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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Im doing a piece of writing and im really struggling to describe the way nipples harden without sounding cliche.

Anyone got any ideas?

Thankyou in advance x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

responded in approval....

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Ooo like that one x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Ooo like that one x"

Erotic writing works best when the person reading is left to add their own imagery .....

Less is more...... so much more...

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I used 'mound of delight' when talking about her lady region but nipples has got me stumped.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Crinkled.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I used 'mound of delight' when talking about her lady region but nipples has got me stumped. "

Oo'er " Stumpy nipples".....

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"responded in approval.... "

Good but not my style.

Try, like a bullet from a gun

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"responded in approval....

Good but not my style.

Try, like a bullet from a gun "

Yeah I guess your user name indicates you prefer the more direct approach.....

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Her nipples were that hard I could hang a wet duffle coat off them.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Her nipples were that hard I could hang a wet duffle coat off them. "

You have a Duffle coat..... ?seriously ?.... OMG..... marmalade sandwich anyone ?.......

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Her nipples were that hard I could hang a wet duffle coat off them.

You have a Duffle coat..... ?seriously ?.... OMG..... marmalade sandwich anyone ?.......

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They are the height of fashion in the great metropolis. It'll catch on up there in a few years. Then we'll be wearing Kagool's.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Her nipples were that hard I could hang a wet duffle coat off them.

You have a Duffle coat..... ?seriously ?.... OMG..... marmalade sandwich anyone ?.......

They are the height of fashion in the great metropolis. It'll catch on up there in a few years. Then we'll be wearing Kagool's. "

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By *andy_tomMan
over a year ago

wolverhampton


"Im doing a piece of writing and im really struggling to describe the way nipples harden without sounding cliche.

Anyone got any ideas?

Thankyou in advance x "

rolling ice cubes over them stiffens them up and makes them hard .

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"responded in approval....

Good but not my style.

Try, like a bullet from a gun

Yeah I guess your user name indicates you prefer the more direct approach..... "

Lol I'm more than a username.

Like the unfurling of snowdrops as they seek the morning dew, eagerly awaiting its cold moist touch.

Then like shit off a shovel its over with in a flash.

I have hidden depths.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"responded in approval....

Good but not my style.

Try, like a bullet from a gun

Yeah I guess your user name indicates you prefer the more direct approach.....

Lol I'm more than a username.

Like the unfurling of snowdrops as they seek the morning dew, eagerly awaiting its cold moist touch.

Then like shit off a shovel its over with in a flash.

I have hidden depths. "

lol.....

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By *.nottsbloke..Man
over a year ago

the vale

She looked like she was smuggling peanuts under her blouse

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Im doing a piece of writing and im really struggling to describe the way nipples harden without sounding cliche.

Anyone got any ideas?

Thankyou in advance x

rolling ice cubes over them stiffens them up and makes them hard . "

To put it in context, ive just had my mouth round her nipple for the first time and it hardened like .......?

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By *.nottsbloke..Man
over a year ago

the vale

Her nipples rose like a prefect sufflee

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Im doing a piece of writing and im really struggling to describe the way nipples harden without sounding cliche.

Anyone got any ideas?

Thankyou in advance x

rolling ice cubes over them stiffens them up and makes them hard .

To put it in context, ive just had my mouth round her nipple for the first time and it hardened like .......?"

Jelly in the fridge ?

Dentures on a plate ?

Klingons on a hairy arse ?

I'm not good at this writing lark lol

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