FabSwingers.com forum: Dammit I’m Mad

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Dammit I’m mad.

Evil is a deed as I live.

God, am I reviled? I rise, my bed on a sun, I melt.

To be not one man emanating is sad. I piss.

Alas, it is so late. Who stops to help?

Man, it is hot. I’m in it. I tell.

I am not a devil. I level “Mad Dog”.

Ah, say burning is, as a deified gulp,

In my halo of a mired rum tin.

I erase many men. Oh, to be man, a sin.

Is evil in a clam? In a trap?

No. It is open. On it I was stuck.

Rats peed on hope. Elsewhere dips a web.

Be still if I fill its ebb.

Ew, a spider… eh?

We sleep. Oh no!

Deep, stark cuts saw it in one position.

Part animal, can I live? Sin is a name.

Both, one… my names are in it.

Murder? I’m a fool.

A hymn I plug, deified as a sign in ruby ash.

A Goddam level I lived at.

On mail let it in. I’m it.

Oh, sit in ample hot spots. Oh wet!

A loss it is alas (sip). I’d assign it a name.N

ame not one bottle minus an ode by me:

“Sir, I deliver. I’m a dog”

Evil is a deed as I live.

Dammit I’m mad.

Dimitri Martin is a genius

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over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I actually never found him all that funny.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I actually never found him all that funny.

I didn't say he was funny - I said he was very clever.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

As a box of frogs?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Yes Lib, you are absolutely right, hey you would look great in this nice white coat I have... Try it on, let me help with the long sleeves....

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By *igeiaWoman
over a year ago

Bristol

I like him. And he plays piano. Bonus.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

It's a palindrome by the way, in case no one realised.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Yo banana boy

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I realised. Wonder how long it took him to write it.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Yo banana boy

On the other end of the scale

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I actually never found him all that funny.

I didn't say he was funny - I said he was very clever."

Well, excuse me!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"It's a palindrome by the way, in case no one realised."

Not much of it is a palindrome.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"It's a palindrome by the way, in case no one realised."

I realised but have to say never heard of this genius

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"It's a palindrome by the way, in case no one realised.

Not much of it is a palindrome."

Not each sentence - the whole thing.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Wow! I thought some sentences were but I didn't realise the whole thing was a palindrome.

Very clever

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Yo banana boy

On the other end of the scale

I've no idea what you're talking about - I was just saying hello

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By *iamondjoeMan
over a year ago

Glastonbury

Whowiththewherewiththewhatnow?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"It's a palindrome by the way, in case no one realised.

Not much of it is a palindrome."

Just the whole thing.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I actually never found him all that funny.

I didn't say he was funny - I said he was very clever.

Well, excuse me!

Pwned.

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over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

@.......

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I thought 'If I' was a really good show.

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By *exysuzi and Mr.SCouple
over a year ago

CONISTON .Stoke Suburbia. Staffs. BARMOUTH. The Lakes (Monthly)

Who is this guy ???? And what is a palindrome

Xxxxx Suzi

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Zzzzzzz

Lighten up fella

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Who is this guy ???? And what is a palindrome

Xxxxx Suzi"

It's a word that's read the same backwards as it is forwards. As 'Hannah'

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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound

This is the only thing I have seen of his: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eU3vqkPFJi8

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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Dammit I’m mad.

Evil is a deed as I live.

God, am I reviled? I rise, my bed on a sun, I melt.

To be not one man emanating is sad. I piss.

Alas, it is so late. Who stops to help?

Man, it is hot. I’m in it. I tell.

I am not a devil. I level “Mad Dog”.

Ah, say burning is, as a deified gulp,

In my halo of a mired rum tin.

I erase many men. Oh, to be man, a sin.

Is evil in a clam? In a trap?

No. It is open. On it I was stuck.

Rats peed on hope. Elsewhere dips a web.

Be still if I fill its ebb.

Ew, a spider… eh?

We sleep. Oh no!

Deep, stark cuts saw it in one position.

Part animal, can I live? Sin is a name.

Both, one… my names are in it.

Murder? I’m a fool.

A hymn I plug, deified as a sign in ruby ash.

A Goddam level I lived at.

On mail let it in. I’m it.

Oh, sit in ample hot spots. Oh wet!

A loss it is alas (sip). I’d assign it a name.N

ame not one bottle minus an ode by me:

“Sir, I deliver. I’m a dog”

Evil is a deed as I live.

Dammit I’m mad.

Dimitri Martin is a genius"

.. Dimitri Martin is a guy with too much time on his hands

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

my phone killed someone on half a battery, it was never charged

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By *exysuzi and Mr.SCouple
over a year ago

CONISTON .Stoke Suburbia. Staffs. BARMOUTH. The Lakes (Monthly)

"Who is this guy ???? And what is a palindrome

Xxxxx Suzi

It's a word that's read the same backwards as it is forwards. As 'Hannah' "

Oh, ok. ...... so what has a palindrome got to do with the poem, verse, speech or whatever it is.

I don't get it

Xxxxx Suzi

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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound

"Who is this guy ???? And what is a palindrome

Xxxxx Suzi

It's a word that's read the same backwards as it is forwards. As 'Hannah'

Oh, ok. ...... so what has a palindrome got to do with the poem, verse, speech or whatever it is.

I don't get it

Xxxxx Suzi"

Every line, from the title to the end, can be read backwards. The letters all work to read the same sentence either way.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Who is this guy ???? And what is a palindrome

Xxxxx Suzi

It's a word that's read the same backwards as it is forwards. As 'Hannah'

Oh, ok. ...... so what has a palindrome got to do with the poem, verse, speech or whatever it is.

I don't get it

Xxxxx Suzi

Every line, from the title to the end, can be read backwards. The letters all work to read the same sentence either way.

It's not really its a word or phrase or sentence read forwards as it is backwards. As I said above

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By *exysuzi and Mr.SCouple
over a year ago

CONISTON .Stoke Suburbia. Staffs. BARMOUTH. The Lakes (Monthly)

I can only read the first 2 lines and the last 2 lines backwards....... The others make no sense...

Am I missing something here, or am I just completely thick.

so annoying xxxx Suzi

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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I can only read the first 2 lines and the last 2 lines backwards....... The others make no sense...

Am I missing something here, or am I just completely thick.

so annoying xxxx Suzi"

It reads backwards and forwards the same. Look at the letters, not the words.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Wow! I thought some sentences were but I didn't realise the whole thing was a palindrome.

Very clever

Yes. True. But it is shit. It is clever. But shit.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Wow! I thought some sentences were but I didn't realise the whole thing was a palindrome.

Very clever

Yes. True. But it is shit. It is clever. But shit."

That pretty much sums up Dimitri Martin's routine, in my opinion

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

That's nice dear.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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over a year ago

"I can only read the first 2 lines and the last 2 lines backwards....... The others make no sense...

Am I missing something here, or am I just completely thick.

so annoying xxxx Suzi"

Are you being funny ? I've answered you twice now and you've completely ignored my answer! Is that because you directed it at someone else ? And that's why you've choose to ignore me?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

My replys get completely blanked ,, strange

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"My replys get completely blanked ,, strange"

Did someone say something??

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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound

"My replys get completely blanked ,, strange"

I replied to one of yours but deleted it as it would confuse things further.

Don't take it to heart - most of us get overlooked on threads.

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By *iamondjoeMan
over a year ago

Glastonbury

Oh, just LOL.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Dullsville.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I thought it had shades of Beckett or Larkin about it. Now I realise the whole thing is a clever palindromic construction I would put it closer to the work of Cage. Much of his poetry is similarly absurdist, post-modernist, deconstructivist baloney!

This is clever on the level of being palindromic and initially kidding the reader that it is somehow philosophically or intellectually significant. However, it clearly isn't and as such it is rendered less poetry and more accurately described as doggerel!

I tend to agree with those who felt this work is evidence the poet has far too much time on his hands. Clever, perhaps? Genius, no!

And it failed to include my all-time favourite palindrome: racecar!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I thought it had shades of Beckett or Larkin about it. Now I realise the whole thing is a clever palindromic construction I would put it closer to the work of Cage. Much of his poetry is similarly absurdist, post-modernist, deconstructivist baloney!

I tend to agree with those who felt this work is evidence the poet has far too much time on his hands. Clever, perhaps? Genius, no!

And it failed to include my all-time favourite palindrome: racecar!

Fooled you though,until someone told you it was a palindrome. What if it wasn't?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I like him. And he plays piano. Bonus."

Delighted you like people who play the piano! There are millions of us around! Not really a reason to be impressed by people though! Unless they're a top pro!

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over a year ago

I tend to agree with those who felt this work is evidence the poet has far too much time on his hands. Clever, perhaps? Genius, no!

And it failed to include my all-time favourite palindrome: racecar!

Fooled you though,until someone told you it was a palindrome. What if it wasn't?"

The construction of a poem can be clever - the strict rules about the form of a sonnet for example! However, if any meaning is lost purely at the expense of the form of the poem, or at least some literary significance in the way the words are played with, the poem becomes little better than the second-rate musings of a pompous undergraduate!

Read John Cage's take on the poem 'The Lake Isle of Innisfree'. I read it as an undergrad myself. It's all about the form - the deconstruction of the original poem. The meaning is the form and the form is the meaning. I think Martin is trying to do much more with his poem, but fails.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"My replys get completely blanked ,, strange

Did someone say something??

That's so funny , NOT

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"My replys get completely blanked ,, strange

Did someone say something??

That's so funny , NOT"

No seriously why say that ? So your friends laugh at me? Give you thumbs up? Because I'm not as popular as you ?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

So so many palindromes!

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over a year ago

"My replys get completely blanked ,, strange

Did someone say something??

That's so funny , NOT

No seriously why say that ? So your friends laugh at me? Give you thumbs up? Because I'm not as popular as you ? "

I was joking.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Please lord give us strength

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"My replys get completely blanked ,, strange

Did someone say something??

That's so funny , NOT

No seriously why say that ? So your friends laugh at me? Give you thumbs up? Because I'm not as popular as you ?

I was joking.

Ok I'm sorry I took it the wrong way. I apologise

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I tend to agree with those who felt this work is evidence the poet has far too much time on his hands. Clever, perhaps? Genius, no!

And it failed to include my all-time favourite palindrome: racecar!

Fooled you though,until someone told you it was a palindrome. What if it wasn't?

I'm not really a poetry person.

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over a year ago

I tend to agree with those who felt this work is evidence the poet has far too much time on his hands. Clever, perhaps? Genius, no!

And it failed to include my all-time favourite palindrome: racecar!

Fooled you though,until someone told you it was a palindrome. What if it wasn't?

I'm not really a poetry person. "

there was once a woman named bad-nanna,

though her real name was anna,

from time to time,

she'd often whine,

while inserting a huge banana

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By *exysuzi and Mr.SCouple
over a year ago

CONISTON .Stoke Suburbia. Staffs. BARMOUTH. The Lakes (Monthly)

"I can only read the first 2 lines and the last 2 lines backwards....... The others make no sense...

Am I missing something here, or am I just completely thick.

so annoying xxxx Suzi

Are you being funny ? I've answered you twice now and you've completely ignored my answer! Is that because you directed it at someone else ? And that's why you've choose to ignore me? "

Excuse me . I think you will find if you bother to scroll back, I replied to your comment with ""oh, ok"" then I asked another question.

No problem, apology accepted. Get facts right first xxxxx Suzi

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

This thread is a mess. Yeah OP, I agree, he's really good at what he does.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I can only read the first 2 lines and the last 2 lines backwards....... The others make no sense...

Am I missing something here, or am I just completely thick.

so annoying xxxx Suzi

Are you being funny ? I've answered you twice now and you've completely ignored my answer! Is that because you directed it at someone else ? And that's why you've choose to ignore me?

Excuse me . I think you will find if you bother to scroll back, I replied to your comment with ""oh, ok"" then I asked another question.

No problem, apology accepted. Get facts right first xxxxx Suzi "

And then you went on to ask the same question again !!! X. LOLA

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I can only read the first 2 lines and the last 2 lines backwards....... The others make no sense...

Am I missing something here, or am I just completely thick.

so annoying xxxx Suzi

Are you being funny ? I've answered you twice now and you've completely ignored my answer! Is that because you directed it at someone else ? And that's why you've choose to ignore me?

Excuse me . I think you will find if you bother to scroll back, I replied to your comment with ""oh, ok"" then I asked another question.

No problem, apology accepted. Get facts right first xxxxx Suzi

And then you went on to ask the same question again !!! X. LOLA"
Come now girls kiss suck and fuck

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I can only read the first 2 lines and the last 2 lines backwards....... The others make no sense...

Am I missing something here, or am I just completely thick.

so annoying xxxx Suzi

Are you being funny ? I've answered you twice now and you've completely ignored my answer! Is that because you directed it at someone else ? And that's why you've choose to ignore me?

Excuse me . I think you will find if you bother to scroll back, I replied to your comment with ""oh, ok"" then I asked another question.

No problem, apology accepted. Get facts right first xxxxx Suzi

And then you went on to ask the same question again !!! X. LOLA"

And where did I apologise to you ?

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By *exysuzi and Mr.SCouple
over a year ago

CONISTON .Stoke Suburbia. Staffs. BARMOUTH. The Lakes (Monthly)

"I can only read the first 2 lines and the last 2 lines backwards....... The others make no sense...

Am I missing something here, or am I just completely thick.

so annoying xxxx Suzi

Are you being funny ? I've answered you twice now and you've completely ignored my answer! Is that because you directed it at someone else ? And that's why you've choose to ignore me?

Excuse me . I think you will find if you bother to scroll back, I replied to your comment with ""oh, ok"" then I asked another question.

No problem, apology accepted. Get facts right first xxxxx Suzi

And then you went on to ask the same question again !!! X. LOLACome now girls kiss suck and fuck

..... Suzi xxxxxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ok suzi, whatever

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

There was once a lady called Suzi,

Who down in the town was a floosie,

The boys all around

Would give her a pound

And enjoy her renowned little pussy!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

There was once a lady called Lola,

She was a showgirl...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Am I in the running for Poet Laureate yet?

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over a year ago

"There was once a lady called Lola,

She was a showgirl...

With yellow feathers in her hair and her dress cut down to there

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By *exysuzi and Mr.SCouple
over a year ago

CONISTON .Stoke Suburbia. Staffs. BARMOUTH. The Lakes (Monthly)

"There was once a lady called Suzi,

Who down in the town was a floosie,

The boys all around

Would give her a pound

And enjoy her renowned little pussy!

..... only a pound !!!!! As in money ??? Or as in a good, hard pound ???? Xxxxxx Suzi

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Why can't I see some messages ? Only replies

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very strange

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Obviously a poke at me. After I apologised ,, strange

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I'm glad it got people talking/thinking.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Yes and for some reason I've got Nasty PMs of the ladies on here.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"My replys get completely blanked ,, strange

Did someone say something??

That's so funny , NOT

No seriously why say that ? So your friends laugh at me? Give you thumbs up? Because I'm not as popular as you ?

I was joking.

Ok I'm sorry I took it the wrong way. I apologise "

No worries

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Obviously a poke at me. After I apologised ,, strange "

Are you talking about me? I only just came back to the thread. I didn't see your response until now...

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over a year ago

"There was once a lady called Suzi,

Who down in the town was a floosie,

The boys all around

Would give her a pound

And enjoy her renowned little pussy!

..... only a pound !!!!! As in money ??? Or as in a good, hard pound ???? Xxxxxx Suzi "

Suzy, the double entendre was deliberate!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Why can't I see some messages ? Only replies "

I'm pretty sure you can see the same posts as me.

I think some didn't understand what the poem was about at first, including me. I knew it included palindromes but didn't realise the whole thing was a palindrome.

I think it's cleverly done.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Obviously a poke at me. After I apologised ,, strange

Are you talking about me? I only just came back to the thread. I didn't see your response until now..."

No not you at all x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Obviously a poke at me. After I apologised ,, strange

Are you talking about me? I only just came back to the thread. I didn't see your response until now...

No not you at all x"

Cool

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's taken me a while to suss it out that's for sure!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Why can't I see some messages ? Only replies

I'm pretty sure you can see the same posts as me.

I think some didn't understand what the poem was about at first, including me. I knew it included palindromes but didn't realise the whole thing was a palindrome.

I think it's cleverly done."

And no I'm pretty sure I can't !! I go back and messages are missing. Just like I got a 24hr ban as a member reported me yet I've seen worse on here and nothing gets done. If your face fits it's ok , if you agree with with the majority it's ok. My posts have been deleted loads of times so I know it happens. Esp if your friends with a mod or admin

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By *ce WingerMan
over a year ago

P.O. Box DE1 0NQ

"I'm glad it got people talking/thinking.

It's certainly got some people making "lively" posts

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By *exysuzi and Mr.SCouple
over a year ago

CONISTON .Stoke Suburbia. Staffs. BARMOUTH. The Lakes (Monthly)

"Yes and for some reason I've got Nasty PMs of the ladies on here. "

Not off me you haven't ..... xxxxxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

So am I now, we've had a power cut for 30 mins, living in the country isn't all beer and skittles, balls! This means "early" to bed as phone's going down also, still be able to listen to the Hunan sinus for longer, yay!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Yes and for some reason I've got Nasty PMs of the ladies on here.

Not off me you haven't ..... xxxxxx

Did I mention names?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Yes and for some reason I've got Nasty PMs of the ladies on here.

Not off me you haven't ..... xxxxxx

Did I mention names?"

Two lovely formites haven't even commented on this thread,but they've pm me, blocked me the other week then unblock me sent me a messsge and blocked me again

how cool is that

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over a year ago

Wow.

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over a year ago

I tend to agree with those who felt this work is evidence the poet has far too much time on his hands. Clever, perhaps? Genius, no!

And it failed to include my all-time favourite palindrome: racecar!

Please, feel free to do better.

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over a year ago

Well I don't know what the fuck happened in this thread, but I think the palindrome is pretty clever. Of course it's not going to be meaningful poetry, ffs, the limitations of making the entire fucking thing a palindrome are quite substantial.

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over a year ago

It gladdens my heart that, even in this digital age, poetry is still capable of causing controversy and outrage.

Nest week: A thread on dry stone walling leads to multiple casualties and the re-start of the cold war...

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over a year ago

"It gladdens my heart that, even in this digital age, poetry is still capable of causing controversy and outrage.

Nest week: A thread on dry stone walling leads to multiple casualties and the re-start of the cold war... "

You jest, but I've seen one about Yorkshire puddings kick off big style

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"It gladdens my heart that, even in this digital age, poetry is still capable of causing controversy and outrage.

Nest week: A thread on dry stone walling leads to multiple casualties and the re-start of the cold war...

You jest, but I've seen one about Yorkshire puddings kick off big style "

Damn, I must have missed that one

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over a year ago

In the words of that great lyricist Midge Ure, 'this means nothing to me'...

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"It gladdens my heart that, even in this digital age, poetry is still capable of causing controversy and outrage.

Nest week: A thread on dry stone walling leads to multiple casualties and the re-start of the cold war...

You jest, but I've seen one about Yorkshire puddings kick off big style "

Was it the whisk v wooden spoon controversy? Wars have been fought over less...

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