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Worked on bio

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath

Just a quick one I took people's advice and improved on my bio can you tell me if I need to add more ?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It looks good

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath


"It looks good "

Ayyy thanks man

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's a little bland if I'm honest, there's nothing really about you personally. Like, that bio could be anyone's. But if it works better for you, great

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By *eroLondonMan
over a year ago

Covent Garden

It's "Burly" and not "Burley" unless you're actually from the town of Burley.

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath


"It's "Burly" and not "Burley" unless you're actually from the town of Burley. "

Hahaa thanks man I'll change that now

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath


"It's a little bland if I'm honest, there's nothing really about you personally. Like, that bio could be anyone's. But if it works better for you, great "

Should I say what kind of kinks I'm into to spice it up?

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By *atnip make me purrWoman
over a year ago

Reading


"It's a little bland if I'm honest, there's nothing really about you personally. Like, that bio could be anyone's. But if it works better for you, great

Should I say what kind of kinks I'm into to spice it up?"

Yes I would. You will put some off but surely is better to find someone you would match well with.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"It's a little bland if I'm honest, there's nothing really about you personally. Like, that bio could be anyone's. But if it works better for you, great

Should I say what kind of kinks I'm into to spice it up?"

You're not getting it lol, (most) women don't give a shit about kinks. Put some personality into it.

Also you're inconsistent. You've put safe sex down as an interest but from your veri you clearly had bareback sex with someone you'd just met...

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath


"It's a little bland if I'm honest, there's nothing really about you personally. Like, that bio could be anyone's. But if it works better for you, great

Should I say what kind of kinks I'm into to spice it up?

You're not getting it lol, (most) women don't give a shit about kinks. Put some personality into it.

Also you're inconsistent. You've put safe sex down as an interest but from your veri you clearly had bareback sex with someone you'd just met... "

Right I'll adjust that and personality being like what I'm like as a person?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Not wanting to sound too brutal here, but you need to work it out for yourself. We can all offer you dozens of tips on what to, and what not to write. But ultimately, we don’t know you, and we can’t tell you how to convey who you are as a person, to others.

I often think that guys who struggle to write a profile, should spend time looking at other men’s profiles. Especially those guys that are active and enjoying ‘success’ on fab. Compare them to your own.

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath

This is a good point as I'm not the best at using my words unfortunately

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"It's a little bland if I'm honest, there's nothing really about you personally. Like, that bio could be anyone's. But if it works better for you, great

Should I say what kind of kinks I'm into to spice it up?

You're not getting it lol, (most) women don't give a shit about kinks. Put some personality into it.

Also you're inconsistent. You've put safe sex down as an interest but from your veri you clearly had bareback sex with someone you'd just met...

Right I'll adjust that and personality being like what I'm like as a person?"

I think your bio should reflect a bit of your character. So whilst what you're saying is important, think about how you're saying it.

There are some really funny ones on here which are often enough for people to spark up a conversation and things can go from there.

Don't be to hard on yourself though, it's difficult to make your mark here are a single guy when the place is flooded with them.

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath

OK so focus on what makes me, me ? and yeah there sure are alot of us

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It’s fine but doesn’t really stand out. Show a bit of your personality, tell a joke, say your favourite kind of cake, anything!

Good luck x

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By *cottieboy123Man
over a year ago

Perth

Dear Dieu, you stand out in any crowd. . . .

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

OP your profile should be a description of you, who you are and what you like.

If you change it to what others want to see then it’s not you anymore and how do you live up to the hype? Plus we all like different stuff.

You sound desperate to please but you can’t be all things to all people.

Take your time, interact on the forums and I’m sure you’ve probably been told, get yourself to a club and socialise.

Good luck

V

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By *r. Mac OP   Man
over a year ago

Bexleyheath


"OP your profile should be a description of you, who you are and what you like.

If you change it to what others want to see then it’s not you anymore and how do you live up to the hype? Plus we all like different stuff.

You sound desperate to please but you can’t be all things to all people.

Take your time, interact on the forums and I’m sure you’ve probably been told, get yourself to a club and socialise.

Good luck

V"

Thank you iv added some things I enjoy doing and I hope it shows kinda what I'm like

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Dear Dieu, you stand out in any crowd. . . . "

Thanks x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I want to go to your local if the beer turns into rum, that sounds amazing

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