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By *arryb89 OP   Man
over a year ago

between filey and bridlington

Hey everyone could you take a look at my profile and give me some tips to make it better xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I would spellcheck your bio and add paragraphs to make it easier to read.

Add some public pics so people get an idea of who they’re talking to.

Other than that you haven’t been here long and you’ve had meets so you’re not doing too bad.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I’d add some public pictures

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I would spellcheck your bio and add paragraphs to make it easier to read.

Add some public pics so people get an idea of who they’re talking to.

Other than that you haven’t been here long and you’ve had meets so you’re not doing too bad."

this

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind "

Make your own thread

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By *nSeeNMan
over a year ago

Z'ha'dum


"Hey everyone could you take a look at my profile and give me some tips to make it better xx"

Looks good to me, wouldn't change a thing.

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By *rwhowhatwherewhyMan
over a year ago

Aylesbury


"I would spellcheck your bio and add paragraphs to make it easier to read.

Add some public pics so people get an idea of who they’re talking to.

Other than that you haven’t been here long and you’ve had meets so you’re not doing too bad."

Took me two years to get a social meet lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind

Make your own thread "

Bog off

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Different Paragraphs work best over one long paragraph, I find it easier to read

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By *oobyHotwifeWoman
over a year ago

Thurrock

I've seen worse

Maybe a couple of extra images, I'd crop the head out tk rather than hide it with an emoji

The bio would read better if it was in paragraphs rather than one long block, also pop it through a spell checker - that's not a dig - my spelling/typing is awful - it'll just make it look/read better and only takes a few seconds

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Better pics

Good public pics

Don’t worry too much about wordy guff on your profile

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By *opsy RogersWoman
over a year ago

London

It tells me everything I need to know.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind

Make your own thread "

Harsh but true

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By *uenevereWoman
over a year ago

Scunthorpe

As others have said...

Public photos - good ones and a variety

Paragraphs - I confess that I didn't even try reading it properly as it stands... blocks of text make my head hurt.

Spelling and grammar check

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hey everyone could you take a look at my profile and give me some tips to make it better xx"
Proofread it for spelling mistakes. I'd also take off the part about "100% straight" as your profile stats already list that and it just sounds as though you are trying to convince yourself that you are. Also punctuation as well as spelling, "I'm" needs an apostrophe. I hope this helps.

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By *iscean_dreamMan
over a year ago

Llanelli


"Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind

Make your own thread

Bog off "

Everyone loves a bogoff

Ps I'd like some profile advice

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By *tephTV67TV/TS
over a year ago

Cheshire

No need to put 100% straight on your profile, never met a gay guy called Barry.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sounds harsh maybe but…

You have a friend who’s willing to join you?

I find it hard enough to trust people on here for a meet let alone some random friend who for whatever reason isn’t on here. I need to build a connection with whoever I am going to be with and some random person who you vouch for wouldn’t be for me

But each to their own

So that would be an instant no from me.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind

Make your own thread

Bog off

Everyone loves a bogoff

Ps I'd like some profile advice "
Your profile text is a bit too self deprecating, especially the first sentences. Black and white and blurry pictures are difficult to see and look like stock images from Alamy. We all have a picture editor on our computer that can turn pictures black and white but it just resembles a Bebo account from 2009. I hope this helps.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Best profile I’ve seen.

Congrats.

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By *iscean_dreamMan
over a year ago

Llanelli


"Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind

Make your own thread

Bog off

Everyone loves a bogoff

Ps I'd like some profile advice Your profile text is a bit too self deprecating, especially the first sentences. Black and white and blurry pictures are difficult to see and look like stock images from Alamy. We all have a picture editor on our computer that can turn pictures black and white but it just resembles a Bebo account from 2009. I hope this helps."

Not really as I've only had good feedback on my bio and photos

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind

Make your own thread

Bog off

Everyone loves a bogoff

Ps I'd like some profile advice Your profile text is a bit too self deprecating, especially the first sentences. Black and white and blurry pictures are difficult to see and look like stock images from Alamy. We all have a picture editor on our computer that can turn pictures black and white but it just resembles a Bebo account from 2009. I hope this helps.

Not really as I've only had good feedback on my bio and photos "
Well you asked for advice....

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By *iscean_dreamMan
over a year ago

Llanelli


"Wouldn’t mind some honest criticism myself..be kind

Make your own thread

Bog off

Everyone loves a bogoff

Ps I'd like some profile advice Your profile text is a bit too self deprecating, especially the first sentences. Black and white and blurry pictures are difficult to see and look like stock images from Alamy. We all have a picture editor on our computer that can turn pictures black and white but it just resembles a Bebo account from 2009. I hope this helps.

Not really as I've only had good feedback on my bio and photos Well you asked for advice.... "

I was joking mind but thank you for the input

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By *arryb89 OP   Man
over a year ago

between filey and bridlington

Thanks everyone had a bit of a tweek and took on bored what you guys had to say thank you all for your input ??

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