FabSwingers.com forum: Please I would like honest

By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

Reply’s on my profile

What it’s like now

And what to improve??

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By (user no longer on site)
40 weeks ago

Pretty good, but ‘don’t be shy’ is an instant ick for me

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By *estarossa.Woman
40 weeks ago

Flagrante

If its a true reflexion of your personality, its fine.

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By *issmorganWoman
40 weeks ago

Calderdale innit

I think it's decent op.

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By *rHotNottsMan
40 weeks ago

Dubai & Nottingham

Pictures are a bit boring.

Most of what you say is what you would expect any man to be, so it doesn’t really need saying. But one line ‘ I love to pleasure a woman in front of her man’ is interesting. I would rewrite the whole profile expanding & explaining that a bit creatively and work on your style of writing.

Hope that helps

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By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

"Pictures are a bit boring.

Hope that helps

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thanks

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By *o_yeur_eyes_onlyMan
40 weeks ago

Londontown

I'm no pro OP, but I found it a bit "bullet-pointy". You could probably bunch some of the "points" into paragraphs.....maybe a few more pics too.. GL

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By *abtastic Mr FoxMan
40 weeks ago

A den in the Glen

I guess it's safe. If it were paint it would be magnolia. I am probably one shade above. 'forest mushroom' or something.

Not a single sky remote or lynx can in site. Even I managed that. Today actually. Well not deodorant. I'm not that sophisticated.

Jazz it up a bit. Like the guy above said. We are all pretty much like you.

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By *electableicecreamMan
40 weeks ago

The West

Your going to get a lot of different opinions OP.

If your are looking for advice on how to improve your bio then I can offer you the same advice I gave myself.

Edit.

Come back to your profile every couple of days and ask yourself if what you've written is generic, necessary, unique to you, memorable etc.

Set your own criteria based on the kind of people you want to attract.

The goal is to find compatible matches after all and the last thing you want is generic profile based on the widest consensus of opinions

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By (user no longer on site)
40 weeks ago

I agree with one of the posters above. The points you have are fine but maybe rewrite into paragraphs. Personally, I like a bit of humour in a profile, makes you stand out from the usual do's and dont's others have. Maybe a few more tasteful pics, the two you have are fine btw. Good luck

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By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

I honestly appreciate all your answers, and will definitely work on it.

Thank you

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
40 weeks ago

The Town by The Cross

I've read it.

Didn't like it.

Not liking it is not important to me.

Me not liking it is okay.

I'd love to have someone watch me type this.

I only eat apples on Sunday's and hope you do too.

Typing is great.

I like lots of keyboards and finding the right buttons is great fun.

I wash my screen on Wednesdays and expect your screen to be clean as well.

Dribble........ ( get rid of the name slobber )

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By *ealMissShadyWoman
40 weeks ago

St Albans/ Welsh Borders

Add your personality into it, it's very generic and doesn't stand out from others.

And yeah, the word 'slobber' reminds me of a slobbery St Bernard

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By *ranny-CrumpetWoman
40 weeks ago

The Town by The Cross

Fuck it.... I put an apostrophe in Sunday's .... dag nabbit ... done it again!

Pass me the pistol and rip off my epaulettes ..... it's time

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By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

"I've read it.

Didn't like it.

Not liking it is not important to me.

Me not liking it is okay.

I'd love to have someone watch me type this.

I only eat apples on Sunday's and hope you do too.

Typing is great.

I like lots of keyboards and finding the right buttons is great fun.

I wash my screen on Wednesdays and expect your screen to be clean as well.

Dribble........ ( get rid of the name slobber ) "

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By *viatrixWoman
40 weeks ago

Redhill

Your 2 photos are fine… a couple more would be better?

Text is a bit meh but says what we need to know I suppose.

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By *abtastic Mr FoxMan
40 weeks ago

A den in the Glen

"Your 2 photos are fine… a couple more would be better?

Text is a bit meh but says what we need to know I suppose.

You could throw glitter on a turd and sell it in an East End market.

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By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

Any better?

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By (user no longer on site)
40 weeks ago

As you’ve been verified twice this year already I’d suggest it’s working as it is.

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By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

"As you’ve been verified twice this year already I’d suggest it’s working as it is. "
thank you

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By *ornucopiaMan
40 weeks ago

Bexley

"As you’ve been verified twice this year already I’d suggest it’s working as it is. "

A couple of good testimonials there. Well done.

The value of the pictures is debatable, however.

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By *abtastic Mr FoxMan
40 weeks ago

A den in the Glen

Oh man. Opening line..'my name is Rampant'.

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By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

"Oh man. Opening line..'my name is Rampant'. "

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By *abtastic Mr FoxMan
40 weeks ago

A den in the Glen

"Oh man. Opening line..'my name is Rampant'.

At least the pics are improving

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By *eyond PurityCouple
40 weeks ago

Lincolnshire

You’ve got fun in your tagline twice - having to say you are fun doesn’t exactly come across as fun

You start your profile blurb with rampant and end with it too - it’s a bit

Fun and rampant were not the words I was using when reading the blurb.

Sorry, it’s harsh…

Photos are fine.

If it reflects you OP then it’s all good

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By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

"You’ve got fun in your tagline twice - having to say you are fun doesn’t exactly come across as fun

You start your profile blurb with rampant and end with it too - it’s a bit

Fun and rampant were not the words I was using when reading the blurb.

Sorry, it’s harsh…

Photos are fine.

If it reflects you OP then it’s all good

K"
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many thanks

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By *illy IdolMan
40 weeks ago

Midlands

Would it excite you if you read it?

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By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

"Would it excite you if you read it?"
not particularly but if you get a twinge please be my guest

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By *ee VianteWoman
40 weeks ago

Somewhere in North Norfolk

I think it's pretty good, better than most.

I don't necessarily think exciting anyone should be what you're going for.

I'd say the aim is to say what you have to offer, what you're looking for and make your intended audience feel comfortable about the idea of meeting you. IMO, your profile does that.

You're never going to appeal to everyone, so don't try.

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By *illy IdolMan
40 weeks ago

Midlands

"Would it excite you if you read it? not particularly but if you get a twinge please be my guest

Well I think you have your answer then

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By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

"I think it's pretty good, better than most.

I don't necessarily think exciting anyone should be what you're going for.

I'd say the aim is to say what you have to offer, what you're looking for and make your intended audience feel comfortable about the idea of meeting you. IMO, your profile does that.

You're never going to appeal to everyone, so don't try.

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aww thank you for your feedback xxx

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By *illy IdolMan
40 weeks ago

Midlands

"Would it excite you if you read it? not particularly but if you get a twinge please be my guest

Well I think you have your answer then

However I don't believe a profile plays a huge part so wouldn't stress too much

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By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

"Would it excite you if you read it? not particularly but if you get a twinge please be my guest

Well I think you have your answer then

However I don't believe a profile plays a huge part so wouldn't stress too much"
I certainly won’t.

And many thanks for your feedback,it’s so much appreciated

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By (user no longer on site)
40 weeks ago

"Pretty good, but ‘don’t be shy’ is an instant ick for me "
Don’t be shy put some more

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By *aGaGagging for itCouple
40 weeks ago

Newcastle upon Tyne

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By *aGaGagging for itCouple
40 weeks ago

Newcastle upon Tyne

Drop the first pic - yes, it's a Breitling (and don't replace it with a pic of your car!)

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By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

"Drop the first pic - yes, it's a Breitling (and don't replace it with a pic of your car!)

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done lol

And thank you

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By *ee VianteWoman
40 weeks ago

Somewhere in North Norfolk

"I think it's pretty good, better than most.

I don't necessarily think exciting anyone should be what you're going for.

I'd say the aim is to say what you have to offer, what you're looking for and make your intended audience feel comfortable about the idea of meeting you. IMO, your profile does that.

You're never going to appeal to everyone, so don't try.

aww thank you for your feedback xxx"

You're welcome and good luck.

Also, bear in mind when reading the advice men are giving you, that men and women often have very different perspectives and are looking for very different things from a profile.

Two of the biggest things for single women meeting new men are our safety, (something a surprising number of men don't understand), and feeling like a man will listen to us and prioritise our pleasure as much as his own. Oh, and being reliable, because a lot of guys seem to get excited about someone then have a wank and lose interest!

Addressing those factors is more important (IMO) than trying to excite us.

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By *entleswinger69 OP Man
40 weeks ago

exeter

"I think it's pretty good, better than most.

I don't necessarily think exciting anyone should be what you're going for.

I'd say the aim is to say what you have to offer, what you're looking for and make your intended audience feel comfortable about the idea of meeting you. IMO, your profile does that.

You're never going to appeal to everyone, so don't try.

aww thank you for your feedback xxx

You're welcome and good luck.

Also, bear in mind when reading the advice men are giving you, that men and women often have very different perspectives and are looking for very different things from a profile.

Addressing those factors is more important (IMO) than trying to excite us. "
you have a very good point there, and not just women I also prefer to meet socially first for my own safety

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By *TG3Man
40 weeks ago

Dorchester

"Reply’s on my profile

What it’s like now

And what to improve??

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I'd say its perfect you'll be knee deep in a year

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