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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

If you saw the first thread then you know what this is about. Please don't ask if you don't want an honest opinion.

Increasingly seen couples putting up rant updates or the odd post about struggling to get meets but rarely if ever see any that want feedback on their profile.

For the brave couples amongst you, say that your in and us singles will mark your profiles out of ten.

(Hopefully us singles will be honest and keep it nice).

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

What is it about ?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sorry couldn't resist...ok I am out now

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Us

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By *lem-H-FandangoMan
over a year ago

salisbury

Did you do ours OP?

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By *oodlandCoupleCouple
over a year ago

Derbyshire

We're in.....

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By *ire X IceCouple
over a year ago

coventry

Us too...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

We're in

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Us "

Good pictures of you both, positive friendly profile but littered with text speak which will definitely put some off.

Is the Facebook warning really necessary on here? It dominates your written profile. 7/10.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


" Did you do ours OP?"

It says that yours is a singles profile?

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By *ischief ManagedCouple
over a year ago

manchester

Go on.....

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We're in "
Id say you guys have it spot on. Photos of you both and its clear what you want x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

[Removed by poster at 09/03/17 13:28:27]

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

We are open to criticism

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"We're in....."

Woodland couple

Good profile, well written, positive with a bit of humour. Pictures of you both but lacking any that show his body shape. Surely your couple and bi fem target audience want a view on whether he ticks their box too. Ps. Why don't you consider taking out the single guy line because you already have them blocked? 7.5/10

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By *azza80Woman
over a year ago

Your wildest Dreams

Wot abous us OP..no pics of Mr as such due to his profession.

Mazza x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Us too..."

Fire X

Good profile. Well written, positive, to the point and clear in what you want and offer. Pictures of you both 8/10.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We're in Id say you guys have it spot on. Photos of you both and its clear what you want x"

Thank you, if you mean us x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"We're in Id say you guys have it spot on. Photos of you both and its clear what you want x"

Great to see a single women giving feedback. I'm sure most of the couples would value your opinion above mine.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"We're in Id say you guys have it spot on. Photos of you both and its clear what you want x"

Purespice

I agree with bunnyhop. Very good profile. Good pictures of you both well written. I like to see a splash of humour but I'm being picky solid 8.5/10, probably higher but then I'd have to increase Gotham finest, enticedxo and one or two others.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Go on....."

Mischief

Good profile, positive, well written, friendly and to the point. Good pictures of you both showing body shape solid 8/10.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Go for it

Jade x

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Us too..."

Fire X Ice - good solid profile that clearly states who you are and what you are looking for. Would benefit from a few pics of Mr that aren't cock shots or face down S&M ones. Perhaps some body shots of you together? Gets 7.5/10 from me.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Go for it

Jade x"

I like it. Good to see pics of you both and a bit of humor in your text. The only thing that would put me off is that youre not always together so arranging a net with both might be tricky but as Thats not something you can change then top marks x

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By *ouble_The_DelightCouple
over a year ago

Wakefield

Please critique ours, thank you.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"We are open to criticism"

Good pictures but unless Mr is that black guy there's none of him which is not good. Written profile starts off well but gives off a negative feel about it in the middle. Maybe highlight what you will do not just what you won't? 6/10.

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"We're in "

PureSpice: Great profile blurb that clearly lays out who you are and what you are looking for - pics are good, if a little too dark in places to be able to make out features (but that's being really picky). Would perhaps benefit from some more of both of you together.

A solid 8.5/10

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Us

Good pictures of you both, positive friendly profile but littered with text speak which will definitely put some off.

Is the Facebook warning really necessary on here? It dominates your written profile. 7/10."

Thanks will rewrite without the text speak

And Facebook warning?

J

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Please critique ours, thank you."

Double The Delight - great well written profile blurb that very clearly and concisely lays out who you are and what you are looking for, as well as being totally clear about your BDSM preferences - all backed up by some amazing pictures of Mrs DTD showing her enjoying that particular lifestyle. A fantastic collection of veris too. Only thing that lets it down is a distinct lack of pictures of Mr DTD which will likely put some people off.

Gets an 8.5/10 from me - would have been higher with some pics of Mr

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Wot abous us OP..no pics of Mr as such due to his profession.

Mazza x"

Good pictures but none of him and I don't buy the profession excuse, you don't need to show faces. A lot of good written substance but it's too much and very disjointed, splattered with text speak. I think you could have a really good profile but in my opinion it needs work 5.5/10

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Go for it

Jade x

I like it. Good to see pics of you both and a bit of humor in your text. The only thing that would put me off is that youre not always together so arranging a net with both might be tricky but as Thats not something you can change then top marks x"

Aw thanks I am trying to change that part by getting him to move here x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Please critique ours, thank you.

Double The Delight - great well written profile blurb that very clearly and concisely lays out who you are and what you are looking for, as well as being totally clear about your BDSM preferences - all backed up by some amazing pictures of Mrs DTD showing her enjoying that particular lifestyle. A fantastic collection of veris too. Only thing that lets it down is a distinct lack of pictures of Mr DTD which will likely put some people off.

Gets an 8.5/10 from me - would have been higher with some pics of Mr "

Yes, I'd agree with all that apart from the score. Lack of Mr pictures makes it a 8.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Go for it

Jade x

I like it. Good to see pics of you both and a bit of humor in your text. The only thing that would put me off is that youre not always together so arranging a net with both might be tricky but as Thats not something you can change then top marks x

Aw thanks I am trying to change that part by getting him to move here x"

Jade x

I agree, very good profile, I would maybe put some of the 'we do not' stuff a little lower down but I'm being picky. 8.5

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By *lem-H-FandangoMan
over a year ago

salisbury


" Did you do ours OP?

It says that yours is a singles profile?"

Our couples profile name is in my profile..

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Us

Good pictures of you both, positive friendly profile but littered with text speak which will definitely put some off.

Is the Facebook warning really necessary on here? It dominates your written profile. 7/10.

Thanks will rewrite without the text speak

And Facebook warning?

J "

Looking better already. Read the warning that you have in your profile, do you need it?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


" Did you do ours OP?

It says that yours is a singles profile?

Our couples profile name is in my profile.."

Come on Clem be fair, haven't got time to go searching for profiles

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By *lem-H-FandangoMan
over a year ago

salisbury


" Did you do ours OP?

It says that yours is a singles profile?

Our couples profile name is in my profile..

Come on Clem be fair, haven't got time to go searching for profiles "

Would have taken less time than that took to write!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


" Did you do ours OP?

It says that yours is a singles profile?

Our couples profile name is in my profile..

Come on Clem be fair, haven't got time to go searching for profiles

Would have taken less time than that took to write! "

That's true

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Why not!

Critique away!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"If you saw the first thread then you know what this is about. Please don't ask if you don't want an honest opinion.

Increasingly seen couples putting up rant updates or the odd post about struggling to get meets but rarely if ever see any that want feedback on their profile.

For the brave couples amongst you, say that your in and us singles will mark your profiles out of ten.

(Hopefully us singles will be honest and keep it nice)."

We noticed your comment about our conversation on your other thread. Agreed, all sorted and no offence taken.

For those who got the wrong end of the stick on our response, you got the wrong end of the stick on our response.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Why not!

Critique away!"

Great pics showing you both but your profile is a tad negative. A lot of rules and what you dont want rather than saying what you want and can offer x

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Why not!

Critique away!"

MikeAndMillie - another good solid profile that clearly lays out what you're looking for. If there's a (minor) criticism it reads a little clinical and could maybe do with some personality being injected but that's being picky. Good set of pics too that show you both at play and in body shots - good to see some of Mr too, although might benefit from one or two more.

Overall (and I'm getting predictable here!!) an 8.5/10 although borders on a 9

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Us

Good pictures of you both, positive friendly profile but littered with text speak which will definitely put some off.

Is the Facebook warning really necessary on here? It dominates your written profile. 7/10.

Thanks will rewrite without the text speak

And Facebook warning?

J

Looking better already. Read the warning that you have in your profile, do you need it?"

Need something there as had my photos from my single profile used by other people on here and on another site... thanks again for the advice

J

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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Need something there as had my photos from my single profile used by other people on here and on another site... thanks again for the advice

J "

It literally means nothing and has no legal standing whatsoever. If you read the FAQs it gives tips if youre worried x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Thank you both for the critique

Mike tends to be the one taking he pictures which is why there are considerably less of him than me! That could be something we make a conscious effort to sort in the future so thank you!

Must admit most of it probably is bordering on negative but after being on fab for a while and now having a slightly more jaded view on the people sending 98% of message we receive completely ignoring our preferences we found being direct and to the point far more efficient than being playful

We are a barrel of laughs... Honest!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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Need something there as had my photos from my single profile used by other people on here and on another site... thanks again for the advice

J

It literally means nothing and has no legal standing whatsoever. If you read the FAQs it gives tips if youre worried x"

Ok thank you will have a look xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Go on then we got thick skin lol

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Why not!

Critique away!"

Mike and Millie

Good pictures of you both, well written but comes across a bit rulesy. Suggest you put the'We love the social side as much' paragraph at the top to soften it a little that will make it an 8/10.

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Go on then we got thick skin lol"

twowrongsmakearight - Apart from the two line second paragraph the profile blurb is very negative and more about what you're not looking for than what you are. The Sydney thing (even though you have treated it lightheartedly) is worthless and has no standing, so is unnecessary. Pics are good but would benefit from some of you both as a couple. The ones of Mr whilst good of him, do suffer from cluttered backgrounds (washing drying, toilet and mug of tea for example). So maybe consider re-doing those. Obviously doing something right though if veris are anything to go by.

Get's a 6/10 from me

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Go on then we got thick skin lol"

Rulesy and a big negative im afraid, just doesn't welcome the reader. The positive is it does have pictures of you both. 6/10.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Don't think we got any last time (or at least could t find it it was so popular!) so we are in again

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By *aughtycouplesexCouple
over a year ago

swadlincote

Why not, take a peek at ours.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Don't think we got any last time (or at least could t find it it was so popular!) so we are in again "

Id say a good pic of his body is needed. The bit about winks isnt really needed, those who wink get it and those who dont will ignore it. You maybe want to say a bit more what you can offer rather than what you want? X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Go on then

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Please keep the critique requests to the thread as opposed to PM. It gives others the opportunity to critique too. Thanks.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Why not, take a peek at ours."

Good pics although again itd be nice to see more of him. I like the humor in your profile but if anything maybe a wee bit too much? Im probably just being fussy though! Are you looking for single girls? Your text seems you are but you havent ticked them in your looking for section x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

Id say a good pic of his body is needed. The bit about winks isnt really needed, those who wink get it and those who dont will ignore it. You maybe want to say a bit more what you can offer rather than what you want? X"

Thanks! That's an awesome red dress by the way

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Go on then "

Lol dont be scared! More pus of him, more of what you can offer and that legal bit at the bottom means nothing x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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Id say a good pic of his body is needed. The bit about winks isnt really needed, those who wink get it and those who dont will ignore it. You maybe want to say a bit more what you can offer rather than what you want? X

Thanks! That's an awesome red dress by the way "

Thank you. Its a bugger to get on

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

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"Don't think we got any last time (or at least could t find it it was so popular!) so we are in again "

Fitbit - interesting profile that reads well. The whole wink thing is a little convaluted though and as not everyone looks at/pays attention to winks might mean you're missing out. Why not just send a message from the start? Nice to see a top 3 list of things you'd like to try if circumatances are right, although some might read that as being all about what you want and be put off as a result.

Pics are good and varied and nice to see some of you both together, perhaps add a few more?

Overall a solid 7/10 from me

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Go on then "

Pand Kent

A good well written profile that is unfortunately let down by the lack of body pictures of Mr. Maybe lose the Sydney university thing? 7.5/10.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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Thank you. Its a bugger to get on "

Well the effort is sure worth it!

Thanks Gemini, will have a bit of an update later.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Do us then .......

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Don't think we got any last time (or at least could t find it it was so popular!) so we are in again "

Fetbit

I like it. Lose the wink paragraph, get another picture of you both and it's an 8/10.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Do us then ....... "

No pics of him or you both together, your text reads a bit negative and doesn't say much about what you wan or can offer x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We're in Id say you guys have it spot on. Photos of you both and its clear what you want x

Purespice

I agree with bunnyhop. Very good profile. Good pictures of you both well written. I like to see a splash of humour but I'm being picky solid 8.5/10, probably higher but then I'd have to increase Gotham finest, enticedxo and one or two others."

Thank you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We're in

PureSpice: Great profile blurb that clearly lays out who you are and what you are looking for - pics are good, if a little too dark in places to be able to make out features (but that's being really picky). Would perhaps benefit from some more of both of you together.

A solid 8.5/10 "

Thank you for taking the time to look. If you get the chance please let us know which pictures seem too dark.

Thank you

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Go on then "

pandskent - clear and concise profile blurb that tells the reader all they need to know. The Sydney thing has no standing so is totally pointless and should be removed. While there are some good pics of Mrs the only ones of Mr are either disembodied ones of his cock, or a solitary one of him in his boxers. Add some more of him showing his body/torso and a few of both of you together.

A solid 7/10 from me

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By *aughtycouplesexCouple
over a year ago

swadlincote


"Why not, take a peek at ours.

Good pics although again itd be nice to see more of him. I like the humor in your profile but if anything maybe a wee bit too much? Im probably just being fussy though! Are you looking for single girls? Your text seems you are but you havent ticked them in your looking for section x"

Thanks for the feedback...

More photos of Mr to come.

No apologies for the humour, it's just the way we are but can see it wouldn't appeal to all.

Thought we had ticked the single females box so a big thank you for pointing it out!

x

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"We're in

PureSpice: Great profile blurb that clearly lays out who you are and what you are looking for - pics are good, if a little too dark in places to be able to make out features (but that's being really picky). Would perhaps benefit from some more of both of you together.

A solid 8.5/10

Thank you for taking the time to look. If you get the chance please let us know which pictures seem too dark.

Thank you "

To be honest there are a few - think it's a case of overdoing filters for an arty effect as much as anything, for example the first two 4th March ones or the 2nd March one with the white shirt or 16th Feb seated might just benefit from being a tad brighter so features can be made out better. As I said that's being really picky though.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Go on then

pandskent - clear and concise profile blurb that tells the reader all they need to know. The Sydney thing has no standing so is totally pointless and should be removed. While there are some good pics of Mrs the only ones of Mr are either disembodied ones of his cock, or a solitary one of him in his boxers. Add some more of him showing his body/torso and a few of both of you together.

A solid 7/10 from me "

Thank you, best get the camera out.

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

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"Do us then ....... "

lottiedothe - profile blurb doesn't really tell us a great deal about you or what you're looking for and appears to be more about what you don't want. Understandable being as you appear to be just starting out and finding your way in this world. Would suggest expanding to include more detail and try and make it positive rather than negative as it comes across now - take a look around at other couples profiles for ideas (there are some very good ones on this thread) - pics need to include some of Mr and some of you together.

Gets a 5/10 from me currently but with some simple changes that would increase.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Go on then

Pand Kent

A good well written profile that is unfortunately let down by the lack of body pictures of Mr. Maybe lose the Sydney university thing? 7.5/10. "

Thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Is that at all better?

Was going to add some stuff about forumites, helium and lightening our profile up but felt that may be a bit much...

Hopefully a bit less "rulesy" and a bit more playful?

All critique still welcome!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Is that at all better?

Was going to add some stuff about forumites, helium and lightening our profile up but felt that may be a bit much...

Hopefully a bit less "rulesy" and a bit more playful?

All critique still welcome!"

Much better, just seems a lot friendlier

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Do us then .......

lottiedothe - profile blurb doesn't really tell us a great deal about you or what you're looking for and appears to be more about what you don't want. Understandable being as you appear to be just starting out and finding your way in this world. Would suggest expanding to include more detail and try and make it positive rather than negative as it comes across now - take a look around at other couples profiles for ideas (there are some very good ones on this thread) - pics need to include some of Mr and some of you together.

Gets a 5/10 from me currently but with some simple changes that would increase. "

lottiedothe

I echo Gemini on this one. You're new so it can take a bit of time for your profile to develop. Try and avoid the negative and rules as you start to fill it out. 5/10 but very much a work in progress.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Us please.

We know it's not very good so some critique would be welcome.

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By *ire X IceCouple
over a year ago

coventry


"Us too...

Fire X Ice - good solid profile that clearly states who you are and what you are looking for. Would benefit from a few pics of Mr that aren't cock shots or face down S&M ones. Perhaps some body shots of you together? Gets 7.5/10 from me."

I'll take that! Sounds like a good idea, thank you

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Why not, take a peek at ours.

Good pics although again itd be nice to see more of him. I like the humor in your profile but if anything maybe a wee bit too much? Im probably just being fussy though! Are you looking for single girls? Your text seems you are but you havent ticked them in your looking for section x

Thanks for the feedback...

More photos of Mr to come.

No apologies for the humour, it's just the way we are but can see it wouldn't appeal to all.

Thought we had ticked the single females box so a big thank you for pointing it out!

x"

Naughty couple sex

I like it! Good pictures of you both showing body shape, witty humorous and well written. Solid 8/10 maybe 8.5!

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Is that at all better?

Was going to add some stuff about forumites, helium and lightening our profile up but felt that may be a bit much...

Hopefully a bit less "rulesy" and a bit more playful?

All critique still welcome!"

Yup much better...although the losing feeling in the lower half of your bodies joke may cause offence to some (even with the apology) but will leave you to judge whether to leave it on or not.

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over a year ago


"Us please.

We know it's not very good so some critique would be welcome. "

I really like it. Very open about yourselves and great mix of pics. X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Us please.

We know it's not very good so some critique would be welcome.

I really like it. Very open about yourselves and great mix of pics. X"

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Us please.

We know it's not very good so some critique would be welcome. "

It's a good profile, friendly, honest, welcoming and good pictures of you both. You seem a nice couple. I'd take out some of the duplication and it's an 8/10 for me.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Go on then we got thick skin lol

Rulesy and a big negative im afraid, just doesn't welcome the reader. The positive is it does have pictures of you both. 6/10. "
..........thats because it cuts out a lot of fcktards n time wasters n dreamers we tried the nice n softly approach h and a very large portion of single gents think I does not apply to them hence no mercy given .........best one we found yet I when posting meets put w/e in capitals cuts out 80%a the dreamers n weirdos instantly lol

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Go on then we got thick skin lol

Rulesy and a big negative im afraid, just doesn't welcome the reader. The positive is it does have pictures of you both. 6/10. ..........thats because it cuts out a lot of fcktards n time wasters n dreamers we tried the nice n softly approach h and a very large portion of single gents think I does not apply to them hence no mercy given .........best one we found yet I when posting meets put w/e in capitals cuts out 80%a the dreamers n weirdos instantly lol"

Happy it works for you and delivers what you want.

It will put off a lot of nice 'non weird' couples and singles though.

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By *aughtycouplesexCouple
over a year ago

swadlincote

Thanks Black On Track.

A useful execise for us to sort out some of the little problems with our profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Go on then we got thick skin lol

Rulesy and a big negative im afraid, just doesn't welcome the reader. The positive is it does have pictures of you both. 6/10. ..........thats because it cuts out a lot of fcktards n time wasters n dreamers we tried the nice n softly approach h and a very large portion of single gents think I does not apply to them hence no mercy given .........best one we found yet I when posting meets put w/e in capitals cuts out 80%a the dreamers n weirdos instantly lol

Happy it works for you and delivers what you want.

It will put off a lot of nice 'non weird' couples and singles though."
...........so be the price of not having a in box full of cock pics n guys asking I they can fuck us both......we can live with it lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Is that at all better?

Was going to add some stuff about forumites, helium and lightening our profile up but felt that may be a bit much...

Hopefully a bit less "rulesy" and a bit more playful?

All critique still welcome!

Yup much better...although the losing feeling in the lower half of your bodies joke may cause offence to some (even with the apology) but will leave you to judge whether to leave it on or not."

I'd figured as much but to be perfectly honest that's our personalities to a T. If someone does take offence at something that was meant very tongue n cheek then that's their prerogative and I highly doubt we'd get along anyway.

We poke fun at ourselves a hundred times more than we do at others, ww're at least being jokey about it rather than abusive like we've seen on some profiles!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sure, we'll play

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Is that at all better?

Was going to add some stuff about forumites, helium and lightening our profile up but felt that may be a bit much...

Hopefully a bit less "rulesy" and a bit more playful?

All critique still welcome!

Yup much better...although the losing feeling in the lower half of your bodies joke may cause offence to some (even with the apology) but will leave you to judge whether to leave it on or not.

I'd figured as much but to be perfectly honest that's our personalities to a T. If someone does take offence at something that was meant very tongue n cheek then that's their prerogative and I highly doubt we'd get along anyway.

We poke fun at ourselves a hundred times more than we do at others, ww're at least being jokey about it rather than abusive like we've seen on some profiles! "

Oh wasn't a criticism on my part at all more an observation - if you're happy with it then go for it. I'm much the same, learned at an early age if I can't laugh at myself who can I laugh at!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Intrigued to see how you rate our profile.

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Sure, we'll play "

kandl74 - what a lovely well written profile that lays out in a positive way what you are about and what you're looking for. You missed an "in" after culminating by the way

Lovely pics too - although would benefit from some more recent ones of Mr (had to scroll a way to get to him) and also some of you both together.

All told a very solid 8/10 from me

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

We're in again, feedback is always useful!

H xx

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By *uxom redCouple
over a year ago

Shrewsbury


" Did you do ours OP?"

No but I'll do you

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Sure, we'll play "

Pictures of you both showing body shape, friendly, positive well written profile. Portrays you well. Edges towards an 8.5/10 for me.

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Intrigued to see how you rate our profile."

Whilst your profile blurb is friendly and open it doesn't really provide any detail of what you are looking for or can offer, so you might want to address that. Could do with some pics of Mr that aren't just cock shots too. Thumbs up for the face pics although not everyone will scroll to the bottom to get to the ones of Mr.

Gets a 6.5/10 from me - but with a few tweaks would be higher.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Us please.

We know it's not very good so some critique would be welcome.

It's a good profile, friendly, honest, welcoming and good pictures of you both. You seem a nice couple. I'd take out some of the duplication and it's an 8/10 for me."

Thank you.

That's the problem with updating our profile and not writing it anew.

Maybe a rewrite is due.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"We're in again, feedback is always useful!

H xx"

I gave you guys an 8.5 in the first thread. I must say that you Gotham Finest, Purespice and a couple others maybe should have been a 9 but.....

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By *ustthe2ofusXXXCouple
over a year ago

coventry

We are in

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We're in again, feedback is always useful!

H xx

I gave you guys an 8.5 in the first thread. I must say that you Gotham Finest, Purespice and a couple others maybe should have been a 9 but....."

But...?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Us please.

We know it's not very good so some critique would be welcome.

It's a good profile, friendly, honest, welcoming and good pictures of you both. You seem a nice couple. I'd take out some of the duplication and it's an 8/10 for me.

Thank you.

That's the problem with updating our profile and not writing it anew.

Maybe a rewrite is due. "

Won't take you long

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Could you do ours pleas

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ow go on then it don't seem to work to well would be nice to know we're we are going wrong!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

What about us?

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"We are in "

Justthe2ofusXXX - Have to confess to being a little confused as to why you'd want same room/same partner if meeting couples, but also are looking for single males who would presumably play with one/both of you (which is another confusion as you mention bi males but both list as straight). How you choose to play is of course your prerogative, but you might want to clarify that a little. Also a small typo in the line about Tom/Dick or Harry's you say "unless you can't agree" think you meant "unless you can agree".

Pics need some of Mr that aren't just his cock, and some of you both together.

Gets a 6.5/10 from me

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"What about us?"

Some clearer photos would be good. Theres no need to use capitals, it comes across as aggressive. The bit about Sydney uni means nothing x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Can we play

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Could you do ours pleas "

your pics although nice are very samey and apart from a few Dick shots there are none showing him off. Profile is a bit muddled and tge bit about use/you comes across as mean. X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"What about us?

Some clearer photos would be good. Theres no need to use capitals, it comes across as aggressive. The bit about Sydney uni means nothing x"

Ok thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We're in Id say you guys have it spot on. Photos of you both and its clear what you want x

Great to see a single women giving feedback. I'm sure most of the couples would value your opinion above mine."

Ooo I'd love to know bunnyhops opinion on our profile!!! be gentle! X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We're in Id say you guys have it spot on. Photos of you both and its clear what you want x

Great to see a single women giving feedback. I'm sure most of the couples would value your opinion above mine.

Ooo I'd love to know bunnyhops opinion on our profile!!! be gentle! X"

Again the pics dont show him off at all, itd be nice to see some body shots of you both. Your profile is clear but maybe a little long winded. The whole put ....in the message title puts me off. If im making the effort to message first surely I shouldnt have to jump through hoops? X

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By *JcouplemidlandsCouple
over a year ago

Peak District

We are in (again) haha last post was very popular.

X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We are in (again) haha last post was very popular.

X"

I hadn't noticed till new you ladies really dont like showing off your men lol. Pics of him would be nice. Your text is nice and short and to the point, it Dorset say F will play with girls but youre both listed as straight. X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We're in Id say you guys have it spot on. Photos of you both and its clear what you want x

Great to see a single women giving feedback. I'm sure most of the couples would value your opinion above mine.

Ooo I'd love to know bunnyhops opinion on our profile!!! be gentle! X

Again the pics dont show him off at all, itd be nice to see some body shots of you both. Your profile is clear but maybe a little long winded. The whole put ....in the message title puts me off. If im making the effort to message first surely I shouldnt have to jump through hoops? X"

Changed it about abut and got rid of the put in title bit! Will have fun playing tonight taking pics of hubby to add!

Thanks for the comments!

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Can we play "

Twisted-firestarters - Great profile with clear blurb - it could do with some grammar/spell checks though but that's being overly picky - there's also a couple of duplicated bits (e.g. You say you're a young couple twice) - but the intent and message are very good.

Pictures are excellent with a good variety of both of you.

Overall very impressive and gets a 9/10 from me

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Could you do ours pleas

your pics although nice are very samey and apart from a few Dick shots there are none showing him off. Profile is a bit muddled and tge bit about use/you comes across as mean. X"
we don't like bad grammar and won't meet anyone who uses it, that's not mean that's choice x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Could you do ours pleas "

Some nice pictures but not enough of him, non showing his body shape. You may be very nice people but the end of your profile doesn't portray that, in fact suggests your not nice 6/10.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Can we play "

Twisted fire starters

Good profile, pictures of you both which are good. Well written, clear, concise. 8.5/10.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Ow go on then it don't seem to work to well would be nice to know we're we are going wrong!!"

Puk pair

No pictures of him and your profile is dominated by what you won't do instead of what you will. Doesn't work for me I'm afraid 5/10.

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

Any more for any more or have bunnyhop, Black On Track and I cleaned up?

If there's anyone we've missed please feel free to nudge us. Thanks to BOT for posting the thread too, has been interesting and fun

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I feel like we should hi 5 for a job well done! The forums will be quiet now we've sorted all these profiles, they'll all be out shagging like rabbits!

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"I feel like we should hi 5 for a job well done! The forums will be quiet now we've sorted all these profiles, they'll all be out shagging like rabbits! "

Oh definitely high 5s all round...

....so that's what that noise was!!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Gemini Man and Bunnyhop a definite hi 5 to you both. It's been fun, I only wish you'd both been on the first thread as well!

I must also add that there are some very good couples profiles out there.

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

Same to you Sir...I did start off on the first thread but got a little waylaid as it got busier.

Definitely been fun today though

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By *ouble_The_DelightCouple
over a year ago

Wakefield


"Please critique ours, thank you.

Double The Delight - great well written profile blurb that very clearly and concisely lays out who you are and what you are looking for, as well as being totally clear about your BDSM preferences - all backed up by some amazing pictures of Mrs DTD showing her enjoying that particular lifestyle. A fantastic collection of veris too. Only thing that lets it down is a distinct lack of pictures of Mr DTD which will likely put some people off.

Gets an 8.5/10 from me - would have been higher with some pics of Mr "

Thank you.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

We're in!!

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"We're in!!

"

summer99 - Liking the concise simplicity of your profile blurb - could maybe flesh it out a little more with some more detail about what you're looking for/can offer. Pics fall into the couples profile trap of being pretty much all of Mrs with just one cock pic of Mr and those of Mrs are all very much alike - so consider more varied pics of both of you with perhaps some of you together.

Gets a solid 7/10 from me

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

In in

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

We made a bit of an effort with ours,it seems to work.

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"We made a bit of an effort with ours,it seems to work."

pullmypantiesdown - Great light hearted profile blurb that doesn't take itself too seriously but gets across a sense of who you are and what you're looking for very well. Would maybe give consideration to changing your username only because it suggests a single profile with the use of the word 'my' but if you're comfortable with it, go for it!!

Limited pictures are good but again fall into the couples profile trap of all being of Mrs and none of Mr. Know you acknowledge that in your profile blurb but male pics don't have to be cock pics - try a few torso/bum shots and perhaps add some of you both together.

Gets a solid 7/10 from me

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"We made a bit of an effort with ours,it seems to work."

A well written friendly profile that is good at explaining what you want and gives an impression of your relaxed approach. Pictures of her but no pictures of him? It's as if you've got something to hide. Many couples and singles are disappointed that they have to ask or worse still guess what Mr looks like, they don't mean cock pictures, they mean body shape. 7/10.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"In in"

Presumably you mean to give honest feedback to couples profiles, which is great.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"We're in!!

"

Summer99

A new profile and a good start, if you balance your pictures out with some body shots of him (not cock) then you'll definitely appeal more to the women and female half of couples on here. Do that and it's an 8/10.

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By *lkDomWhtSubBiCpleCouple
over a year ago

Somewhere / Everywhere /Kinksville

Okay I'd like to know what folk think

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Thanks!!!

New pics this weekend!!!

Sx

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By *cduck and Blue eyesCouple
over a year ago

nr chester

Go on then, why not Mrs blue eyes

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Okay I'd like to know what folk think "

BlkDomWhtSubBiCple - A profile I've long admired from a discreet distance Very clear profile blurb that shows exactly who you are and what you're looking for and more importantly goes into detail about your particular interests in the BDSM side of the lifestyle. Great pics too that include both of you, although could probably benefit from a few more of Him and maybe some of you together.

Gets a 9/10 from me

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Okay I'd like to know what folk think "

Black dom white sub

It's a good profile, very good actually. You get the basics right. Pictures include you both and have body type shots. Clear description of who you are and what you want. I think I'd only change one sentence, it's a solid 8.5/10 for me.

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By *lkDomWhtSubBiCpleCouple
over a year ago

Somewhere / Everywhere /Kinksville

Thank you both.

Yes I could think there are a couple of sentences that some might not like. And yes we definitely need more photos of Sir. I feel a bott shot coming up

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Us please x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Go on then, why not Mrs blue eyes "

Good pictures of you both and a friendly profile descriptive but you've been here over a year so should have more of an idea of what you're looking for. A picture together would work well and better punctuation on your first paragraph (first impression). Small changes would make yours a very good profiles 8/10.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Us please x"

Bump and Grind

A very good profile. Good selection of pictures showing body type. Welcoming, positive, concise and well written descriptive. Up there with the top ones for me 8.5/10.

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By *cduck and Blue eyesCouple
over a year ago

nr chester


"Go on then, why not Mrs blue eyes

Good pictures of you both and a friendly profile descriptive but you've been here over a year so should have more of an idea of what you're looking for. A picture together would work well and better punctuation on your first paragraph (first impression). Small changes would make yours a very good profiles 8/10."
. A little laziness really, keep meaning to go back and redo punctuation, we do have pics of us together in our friends only, we are a little careful as we can be easily recognised by tatt's, but well as for the not knowing what we like, well although we have been on fab over a year, we actually still haven't swung as such we like to watch and be watched in clubs, but we are still not sure what we want, so we try not to lead people on with our profile, do you think we should add more about the voyuer and exhibtionist side?? Thanks btw, Mrs blue eyes

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Go on then, why not Mrs blue eyes

Good pictures of you both and a friendly profile descriptive but you've been here over a year so should have more of an idea of what you're looking for. A picture together would work well and better punctuation on your first paragraph (first impression). Small changes would make yours a very good profiles 8/10.. A little laziness really, keep meaning to go back and redo punctuation, we do have pics of us together in our friends only, we are a little careful as we can be easily recognised by tatt's, but well as for the not knowing what we like, well although we have been on fab over a year, we actually still haven't swung as such we like to watch and be watched in clubs, but we are still not sure what we want, so we try not to lead people on with our profile, do you think we should add more about the voyuer and exhibtionist side?? Thanks btw, Mrs blue eyes "

Definitely! There are lots of couples and singles looking for exactly that.

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By *cduck and Blue eyesCouple
over a year ago

nr chester


"Go on then, why not Mrs blue eyes

Good pictures of you both and a friendly profile descriptive but you've been here over a year so should have more of an idea of what you're looking for. A picture together would work well and better punctuation on your first paragraph (first impression). Small changes would make yours a very good profiles 8/10.. A little laziness really, keep meaning to go back and redo punctuation, we do have pics of us together in our friends only, we are a little careful as we can be easily recognised by tatt's, but well as for the not knowing what we like, well although we have been on fab over a year, we actually still haven't swung as such we like to watch and be watched in clubs, but we are still not sure what we want, so we try not to lead people on with our profile, do you think we should add more about the voyuer and exhibtionist side?? Thanks btw, Mrs blue eyes

Definitely! There are lots of couples and singles looking for exactly that."
. Thankyou muchly

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

*creeps in at the back..* hey OP, come on in, but be gentle

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"*creeps in at the back..* hey OP, come on in, but be gentle "

Peach fuzz

This profile could be so so good, it's all there! Good pictures of you both showing body shape, good descriptive but it's spoilt by terrible punctuation and what are all the X's for? Lose them, punctuate it, use paragraphs and lose the warning at the end and you've got a better! (Should take you 5 minutes). At the moment it's just below an 8/10.

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By *cduck and Blue eyesCouple
over a year ago

nr chester

Any better? Mrs blue eyes

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Any better? Mrs blue eyes "

Brilliant, it just reads so much better and you really come across as fun people.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"*creeps in at the back..* hey OP, come on in, but be gentle

Peach fuzz

This profile could be so so good, it's all there! Good pictures of you both showing body shape, good descriptive but it's spoilt by terrible punctuation and what are all the X's for? Lose them, punctuate it, use paragraphs and lose the warning at the end and you've got a better! (Should take you 5 minutes). At the moment it's just below an 8/10."

Sorry sir, on it now...;-)

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By *cduck and Blue eyesCouple
over a year ago

nr chester


"Any better? Mrs blue eyes

Brilliant, it just reads so much better and you really come across as fun people. "
. Aww Thankyou, it's really hard as we don't do arranged meets as such, we just attend clubs with a see what happens kind of attitude our reasoning for this is that we are not keen on all the pressure of meets, especially as we really don't know where our swinging journey will go but we don't want to sound negative in our profile, with we don't do this and we don't do that, and we don't want to string people along, we are very honest with our messaging though and our way of swinging seems to be working for us at the minute, thanks lots for all the advice Mrs blue eyes

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"*creeps in at the back..* hey OP, come on in, but be gentle

Peach fuzz

This profile could be so so good, it's all there! Good pictures of you both showing body shape, good descriptive but it's spoilt by terrible punctuation and what are all the X's for? Lose them, punctuate it, use paragraphs and lose the warning at the end and you've got a better! (Should take you 5 minutes). At the moment it's just below an 8/10.

Sorry sir, on it now...;-)"

All revised and ready for a remark please

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over a year ago


"*creeps in at the back..* hey OP, come on in, but be gentle

Peach fuzz

This profile could be so so good, it's all there! Good pictures of you both showing body shape, good descriptive but it's spoilt by terrible punctuation and what are all the X's for? Lose them, punctuate it, use paragraphs and lose the warning at the end and you've got a better! (Should take you 5 minutes). At the moment it's just below an 8/10.

Sorry sir, on it now...;-)

All revised and ready for a remark please "

A remarkable transformation, very good. It's a solid 8.5/10 now and like some select other profiles could possibly be a 9, but I don't give 9's. Try and add a picture of the two of you together if you can.

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over a year ago


"Us please x

Bump and Grind

A very good profile. Good selection of pictures showing body type. Welcoming, positive, concise and well written descriptive. Up there with the top ones for me 8.5/10."

Ah thank you. Have been told we need more male pics - it's something were working on

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Go on then

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"*creeps in at the back..* hey OP, come on in, but be gentle

Peach fuzz

This profile could be so so good, it's all there! Good pictures of you both showing body shape, good descriptive but it's spoilt by terrible punctuation and what are all the X's for? Lose them, punctuate it, use paragraphs and lose the warning at the end and you've got a better! (Should take you 5 minutes). At the moment it's just below an 8/10.

Sorry sir, on it now...;-)

All revised and ready for a remark please

A remarkable transformation, very good. It's a solid 8.5/10 now and like some select other profiles could possibly be a 9, but I don't give 9's. Try and add a picture of the two of you together if you can."

Thanks Op! It's been a pleasure, I'll jump the old man as soon as he gets in from work and get my homework done

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

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"Go on then "

Pure-karnage - Profile blurb is a little confusing with typos and duplications (e.g. You've two lines about each of you both prefaced with Miss K/Mr K, consider combining them into single paragraphs and removing the second Miss K/Mr K in each instance - you also have a line that starts "Head game is...", guessing that should be "Her game is..." - likewise you make reference to Mr K "also has his own pride" guessing should be "profile"?). There's reference to a bucket list - either give some clues to what's on it, or make it clear it can be discussed if there's mutual interest. Maybe include the names of your solo profiles as a cross-reference and for anyone that might be interested in meeting you alone?

Pics are good and varied, although some are a little indistinct and there's too many cock pics of Mr, so maybe replace with some body pics.

Overall a 6.5/10 but can easily be improved with just a few small changes

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"*creeps in at the back..* hey OP, come on in, but be gentle

Peach fuzz

This profile could be so so good, it's all there! Good pictures of you both showing body shape, good descriptive but it's spoilt by terrible punctuation and what are all the X's for? Lose them, punctuate it, use paragraphs and lose the warning at the end and you've got a better! (Should take you 5 minutes). At the moment it's just below an 8/10.

Sorry sir, on it now...;-)

All revised and ready for a remark please

A remarkable transformation, very good. It's a solid 8.5/10 now and like some select other profiles could possibly be a 9, but I don't give 9's. Try and add a picture of the two of you together if you can.

Thanks Op! It's been a pleasure, I'll jump the old man as soon as he gets in from work and get my homework done "

Have to agree with the OP didn't see the original so looking at this fresh, but couldn't add more to what BOT's already said. A pic of you together would for sure finish it off nicely.

Definitely an 8.5/10

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Just wanted to give you 3 reviewers a big thank you for posting to this fun yet informative thread which will undoubtably actually help people on here.

It's a bit refreshing having the help thrown towards couples rather than the couples helping with the single male profiles.

Hope to see a number 3 when this one fills!

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By *onnie and JohnCouple
over a year ago

WILTSHIRE

Go on then do your best..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Let's hear it then...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"*creeps in at the back..* hey OP, come on in, but be gentle

Peach fuzz

This profile could be so so good, it's all there! Good pictures of you both showing body shape, good descriptive but it's spoilt by terrible punctuation and what are all the X's for? Lose them, punctuate it, use paragraphs and lose the warning at the end and you've got a better! (Should take you 5 minutes). At the moment it's just below an 8/10.

Sorry sir, on it now...;-)

All revised and ready for a remark please

A remarkable transformation, very good. It's a solid 8.5/10 now and like some select other profiles could possibly be a 9, but I don't give 9's. Try and add a picture of the two of you together if you can.

Thanks Op! It's been a pleasure, I'll jump the old man as soon as he gets in from work and get my homework done

Have to agree with the OP didn't see the original so looking at this fresh, but couldn't add more to what BOT's already said. A pic of you together would for sure finish it off nicely.

Definitely an 8.5/10 "

Thank you Gemini x Great thread op!

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

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"Go on then do your best.. "

Corfu Connie john: A detailed profile that clearly lays out who you are and what you are looking for once you get past the first couple of lines, which had me a little confused to be honest - if I've understood correctly you're in Corfu and will be until November 2017? If so then you need to make that clear as I wondered if your profile was out of date and you meant last November. Would also change the line that says "no chance of meeting until the summer season starts" as a lot of people will read that and move on to the next profile - why not put something like "If you're ever in Corfu and fancy a no pressure relaxed meet in the sun, why not drop us a message?".

The line about offering info about Corfu is a nice touch but has got kind of confused in with the previous line about reading profiles, so maybe make it a separate line and perhaps ask people to message rather than wink - might be a way to open up a chat

The Sydney University thing is worthless and has no standing, so I'd remove that.

Finally one pic of one of you (can't tell which) in the distance is going to put a lot of people off - so time to get the camera out. Doesn't have to be rude pics, or even face pics but would be good to have some that give an idea of body shape etc.

Gets a 6.5/10 from me but with some small changes and pics would easily reach an 8 or better.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Just wanted to give you 3 reviewers a big thank you for posting to this fun yet informative thread which will undoubtably actually help people on here.

It's a bit refreshing having the help thrown towards couples rather than the couples helping with the single male profiles.

Hope to see a number 3 when this one fills!"

Thank you for that, it's been fun.

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By *onnie and JohnCouple
over a year ago

WILTSHIRE

Changes made, as to photos ..we used to have some but after some where posted up around the village "most embarrassing" by a twat, we decided to keep them private and send with a message ..

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Let's hear it then... "

Twice as nice

Good pictures of you both but would benefit from a body shape picture of Mr. Then I'm afraid it's very much a profile of two halves.

The first half has an air of negativity and is very 'glass half full' and then the second half is great apart from the last paragraph. I'd lose most of the first half or word it differently. Your profile should start with the 'we like the social' paragraph you've got, at least it would get them in before hitting them with all the rules, demands and what you won't do. 5.5/10 but could easily be much higher.

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

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"Let's hear it then... "

TwiceAsNice2017 - Once you get to the paragraph that starts "We have had many meets..." it's a great, positive, well written and appealing profile but the negative paragraphs before it read a bit rulesy - understand the need for them but perhaps consider moving them to after the positives. Appears you have single men blocked so is there really any need to include the paragraph (if they can't message you anyway) about them beyond saying "we will find you".

Pics are good but would benefit from more of Mr and perhaps some more shots of you together.

Gets a 7/10 from me

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Thankyou guys, all taken on board and will make the necessary changes a little later xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ooo what have I missed?!? Haha x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Ooo what have I missed?!? Haha x"

You've missed a request for a third one of these threads when this one is full!

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

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"Ooo what have I missed?!? Haha x

You've missed a request for a third one of these threads when this one is full! "

Well we are only 5 posts away from filling this one!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I can see 4 couples profiles that are already considerably better for these threads at the very least, I say give the people what they want!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Im up for more judging. Just call me Mr Cowell

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

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"Im up for more judging. Just call me Mr Cowell "

Bagsy not be Louis Walsh!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Im up for more judging. Just call me Mr Cowell

Bagsy not be Louis Walsh!!"

You can be Cheryl x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Sounds like number 3 is a goer then! I'll start it shortly....

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