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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside

ok so you are all sexy and kinky so and sos so i want to pick your conceptual ideas..

some of you have liked my stories here but i want to develop the scenes into something with a plot..i find scenes easy to write but not

the structure of how people could meet realistically,

how kink etc gets introduced,

the purpose of the whole story..

the deeper psychology behind the

characters

so this tuesday, if you are inspired or bored, please offer your inspired suggestions on this thread and be my storytime collective muse...

thank you

s x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like vampires

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like vampires "
please elaborate..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like vampires "

I like clowns

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like vampires

I like clowns"

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By *mm_n_ZedCouple
over a year ago

Fareham

I like medical fantasies

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like vampires please elaborate.."

Being captured / taken by a paranormal Alpha Male

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like vampires

I like clowns"

I have a red nose and funny hair

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like medical fantasies"

cool

any realistic suggestions where the two medical fantasy fanatics would meet?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like vampires

I like clowns

"

Actually clowns are quite scary

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like vampires please elaborate..

Being captured / taken by a paranormal Alpha Male

"

have you read the gor books?..if not you really might like them x

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scary"

i dont find them erotic at all

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all"

Like the idea of vampires, that could be interesting

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all"

Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all

Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn"

Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

As I'm a builder I love it when the female client is very suggestive ....but professionalism spoils it ....unless I'm working for fab members

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all

Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn

Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!! "

I know i think i need help

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By *ex mad ladMan
over a year ago

Sussex

I'd agree

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all

Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn

Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!

I know i think i need help "

well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all

Like the idea of vampires, that could be interesting "

most humans are parasites..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like medical fantasies

cool

any realistic suggestions where the two medical fantasy fanatics would meet?"

In the morgue, it's quiet in there, x

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all

Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn"

i bet youve got sound of music on dvd havent you?..come on admit it

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like medical fantasies

cool

any realistic suggestions where the two medical fantasy fanatics would meet?

In the morgue, it's quiet in there, x"

you are a seriously troubled lot

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all

Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn

Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!

I know i think i need help well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material "

Hmmm i dont know,a load of nuns sucking clowns off

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all

Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn

Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!

I know i think i need help well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material

Hmmm i dont know,a load of nuns sucking clowns off "

its that the nilla world

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all

Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn

Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!

I know i think i need help well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material

Hmmm i dont know,a load of nuns sucking clowns off "

Oh and bu the way the collective noun for nuns is a "superfluity of nuns"

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By *erdita Von TeaseWoman
over a year ago

nottingham

The story of what happened in kinkys fab bdsm club

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all

Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn

Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!

I know i think i need help well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material

Hmmm i dont know,a load of nuns sucking clowns off

Oh and bu the way the collective noun for nuns is a "superfluity of nuns""

as if i give a flying fuck

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"The story of what happened in kinkys fab bdsm club "
nothing happened they all got pissed which isnt ethical in BDSM you would all in a proper establishment been asked to leave

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all

Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn

Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!

I know i think i need help well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material

Hmmm i dont know,a load of nuns sucking clowns off

Oh and bu the way the collective noun for nuns is a "superfluity of nuns"as if i give a flying fuck

"

You need to be spanked suzi

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow "

Hahaha how cute

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I like medical fantasies

cool

any realistic suggestions where the two medical fantasy fanatics would meet?"

A Dr stumbles across a person who has been knocked out, with a bomb strapped to their genitals, specific instructions are left by some mysterious person which states the person must achieve an orgasm every 30 minutes or the bomb will explode. If they tell anyone, call the police, or one leaves the other, the bomb will explode.

If they try to remove the bomb, it will explode.

To complicate matters even more, you could add in the orgasm must be achieved in certain areas of the city as detailed by the culprit.

Like porn version of speed maybe?

Not that I've spent time thinking about this at all......

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like vampires

I like clowns

Actually clowns are quite scaryi dont find them erotic at all

Not in the same league as nuns,i really need to stop watching german porn

Clowns & nuns, seriously wtf!!

I know i think i need help well its hardly the basis for a widely appealing erotc novel..more like horror comic strip material

Hmmm i dont know,a load of nuns sucking clowns off

Oh and bu the way the collective noun for nuns is a "superfluity of nuns"as if i give a flying fuck

You need to be spanked suzi"

probably its been far too long and i find unrealistic fantasy a complete turnoff..no better than a 50 shades spin off..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow

Hahaha how cute"

fk off

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow "
ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow

Hahaha how cute

fk off "

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"I like medical fantasies

cool

any realistic suggestions where the two medical fantasy fanatics would meet?

A Dr stumbles across a person who has been knocked out, with a bomb strapped to their genitals, specific instructions are left by some mysterious person which states the person must achieve an orgasm every 30 minutes or the bomb will explode. If they tell anyone, call the police, or one leaves the other, the bomb will explode.

If they try to remove the bomb, it will explode.

To complicate matters even more, you could add in the orgasm must be achieved in certain areas of the city as detailed by the culprit.

Like porn version of speed maybe?

Not that I've spent time thinking about this at all...... "

that is a scene..not a novel plit,,but at least you can string a story together to make sense..thankyou for your contribution x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx"

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

"

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead..."

]

i want an 'in your face' emote haha

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]

i want an 'in your face' emote haha"

you liked unicorn hotel right?

did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]

i want an 'in your face' emote haha

you liked unicorn hotel right?

did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense"

i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]

i want an 'in your face' emote haha

you liked unicorn hotel right?

did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense

i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon "

im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

If i could come up with a plot I'd be Writing my own novel not giving away my ideas

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"If i could come up with a plot I'd be Writing my own novel not giving away my ideas "
fair enough,,some people are concept people and dont like writing though. im not nicking peoples ideas im asking for suggestive inspiration i can run with x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]

i want an 'in your face' emote haha

you liked unicorn hotel right?

did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense

i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx"

dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]

i want an 'in your face' emote haha

you liked unicorn hotel right?

did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense

i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx

dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf "

hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"If i could come up with a plot I'd be Writing my own novel not giving away my ideas fair enough,,some people are concept people and dont like writing though. im not nicking peoples ideas im asking for suggestive inspiration i can run with x"

It was meant in a jokey way...o wasn't suggesting you were stealing ideas x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]

i want an 'in your face' emote haha

you liked unicorn hotel right?

did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense

i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx

dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf

hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx"

you know it

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]

i want an 'in your face' emote haha

you liked unicorn hotel right?

did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense

i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx

dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf

hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx

you know it "

minx..im saving petrol money as we speak x

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By *edsBonkingMan
over a year ago

Near MK


"ok so you are all sexy and kinky so and sos so i want to pick your conceptual ideas..

some of you have liked my stories here but i want to develop the scenes into something with a plot..i find scenes easy to write but not

the structure of how people could meet realistically,

how kink etc gets introduced,

the purpose of the whole story..

the deeper psychology behind the

characters

so this tuesday, if you are inspired or bored, please offer your inspired suggestions on this thread and be my storytime collective muse...

thank you

s x"

I've got a couple of rolepaly scripts from something ago. Maybe you could find something in there to help you. Mail me if interested.

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"ok so you are all sexy and kinky so and sos so i want to pick your conceptual ideas..

some of you have liked my stories here but i want to develop the scenes into something with a plot..i find scenes easy to write but not

the structure of how people could meet realistically,

how kink etc gets introduced,

the purpose of the whole story..

the deeper psychology behind the

characters

so this tuesday, if you are inspired or bored, please offer your inspired suggestions on this thread and be my storytime collective muse...

thank you

s x

I've got a couple of rolepaly scripts from something ago. Maybe you could find something in there to help you. Mail me if interested. "

as i said scning isnt a problem its more the real situations that would realistically work to continue into an erotic/ kink novel x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]

i want an 'in your face' emote haha

you liked unicorn hotel right?

did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense

i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx

dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf

hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx

you know it minx..im saving petrol money as we speak x"

atta girl

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]

i want an 'in your face' emote haha

you liked unicorn hotel right?

did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense

i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx

dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf

hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx

you know it minx..im saving petrol money as we speak x

atta girl

"

sweet do you go to chams i cant remember? x

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over a year ago


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]

i want an 'in your face' emote haha

you liked unicorn hotel right?

did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense

i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx

dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf

hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx

you know it minx..im saving petrol money as we speak x

atta girl

sweet do you go to chams i cant remember? x"

its on our to go to places - but its further afield so we are hoping to go with friends for a weekend and meet some folk there - its been over a year in planning hahah

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"cant two people just meet in the local pool/sauna/ chat over a magazine article whilst sitting on a long train journey - ok im way too shallow ahh the voice of reality..thankyou thankyou..

so all i need is background of what they were doing..why there..how get talking etc..

who are they as people?

ps im glad theres a sane one in here xx

see Rossi - reality required - maybe onto a convention of a kind - if you want to mix in medievil, medical or supernatural

believability is essential for any good story, it allows for the unknown to happen without the reader disengaging..like the psychology of pace and lead...]

i want an 'in your face' emote haha

you liked unicorn hotel right?

did you fill out the gaps of the plot with that story..ive always thought about changing that into a novel..or expanding it..i just need a reason why she would do it or how it would come about and of course a conclusion to the story that makes sense

i loved that - i will re read it and ponder - but not just now got a pile of ladies to abuse soon im going to sulk because im not able to come out and play..the one good thing is that i found 4 shortcake biscuits in my cupboard the kids didnt find..and have demolished them..seriously though have a wonderful time..wish i was there xx

dont sulk - i will have an orgasm or two on your behalf

hahaha go for it...and thanks very thoughtful of you xxxx

you know it minx..im saving petrol money as we speak x

atta girl

sweet do you go to chams i cant remember? x

its on our to go to places - but its further afield so we are hoping to go with friends for a weekend and meet some folk there - its been over a year in planning hahah "

ok xx

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over a year ago

Howsabout a scenario where the attempt to return an item that has been left behind at say, a coffee shop table as they vacate their seat for you?...

Perhaps a diary/notepad with notations on a novel that they are writing (possibly an erotic novel ?) Which you happen to have a look through whilst endeavouring to return it?...

Just an idea though

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"Howsabout a scenario where the attempt to return an item that has been left behind at say, a coffee shop table as they vacate their seat for you?...

Perhaps a diary/notepad with notations on a novel that they are writing (possibly an erotic novel ?) Which you happen to have a look through whilst endeavouring to return it?...

Just an idea though "

yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

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over a year ago


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx"

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

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over a year ago


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

"

Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?

Just an idea xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm currently reading The BFG. I'm no good to you

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over a year ago


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?

Just an idea xx"

max imum flirt potential here

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I'm currently reading The BFG. I'm no good to you "

brill book me and my daughter going to see it at cinema next week - shes 22 im 54 both gonna act like 10 yr olds

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over a year ago


"I'm currently reading The BFG. I'm no good to you

brill book me and my daughter going to see it at cinema next week - shes 22 im 54 both gonna act like 10 yr olds "

I'm excited too. Though it will take some getting used to that The BFG isn't voiced by David Jason.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sorry Suzy - we hijacked your thread like we hijacked your hot tub

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?

Just an idea xx

max imum flirt potential here"

hey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"Sorry Suzy - we hijacked your thread like we hijacked your hot tub "
fick it i dont care..BFG away in my hot tub or not i dont mind xx

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over a year ago


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?

Just an idea xx

max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??"

maybe the old fashioned left bundle of notes - well one manilla folders worth that the finder reads and wonders about - is it research - is it blog - is it story hmmmmm- do they poo poo the stuff they had to nosily read or were they fk yeah i need this in my life

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over a year ago


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?

Just an idea xx

max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??"

you flirt with those sexy eyes mrs x

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?

Just an idea xx

max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??

maybe the old fashioned left bundle of notes - well one manilla folders worth that the finder reads and wonders about - is it research - is it blog - is it story hmmmmm- do they poo poo the stuff they had to nosily read or were they fk yeah i need this in my life "

ok why would she read the stuff and why would she feel the need for it in her life...background character stuff ideas??

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?

Just an idea xx

max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??

you flirt with those sexy eyes mrs x"

i do not! well not on purpose anyway..

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over a year ago


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?

Just an idea xx

max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??

maybe the old fashioned left bundle of notes - well one manilla folders worth that the finder reads and wonders about - is it research - is it blog - is it story hmmmmm- do they poo poo the stuff they had to nosily read or were they fk yeah i need this in my life ok why would she read the stuff and why would she feel the need for it in her life...background character stuff ideas??"

depends what was in the folder - could be typed up notes - or could be scrapbook type ideas

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over a year ago


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?

Just an idea xx

max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??

you flirt with those sexy eyes mrs x i do not! well not on purpose anyway.. "

oh you so do

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Good thread - I'll have a think

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over a year ago


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?

Just an idea xx

max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??"

Hehe! Well I guess it depends on whether you like the slow burn of escalating flirtation building up to the actual invitation of a meeeting, or want it to go straight to the bedroom!(or dungeon) lol

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?

Just an idea xx

max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??

you flirt with those sexy eyes mrs x i do not! well not on purpose anyway..

oh you so do "

not consciously i dont

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"yay a man with an imagination...thankyou hunni...maybe it includes his BDSM checklist..maybe he left it there on purpose...cool...add if you can xx

Or an ongoing exchange takes place as each day he gives up his seat and she gives the notes back with her added ideas/desires?

Maybe leading on from notes to actual full descriptions and explicitly described scenes which blatantly have each other featuring in them?

Just an idea xx

max imum flirt potential herehey im useless at flirting in real life...dont you feel this is a bit 'online'?..maybe one exchange when she gets the book back to him he manages to send her something offering he a rendezvous...or something??

Hehe! Well I guess it depends on whether you like the slow burn of escalating flirtation building up to the actual invitation of a meeeting, or want it to go straight to the bedroom!(or dungeon) lol "

a balance but there hasto be a purpose more than man wants woman...what could that be?

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"Good thread - I'll have a think "
thankyou

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By *eliz NelsonMan
over a year ago

The Tantric Tea Shop

Getting back to the couple on train scenario...

One party, recently split from partner, sexless marriage....reading a magazine article on swinging!

The party opposite a seasoned swinger, just had a promising meet cancelled..

Party reading magazine 'This is silly/crazy!''

Other party 'Is it? Why?''

And of you go

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"Getting back to the couple on train scenario...

One party, recently split from partner, sexless marriage....reading a magazine article on swinging!

The party opposite a seasoned swinger, just had a promising meet cancelled..

Party reading magazine 'This is silly/crazy!''

Other party 'Is it? Why?''

And of you go

"

highly unlikely..whats the ending she fucks him to death??

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

Hehe! Well I guess it depends on whether you like the slow burn of escalating flirtation building up to the actual invitation of a meeeting, or want it to go straight to the bedroom!(or dungeon) lol a balance but there hasto be a purpose more than man wants woman...what could that be? "

I was kinda going for the original purpose to be the innocent return of the item left behind and then progress in to a fascination/obsession angle maybe, but considering that I hadn't had more than a moment to come up with the scenario after I read your thread, I'll admit that I didn't get much further in the advancement if this tale

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"

Hehe! Well I guess it depends on whether you like the slow burn of escalating flirtation building up to the actual invitation of a meeeting, or want it to go straight to the bedroom!(or dungeon) lol a balance but there hasto be a purpose more than man wants woman...what could that be?

I was kinda going for the original purpose to be the innocent return of the item left behind and then progress in to a fascination/obsession angle maybe, but considering that I hadn't had more than a moment to come up with the scenario after I read your thread, I'll admit that I didn't get much further in the advancement if this tale "

ok so what would the last page say? x

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" ok so what would the last page say? x "

The last page?... It would be an epilogue of sorts...

The aromas and aural company that the coffee shop provided her with daily were devoid of their usually welcome good morning kiss to her senses.

She realised that with the culmination of her quest of sorts that she would no longer look upon this small but meaningful part of her regimen with the same fondness.

At the threshold she remained, reluctant to go on with the ritual that had taken her to awakenings she did not know to be slumbering in her. Not because of an unwillingness to take them any further. But knowing now that he had been the trigger, and would always be remembered for that, yet no longer able to accompany her on the next steps of her meandering and now unquenchable thirst for exploration.

His back to her, sat at the same table as ever, she left him unaware of her presence and turned away, knowing that she would be writing her own next chapter.

Soooo that was a bit longer than I intended! Lol

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By *uzy444 OP   Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"

ok so what would the last page say? x

The last page?... It would be an epilogue of sorts...

The aromas and aural company that the coffee shop provided her with daily were devoid of their usually welcome good morning kiss to her senses.

She realised that with the culmination of her quest of sorts that she would no longer look upon this small but meaningful part of her regimen with the same fondness.

At the threshold she remained, reluctant to go on with the ritual that had taken her to awakenings she did not know to be slumbering in her. Not because of an unwillingness to take them any further. But knowing now that he had been the trigger, and would always be remembered for that, yet no longer able to accompany her on the next steps of her meandering and now unquenchable thirst for exploration.

His back to her, sat at the same table as ever, she left him unaware of her presence and turned away, knowing that she would be writing her own next chapter.

Soooo that was a bit longer than I intended! Lol

"

wow you are an excellent muse and conceptualist sweet ..thankyou..so obviously a trilogy then?..

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By *ohnaronMan
over a year ago

london

Oh Suzy, how it rolls off your tongue!

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By *ildbillkidMan
over a year ago

where the road goes on forever

With apologies to snoopy and charles shultz , "it was a dark and stormy night"

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By *ola.Woman
over a year ago

Just where I need to be.

A woman recently divorced needs to find extra income. Starts writing erotic short stories. Mainly based on her inner desires things she has only fantasised never explored.An editor reads them and it peaks his interest. He sees a woman that has hidden her sexuality deep inside. When she submits new stories they both reenact them. So can be visit to local club, introducing bondage. He guides her through new experiences. She in turn helps him release the darker needs in him.She realises that what she feels and her desires are not weird or unnatural but part of who she is.She isn't some naive innocent just someone who has never met right person to release herself to.

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By *lashheartMan
over a year ago

shrewsbury

A guy goes for s walk in his local wood and finds a pretty kitty ...

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