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By *aughty alex 99 OP   Man
over a year ago

gosport

So lately have been taking fabbers advice on making improvements to my profile and only thing haven't done is new and better pics.

So for further advice or even jus social chat if like what you see give us a message

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"So lately have been taking fabbers advice on making improvements to my profile and only thing haven't done is new and better pics.

So for further advice or even jus social chat if like what you see give us a message "

And what advice have you acted upon?

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By *alandNitaCouple
over a year ago

Scunthorpe

Hi... not a bad profile.

If you want to appeal to a more mature lady, I'm not sure it's going to do the trick though... It certainly wouldn't appeal to me. Sorry.

I can't speak for others, but the poor grammar and lack of capital letters in the correct places, coupled with lots of lols and such, would be an issue for me.

I didn't look at your photos.

Nita

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By *aughty alex 99 OP   Man
over a year ago

gosport

Well i did think i had changes all spellings errors and i attepted to add more effort to profile paragragh!!!

thank you ! anything in particular to change other than the fact of poor grammar and spellin??

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Your profile can't be new and improved.

It's either or.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Well i did think i had changes all spellings errors and i attepted to add more effort to profile paragragh!!!

thank you ! anything in particular to change other than the fact of poor grammar and spellin??

"

You were told to spell and grammar check it but you have ignored that advice.

Even if you did that, your profile would still be poor.

There are hundreds of males (with much better presented profiles) for every female here.

Why would a lady pick you? Do you think it is attractive? What do you offer over the others competing?

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By *aughty alex 99 OP   Man
over a year ago

gosport

All so very helpful ?? yes i have lol. Is a lot better wrote than was last week i cam tel you that but thanks again for sarcastic comments. Realy makes me warm inside ahahahahahaha

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By *alandNitaCouple
over a year ago

Scunthorpe

I'll apologise in advance as this may sound rude.

You say you are mature for your age, yet the profile comes across as rather immature.

I realise you are trying to make it lighthearted, but it just doesn't work.

Maybe start again from scratch using a computer programme that has spell and grammar check. Then copy and paste it into Fab.

Nita

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By *alandNitaCouple
over a year ago

Scunthorpe


"All so very helpful ?? yes i have lol. Is a lot better wrote than was last week i cam tel you that but thanks again for sarcastic comments. Realy makes me warm inside ahahahahahaha"

If you are going to survive on here you also need to be less defensive. Posting a thread opens you up to all sorts of responses and nobody has actually been rude to you.

You should see comments on other threads asking for advice

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"All so very helpful ?? yes i have lol. Is a lot better wrote than was last week i cam tel you that but thanks again for sarcastic comments. Realy makes me warm inside ahahahahahaha"

I gave you positive advice. You asked for advice.

If all you want is positive feedback, why ask?

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By *aughty alex 99 OP   Man
over a year ago

gosport

Ahaha yess i have realised that. Yess i might just have to

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Ahaha yess i have realised that. Yess i might just have to "

None of it makes much sense. It is certainly not attractive. Maybe sit down and write it out before committing it to here? You clearly have issues with writing so spell and grammar check - which you seem to resist.

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