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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Just a few words I wrote ages ago:

Looking at you girl you are close to perfect,

I'd go through hot coals because you are definitely worth it.

That look about you dunno how to word it,

But I do know this your beauty is certain.....

There is more but cba typing the rest lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

very good - and way better than my attempts at a rap.

Hey girl, you're so fine, but looking down on yo' luck

Shake that booty, time ta get fruity, yeah girl fancy a fuck?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Cheers, I have a full verse for a track for it, but never decided a hook.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


" very good - and way better than my attempts at a rap.

Hey girl, you're so fine, but looking down on yo' luck

Shake that booty, time ta get fruity, yeah girl fancy a fuck? "

very catchy

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