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Nice or raunch?????

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Ok I'm wanting people to come criticise my profile.

Woah woah woah brigades of all manners.......I'm not just on a "come look at my profile pleeeeeeaaaaase" case.i actually want to know what people think....have i made it too nice,not enough raunch.

It's hard to be honest but at the same time not scare the crap out of people.

All comments will be Grateley appreciated.i throw myself at your mercy lol

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By *iamondjoeMan
over a year ago

Glastonbury

Too many question marks in your question for a start?

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By *S RachaelTV/TS
over a year ago

Lowestoft

Well its got me interested. Xxx

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Well that's a start.agreed but everything gets extra at Christmas time

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Well its got me interested. Xxx"

Interest is always appreciated

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Ok I'm wanting people to come criticise my profile.

Woah woah woah brigades of all manners.......I'm not just on a "come look at my profile pleeeeeeaaaaase" case.i actually want to know what people think....have i made it too nice,not enough raunch.

It's hard to be honest but at the same time not scare the crap out of people.

All comments will be Grateley appreciated.i throw myself at your mercy lol"

No comment from this nazi grammar.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Ok I'm wanting people to come criticise my profile.

Woah woah woah brigades of all manners.......I'm not just on a "come look at my profile pleeeeeeaaaaase" case.i actually want to know what people think....have i made it too nice,not enough raunch.

It's hard to be honest but at the same time not scare the crap out of people.

All comments will be Grateley appreciated.i throw myself at your mercy lol

No comment from this nazi grammar."

Yes my grammar may be abit squiffy,but after 5 cans of Stella my eyes gan a bit squiffy lol

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By *obbytupperMan
over a year ago

Menston near Ilkley


"Ok I'm wanting people to come criticise my profile.

Woah woah woah brigades of all manners.......I'm not just on a "come look at my profile pleeeeeeaaaaase" case.i actually want to know what people think....have i made it too nice,not enough raunch.

It's hard to be honest but at the same time not scare the crap out of people.

All comments will be Grateley appreciated.i throw myself at your mercy lol

No comment from this nazi grammar."

Grammar nazi perhaps

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

well looks okay to me

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"well looks okay to me "

Many thanks

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Ok I'm wanting people to come criticise my profile.

Woah woah woah brigades of all manners.......I'm not just on a "come look at my profile pleeeeeeaaaaase" case.i actually want to know what people think....have i made it too nice,not enough raunch.

It's hard to be honest but at the same time not scare the crap out of people.

All comments will be Grateley appreciated.i throw myself at your mercy lol

No comment from this nazi grammar.

Grammar nazi perhaps "

Lol yes I'm err getting the feeling I need to gan&check my grammar

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By *w214Couple
over a year ago

Wirral

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By *issHottieBottieWoman
over a year ago

Kent

Where you say ....&....put some spaces in between the words and the & signs.. It makes my eyes go funny trying to read it like that!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Where you say ....&....put some spaces in between the words and the & signs.. It makes my eyes go funny trying to read it like that!

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Nice one point noted

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

What's raunch?

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By *enard ArgenteMan
over a year ago

London and France


"Where you say ....&....put some spaces in between the words and the & signs.. It makes my eyes go funny trying to read it like that!

Nice one point noted"

And go and get a handful of apostrophes and commas ....

And deploy appropriately.

Not being arsey here, but the lack makes it difficult to read .

And you want people to read; you only have about half a second to grab attention.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"What's raunch? "

Well ide suppose another way would be to say give it some more sexual comments...you know raunchy

Or have I just made that word up?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Where you say ....&....put some spaces in between the words and the & signs.. It makes my eyes go funny trying to read it like that!

Nice one point noted

And go and get a handful of apostrophes and commas ....

And deploy appropriately.

Not being arsey here, but the lack makes it difficult to read .

And you want people to read; you only have about half a second to grab attention."

Hopefully appeased the grammar squad a little.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Where you say ....&....put some spaces in between the words and the & signs.. It makes my eyes go funny trying to read it like that!

Nice one point noted

And go and get a handful of apostrophes and commas ....

And deploy appropriately.

Not being arsey here, but the lack makes it difficult to read .

And you want people to read; you only have about half a second to grab attention.

Hopefully appeased the grammar squad a little. "

Not a lot.

In terms of content, too, it could be better.j

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Where you say ....&....put some spaces in between the words and the & signs.. It makes my eyes go funny trying to read it like that!

Nice one point noted

And go and get a handful of apostrophes and commas ....

And deploy appropriately.

Not being arsey here, but the lack makes it difficult to read .

And you want people to read; you only have about half a second to grab attention.

Hopefully appeased the grammar squad a little.

Not a lot.

In terms of content, too, it could be better.j"

Well at least a try is better than nowt lol.Will try harder in the future.Thanks for the reply

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