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By *rightonsteve OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

I've written a publishable quality poem

"Herne Bay

Stay away

Like a rain cloud

On a summers day"

It's iambic. or would be if I added some bits and changed the timbre a bit.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Don't know what you're on about but there's rather a nice lady on here from there.

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By *rightonsteve OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Don't know what you're on about but there's rather a nice lady on here from there. "

Yes there is.

This is a quality poem - don't you like bleedin' culture?

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire

Im staying away from you tonight. There will be no sense from you

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By *rightonsteve OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Im staying away from you tonight. There will be no sense from you"

That's doesn't even rhyme

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Herne Bay

It's by the sea

It makes me want to

Have a wee

When it's hot

It's quite alright

When it's wet

It's fu*king shite*

(*not really)

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire

There was a young man from brighton

Whose boxer shorts where tighton

His bicep was big

His cock was small

That nice young man from brighton

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By *rightonsteve OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"There was a young man from brighton

Whose boxer shorts where tighton

His bicep was big

His cock was small

That nice young man from brighton"

I'll critique it for you....

I'm not that young but will accept it not as a compliment but as a context word, I'm not from Brighton, actually. I reside there but I originate from Stamford in Lincolnshire. There are, in fact, hipsters not boxers. They fit perfectly, thank you. Bicep observation is remarkable for its accuracy. I am nice - you're right. Not bad, considering.....

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire


"There was a young man from brighton

Whose boxer shorts where tighton

His bicep was big

His cock was small

That nice young man from brighton

I'll critique it for you....

I'm not that young but will accept it not as a compliment but as a context word, I'm not from Brighton, actually. I reside there but I originate from Stamford in Lincolnshire. There are, in fact, hipsters not boxers. They fit perfectly, thank you. Bicep observation is remarkable for its accuracy. I am nice - you're right. Not bad, considering..... "

you missed out the cock bit

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By *rightonsteve OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"There was a young man from brighton

Whose boxer shorts where tighton

His bicep was big

His cock was small

That nice young man from brighton

I'll critique it for you....

I'm not that young but will accept it not as a compliment but as a context word, I'm not from Brighton, actually. I reside there but I originate from Stamford in Lincolnshire. There are, in fact, hipsters not boxers. They fit perfectly, thank you. Bicep observation is remarkable for its accuracy. I am nice - you're right. Not bad, considering..... you missed out the cock bit "

*rumbled*!

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire

There was an old man from stamford.

He fell over in red lion square.

He was so fat he didnt care.

Was it steve or was it daniel

Hard to tell apart

Down the riverside he would occasionally go

To give the local birds a go.

He didnt think much of the place.

But would of changed his mind if diamond had shown her face

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire

[Removed by poster at 28/04/17 20:33:32]

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By *rightonsteve OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"There was an old man from stamford.

He fell over in red lion square.

He was so fat he didnt care.

Was it steve or was it daniel

Hard to tell apart

Down the riverside he would occasionally go

To give the local birds a go.

He didnt think much of the place.

But would of changed his mind if diamond had shown her face "

Utterly heavenly

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By *rightonsteve OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

How I yearn to say

I adore Herne Bay

But, alas, the rail links

Stink

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By *ucy. AlCouple
over a year ago

Newcastle upon Tyne


"How I yearn to say

I adore Herne Bay

But, alas, the rail links

Stink

"

I'd love to hear a poem (that rhymes) about Whitstable just along the coast from Herne bay and my old hometown.

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