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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Done my profile text again, anyone got any views on it, things to put in/take out x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I see what you've done there with the old 'It's going to be easier to list the things I don't want' but to be fair, I'm not sure if this is the right approach.

To me, it just sets your profile off on a negative tone.

Just give a few examples of things you're into and add 'and much more'.

For example, there's a tick box list that you can pick out from and a lot of users look at your 'interests' to see if you're into the same sorts of things as them.

I'd also perhaps be inclined to lose the 'Ok, I will try my best to fill this out' bit. it's clutter. Makes you look like you're filling space for a lack of things to say - if you get where i'm coming from.

One question that jumps to mind. How is anyone to have guessed you're into BDSM?

One really important thing that is very absent from your profile is what have YOU got to offer potential meets. What makes you stand out? Why should anyone choose YOU over a thousand other single blokes on here vying for their attention?

Then there's the matter of pictures, or rather the lack of them.

Not being funny fella, but that picture on there really could be of anyone.

You can't accommodate, but you don't explain why. You may well have good reasons why not, but if you don't state what they are, people are going to come to their own conclusions - like you're married and cheating on your wife.

All very simple straightforward things.

Be more positive. Sell your self.

Us single blokes have a hard enough time as it is getting the ladies (or even couples) to look at our profiles. You don't want them skipping past yours in disappointment now do you.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I see what you've done there with the old 'It's going to be easier to list the things I don't want' but to be fair, I'm not sure if this is the right approach.

To me, it just sets your profile off on a negative tone.

Just give a few examples of things you're into and add 'and much more'.

For example, there's a tick box list that you can pick out from and a lot of users look at your 'interests' to see if you're into the same sorts of things as them.

I'd also perhaps be inclined to lose the 'Ok, I will try my best to fill this out' bit. it's clutter. Makes you look like you're filling space for a lack of things to say - if you get where i'm coming from.

One question that jumps to mind. How is anyone to have guessed you're into BDSM?

One really important thing that is very absent from your profile is what have YOU got to offer potential meets. What makes you stand out? Why should anyone choose YOU over a thousand other single blokes on here vying for their attention?

Then there's the matter of pictures, or rather the lack of them.

Not being funny fella, but that picture on there really could be of anyone.

You can't accommodate, but you don't explain why. You may well have good reasons why not, but if you don't state what they are, people are going to come to their own conclusions - like you're married and cheating on your wife.

All very simple straightforward things.

Be more positive. Sell your self.

Us single blokes have a hard enough time as it is getting the ladies (or even couples) to look at our profiles. You don't want them skipping past yours in disappointment now do you."

Ok took most of that on board and changes some things round added and took away, another look?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

To some people, grammar and spelling matters. Try running it through a spellchecker. And improve the photos.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"To some people, grammar and spelling matters. Try running it through a spellchecker. And improve the photos."

Photo wise what would you sugest?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

An improvement, but really, you should read through it a couple of times yourself and make sure you're happy with it.

How do you think it comes across?

Does it reflect you as a person?

Do you get a sense, from reading it, that this portrays you well?

Look at more than just the words. How does it feel. What vibe does it give off.

There's much to be said about reading between the lines.

Do you get a sense of your personality from reading it?

That's what you should really be aiming for. You're not restricted for space, so don't be shy to express yourself.

You only get one chance to make a first impression.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

sorry was that a profile?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"To some people, grammar and spelling matters. Try running it through a spellchecker. And improve the photos.

Photo wise what would you sugest? "

Bloody hell mate, not hard to figure out is it.

You have a photo of what looks like a bears chest.

Try upping a few of your face??

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

delete the profile.

instead of all the crap.

put likes dislikes what u are looking for.

yes some proper photos to make your profile appealing.

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