FabSwingers.com forum: Haiku!!!

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Share great haikus with us.

If you dont know what a haiku is, it is Japanese poetic form includes three lines with 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively.

Example;

While bees are in rush

Smell of rain showed me a dream

I weeped as always…

Hit me with your hardest…

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Company coming?

And your house is a big mess?

Just put on lipstick.

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By *stellaWoman
over a year ago

London

When brushing my teeth

If my arm gets too tired

I shake my whole head.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Company coming?

And your house is a big mess?

Just put on lipstick."

Hahahhaha

Good haiku. Good haiku. Nice

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By *dalisqueWoman
over a year ago

land of make believe

"When brushing my teeth

If my arm gets too tired

I shake my whole head."

Great!!

My grandchildren do this haha

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"When brushing my teeth

If my arm gets too tired

I shake my whole head."

That is really good actually. Could you try to write a haiku related to feelings and nature? Because haikus are supposed to be about those.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"When brushing my teeth

If my arm gets too tired

I shake my whole head.

Great!!

My grandchildren do this haha"

Who doesnt….

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By *amie HantsWoman
over a year ago

Atlantis

When trusting a fart

Never be too trusting

It can disappoint

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Easy to find love

Very hard to make it work

At least there are cats.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"When trusting a fart

Never be too trusting

It can disappoint "

Impressive. Really good presented your anger and sadness with three lines…

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By *amie HantsWoman
over a year ago

Atlantis

Sweeties are for kids

Unless you are stronger

Enjoy your sweeties

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"When brushing my teeth

If my arm gets too tired

I shake my whole head."

Milliganesque

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It was only rain

On my cold face when you left

No, they were not tears

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I got lost again

When searching for happiness

Want to go home now

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By *uietlyBohemianCouple
over a year ago

Newcastle-under-Lyme

you slip your bright clothes

I worship your nakedness

autumn is sexy

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By *ickyxxx69Man
over a year ago

Bedford

Isn't haikus what Ken used to shout on street fighter 2?

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