FabSwingers.com forum: Rate my profile.

By *aughtyman23 OP Man
over a year ago

cheadle

Hi Guys and Gals,

Hope you are having a nice night?

So here I am just another single guy trying like all the others on here, to stand out from the crowd and promote and convey what I am like in a digital online format that quite frankly at my ripe old age is a new thing and a bit of learning curve in itself and not something I am accustomed to.

That said I am trying to improve and would welcome your feedback on my profile good or bad (as long as constructive) and yes I realise I need new photos but I'm not really into selfies of myself so looking for ideas, inspiration and feedback.

Thanks in advance,

Joe xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I stopped reading after 4 paragraphs and realised there was still more! It reads like an essay. Short and sweet but informative is better. The reader needs to be drawn to you by the bio, and wants to chat to see if there's connection

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I tried reading it and just started skimming. It's very long and comes across as a bit ...indecisive? Uncertain or lacking in confidence? Something like thst.

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By *ex HolesMan
over a year ago

Up North

If Carlsberg made profiles then they’d certainly be happy with your photo on 27th November

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By *aughtyman23 OP Man
over a year ago

cheadle

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By *aughtyman23 OP Man
over a year ago

cheadle

"I stopped reading after 4 paragraphs and realised there was still more! It reads like an essay. Short and sweet but informative is better. The reader needs to be drawn to you by the bio, and wants to chat to see if there's connection "

OK thanks ??

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By *aughtyman23 OP Man
over a year ago

cheadle

OK thanks, especially as you look so dam hot BTW

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I think it looks ok. Your references make you seem like a decent guy which is a big help.

I would go though your bio and see if you can shorten it a little by changing the wording slightly

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By *aughtyman23 OP Man
over a year ago

cheadle

Yeah you know, you've got a point and I'd agree lol.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Decent profile maybe get all the best bits and condense though

but saying that I’m not a profile king so you just keep being you and you will find the balance

I always look at my profile and go hmmm is it any good :/

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By *aughtyman23 OP Man
over a year ago

cheadle

"Decent profile maybe get all the best bits and condense though

but saying that I’m not a profile king so you just keep being you and you will find the balance

I always look at my profile and go hmmm is it any good :/"

Thanks, I've started to try and condense it but the problem is knowing what to take out as so many people asking what you into etc so just wanted to put it out there to avoid having to explain my self after every message. It is a work in progress and thanks for your feedback

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

People asking you what your into is good means your profile is intriguing but also gets messages flowing

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By *aughtyman23 OP Man
over a year ago

cheadle

"People asking you what your into is good means your profile is intriguing but also gets messages flowing

True I guess. I have updated it now with all comments taken on board. Will continue to update as I go. Thanks all xx

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