FabSwingers.com forum: Is my profile crap and have waffled to much ..help lol

By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

Just thought I'd ask I have been on a similar site .fab had been suggested to me by a friend at work .plus I can take criticism. My pic's aren't as fabulous as some of ladies and gents but I'm trying

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Lots of typos in your profile text.

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"Lots of typos in your profile text."
thanks il go through it all again lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Yea it's rubbish

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Acid Jazz

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"Yea it's rubbish

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lmfao I know il get it right

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

it took so long to read it I forgot the question

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Yea it's rubbish

x lmfao I know il get it right

Nah, you probably wont

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"Acid Jazz

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yeah mate I was djing in liverpool playing acid jazz

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"Yea it's rubbish

x lmfao I know il get it right

Nah, you probably wont"
I know lol

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"it took so long to read it I forgot the question

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I know I'm going to wipe it and start again some of the profiles are long but I read a few short profiles

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I don't remember the acid jazz scene in the 90s, I must have been too young

what I'm saying ia that to me the profile waffles on and I tuned out really, as a lot has nothing to do with swinging and what you can offer a lady or couple

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Too many irrelevant words....

Perhaps better off just sticking with the sort of basic information needed to gauge sexual compatibility and mutual appeal...

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By *hoonzeeWoman
over a year ago

Up..down..left..right..stop

I can tell you are a nice guy with nice buns

As others have said, I'd keep the text to the point:

What do I offer?

What do I want?

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By *olgateMan
over a year ago

on the road to nowhere in particular

Break it into smaller paragraphs

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"I don't remember the acid jazz scene in the 90s, I must have been too young

what I'm saying ia that to me the profile waffles on and I tuned out really, as a lot has nothing to do with swinging and what you can offer a lady or couple

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yes I've realised that ive waffled I will change my profile to a shorter version and state what I have to offer and the acid jazz scene was a mixture of soul rare groove funk and hip hop

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"Too many irrelevant words....

Perhaps better off just sticking with the sort of basic information needed to gauge sexual compatibility and mutual appeal...

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thanks

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By *obyn GravesTV/TS
over a year ago

1127 walnut avenue

i liked the status update

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By *hoonzeeWoman
over a year ago

Up..down..left..right..stop

Ha ha. I just looked at my own. Ha ha.

Sort it out girl!

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Lose the Acid Jazz 90's dj stuff. How will that get you a meet?

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"I can tell you are a nice guy with nice buns

As others have said, I'd keep the text to the point:

What do I offer?

What do I want?"
thanks much appreciated i shall take your advice

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"i liked the status update "
thanks

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"Lose the Acid Jazz 90's dj stuff. How will that get you a meet? "
will do mate I was just trying say a little about myself went to far

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By *isscheekychopsWoman
over a year ago

The land of grey peas and bacon

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It is unreadable. Try a grammar and spelling checker.

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"Break it into smaller paragraphs "
will do mate one of my bad traits can't stop talking shows in the way I write

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Lose the Acid Jazz 90's dj stuff. How will that get you a meet? will do mate I was just trying say a little about myself went to far

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went too far back

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"It is unreadable. Try a grammar and spelling checker."
I know just read it I'm more creative than a writer thanks for your input

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"Lose the Acid Jazz 90's dj stuff. How will that get you a meet? will do mate I was just trying say a little about myself went to far

went too far back

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got it cheers

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"It is unreadable. Try a grammar and spelling checker. I know just read it I'm more creative than a writer thanks for your input

Try reading before you create?

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By *jj46 OP Man
over a year ago

rhyl

"It is unreadable. Try a grammar and spelling checker. I know just read it I'm more creative than a writer thanks for your input

Try reading before you create?"
I've started writing my profile again .much appreciated for your input

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