only thing I'd say is that first paragraph is a little waffly and has far too many uses of "and" for one sentence but that's being really picky. Hope it works for you " Noted, recapped and dealt with accordingly. xx | |||
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"I did read the profile yesterday Just read the new one. The new one is to the point and friendly. It's a huge improvement. Just a thought ..... If your meets are drying up - have you fucked all the people in your area that fancy you and that you fancy ? Is it time to cast the net wider ? There's got to be a limited number of fuckers in one area " so succinctly put | |||
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"Can I just say OP what a refreshing change it makes to contribute to a profile advice thread where the advice given is taken on board with good grace and actually acted upon. All too often I find the advice given is completely ignored and the requester never returns to the thread so good on you both " We had to seek advice from others. It's all too easy to fall into your own trap of not seeing past the end of your nose. Thankfully we attracted the attention of decent people who were prepared to help us rather than criticise us to the lengths of abuse. So thankyou for YOUR input to our now hopefully more appealing profile. xx | |||
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