FabSwingers.com forum: Sensual or Crude

By *nFairness OP Man
over a year ago

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Okay so i write a bit... quite a lot actually haha, and when i do i like to experiment with different levels of sensuality that i encompass in my writing. While an inexperienced person might think that cyber/erotica is generic i'd disagree and have found wild variances to the different levels.

So my question is this.... do you like soft sensual writing that involves all aspects of sex, but in a softly worded way. Or, more crude, straightforward styles of writing that leaves nothing at all to the imagination?.

Or perhaps either?

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By *nFairness OP Man
over a year ago

The Four Corners

neither*

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross

As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending.

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By *nFairness OP Man
over a year ago

The Four Corners

"As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending."

fair point

but generally speaking i'd argue that if people were in one of those two moods, the first thing they are going to want to find isn't necessarily going to be a book, letter, email or chat room haha but i cold well be wrong :P

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross

What shape is the book ?

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By *nFairness OP Man
over a year ago

The Four Corners

"What shape is the book ?"

hahahahaha

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending."

Though when I write,sensual can soon become crude (mood dependant) just like when I have sex, everything is a factor

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By *nFairness OP Man
over a year ago

The Four Corners

"As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending.

Though when I write,sensual can soon become crude (mood dependant) just like when I have sex, everything is a factor"

Do you ever find there is a lack of words, forgive me for saying so, that don't phonetically sound crude for a vagina lol.

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By *nFairness OP Man
over a year ago

The Four Corners

that being an example (poorly worded)

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending.

Though when I write,sensual can soon become crude (mood dependant) just like when I have sex, everything is a factor

Do you ever find there is a lack of words, forgive me for saying so, that don't phonetically sound crude for a vagina lol."

I always think they are crude or twee no middle ground

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending.

Though when I write,sensual can soon become crude (mood dependant) just like when I have sex, everything is a factor

Do you ever find there is a lack of words, forgive me for saying so, that don't phonetically sound crude for a vagina lol."

I find clitoris a pleasant sounding word and though it's not the full vagina, from a writing point of view, I think I'd prefer to write that the man's shaft rubbed her clitoris as he was deep inside her no matter how sensual or crude because that (to me) is deeply arousing

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross

"As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending.

Though when I write,sensual can soon become crude (mood dependant) just like when I have sex, everything is a factor

Do you ever find there is a lack of words, forgive me for saying so, that don't phonetically sound crude for a vagina lol."

Phonetically crude?

What's that ?

I know what phonics are. I know what crude is but phonetically crude?

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross

"As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending.

Though when I write,sensual can soon become crude (mood dependant) just like when I have sex, everything is a factor

Do you ever find there is a lack of words, forgive me for saying so, that don't phonetically sound crude for a vagina lol.

Pardon my eye for detail

How can a shaft rub a clitoris is he is deep inside her ?

Perhaps that old cliche has a ring of truth.

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross

/'kru:d/

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending.

Though when I write,sensual can soon become crude (mood dependant) just like when I have sex, everything is a factor

Do you ever find there is a lack of words, forgive me for saying so, that don't phonetically sound crude for a vagina lol.

Phonetically crude?

What's that ?

I know what phonics are. I know what crude is but phonetically crude? "

Something to do with the shape of your phone?

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By *nFairness OP Man
over a year ago

The Four Corners

"As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending.

Though when I write,sensual can soon become crude (mood dependant) just like when I have sex, everything is a factor

Do you ever find there is a lack of words, forgive me for saying so, that don't phonetically sound crude for a vagina lol.

Phonetically crude?

What's that ?

I know what phonics are. I know what crude is but phonetically crude? "

perhaps a better word would of been vulgar, like how the c word sounds aggressive.... or how bubbles sounds bubbly...

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross

"As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending.

Though when I write,sensual can soon become crude (mood dependant) just like when I have sex, everything is a factor

Do you ever find there is a lack of words, forgive me for saying so, that don't phonetically sound crude for a vagina lol.

Phonetically crude?

What's that ?

I know what phonics are. I know what crude is but phonetically crude?

Something to do with the shape of your phone?"

Yeah. My penis phone is phonetically crude.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending.

Though when I write,sensual can soon become crude (mood dependant) just like when I have sex, everything is a factor

Do you ever find there is a lack of words, forgive me for saying so, that don't phonetically sound crude for a vagina lol.

Phonetically crude?

What's that ?

I know what phonics are. I know what crude is but phonetically crude?

Something to do with the shape of your phone?

Yeah. My penis phone is phonetically crude. "

As in "it wasn't my fault that my penis phone pocket dialled her and offered to bury itself deep in her moist cun.... "

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

*** unfortunately lost signal at that point ***

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross

t..... which is phonetically crude!

How RUDE !

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"t..... which is phonetically crude!

How RUDE !"

True but it's redeemed by its very engaging vibration options

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

There's an annual award for the most badly written sexual encounter. I don't think I've ever read any sexual writing without laughing. A more effective mechanism would be to slow the reader to use their imagination and get straight back into the action.

"Charlene was pleased that her white trash trailer had exploded, although she had suffered minor burns...."ah don' mairnd"....she said..."it wall saive mah self havin' t' shave ma pubes"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Erotic writing, both crude and sensual, should be perhaps left to the imagination. Sometime you cab say more by saying nothing. If it needs to be included then its about the people, not the act.

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross

"t..... which is phonetically crude!

How RUDE !

True but it's redeemed by its very engaging vibration options"

I think you're a salesman-

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
over a year ago

The Town by The Cross

It's just something about your name...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Erotic writing, both crude and sensual, should be perhaps left to the imagination. Sometime you cab say more by saying nothing. If it needs to be included then its about the people, not the act."

Like in older movies where they panned off to some obscure part of the room before cut scene?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"As a 'writer' you'd understand that mood determines much.

Both depending.

Though when I write,sensual can soon become crude (mood dependant) just like when I have sex, everything is a factor

Do you ever find there is a lack of words, forgive me for saying so, that don't phonetically sound crude for a vagina lol.

Pardon my eye for detail

How can a shaft rub a clitoris is he is deep inside her ?

Perhaps that old cliche has a ring of truth."

I take creative liberties with my writing

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Erotic writing, both crude and sensual, should be perhaps left to the imagination. Sometime you cab say more by saying nothing. If it needs to be included then its about the people, not the act.

Like in older movies where they panned off to some obscure part of the room before cut scene?"

Not necessarily. I think there are more creative ways of implying something. We all fuck, have sex, make love - what so special about the way your characters engage in it that there needs to be an account of it? Context, I think, is all important.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Okay so i write a bit... quite a lot actually haha, and when i do i like to experiment with different levels of sensuality that i encompass in my writing. While an inexperienced person might think that cyber/erotica is generic i'd disagree and have found wild variances to the different levels.

Or perhaps either?"

I like both of its written in an erotic way.

Good luck with your writing

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I write too. I'm far more sensual than crude. Art reflects life.

They do say to write well, write what you know

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Erotic writing, both crude and sensual, should be perhaps left to the imagination. Sometime you cab say more by saying nothing. If it needs to be included then its about the people, not the act.

Like in older movies where they panned off to some obscure part of the room before cut scene?

Ah, I misunderstood what the prior message alluded to, that makes more sense

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By *nFairness OP Man
over a year ago

The Four Corners

agree completely with the imagination thing, think i took that for granted as something everyone does, hence the lack of a mention.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"It's just something about your name... "

It took hours of thought then I changed it.

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By *rinking-in-laCouple
over a year ago

Bristol

I think Gash is the most delicate and sensual word for a vagina.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

When I write erotica (usually on request or in response to a specific fantasy) I try to move from sensual/seductive to harder/fast paced.....as I imagine the readers arousal will do.

The more crude descriptions tend to feature as the story 'heats up '

I do, however, try to steer away from the more clinical description s for genitalia as they seem to quickly sap the ' horny ' out of a situation, lol.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I think Gash is the most delicate and sensual word for a vagina."

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It sounds to me like the op is just peacocking. Trying to show his intelligence and he is the only one who is right?!

I'm not much of a reader.

I'd rather 'do', than read or write about it?!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I find the word Cock superior to that of Dick.

I read a 19th century work that referred to a hardon as a cockstand....which I feel is much more descriptive. (And much less Americanised....or should that be Americanized.)

And as it turns out.....females do not wish their lady bits to be described as....like an axe-wound in a gorillas back.

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By *rinking-in-laCouple
over a year ago

Bristol

"It sounds to me like the op is just peacocking. Trying to show his intelligence and he is the only one who is right?!

I'm not much of a reader.

I'd rather 'do', than read or write about it?! "

Peacocking? On these forums? Where do you get such a barmy idea?

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By *icentiousCouple
over a year ago

Up on them there hills

"It sounds to me like the op is just peacocking. Trying to show his intelligence and he is the only one who is right?!

I'm not much of a reader.

I'd rather 'do', than read or write about it?!

Peacocking? On these forums? Where do you get such a barmy idea? "

For a writer you do use a lot of superfluous words.

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By *rinking-in-laCouple
over a year ago

Bristol

"It sounds to me like the op is just peacocking. Trying to show his intelligence and he is the only one who is right?!

I'm not much of a reader.

I'd rather 'do', than read or write about it?!

Peacocking? On these forums? Where do you get such a barmy idea?

For a writer you do use a lot of superfluous words.

None of us are writers.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I often find the word superfluous, superfluous.

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By *icentiousCouple
over a year ago

Up on them there hills

"It sounds to me like the op is just peacocking. Trying to show his intelligence and he is the only one who is right?!

I'm not much of a reader.

I'd rather 'do', than read or write about it?!

Peacocking? On these forums? Where do you get such a barmy idea?

For a writer you do use a lot of superfluous words.

None of us are writers. "

Not strictly true.

I should have been more specific and referred to the OP's mention of writing.

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By *icentiousCouple
over a year ago

Up on them there hills

"I often find the word superfluous, superfluous.

He he, depends on the context.

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By *rinking-in-laCouple
over a year ago

Bristol

"It sounds to me like the op is just peacocking. Trying to show his intelligence and he is the only one who is right?!

I'm not much of a reader.

I'd rather 'do', than read or write about it?!

Peacocking? On these forums? Where do you get such a barmy idea?

For a writer you do use a lot of superfluous words.

None of us are writers.

Not strictly true.

I should have been more specific and referred to the OP's mention of writing.

Apologies when I said none of us I meant Lu or Andy. I cannot comment on the rest of you. Although I can harbour private prejudice and whatnot.

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