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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Apologies guys as I know I find these tedious but at the same time really useful.. I just want some feedback from girls and couples on my profile.. good bad or ugly... I'm

A big lad i can take it

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By *otSoNewWalesCoupleCouple
over a year ago

South Wales

Lose the sink picture.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Noted

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Lose the sink picture."

But I like the sink picture! (Maybe crop the sink out lol)!. X

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross

Lovely tie....... Loving the porcelain with a strategically placed toilet roll. White tissue is always handy post meet .....

All in all ..... fuckin ell. I'll read the words now.

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By *inglehotchickWoman
over a year ago

blackpool

At least the sink is clean!

I like your profile. Nothing to complain about for me

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross

Nice lips.

Profile is .......meh.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I quite like it, although when I read the bit about ‘going home with her partner and making her sex life better’ I did kinda read it and think ‘are you not very good then?’ Pretty sure that isn’t the way it’s intended.

All in all, if I was single I would definitely fuck you lol x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks.. and I'm not sure why but.. meh always makes me laugh.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Now I didn't see it like that but I can now.. although I think it's hard to articulate what i mean.. probably best do that face to face to avoid confusion

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross


"Thanks.. and I'm not sure why but.. meh always makes me laugh. "

Me too ...... dunno what it means tho. I use it to mean ........ not brilliant not shit ..... mediocre ?

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By *hris and SamCouple
over a year ago

at the end of the rainbow

Seems ok to me...granted possibly would have enjoyed more of the torso and less of the sink

You profile reads well pretty succinct in what you do and how you play...sam

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

And I like yours too.. thanks for taking the time to share x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I agree Sam.. but I do like a nice clean sink and if you showed you everything now what would be left to see?

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By *iversong321Woman
over a year ago

Preston/Merseyside

Sink pic - just why?

Paragraphs - make it easier to read

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Agreed, I write it on my phone but I think a revised version is required. Thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Add some structure to your words

Full stops, commas, paragraphs

Make it an easier read

Also in the sink pic you look a bit chunkier than in your other pics

That would make me think is he using older pics to try and hide his podge ?

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

I think it's not bad OP but would benefit perhaps from some refinement - for example not sure there's any need for the "I can guarantee no feelings will develop" bit or the various trusted scenarios - they should all be givens on a site like this.

It's not clear from your last sentence if you're currently in a relationship or not - I think it suggests you're not but could also be read that you are - so you might want to re-word.

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By *hris and SamCouple
over a year ago

at the end of the rainbow


"I agree Sam.. but I do like a nice clean sink and if you showed you everything now what would be left to see? "

Everything because seeing a person in a photo is nothing like seeing someone in the flesh, when someone looks at you you know they are seeing you. Though that maybe just me.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks for all the advice.. the sink will disappear and I'll also post a body pic to avoid and hidden "podge" .. thanks again

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By *alandNitaCouple
over a year ago

Scunthorpe

[Removed by poster at 02/01/18 14:29:53]

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Thanks for all the advice.. the sink will disappear and I'll also post a body pic to avoid and hidden "podge" .. thanks again "

Btw there's nowt wrong with a podge

I have cultured my very own over the years

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By *alandNitaCouple
over a year ago

Scunthorpe

Sorry but it's not great. ..

For someone who has been on and off I would expect better.

I can only agree with earlier posters.

It's barely readable and does nothing for me.

Nita

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's not the easiest to read, a spell check and a bit of tidying would help, and all the reassurance about discretion and not developing feelings comes across more than what you are looking for and offer. As someone else said it ought to be a given, if not just a small part of the profile. The pics are fine, I don't mind the sink one personally.

Overall if you messaged us and I looked there's enough there that I'd probably want to find out more.

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By *ce WingerMan
over a year ago

P.O. Box DE1 0NQ


"Lose the sink picture.

But I like the sink picture! (Maybe crop the sink out lol)!. X"

I want to know why he keeps his bogroll on the sink

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

My advice would be to put the loo roll somewhere else as the bottom of it is bound to get wet and render it almost useless!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A bit more spread out in the writing please. It's a bit hard to read all squashed together.

Nice pics x

Just down the motorway too.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Plus I admire your spotlessly clean sink.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

See this is the advice which I really needed

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Plus I admire your spotlessly clean sink. "

Thanks.. there's secrets the cleanliness

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Lose the sink picture.

But I like the sink picture! (Maybe crop the sink out lol)!. X

I want to know why he keeps his bogroll on the sink "

Because the toilet roll holder was yanked off the wall during a particularly vigorous, kinky sex session on Boxing day

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Break free from the bathroom and show us a bit more body

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