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Those same old phrases....

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I love the Stories & Fantasies section but get a little bored of phrases such as "... cock glistening with pre-cum".

Anything that makes you think "Great story, oh no.... here we go again, yawn!"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

That's a very specific kinda rant

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By *am-RaiderMan
over a year ago

Corby


"That's a very specific kinda rant "

Yeah cliches can ruin even a well written story but even worse to my mind are the ones with basic grammar mistakes and bad spelling.

Some just seem to be one long sentence and others have no idea of the concept of tense..moving randomly from past to present and first to third person.

Really puts me off my strum!

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