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By *emolitionman85 OP   Man
over a year ago

Basildon

Morning u lovely lot have had a refresh of my profile could u let me know what u think be as brutal and honest as possible please thanks guys n gals

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

yikes...... cant comment on the content as the large monosyllabic block of text made my eyes go

Might be better to split it up into manageable size paragraphs to make it easier to read..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By *emolitionman85 OP   Man
over a year ago

Basildon

Thanks will break it up

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Thanks will break it up "

That's a gazillion times easier on the eye,,,

Best of luck...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

May want to just check the grammar content on it, your missing a few comas, spaces, capital letter for your name, bits like that.

May also want to consider swapping and for all the n's

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By *emolitionman85 OP   Man
over a year ago

Basildon

Cheers sparks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Cut the text speak.

Only show one cock picture.

Get rid of the trackie picture.

* Personal preference only. Others may disagree.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Good luck fella

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