FabSwingers.com forum: Help improve the profile above

By *nterracial2 OP Couple
over a year ago

Ribble Valley

So, just seeing a lot of people on the threads asking for advice on their profiles, we ran a thread like this a while back and it helped us and others streamline our profiles and make them more appealing. Just list a few positive and a few negative points about the profile above you. Remember honesty is a must. Oh and remember to start with the name of the profile you're referring to, if this thread gets too popular it just becomes a frenzy nobody can understand. The template to follow is below. Happy fabbing.

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Pos -

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm in . Please don't be to harsh

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'm in . Please don't be to harsh

Lol don't mate someone will find fault even if it was perfect

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By *nterracial2 OP Couple
over a year ago

Ribble Valley

Toshn

Pos

Stated your preferences.

Good condition considering age.

Cons

Bathroom photos, IKEA sell full length mirrors for £15.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'm in . Please don't be to harsh

Lol don't mate someone will find fault even if it was perfect"
lol I know mate. I am thick skinned. Or is that just thick ?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'm in . Please don't be to harsh

Lol don't mate someone will find fault even if it was perfect lol I know mate. I am thick skinned. Or is that just thick ?

No comment

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Toshn

Pos

Stated your preferences.

Good condition considering age.

Cons

Bathroom photos, IKEA sell full length mirrors for £15."
haha like it. Thank you x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'm in . Please don't be to harsh

Lol don't mate someone will find fault even if it was perfect lol I know mate. I am thick skinned. Or is that just thick ?

No comment

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Cheers mate

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'm in . Please don't be to harsh

Lol don't mate someone will find fault even if it was perfect lol I know mate. I am thick skinned. Or is that just thick ?

No comment

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Jo and nicks profile. Great pics , great text. But ain't got a clue what they are looking for

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'm in . Please don't be to harsh

Lol don't mate someone will find fault even if it was perfect lol I know mate. I am thick skinned. Or is that just thick ?

No comment

Jo and nicks profile. Great pics , great text. But ain't got a clue what they are looking for

LMFAO maybe we should draw a few pics lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'm in . Please don't be to harsh

Lol don't mate someone will find fault even if it was perfect lol I know mate. I am thick skinned. Or is that just thick ?

No comment

Jo and nicks profile. Great pics , great text. But ain't got a clue what they are looking for

LMFAO maybe we should draw a few pics lol"
haha yeah , gives us a clue

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By *risky_MareWoman
over a year ago

...Up on the Downs

"I'm in . Please don't be to harsh

Lol don't mate someone will find fault even if it was perfect lol I know mate. I am thick skinned. Or is that just thick ?

No comment

Jo and nicks profile. Great pics , great text. But ain't got a clue what they are looking for

LMFAO maybe we should draw a few pics lol haha yeah , gives us a clue

Quite fit for an old git but profile needs some dribbling cum shots and a few impaled ladies arses to be really appealing!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Frisky

States what you want quite cleary

The pic with your eyes bit scary

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By *nterracial2 OP Couple
over a year ago

Ribble Valley

Frisky_Mare

Pos -

Great detail on your profile and expectations

Great figure and look very tidy

Neg -

Sounds somewhat confrontational

More sexy body shots, the ones you have already are damn right sexy.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm up for someone having a pop lol!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ok I'm in ....please be gentle

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Beemcpl

Pro: a damn good profile to be fair. Well laid out, clear needs and offers. Well verified!

Con: no kissing..... Must admit I like that, but personal preferences prevail...so fair play

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By *risky_MareWoman
over a year ago

...Up on the Downs

"Frisky

States what you want quite cleary

The pic with your eyes bit scary "

Haha, be afraid, be very afraid! !

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By *nterracial2 OP Couple
over a year ago

Ribble Valley

Cinnamon&ginger

Pro- detailed profile

Sets the scene perfectly for a Dom to join in

Neg- nothing much really, could do with a pic or two of him

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm in.

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By *nterracial2 OP Couple
over a year ago

Ribble Valley

Miss seductive kisser

Pro - damn you work those curves

Neg - move to the north west

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Go on then someone tell us how shit our profile is

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Miss Seductive Kisser

Some great pictures and certainly know what you want

Didn't like the negative words you used to describe yourself

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Go on then someone tell us how shit our profile is

Its not at all only criticism more pictures of those corsets and basques

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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago

Northampton Somewhere

Cinnamonandginger

Pros - A good selection of pics of both of you, makes a change! You definitely know what you are looking for.

Cons - Comes across a little bossy perhaps....but that's not really a bad thing

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'm in. "

Know you are mainly here for forum but profile doesn't let people get to know you and what your likes are

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'm in.

Know you are mainly here for forum but profile doesn't let people get to know you and what your likes are"

Gimme 2 minutes I will add some!

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By *nterracial2 OP Couple
over a year ago

Ribble Valley

" Gimme 2 minutes I will add some!"

I'm sure you have more sexual desires than just rimming

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

" Gimme 2 minutes I will add some!

I'm sure you have more sexual desires than just rimming

I give a slight hint to them when I mention I like doing things whilst they sleep. It's a tricky one to explain!

Things that I get turned on by are a bit odd and would come later on.

I like guys talking to me, I have a gift that makes people want to talk to me about everything I don't even know how but people just spill all their personal problems out, people that work on checkouts will talk to me and keep talking, even mothers down the school who I don't know that well will talk to me then just keep talking, I give good advice and look like I listen intently! With guys they will talk and talk and then talk about any issues or problems that they have, anything that makes them feel upset or deep rooted insecurities they just spill everything, if I see a guy getting visibly upset or distressed it makes me soaking! I like to comfort them when they feel vulnerable, I'll start sucking their dick or sticking my tit in their mouth. It lulls them into a false sense of security and creates a closeness and a sort of bond which leads to the sex being intense, they tell me all this shit that they've probably never talked about and creates trust which leads to my next thing the sleeping! I like to suck dick and tongue fuck arse holes whilst they sleep, like to sit on their face and fuck their nose and chin then put my fanny over their mouth so I can look down and watch them struggling to breath, they always wake up and have sleepy disorientated sex which again is nice and intense.

So, my sexual desires are quite strange and are not the sort of things that I could advertise on my profile

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By *risky_MareWoman
over a year ago

...Up on the Downs

" Gimme 2 minutes I will add some!

I'm sure you have more sexual desires than just rimming

I give a slight hint to them when I mention I like doing things whilst they sleep. It's a tricky one to explain!

Things that I get turned on by are a bit odd and would come later on.

So, my sexual desires are quite strange and are not the sort of things that I could advertise on my profile

Just post 'em on the forums Athena, no-one will notice

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Friday's profile is fabulous.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Friday's profile is fabulous."
. I meant 'Friskys'

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

It's superb, Steve. Don't change a thing - because, matey, had you wanted to, you would already have done so.

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By *aeDragonCouple
over a year ago

Calne

Brightonsteve..

Pros:

Inventive photos! Definitely a flair for the erotic there!

Easy read blurb.. and with some wry humour thrown in.

Cons:

The blurb is a bit confusing from the context of having two profiles.. it can appear as untrustworthy as you redirect people somewhere else after setting them up. Suspect that's not what you intended however.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Brightonsteve..

Pros:

Inventive photos! Definitely a flair for the erotic there!

Easy read blurb.. and with some wry humour thrown in.

Cons:

The blurb is a bit confusing from the

context of having two profiles.. it can

appear as untrustworthy as you redirect

people somewhere else after setting

them up. Suspect that's not what you

intended however.

I didn't think of that! I only have one profile but two sets of wording - this one and I've saved in a word document, the long one. Thanks. That was useful. Your profile is good.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Steve your photos are to old. X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Well I did a critique...... Can someone rip mine to bits ...or otherwise!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Id like to know if mine passes muster

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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago

Northampton Somewhere

"Well I did a critique...... Can someone rip mine to bits ...or otherwise!"

Well I was overlooked to

Pros - Good breakdown of what you want/don't want etc.

Cons - Too many cock and fucking pics for my liking. Your text us good but just a little long winded.

Well you did ask....

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Over all great profile write up .

Less cock.and sex pictures, tease and tempt people with glimpses of what may be

Good luck.

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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago

Northampton Somewhere

"Over all great profile write up .

Less cock.and sex pictures, tease and tempt people with glimpses of what may be

Good luck.

I hope that wasn't for me...lol

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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago

Northampton Somewhere

Oh and you're profile is great btw.

Love your pics and the wording

Negatives.....none!! X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Oh and you're profile is great btw.

Love your pics and the wording

Negatives.....none!! X"

Time for younger men

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By *thwalescplCouple
over a year ago

brecon

Lady Lick

Pros, lots of pics, lots of info and knows what she wants

Negs- none, although a few more full length pics to drool over would be nice lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Over all great profile write up .

Less cock.and sex pictures, tease and tempt people with glimpses of what may be

Good luck.

I hope that wasn't for me...lol

your profile is delish Lady x

and OP had another look and yes your profile and pictures are just spot on well done

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Over all great profile write up .

Less cock.and sex pictures, tease and tempt people with glimpses of what may be

Good luck.

I hope that wasn't for me...lol

your profile is delish Lady x

and OP had another look and yes your profile and pictures are just spot on well done

For me your profile is too wordy. I think a balance needs to be struck between giving the information and feel you need and trying not to make it too long and leave a little mystery.

I like profiles that give me something to talk about we may have in common (I saw once that a young woman on here loves game of thronea, I'm a massive fan... Conversation started

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Over all great profile write up .

Less cock.and sex pictures, tease and tempt people with glimpses of what may be

Good luck.

I hope that wasn't for me...lol

Think it was for me.... But I don't tend to take pics unless I'm having fun. And half of them have been taken by others lol....

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By *ire_bladeMan
over a year ago

Manchester

Mines perfect so sod off

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By *rladytoyMan
over a year ago

bournemouth

Your all wonderful in your own ways

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By *oxy_minxWoman
over a year ago

Scotland - Aberdeen

Well, I changed mine yesterday, so not sure how it reads now, I changed it to pretend I was really friendly

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm in. Would love to hear what everyone thinks

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"I'm in. Would love to hear what everyone thinks

It's fine and working well.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Im out. Why set yourself up more failure

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Well, I changed mine yesterday, so not sure how it reads now, I changed it to pretend I was really friendly

Your profile is the only reason I would go to Aberdeen.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Im out. Why set yourself up more failure

The last sentence doesn't make sense. Doesn't work for me anyway.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Im out. Why set yourself up more failure

The last sentence doesn't make sense. Doesn't work for me anyway. "

I should learn to proof read

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Im out. Why set yourself up more failure

The last sentence doesn't make sense. Doesn't work for me anyway. "

Brightonsteve:

Pros:Decent pics

Negative:Having to ask for his proper profile is annoying!!

But he is a lovely man, so I forgive him

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