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By *eeside OP   Man
over a year ago

margate sumwear by the sea

In relashoun with rate profile above y not give advice lol

Yes that meens you need to reed a profile

I don't expect this tether will be very bizey lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"In relashoun with rate profile above y not give advice lol

Yes that meens you need to reed a profile

I don't expect this tether will be very bizey lol "

Swap the shirt for Xmas jumper and

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Profile seems quite well written for someone with dyslexia, obviously spent a bit of time on it.

All your pictures bar 1 or 2 are 'profile' maybe consider a few more body shots?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"In relashoun with rate profile above y not give advice lol

Yes that meens you need to reed a profile

I don't expect this tether will be very bizey lol "

Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given "

What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar.

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By *iamondjoeMan
over a year ago

Glastonbury


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Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given

What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar. "

Tries hard but could do better.

Vaguely fuckable, if he'd just stop talking

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given

What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar. "

Fair bit of your profile text talks about your female friend and wanting to meet others with her,maybe a cpls profile would be more suitable.

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By *uxom redCouple
over a year ago

Shrewsbury


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Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given

What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar. "

The only thing I'd say is if you have an fb get a couples profile with her and not go on about her on your single profile.

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire


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Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given

What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar.

Tries hard but could do better.

Vaguely fuckable, if he'd just stop talking "
says what he wants it to say.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given

What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar.

The only thing I'd say is if you have an fb get a couples profile with her and not go on about her on your single profile. "

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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Don't take this the wrong way, I understand your dyslexia and Aspergers, but the text really needs a spell check .Your profiles been up long enough to work at the errors bit by bit.Hope no offence given

What you say in your 'About Me' section could said in 9 or 10 lines, as opposed to a 3,000 word essay. Status is more a Facebook one than one you'd use on a site full of strangers. Pics are all very similar.

The only thing I'd say is if you have an fb get a couples profile with her and not go on about her on your single profile.

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Decent profile, good pictures and text says about you and what you're looking for. Above the average profile

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Perfectly acceptable

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By *igeiaWoman
over a year ago

Bristol


"Perfectly acceptable "

A Ronseal of a profile. It does what it says on the tin. Only thing I would change would be to add an 'I' before the 'thank you' at the end. Mainly because I have a mental image of said profile holder doffing his hat at that point.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Perfectly acceptable

A Ronseal of a profile. It does what it says on the tin. Only thing I would change would be to add an 'I' before the 'thank you' at the end. Mainly because I have a mental image of said profile holder doffing his hat at that point."

Rather a strange thing to suggest. Ligeriariaiaearias profile is one which I spend a lot of time looking at. I guess the wording is ok too

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By *igeiaWoman
over a year ago

Bristol


"Perfectly acceptable

A Ronseal of a profile. It does what it says on the tin. Only thing I would change would be to add an 'I' before the 'thank you' at the end. Mainly because I have a mental image of said profile holder doffing his hat at that point.

Rather a strange thing to suggest. Ligeriariaiaearias profile is one which I spend a lot of time looking at. I guess the wording is ok too "

I thank you (I did a curtsey since I am in my pyjamas and have no hat to doff)

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Perfectly acceptable

A Ronseal of a profile. It does what it says on the tin. Only thing I would change would be to add an 'I' before the 'thank you' at the end. Mainly because I have a mental image of said profile holder doffing his hat at that point.

Rather a strange thing to suggest. Ligeriariaiaearias profile is one which I spend a lot of time looking at. I guess the wording is ok too

I thank you (I did a curtsey since I am in my pyjamas and have no hat to doff)"

I have....now

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

I'll critique my own. It's shit and he knows it is. It's designed to keep the riffraff away, the drones from messaging and the ne'er-do-wells from wanting to touch my botty.

The proper worded profile is, of course, rather betterly written.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I'll critique my own. It's shit and he knows it is. It's designed to keep the riffraff away, the drones from messaging and the ne'er-do-wells from wanting to touch my botty.

The proper worded profile is, of course, rather betterly written. "

Can't really advise someone who is good at advice

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I know our profile needs a re write but not sure what any ideas please (Kat) xx

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By *eliWoman
over a year ago

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" I know our profile needs a re write but not sure what any ideas please (Kat) xx "

I would lose the part about not looking for single men - you've already stated what you're looking for, little point reiterating it. Lose the 'if we're not what you are looking for' - you know if you're not.

You can put some of the sentences together to make it sound more appealing and less appealing - an example would be

'We love the excitement of going to clubs and meeting new people whilst exploring Kat's bi side.' I could rewrite it but then I think your voice would be lost and it might not be you as such. I'd lose the no black or asian thing but meh.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


" I know our profile needs a re write but not sure what any ideas please (Kat) xx "

If you're not looking for single guys just use your filters rather than saying it. Gives you more opportunity to say what you are looking for than what you're not.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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I would lose the part about not looking for single men - you've already stated what you're looking for, little point reiterating it. Lose the 'if we're not what you are looking for' - you know if you're not.

You can put some of the sentences together to make it sound more appealing and less appealing - an example would be

'We love the excitement of going to clubs and meeting new people whilst exploring Kat's bi side.' I could rewrite it but then I think your voice would be lost and it might not be you as such. I'd lose the no black or asian thing but meh.

"

Good profile, maybe add your avatar to your picture list? I think you'd find that it would be a popular one.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


" I know our profile needs a re write but not sure what any ideas please (Kat) xx

I would lose the part about not looking for single men - you've already stated what you're looking for, little point reiterating it. Lose the 'if we're not what you are looking for' - you know if you're not.

You can put some of the sentences together to make it sound more appealing and less appealing - an example would be

'We love the excitement of going to clubs and meeting new people whilst exploring Kat's bi side.' I could rewrite it but then I think your voice would be lost and it might not be you as such. I'd lose the no black or asian thing but meh.

"
Thanks for your advice will get together and do a re write tomorrow xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


" I know our profile needs a re write but not sure what any ideas please (Kat) xx

If you're not looking for single guys just use your filters rather than saying it. Gives you more opportunity to say what you are looking for than what you're not. "
Thank you xx

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By *eliWoman
over a year ago

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" Good profile, maybe add your avatar to your picture list? I think you'd find that it would be a popular one."

I thought so too. I actually received the most abuse about my figure with that one so decided to just keep it as an avatar.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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Can't really advise someone who is good at advice"

I'd consider losing the last line, it already says you don't accommodate higher up in your profile.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


" Good profile, maybe add your avatar to your picture list? I think you'd find that it would be a popular one.

I thought so too. I actually received the most abuse about my figure with that one so decided to just keep it as an avatar."

I think your profile is good as it is. Leaves lots to the imagination

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Alness I think your profile is great, the text is rather long.. that is literally my only (very picky) criticism. That pic with all the toys... it's like Christmas!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Alness I would agree with friggin. A spot on profile. Gives a real sense of you both and very clear in what it is you are after. Touché

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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I think your profile is good as it is. Leaves lots to the imagination"

Maybe consider rewriting the 'few basic rules' section? It sort of ends things on a bit of a downer or negative.

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire


"Alness I think your profile is great, the text is rather long.. that is literally my only (very picky) criticism. That pic with all the toys... it's like Christmas!! "
brief but says ecactly why shes here

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By *ogue78Man
over a year ago

Edinburgh

Long text, although describes exactly what she's after, and pics leave loads to the imagination, which is good

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Alness I think your profile is great, the text is rather long.. that is literally my only (very picky) criticism. That pic with all the toys... it's like Christmas!! "

Thanks you! And have been trying to shorten it but not sure what to lose

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Alness I think your profile is great, the text is rather long.. that is literally my only (very picky) criticism. That pic with all the toys... it's like Christmas!! brief but says ecactly why shes here"

Yet lads still don't read it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"....brief but says ecactly why shes here"

Good profile but I'd lose the 'Losing weight has taken a toll on my body, doesn't bother me, hope it doesn't bother you' line.

It invites a negative perception.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"....brief but says ecactly why shes here

Good profile but I'd lose the 'Losing weight has taken a toll on my body, doesn't bother me, hope it doesn't bother you' line.

It invites a negative perception. "

Can't get past his pictures

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"....brief but says ecactly why shes here

Good profile but I'd lose the 'Losing weight has taken a toll on my body, doesn't bother me, hope it doesn't bother you' line.

It invites a negative perception.

Can't get past his pictures "

Looks good to me.

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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago

Northampton Somewhere


"....brief but says ecactly why shes here

Good profile but I'd lose the 'Losing weight has taken a toll on my body, doesn't bother me, hope it doesn't bother you' line.

It invites a negative perception.

Can't get past his pictures

Looks good to me. "

Oh my gawd.....its him Profile advice for the profile adviser? Ok then.....there's not much text which I guess you've done for a reason but it makes me think you might be a bit of a lazy, and we don't want that in the bedroom, do we??

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Lady Lick - your profile could perhaps be shortened a bit. However, it says what needs to be said and the pics are excellent.

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By *aughtypair555Couple
over a year ago

north west


"Lady Lick - your profile could perhaps be shortened a bit. However, it says what needs to be said and the pics are excellent."

Maybe a few more pics in the public gallery xx

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By *obwithkiltMan
over a year ago

Belton

Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great profile lovely variety of pics x

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By *aughtypair555Couple
over a year ago

north west


"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though "

Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though

Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now "

Your profile is great.yous look fab too so no advice to give

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

English Lass, some pics of you from behind would be great

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though

Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now

Your profile is great.yous look fab too so no advice to give "

Great profile though I'd change location to east mids

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Does nothing for me. Lol

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By *aughtypair555Couple
over a year ago

north west


"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though

Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now

Your profile is great.yous look fab too so no advice to give "

Thanks lovely pics , no advice needed either xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though

Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now

Your profile is great.yous look fab too so no advice to give

Thanks lovely pics , no advice needed either xx"

Maybe some more pics of Mr apart from that a very nice profile

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By *aughtypair555Couple
over a year ago

north west


"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though

Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now

Your profile is great.yous look fab too so no advice to give

Thanks lovely pics , no advice needed either xx

Maybe some more pics of Mr apart from that a very nice profile "

Haha yes! I'll need to play paparazzi with mr tho - he doesn't like posing xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

naughtypair short sweet and cracking pics

Perhaps a little more about your personalities, but thats not advice im giving with much conviction. More for title of the thread ha

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Naughty pair... Nice pics... Needs more than a wink though

Yes actually didn't realise hadn't put anything else on there hope it's a bit better now

Your profile is great.yous look fab too so no advice to give

Thanks lovely pics , no advice needed either xx

Maybe some more pics of Mr apart from that a very nice profile

Haha yes! I'll need to play paparazzi with mr tho - he doesn't like posing xx"

Got to give the ladies a sample of your good man

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Jammyc...

Bio tells quite a bit which is fine but maybe a little variation in the pictures

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ffs

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Jammyc...

Bio tells quite a bit which is fine but maybe a little variation in the pictures "

Love a man in a suit vert dapper and....where was i? Drool city mm x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Jammyc...

Bio tells quite a bit which is fine but maybe a little variation in the pictures

Love a man in a suit vert dapper and....where was i? Drool city mm x"

Great profile and photos - can't think of any improvement

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Chipper... Need more on the bio, you've stated you're single 3 times

Black magic.... Good evening

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Chipper... Need more on the bio, you've stated you're single 3 times

Black magic.... Good evening "

Short but sweet. I like it.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Passion a really fitting username. A glowing profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Passion a really fitting username. A glowing profile"

Ah got you before, same as previous

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon

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By *hocoholicWoman
over a year ago

The big D


"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon "

Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon

Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u. "

Well I'm manged to Fab all the photos of you I like in that time, maybe I should shorten it, it was longer haha

I could go on probs should save it for the meets

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon

Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u.

Well I'm manged to Fab all the photos of you I like in that time, maybe I should shorten it, it was longer haha

I could go on probs should save it for the meets "

Seems pretty good but maybe condense your text and streamline it. lt's quite long.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon

Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u.

Well I'm manged to Fab all the photos of you I like in that time, maybe I should shorten it, it was longer haha

I could go on probs should save it for the meets

Seems pretty good but maybe condense your text and streamline it. lt's quite long."

Your pics are good but a little samey to my eye.

Profile is honest.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon

Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u.

Well I'm manged to Fab all the photos of you I like in that time, maybe I should shorten it, it was longer haha

I could go on probs should save it for the meets

Seems pretty good but maybe condense your text and streamline it. lt's quite long.

Your pics are good but a little samey to my eye.

Profile is honest. "

Honest and to the point, some great pics too x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Just add a few more pics maybe.

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By *lue NarwhalMan
over a year ago

Iceland, but Aldi is closer..


"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon

Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u.

Well I'm manged to Fab all the photos of you I like in that time, maybe I should shorten it, it was longer haha

I could go on probs should save it for the meets

Seems pretty good but maybe condense your text and streamline it. lt's quite long.

Your pics are good but a little samey to my eye.

Profile is honest.

Honest and to the point, some great pics too x"

Waxing lyrical,

A joy to read but then I had great hopes from the outset..

Good pics, only a few but then less is more...

Seems all inclusive and even your negatives(dislikes, etc) were written in a shit sandwich style and ended on a positive..

Cannot fault it at all..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Need to get my self a suit pic I reckon

Wow there's alot of reading here, il have to get back to u.

Well I'm manged to Fab all the photos of you I like in that time, maybe I should shorten it, it was longer haha

I could go on probs should save it for the meets

Seems pretty good but maybe condense your text and streamline it. lt's quite long.

Your pics are good but a little samey to my eye.

Profile is honest.

Honest and to the point, some great pics too x

Waxing lyrical,

A joy to read but then I had great hopes from the outset..

Good pics, only a few but then less is more...

Seems all inclusive and even your negatives(dislikes, etc) were written in a shit sandwich style and ended on a positive..

Cannot fault it at all.."

Fun pics and a fun profile.

A refreshing change

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio "

Lol. You do realise that's just part of my very professional legal warning to Sydney uni?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio

Lol. You do realise that's just part of my very professional legal warning to Sydney uni? "

I didn't

Well in that case it's great

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By *lkDomWhtSubBiCpleCouple
over a year ago

Somewhere / Everywhere /Kinksville


"Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio "

My advice is, why haven't you contacted us yet

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio

Lol. You do realise that's just part of my very professional legal warning to Sydney uni?

I didn't

Well in that case it's great "

I'll amen it so it's not confuffilating

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By *VineMan
over a year ago

Just north of Bristol


"Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio

My advice is, why haven't you contacted us yet "

Nice profile but it would be nice to see a few whole body pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nice profile.just lose the dick pics

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By *lkDomWhtSubBiCpleCouple
over a year ago

Somewhere / Everywhere /Kinksville


"Passion8... Good variety of pics, only thing I don't like is the last sentence on your bio

My advice is, why haven't you contacted us yet

Nice profile but it would be nice to see a few whole body pics "

Can't you print me off and put me together like a jigsaw

Fair comment. And we need some of Sir too

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By *Devil77Man
over a year ago

West Midlands

Seems fine to me without my help

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Seems fine to me without my help "

I suspect the messages off guys you mention may be because you show several pics of your bum.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Reminds me; need more pics of my bum

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Reminds me; need more pics of my bum "

Says what you dont want but not enough of what you do want x

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By *VineMan
over a year ago

Just north of Bristol


"Nice profile.just lose the dick pics "

Really. The are very subtle ones

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

I'd prefer a long bob hairstyle a la Louise Brookes

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"I'd prefer a long bob hairstyle a la Louise Brookes "
on Passion8

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Nice profile.just lose the dick pics

Really. The are very subtle ones "

Pretty good no need for any help

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I'd prefer a long bob hairstyle a la Louise Brookes on Passion8 "

No dick pics? rude

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Reminds me; need more pics of my bum

Says what you dont want but not enough of what you do want x"

More pics please. You don't need anymore profile text cos you're a lady but it would be icing on the cake.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"I'd prefer a long bob hairstyle a la Louise Brookes on Passion8

No dick pics? rude "

I only send them t' people who ask open mouthed.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I'd prefer a long bob hairstyle a la Louise Brookes on Passion8

No dick pics? rude

I only send them t' people who ask open mouthed. "

(Open mouth emoji)

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'd get a couple of public photos. All good other than that.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I'd get a couple of public photos. All good other than that. "

Lol JUST made em private

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I'd prefer a long bob hairstyle a la Louise Brookes on Passion8 "

I have a blonde bob.

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By *uxom redCouple
over a year ago

Shrewsbury

Passion8

I wouldn't change a thing x

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By *andsonjohnMan
over a year ago

in the eye of the storm


"Passion8

I wouldn't change a thing x"

Great profile but could do with more rear shots to pervy if you've got it show it off

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Very long, I'd have a short paragraph for those too lazy to read at the beginning.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Yes please

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Yours is better than mine so 9

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By *r Stagger LeeMan
over a year ago

torquay

not bad seem honest and humble and to the point, solid 8.

maybe a few arty pics needed

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By *layer oneMan
over a year ago

mirfield

It's ok I would say explaining more about your self as every sentence has "filthy" in it lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Stagger lee, 7 great bio and some decent pics

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By *imon_hydeMan
over a year ago

Stockport


"not bad seem honest and humble and to the point, solid 8.

maybe a few arty pics needed"

It's a good honest profile, just that the reference to the nick cave song is damned scary...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"not bad seem honest and humble and to the point, solid 8.

maybe a few arty pics needed

It's a good honest profile, just that the reference to the nick cave song is damned scary..."

Maybe better pics, but as your not meeting at present, little incentive

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

Maybe better pics, but as your not meeting at present, little incentive "

Great selection of pics and a clear bio, 8

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By *uxom redCouple
over a year ago

Shrewsbury


"

Maybe better pics, but as your not meeting at present, little incentive

Great selection of pics and a clear bio, 8"

It's a good profile

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By *ecretlyASoftieWoman
over a year ago

Hull but travel regularly


"

Maybe better pics, but as your not meeting at present, little incentive

Great selection of pics and a clear bio, 8

It's a good profile "

Good photos, clear text, excellent veris. No advice really

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

Maybe better pics, but as your not meeting at present, little incentive

Great selection of pics and a clear bio, 8

It's a good profile

Good photos, clear text, excellent veris. No advice really "

An excellent profile, well written and great pictures. Maybe the text is a little over long but I'm being picky

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

All looks good to me.

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By *ecretlyASoftieWoman
over a year ago

Hull but travel regularly


"

Maybe better pics, but as your not meeting at present, little incentive

Great selection of pics and a clear bio, 8

It's a good profile

Good photos, clear text, excellent veris. No advice really

An excellent profile, well written and great pictures. Maybe the text is a little over long but I'm being picky "

So am I

But I know what you mean, I've tried to distill it as much as poss x

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By *ecretlyASoftieWoman
over a year ago

Hull but travel regularly


"All looks good to me."

More pics please

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By *akey.r8Man
over a year ago

Travelling with work

Really rather artistic! Love it!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Does what it says on the tin i suppose lol

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By *uckandbunnyCouple
over a year ago

The Wild Wetness


"Does what it says on the tin i suppose lol"

I'd drop the "at some point I'll improve this profile"

Makes people think you are not serious. Ie they will come back when it's ready.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Oh yous have great pics

Not much yous could improve

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By *uckOfTheBayMan
over a year ago

Mold

Findme ... how long are you going to be looking at updating your profile ?

Get a move on

Just be grateful for any message without asking for a face pic

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Oh yous have great pics

Not much yous could improve

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Lovely photos but you could say more in your profile about yourself.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Id say its a bit thin but you kinda cover that off. My experience women want more not lesss though...Not sure though. I'm not the best fabber in the world lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Id say its a bit thin but you kinda cover that off. My experience women want more not lesss though...Not sure though. I'm not the best fabber in the world lol"

I actually think you have a great profile. You're missing the "o" in the word "to" in your last sentence. Other than that, I really like it.

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By *r Stagger LeeMan
over a year ago

torquay

very nice clear and polite and to the point, plus a nice variety of pics.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Passion8

I wouldn't change a thing x"

Aw. Thank you xxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

I actually think you have a great profile. You're missing the "o" in the word "to" in your last sentence. Other than that, I really like it. "

Oh thanks, I'm never sure how good mine is. Sseems a tad silly sometimes. Thanks for the spell check to, hadnt seen that!

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

It's a good profile. I'd leave it as it is. More photos is always good.

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By *uckandbunnyCouple
over a year ago

The Wild Wetness


"Oh yous have great pics

Not much yous could improve "

You are a sweetie

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By *rinking-in-laCouple
over a year ago

Bristol


"

You are a sweetie "

Nice profile. If anything a little far away from us!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

You are a sweetie

Nice profile. If anything a little far away from us! "

Ok profile, could do with a bit more details 5

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

You are a sweetie

Nice profile. If anything a little far away from us!

Ok profile, could do with a bit more details 5"

Ok profile, could do with more pics using soap in the shower and less underwear hahah

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Your profile is perfect

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Miss Innocent -good profile, lots of pics, clear pics so people know exactly what you look like.

Profile text is unambiguous - very clear what you're like and what you're looking for. Solid 9 out of 10.

The OP asks for advice to improve - hmmm toughie! Maybe your username? I can't believe you're *that* innocent!!

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Miss Innocent -good profile, lots of pics, clear pics so people know exactly what you look like.

Profile text is unambiguous - very clear what you're like and what you're looking for. Solid 9 out of 10.

The OP asks for advice to improve - hmmm toughie! Maybe your username? I can't believe you're *that* innocent!! "

Great profile...lays out everything you need to know about DanBerks in one neat package. Good selection of interesting and humourous pics too. Single guys looking for profile advice would do well to read this one and take some tips from it. Gets a 10/10 from me.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Gemini : ah thank you my friend, really nice words that I appreciate!

Without wishing to sound like a mutual backslapping society I think I can pretty much mirror your comments - an excellent profile with some varied pics and exceptionally clear write up that explains everything a prospective suitor needs to know! A solid 10 for a 'single' male profile even if you're also part of a hot swinging couple

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By *exysuzi and Mr.SCouple
over a year ago

CONISTON .Stoke Suburbia. MOORLANDS & BARMOUTH.

What else is there to say. A perfect profile. Great pics.

Would love to meet, if only you had a companion to join you.

Xxxxx Suzi

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By *ashedMan
over a year ago

hemel

Some lovely photos . But profile went on a little but think the photos will catch peoples eye

Xxxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Some lovely photos . But profile went on a little but think the photos will catch peoples eye

Xxxx"

Pics are all about those unusual pants and your penis. Too much of that I think.

I don't really get an impression of 'you' from your spiel.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

It makes for interesting times in the toilet

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Maybe just remove the

Not meeting that often but apart from that good profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"It makes for interesting times in the toilet "

Oh Steve, you know all you gotta do is ask

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Dundeelad 2, just cock pics and not much to read

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By *loppsyWoman
over a year ago

marlow

I'm in..... braced and ready .....

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By *loppsyWoman
over a year ago

marlow

dathuilbastsaird..... to be fair pretty awesome profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Definitely a solid profile! The only think I would say is your first picture looks as though the lingerie is a little baggy and not as flattering as it could be... I'm clutching at straws though

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

This is the part where I ask to be roasted then I guess... no jokes please

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Maybe just remove the

Not meeting that often but apart from that good profile"

But I don't meet very often!!!

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"This is the part where I ask to be roasted then I guess... no jokes please "

You have a cock pic and a face pic and say that you hve in your profile. You could say something else instead.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"This is the part where I ask to be roasted then I guess... no jokes please

You have a cock pic and a face pic and say that you hve in your profile. You could say something else instead. "

Bring back the abs

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Always one bright spark! changed, cheers!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers! "

seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers!

seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time."

Pauly, great pics, great profile

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers!

seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time."

Fell asleep at 'slim'

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers!

seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time.

Pauly, great pics, great profile "

I like it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers!

seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time.

Fell asleep at 'slim' "

do you sleep on your front?

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Can I just say that my current profile wording is actually designed NOT to attract anyone? I have a proper wording for those who are interested.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Can I just say that my current profile wording is actually designed NOT to attract anyone? I have a proper wording for those who are interested. "

uses promises of wine and haribos to get laid.... for shame

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers!

seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time.

Fell asleep at 'slim'

do you sleep on your front? "

Only on the beach

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers!

seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time.

Fell asleep at 'slim'

do you sleep on your front?

Only on the beach "

My only criticism is that you could do with a bigger bag of haribo's!

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit


"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers!

seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time.

Fell asleep at 'slim'

do you sleep on your front?

Only on the beach

My only criticism is that you could do with a bigger bag of haribo's!"

Good blurb that explains clearly what the profile is used for and good selection of pics - nothing else needed

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Always one bright spark! changed, cheers!

seems bonza... I have no doubt you will be verified in no time.

Fell asleep at 'slim'

do you sleep on your front?

Only on the beach

My only criticism is that you could do with a bigger bag of haribo's!

Good blurb that explains clearly what the profile is used for and good selection of pics - nothing else needed "

Well written, if a little long.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

More leg pics

Kinky

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"More leg pics

Kinky "

It's a bit bossy but I'm assuming that's a product of the master/slave scenario. I always think the harsher the master, the more gentle the profile simply to really get into people's heads.

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By *iya2015Man
over a year ago

Hythe


"More leg pics

Kinky

It's a bit bossy but I'm assuming that's a product of the master/slave scenario. I always think the harsher the master, the more gentle the profile simply to really get into people's heads. "

Seems fine, decent pics, honest and to the point,

Well done sir

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Well written with some good pictures well done young chap its a great profile

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By *uckOfTheBayMan
over a year ago

Mold

Not enough pictures of his pooch !

And you block single males, so I can't pm you

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By *ouisebottomTV/TS
over a year ago

London

Make your last pic uploaded your profile pic very funny x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Make your last pic uploaded your profile pic very funny x"

You're clear about what you're looking for which is good.

The Legal Notice is a complete waste of space on your profile.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Make your last pic uploaded your profile pic very funny x

You're clear about what you're looking for which is good.

The Legal Notice is a complete waste of space on your profile."

Great profile. So much better now there's more variety in your style of pics.

Reminds me; I need to pen a new Sydney paragraph

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Make your last pic uploaded your profile pic very funny x

You're clear about what you're looking for which is good.

The Legal Notice is a complete waste of space on your profile.

Great profile. So much better now there's more variety in your style of pics.

Reminds me; I need to pen a new Sydney paragraph "

Says exactly what it needs to say, with a nice wink to Sydney.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Looks OK to us

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Mr shep

No advice.needed.

Decent profile.

Mr

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Mr shep

No advice.needed.

Decent profile.

Mr"

Cant find a thing wrong with it.

So my advice is

Keep up the good work

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Mr shep

No advice.needed.

Decent profile.

Mr

Cant find a thing wrong with it.

So my advice is

Keep up the good work "

Cracking

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

Cant find a thing wrong with it.

So my advice is

Keep up the good work "

Nor me with yours. Good photos of both of you, meet parameters set in profile, not pushy.

Good profile!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

Cant find a thing wrong with it.

So my advice is

Keep up the good work

Nor me with yours. Good photos of both of you, meet parameters set in profile, not pushy.

Good profile!"

Might want to reconsider your username seeing as you're straight.

Just sayin

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Maybe a pic with your shirt off. Everything else fine.

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By *iamondjoeMan
over a year ago

Glastonbury

Arty pics; needs more meets and better meat

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

Cant find a thing wrong with it.

So my advice is

Keep up the good work

Nor me with yours. Good photos of both of you, meet parameters set in profile, not pushy.

Good profile!

Might want to reconsider your username seeing as you're straight.

Just sayin "

Lol straights eh!?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Arty pics; needs more meets and better meat"

I can't improve my meat!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Write something to describe yourself and what you are after. Not just "nothing else"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

No way! I'm no sheep.

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