FabSwingers.com forum: Profile thoughts....

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thinking of freshening up my profile as don't have that much luck, any thoughts on it and how it would be more appealing.

I can take the criticism I'm going to get so don't hold back, ha ha

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

It's quite negative in places.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Take out the bit about not being into men. It is pointless. Just filter men from messaging you.

I would remove the part about not having had much luck. It comes off as negative.

I would also take out the bit about giving three chances before blocking. It seems kinda nasty, which I'm sure isn't your intention.

The rest looks fine. Not the best I've seen, but not the worst, either.

Good luck.

-Courtney

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By *umpleteazerWoman
over a year ago

Flintshire

'Cannot not' is a double negative and changes the meaning completely x

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Take out the bit about not being into men. It is pointless. Just filter men from messaging you.

I would remove the part about not having had much luck. It comes off as negative.

I would also take out the bit about giving three chances before blocking. It seems kinda nasty, which I'm sure isn't your intention.

The rest looks fine. Not the best I've seen, but not the worst, either.

Good luck.

-Courtney"

Thank you, I will make some changes, I'd put the men but in when I got annoyed, ha ha

The negative bits I'd copied from others, I don't think it's needed either.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"'Cannot not' is a double negative and changes the meaning completely x"

Thanks, I'll look at that.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The profile should reflect you and should show what you want and what you can offer.

Make it friendly, fun and informative.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Take out the bit about not being into men. It is pointless. Just filter men from messaging you.

I would remove the part about not having had much luck. It comes off as negative.

I would also take out the bit about giving three chances before blocking. It seems kinda nasty, which I'm sure isn't your intention.

The rest looks fine. Not the best I've seen, but not the worst, either.

Good luck.

-Courtney

Thank you, I will make some changes, I'd put the men but in when I got annoyed, ha ha

The negative bits I'd copied from others, I don't think it's needed either."

If you copy bits of other people's profiles it won't reflect you and so the profile won't work.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"The profile should reflect you and should show what you want and what you can offer.

Make it friendly, fun and informative."

Thank you, I will give it a bash

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Take out the bit about not being into men. It is pointless. Just filter men from messaging you.

I would remove the part about not having had much luck. It comes off as negative.

I would also take out the bit about giving three chances before blocking. It seems kinda nasty, which I'm sure isn't your intention.

The rest looks fine. Not the best I've seen, but not the worst, either.

Good luck.

-Courtney

Thank you, I will make some changes, I'd put the men but in when I got annoyed, ha ha

The negative bits I'd copied from others, I don't think it's needed either.

If you copy bits of other people's profiles it won't reflect you and so the profile won't work. "

It wasn't totally , I meant the idea but I get what u mean pal.

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By *ark CharmerMan
over a year ago

Horsham

Hope you take on the advises above as I agree on the negativity, the bits about men, the 3 chances, the self pity bit about not really meeting.

I don't know how people would respond to the chat/Skype bit. Maybe its something people find out once you start to chat.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Totally agree with Courtney

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Take away the negative start saying no luck and also why cant you accommodate? Many will think you are married. Most of all you need patience.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thanks everyone, some changes made

Let's see how it goes.

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