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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I am an amateur erotic writer and have posted some of my stories to fab with one still to complete.

I'm now looking for inspiration for my next stories

I am fully aware most erotic stories on fab are written by men focusing on men's fantasies.

What I would like to do is write a series of short erotic stories based on subjects women would like to read about.

So in short I'm interested to hear your fantasies. I want to know the kind of scenarios and situations that you women would like to read about in an erotic novel.

You can PM me or just reply to thread. All ideas welcome

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A man doing the housework

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By *teveanddebsCouple
over a year ago

Norwich


"A man doing the housework "

Well it is fiction

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Write about what you enjoy.

If I want a woman's perspective I'll read a story written by a woman.

...This sounds incredibly bitchy and I genuinely don't mean it that way! X

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"A man doing the housework "

And the food shop?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Write about what you enjoy.

If I want a woman's perspective I'll read a story written by a woman.

...This sounds incredibly bitchy and I genuinely don't mean it that way! X"

Doesn't sound bitchy at all. It's just not many stories are written by women and I always write stories I think everyone will enjoy but would love some inspiration and getting a woman's perspective is helpful to my writing.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A man doing the housework

And the food shop?"

Omg that’s got me going already

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A man doing the housework "

I love the suction on the hoover Icl

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By *ittlemissTinselTitsCouple
over a year ago

Southampton


"A man doing the housework "

Don't hate me but mine does

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A man doing the housework

I love the suction on the hoover Icl "

I got a shark pet one a few months back and it sucks so hard it’s an absolute workout hoovering the carpets

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A man doing the housework

Don't hate me but mine does "

Fuckinell where did you find him?!

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By *ickeyandmouseCouple
over a year ago

nr Alicante


"A man doing the housework "

Brilliant ( Mr) lol

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By *ittlemissTinselTitsCouple
over a year ago

Southampton


"A man doing the housework

Don't hate me but mine does

Fuckinell where did you find him?!"

Literally on a street corner 22 years ago lmfao... he even cooks too !

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sensible answer tho, I’d say make it realistic and don’t fall for the usual man stuff (heaving bosoms and fluttering hearts) etc

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By *ittlemissTinselTitsCouple
over a year ago

Southampton


"A man doing the housework

I love the suction on the hoover Icl

I got a shark pet one a few months back and it sucks so hard it’s an absolute workout hoovering the carpets "

I read that as you got a pet shark ! Lmao

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

…and he whispered in her ear “you can nap for as long as you want…” pausing to take a slow deep inhale, then purred “…and don’t worry about the kids, I will sort them and take them out for a few hours so you can be in peace and quiet”

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By *nightsoftheCoffeeTableCouple
over a year ago

Leeds

I prefer lesbian smut the men are always off-putting.

You can tell the difference between man & woman author too.

Mrs

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Sensible answer tho, I’d say make it realistic and don’t fall for the usual man stuff (heaving bosoms and fluttering hearts) etc "

I always try to make my stories as realistic as possible. I prefer to base my subjects and the characters on realistic people with realistic bodies and lives, but with perhaps an alter ego waiting to get out and explore.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A man doing the housework

I love the suction on the hoover Icl

I got a shark pet one a few months back and it sucks so hard it’s an absolute workout hoovering the carpets

I read that as you got a pet shark ! Lmao"

Wonder if that would molt?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"…and he whispered in her ear “you can nap for as long as you want…” pausing to take a slow deep inhale, then purred “…and don’t worry about the kids, I will sort them and take them out for a few hours so you can be in peace and quiet”"

There's fantasy and then there's fantasy.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I prefer lesbian smut the men are always off-putting.

You can tell the difference between man & woman author too.

Mrs "

Yeah it's often too obvious when a man has written a story. Don't get me wrong some are fantastic but I would just like to write some with a woman's point of view to it for a change.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"A man doing the housework

And the food shop?

Omg that’s got me going already "

Well if that turns you on wait until he puts the washing on, pulls out the ironing board then suggests he makes dinner lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A man doing the housework

I love the suction on the hoover Icl

I got a shark pet one a few months back and it sucks so hard it’s an absolute workout hoovering the carpets "

Yeah the carpet doesn’t need much suction just a little tickle on the right bit

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By *nightsoftheCoffeeTableCouple
over a year ago

Leeds


"I prefer lesbian smut the men are always off-putting.

You can tell the difference between man & woman author too.

Mrs

Yeah it's often too obvious when a man has written a story. Don't get me wrong some are fantastic but I would just like to write some with a woman's point of view to it for a change."

Why not have a read of some women's books go gain some insight, I can recommend a few.

Mrs

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By *ose-tinted GlassesMan
over a year ago

Glasgow / London

Here’s an idea for a shortcut.

Go subscribe to a women-led porn site for a month or two. Watch some of the films (which won’t be a hardship). Write fiction based on the scenarios you see in those films.

Erika Lust might be a good one to start with. Her ‘confessions’ series is based on fantasies sent in by her female subscribers.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Do we get credited for co writing it?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I prefer lesbian smut the men are always off-putting.

You can tell the difference between man & woman author too.

Mrs

Yeah it's often too obvious when a man has written a story. Don't get me wrong some are fantastic but I would just like to write some with a woman's point of view to it for a change.

Why not have a read of some women's books go gain some insight, I can recommend a few.

Mrs "

Yes a few recommendations would be helpful thank you. Just PM them to me

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Here’s an idea for a shortcut.

Go subscribe to a women-led porn site for a month or two. Watch some of the films (which won’t be a hardship). Write fiction based on the scenarios you see in those films.

Erika Lust might be a good one to start with. Her ‘confessions’ series is based on fantasies sent in by her female subscribers."

Thanks that's very useful. I have to admit I'm not big on knowing women led porn. But with start with your recommendation for Erika Lust

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Do we get credited for co writing it? "

Only if you send me in some text lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I am alone in a foreign country and I wake up on a train. Oh my god. A dead dog lies in my sight and beside it is a five inch blade. But the strange thing is, the dog is all part of my imagination. I am not mentally stable. I walk through the carriage and I see fucking Harry Potter on his way to Hogwarts. Can I be saved? Well, that's up to you.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I am alone in a foreign country and I wake up on a train. Oh my god. A dead dog lies in my sight and beside it is a five inch blade. But the strange thing is, the dog is all part of my imagination. I am not mentally stable. I walk through the carriage and I see fucking Harry Potter on his way to Hogwarts. Can I be saved? Well, that's up to you."

Wow that's quite the imagination, I wasn't sure where that was going. I like the darkness though very edgy with loads of possibilities

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I am alone in a foreign country and I wake up on a train. Oh my god. A dead dog lies in my sight and beside it is a five inch blade. But the strange thing is, the dog is all part of my imagination. I am not mentally stable. I walk through the carriage and I see fucking Harry Potter on his way to Hogwarts. Can I be saved? Well, that's up to you.

Wow that's quite the imagination, I wasn't sure where that was going. I like the darkness though very edgy with loads of possibilities "

Oh god, I told her not to post on here without letting me check her crazy stories. Apologies for that. Come on now Lemon, let's go and have a glass of water.

F

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By *aucasian GhandiMan
over a year ago

from my dad's left nut (Warwick)


"A man doing the housework "

Boy don't wash up....

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By *atnip make me purrWoman
over a year ago

Reading


"A man doing the housework

And the food shop?

Omg that’s got me going already

Well if that turns you on wait until he puts the washing on, pulls out the ironing board then suggests he makes dinner lol"

I have cum

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I am alone in a foreign country and I wake up on a train. Oh my god. A dead dog lies in my sight and beside it is a five inch blade. But the strange thing is, the dog is all part of my imagination. I am not mentally stable. I walk through the carriage and I see fucking Harry Potter on his way to Hogwarts. Can I be saved? Well, that's up to you.

Wow that's quite the imagination, I wasn't sure where that was going. I like the darkness though very edgy with loads of possibilities

Oh god, I told her not to post on here without letting me check her crazy stories. Apologies for that. Come on now Lemon, let's go and have a glass of water.

F"

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"A man doing the housework

And the food shop?

Omg that’s got me going already

Well if that turns you on wait until he puts the washing on, pulls out the ironing board then suggests he makes dinner lol

I have cum "

Well if that all it takes next time I'm with a woman I'll skip giving her oral and just get on with the ironing lol

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By *chochamberWoman
over a year ago

Munster

Two really hot single women meeting on the beach, choosing to sit together to look after each others bags etc. A third joins, allowing the original two women to go for a naked swim in the sea together, their nipples hard, and skin glistening in the salty water, breasts rubbing off each other. They slowly become aroused and find ways to gently and discretely touch each other. As they emerge from the water, the lifeguard cannot take his eyes off the two curvaceous, ample bodies as they walk in unison up the beach. Many more men notice them and cannot help but get hard.....

The sexual energy ripples down the beach, the two beach girls enjoy stroking each others breaths and kissing each others lips.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Two really hot single women meeting on the beach, choosing to sit together to look after each others bags etc. A third joins, allowing the original two women to go for a naked swim in the sea together, their nipples hard, and skin glistening in the salty water, breasts rubbing off each other. They slowly become aroused and find ways to gently and discretely touch each other. As they emerge from the water, the lifeguard cannot take his eyes off the two curvaceous, ample bodies as they walk in unison up the beach. Many more men notice them and cannot help but get hard.....

The sexual energy ripples down the beach, the two beach girls enjoy stroking each others breaths and kissing each others lips. "

Oh wow! That's a great story waiting to happen. The possibilities are endless. Thank you x

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)

Think about the kinds of stories you write. Rework them from one of the female character's perspective. Having stronger characters and understanding multiple perspectives will build your craft.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Think about the kinds of stories you write. Rework them from one of the female character's perspective. Having stronger characters and understanding multiple perspectives will build your craft."

Most of my stories are from the female characters perspective already. I did one story called the 'at the pool' which was purely from my perspective, but all my other stories are from the woman characters perspective which to be honest I prefer writing from. Part of me gets a kick from a woman freeing herself from societal norms and giving in to her urges.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I rubbed my hard nipples as I freed myself from societal norms and gave in to my urges. My moist vagina glistened in the moonlight and he gasped as I

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I rubbed my hard nipples as I freed myself from societal norms and gave in to my urges. My moist vagina glistened in the moonlight and he gasped as I "

Lol very good x

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)


"Think about the kinds of stories you write. Rework them from one of the female character's perspective. Having stronger characters and understanding multiple perspectives will build your craft.

Most of my stories are from the female characters perspective already. I did one story called the 'at the pool' which was purely from my perspective, but all my other stories are from the woman characters perspective which to be honest I prefer writing from. Part of me gets a kick from a woman freeing herself from societal norms and giving in to her urges."

So if you're already writing from a woman's perspective, why do you need our input?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Think about the kinds of stories you write. Rework them from one of the female character's perspective. Having stronger characters and understanding multiple perspectives will build your craft.

Most of my stories are from the female characters perspective already. I did one story called the 'at the pool' which was purely from my perspective, but all my other stories are from the woman characters perspective which to be honest I prefer writing from. Part of me gets a kick from a woman freeing herself from societal norms and giving in to her urges.

So if you're already writing from a woman's perspective, why do you need our input?"

I want women's input into ideas for scenarios etc. I think I've explained myself quite well on the thread so far

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By *offiaCoolWoman
over a year ago

Kidsgrove

I wouldn't send my fantasy to anyone claiming to use it for anything other than wank material. That's not a pop at you, that's just what I would assume was the real reason behind the claim.

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By *naswingdressWoman
over a year ago

Manchester (she/her)


"Think about the kinds of stories you write. Rework them from one of the female character's perspective. Having stronger characters and understanding multiple perspectives will build your craft.

Most of my stories are from the female characters perspective already. I did one story called the 'at the pool' which was purely from my perspective, but all my other stories are from the woman characters perspective which to be honest I prefer writing from. Part of me gets a kick from a woman freeing herself from societal norms and giving in to her urges.

So if you're already writing from a woman's perspective, why do you need our input?

I want women's input into ideas for scenarios etc. I think I've explained myself quite well on the thread so far"

Problem is I'm unable to differentiate between your request and a request for something to wank off to.

As a writer myself... scenarios are the easy bit?

Boy meets girl in (setting). There's some sort of tension/ conflict/ confusion. This is resolved. They fuck.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Think about the kinds of stories you write. Rework them from one of the female character's perspective. Having stronger characters and understanding multiple perspectives will build your craft.

Most of my stories are from the female characters perspective already. I did one story called the 'at the pool' which was purely from my perspective, but all my other stories are from the woman characters perspective which to be honest I prefer writing from. Part of me gets a kick from a woman freeing herself from societal norms and giving in to her urges.

So if you're already writing from a woman's perspective, why do you need our input?

I want women's input into ideas for scenarios etc. I think I've explained myself quite well on the thread so far

Problem is I'm unable to differentiate between your request and a request for something to wank off to.

As a writer myself... scenarios are the easy bit?

Boy meets girl in (setting). There's some sort of tension/ conflict/ confusion. This is resolved. They fuck."

I think it's way more complicated than that. You've just over simplified it.

When I read stories read by men, it doesn't matter if it's from female or male character perspective, the overall fantasy is a man's as he is the writer.

What I'm try to do is understand what women enjoy reading. I'm certainly not looking for wank material although the end result of the story should hopefully cover that.

I'm trying to engage not just male minds but those of women as well.

I think you have missed the point of what I'm asking for.

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