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By *ackspop OP   Couple
over a year ago

Wymondham

I've got a story running in the Stories and Fantasies forum but I'm concerned it's a bit "wordy" (even with a bit of editing!) so here's the question:

Do people prefer "wordy" slow burn stories or wham-bam quickies? All input gratefully accepted. Cheers.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I've read literotica for about 15 years. If I open a story and it's less than 7-8 pages I skip it. If it's more than 20 or 30 I skip it. The stories which are 100 plus pages... No thanks.

If I'm reading erotica I don't want the back story.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Reading any type of erotic doesn't help my juices flow.......

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By *ophieslutTV/TS
over a year ago

Central

I haven't read your contribution but if there's a surplus of extraneous details, I switch off. Keep it relevant and on track whilst avoiding clichés.

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By *ammykingMan
over a year ago

Lisburn


"I've read literotica for about 15 years. If I open a story and it's less than 7-8 pages I skip it. If it's more than 20 or 30 I skip it. The stories which are 100 plus pages... No thanks.

If I'm reading erotica I don't want the back story. "

Quality over quantity

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By *ophieslutTV/TS
over a year ago

Central

I took a peek and first impressions are that I was possibly starting to read a mills and boon or Jackie Collins, as there are rather a large number of words that convey some of your message. I'd prefer it to be a little more concise.

It all depends on your target audience though. We're all different.

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross

Just the money paragraph for me. Anything else is a waste of my eyeballs

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By *ackspop OP   Couple
over a year ago

Wymondham

Thanks all for the input. Appreciated.

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