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By *beautifulpain OP   Couple
over a year ago

Basingstoke

I have just updated our profile but I am dyslexic would someone mind proof reading it for me please

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By *ee VianteWoman
over a year ago

Somewhere in North Norfolk

I'll admit I skimmed some of it but it looks great to me. Good job.

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By *beautifulpain OP   Couple
over a year ago

Basingstoke

Thank you kindly

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By *ohnjones3210Man
over a year ago

Chester


"I have just updated our profile but I am dyslexic would someone mind proof reading it for me please "

Read the whole lot. This sentence is a bit shaky!

"and a huge lover of Anal both giving and or rare occasion receiving."

I know what you mean but its not worded correctly.

That's the only problem I found.

By the way, thats an excellent profile. Probably the best I've ever read infact. You both sound really interesting actually. Your wife/gf is nice looking too. If only you were closer!

Manchester would have been ideal.

Good luck mate.

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By *ee VianteWoman
over a year ago

Somewhere in North Norfolk


"Read the whole lot. This sentence is a bit shaky!

"and a huge lover of Anal both giving and or rare occasion receiving."

I know what you mean but its not worded correctly."

Change "or" to "on" and it makes sense.

I'd add a comma after anal and make the capital A lower case, if I were being picky.

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By *livia_KWoman
over a year ago

South London

Awesome profile guys

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By *beautifulpain OP   Couple
over a year ago

Basingstoke

Changes made, thank you both kindly

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By *beautifulpain OP   Couple
over a year ago

Basingstoke


"Awesome profile guys "

Thank you, we enjoyed reading yours too.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Pretty lengthy but kept my attention throughout the whole thing cool profile, cool people

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I have just updated our profile but I am dyslexic would someone mind proof reading it for me please "

Very wel written, dyslexic or not, Good profile, good job. x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Blinking hell, bloody awesome profile... Damn, I need you as a PA, really good

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By *eryBigGirlWoman
over a year ago

East Yorkshire

Yeah not a lot to add but def one of the most interesting profiles I've read.

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By *beautifulpain OP   Couple
over a year ago

Basingstoke

I didn't think it was that good, but thank you.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very very good profile and a pleasure to read guys

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By *obbobeanMan
over a year ago

dagenham

Dyslexic my arse lol well done (wishing there was a clapping icon) good ruse to get people to read your profile

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By *beautifulpain OP   Couple
over a year ago

Basingstoke


"Dyslexic my arse lol well done (wishing there was a clapping icon) good ruse to get people to read your profile "

I am Dyslexic for real,I type things in word first for the spell check then copy over here. It tends to be punctuation I get wrong, or the wrong word in the wrong place

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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound


"Dyslexic my arse lol well done (wishing there was a clapping icon) good ruse to get people to read your profile

I am Dyslexic for real,I type things in word first for the spell check then copy over here. It tends to be punctuation I get wrong, or the wrong word in the wrong place"

Thank you for the effort. You manage your dyslexia using the tools available and present yourself well.

You two sound absolutely lovely and a pleasure to be with.

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By *beautifulpain OP   Couple
over a year ago

Basingstoke


"Thank you for the effort. You manage your dyslexia using the tools available and present yourself well.

You two sound absolutely lovely and a pleasure to be with."

Thank you for your kind words, i hope people begin to realise this.

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