FabSwingers.com forum: Updated my profile

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Just updated my profile let me know what you think

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's got a bit more substance than most, but it's a bit generic to be brutally honest. Nothing there really stands out and says 'I must meet this person'

By *izzy RascallMan
over a year ago

Cardiff

You could always break your paragraph up into two or three smaller ones.

Might be easier on the eye.

By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

I've seen a lot worse but have also seen a lot better - it's fairly generic and not unlike a lot of other single guy profiles. You need to try and write something that gets across some of your personality and that will make people sit up and want to find out more.

Might also help to break it down into paragraphs rather than just one continuous block of text as you have it now.

Pics are ok and kudos for being brave enough to post face pics (and avoiding the ubiquitous cock shot) - maybe add to that with some body shots?

Good luck

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nothing like blowing your own trumpet...

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very self assured .....

The offer of queue jumping might come over to some people as a tad counterproductive....