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By *igfunboy OP   Man
over a year ago

bradford

Hi there just wanting someone else's advise ... Is my profile ok ?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Your profile comes across very demanding, for a single male. Maybe tone down the caps, the requirements, etc, and make it more human

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By *he devil wears pradaWoman
over a year ago

gosport ish

Very long, too many words of little substance and the caps are sounding demanding

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By *akedninjaMan
over a year ago

edinburgh

No offense but your profile is too wordy...I barely have a paragraph and even at that it rarely gets read so don't be surprised if people take one look at your content and skip onto someone else....also you come across as being a bit hostile,aggressive,controlling...most single women/couples will simply read the first few lines and get the impression that your not a safe meet.....thats just my humble opinion for what it's worth....it's nice to be nice I always say so thats probably your best approach at putting your best foot forward....other than that you have ample public pics which should work in your favor as most single guys don't have any pics or they only have one public pic as in my case but that's due to my inclination to preserve my privacy...I'd possibly be infinitely more fortunate on here if I were to have more pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hi there just wanting someone else's advise ... Is my profile ok ? "

Badly written. Ranty. Demanding.

But I am sure it will be fine for your target audience.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

It's a lot of words that doesn't say much. People would have to take notes to make sure they meet your standards and expectations. Personally, I find "gizzashagyabitch" archieves a similar result.

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

Too long, couldn't be bothered to read it.

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By *olgateMan
over a year ago

on the road to nowhere in particular

I've read shorter novels

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